Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTXTGGZTXFVS7X9K69AVGP3

Run Details

Duration:
7.0s
Cost:
$0.002389
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak stones loomed against the black canvas of the Richmond sky, their gnarled surfaces twisted into shapes that defied natural growth. Rory stepped across the threshold, the dry grass crunching beneath her boots with a sound unnaturally loud in the oppressive silence. She clutched the silver chain at her throat, the deep crimson gemstone pressing cold against her collarbone before it began to thrum with a sluggish, rhythmic heat. It belongs here, doesn't it? Just show me where. Her voice died instantly, swallowed by the thick, stagnant air of the Grove. No birds sang. No wind stirred the heavy canopy of leaves above. The temperature plummeted, turning her breath into ragged plumes of white mist that hung suspended like ghosts. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, her fingers trembling as she scanned the periphery of the clearing. Something skittered behind the nearest oak monolith. A dry, scraping sound, like talons dragging over brittle stone. She whipped her head around, her blue eyes straining against the gloom. The foliage remained undisturbed, a wall of thorns and shadow, but the air now tasted metallic, stinging the back of her throat with the sharp tang of copper. Deep breaths, Rory. Just a delivery. Get the drop, find the pulse, leave. The pendant surged with warmth, a sudden flare of intensity that forced her to gasp. The gemstone pulsed in time with her own racing heart, acting as a beacon that pointed toward the center of the clearing. She took a step forward, then halted. Another sound drifted through the stagnant air—the faint, rhythmic clicking of teeth. It originated from everywhere and nowhere, a constant, shifting vibration that seemed to emanate from the very roots beneath her feet. She backed toward the standing stones, her soles finding the uneven, moss-covered ground, but the wall of oaks seemed further away than it had seconds ago. The grove stretched. She turned a slow, deliberate circle. The path she had taken inward had vanished. In its place stood a tall, slender obstruction, its bark pale and slick as stretched skin. She reached out, her fingers grazing the surface, only for the wood to recoil with a wet, sucking sound. Find the center before it finds you. She pivoted toward the heat radiating from her chest. The crimson glow of the Heartstone became a blinding point of light in the total darkness, illuminating the space ahead. The grass beneath her boots shifted, undulating in waves despite the absolute absence of wind. A dozen pale shapes detached themselves from the base of the standing stones, towering, spindly silhouettes that possessed no discernable faces. They stood perfectly still, their elongated limbs draped in layers of shredded leaves and velvet night. One of them tilted its head at a sharp, bone-cracking angle. A low whine vibrated in Rory’s ears, rising in frequency until her teeth ached. She squeezed her eyes shut, fighting the urge to tear the necklace from her throat and fling it into the dark. Did you bring it for us, or are you just a stray that wandered into the trap? The voice didn't belong to a throat. It seeped into her mind, heavy with the texture of stagnant water and rotting soil. She opened her eyes, finding the distance between her and the nearest entity had closed by half. They moved only when she blinked, advancing in the gaps between her heartbeats. I’m looking for the portal, not the company. She spun on her heel, her breath hitching as the pendant flared again, burning hot enough to blister her skin. The red light washed over the ground, revealing not grass, but a dense, living carpet of intertwined root systems that pulsed in the same rhythm as the stone. Every time the pendant cast its crimson light, the beings froze, their faceless masks turning toward the source of the glow. She focused on the vibration in her palm, letting it drag her forward. Fear crawled up her spine, cold and oily, but she pushed it down, locking her gaze on the ground ahead. She did not look at the shadows. She focused on the heat. Stay in the light. Just move. She broke into a run, her boots slapping against the shifting roots. The clicking behind her accelerated, a frantic, rattling applause, and the temperature dropped so sharply that frost erupted across her jacket. The air grew dense, viscous, forcing her to slog through it as if submerged in deep water. She sensed the movement just behind her ear—a rush of displaced air, the smell of ozone and wet earth. She didn't turn back. She lunged forward, her hand hitting the side of an massive, pulsating column that felt disturbingly like a chest cavity. The pendant lashed out with a beam of crimson fire, tearing open the darkness in front of her. A ripple in the space—a tear in the reality of the Grove—widened as the artifact recognized the proximity to the Hel portal. It was an aperture of pure, swirling void, cold as deep space and infinitely hungry. She stood at the precipice, the vacuum threatening to pull her equilibrium into the maw. Is this the end of the line, or just a shortcut through the rot? She didn't wait for a response. The sounds behind her reached a fever pitch, a chorus of clicks and wet tearing noises as the entities surged forward, their spindly shadows stretching out to claim her. She saw the flick of a long, grey finger grazing the edge of her coat. With a final, desperate heave, she reached into the rift, feeling the shift of air and the sudden, violent transition of pressure. The ground fell away from her feet. The coldness of the grove clamped down like a vice before it vanished, leaving her tumbling into a space where gravity held no jurisdiction. There was no sound here. No clicks, no shifting roots, no whispers. Only the fading flicker of the crimson light and the terrifying, absolute silence of the in-between. She curled her knees to her chest, the pendant finally dimming to a soft, rhythmic hum. Not today. I’m not yours today. She drifted in the blackness, the pressure slowly normalizing against her skin while she watched her own breath vanish into the infinite void. The Grove was behind her, trapped in its pocket of distorted time, while she remained suspended, waiting for the rift to deposit her somewhere that stayed still. Her pulse slowed as the heat in her chest faded, leaving her trembling in the sudden aftermath of the hunt. She traced the scar on her wrist with her thumb, feeling the sharp, jagged imperfection of her own skin in the dark. Silence became her only companion, indifferent and vast. She stared into the nothingness, searching for a sign of anything that wasn't the reflection of her own terrified eyes. Where does it end? And who finds me if I stop here?
