| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.224 | | leniency | 0.449 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.79% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1407 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.36% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1407 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "effortless" | | 5 | "facade" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "depths" | | 8 | "electric" | | 9 | "fleeting" | | 10 | "gleaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1401 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 6 | | wordCount | 985 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 0.41 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed ready to topple at the slightest vibration of his footsteps" | | 1 | "sound that seemed to mock the silence" | | 2 | "felt like an intrusion; he was a monume" | | 3 | "sounded like a serrated edge" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.714 | | wordCount | 1401 | | matches | | 0 | "not to touch, but to trace the edge of a stack of scrolls on the table" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 22.6 | | std | 19.34 | | cv | 0.856 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 58 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 53 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 42 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 54 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 51 | | 44 | 54 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 34 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 94.79% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "were stacked" | | 1 | "been coiled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.057 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked immaculate in a charcoal suit that cost more than my entire life’s inventory of possessions, his eyes—that disconcerting, mismatched amber and black—tracking the rapid rise and fall of my chest." | | 1 | "He stood exactly three feet away—the distance of a polite stranger, yet the air between us sparked with the kind of static you feel right before a lightning strike." | | 2 | "The contrast between his refined, aristocratic hands and the chaos of the flat felt like an intrusion; he was a monument of order standing in the middle of my frantic, messy survival." | | 3 | "He used the tip of his cane to hook the edge of the chair, pulling it—and me—closer." | | 4 | "He didn't look angry; he looked hungry, a flicker of something ancient and volatile flashing in the obsidian depths of his black eye." | | 5 | "The world beyond the walls of the flat vanished—the sirens from the street, the damp rot of the ceiling, the threat of the men from Cardiff." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 997 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "warm, pressed against my" | | 2 | "heavy, lead-lined coat" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.025075225677031094 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009027081243731194 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 13.34 | | std | 7.91 | | cv | 0.593 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 50.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3523809523809524 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "I yanked the door open," | | 1 | "My hand stayed gripped on" | | 2 | "My throat tightened." | | 3 | "He looked immaculate in a" | | 4 | "He leaned against his ivory-handled" | | 5 | "I didn't step back, though" | | 6 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 7 | "He simply stepped forward, forcing" | | 8 | "His nose crinkled almost imperceptibly" | | 9 | "He tapped the silver tip" | | 10 | "He stopped in the centre" | | 11 | "He stood exactly three feet" | | 12 | "He moved with that lethal," | | 13 | "He didn't look at the" | | 14 | "He looked at me, focusing" | | 15 | "he noted, his voice dropping" | | 16 | "He took a half-step closer" | | 17 | "He reached out, not to" | | 18 | "His fingers were long, pale," | | 19 | "He turned his head, the" |
| | ratio | 0.656 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt rattled in" | | 1 | "I yanked the door open," | | 2 | "My hand stayed gripped on" | | 3 | "My throat tightened." | | 4 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 5 | "He looked immaculate in a" | | 6 | "He leaned against his ivory-handled" | | 7 | "I didn't step back, though" | | 8 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 9 | "He simply stepped forward, forcing" | | 10 | "Eva’s place smelled of sage," | | 11 | "Books were stacked in precarious," | | 12 | "Ptolemy, the ginger tabby, hissed" | | 13 | "Lucien took in the room" | | 14 | "His nose crinkled almost imperceptibly" | | 15 | "He tapped the silver tip" | | 16 | "He stopped in the centre" | | 17 | "The space felt claustrophobic now," | | 18 | "He stood exactly three feet" | | 19 | "He moved with that lethal," |
| | ratio | 0.953 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 20.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked immaculate in a charcoal suit that cost more than my entire life’s inventory of possessions, his eyes—that disconcerting, mismatched amber and black—t…" | | 1 | "He leaned against his ivory-handled cane, a predatory patience radiating off him that made the heat in the room turn brittle." | | 2 | "Books were stacked in precarious, leaning towers that seemed ready to topple at the slightest vibration of his footsteps." | | 3 | "He looked at me, focusing on the small, crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist that peeked out from my sleeve." | | 4 | "He let out a low, dark laugh then, a sound that started in his chest and seemed to vibrate through the very floorboards." | | 5 | "I felt the heat of him, an unnatural furnace that made my skin prickle." | | 6 | "There was only the sharp, electric current between us, a tether that had never really snapped, just stretched until we both reached our breaking points." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "he noted, his voice dropping from a conversational hum to something silkier" | | 1 | "he whispered, his gaze dropping to my mouth" | | 2 | "I rasped, my voice barely a thread" | | 3 | "he ordered, not looking back" |
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| 68.37% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he noted (note)" | | 1 | "he whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "he muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "he ordered (order)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.082 | | leniency | 0.163 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.163 | |