created_at"2026-03-03T22:41:42.445Z" 3/3/2026, 10:41:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
82.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1164
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"perfectly"
2"sharply"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1164
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"rhythmic"
count3
4
word"traced"
count2
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count2
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count2
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"beacon"
count1
13
word"velvet"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count1
15
word"maw"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
17
word"aftermath"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"oppressive"
2"silence"
3"rhythmic"
4"traced"
5"scanned"
6"gloom"
7"pulse"
8"warmth"
9"intensity"
10"pulsed"
11"racing"
12"beacon"
13"velvet"
14"vibrated"
15"maw"
16"flicker"
17"aftermath"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences83
matches
0"d with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1160
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount1160
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.26
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Grove3
Rory3
Heartstone1
Hel1
persons
0"Grove"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"vibration that seemed to emanate from the very roots beneath her feet"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.862
wordCount1160
matches
0"not grass, but a dense, living carpet of intertwined root systems"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean41.43
std22.67
cv0.547
sampleLengths
071
19
262
357
413
544
659
752
87
965
1062
1117
1252
138
1469
1545
166
1750
1861
1952
2014
2150
2253
2344
246
2570
2650
2712
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs175
matches(empty)
39.59% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences83
ratio0.036
matches
0"Another sound drifted through the stagnant air—the faint, rhythmic clicking of teeth."
1"She sensed the movement just behind her ear—a rush of displaced air, the smell of ozone and wet earth."
2"A ripple in the space—a tear in the reality of the Grove—widened as the artifact recognized the proximity to the Hel portal."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1167
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"pressing cold against her"
1"uneven, moss-covered ground,"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.02913453299057412
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012853470437017995
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean13.98
std7.41
cv0.53
sampleLengths
023
121
227
35
44
513
63
79
817
920
107
1110
1212
1328
143
153
167
1715
1822
197
2012
2121
2226
233
246
258
2616
2719
287
299
3020
3115
3221
3316
3411
3514
3621
3717
387
3915
4017
4113
428
4320
4428
4521
4613
4720
487
495
48.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3493975903614458
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences81
matches
0"Just show me where."
1"Just a delivery."
2"Only the fading flicker of"
ratio0.037
47.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences81
matches
0"She clutched the silver chain"
1"It belongs here, doesn't it?"
2"Her voice died instantly, swallowed"
3"She traced the crescent scar"
4"She whipped her head around,"
5"She took a step forward,"
6"It originated from everywhere and"
7"She backed toward the standing"
8"She turned a slow, deliberate"
9"She reached out, her fingers"
10"She pivoted toward the heat"
11"They stood perfectly still, their"
12"She squeezed her eyes shut,"
13"It seeped into her mind,"
14"She opened her eyes, finding"
15"They moved only when she"
16"I’m looking for the portal,"
17"She spun on her heel,"
18"She focused on the vibration"
19"She did not look at"
ratio0.432
71.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences81
matches
0"The ancient oak stones loomed"
1"Rory stepped across the threshold,"
2"She clutched the silver chain"
3"It belongs here, doesn't it?"
4"Her voice died instantly, swallowed"
5"The temperature plummeted, turning her"
6"She traced the crescent scar"
7"Something skittered behind the nearest"
8"A dry, scraping sound, like"
9"She whipped her head around,"
10"The foliage remained undisturbed, a"
11"The pendant surged with warmth,"
12"The gemstone pulsed in time"
13"She took a step forward,"
14"Another sound drifted through the"
15"It originated from everywhere and"
16"She backed toward the standing"
17"The grove stretched."
18"She turned a slow, deliberate"
19"The path she had taken"
ratio0.778
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The ancient oak stones loomed against the black canvas of the Richmond sky, their gnarled surfaces twisted into shapes that defied natural growth."
1"The temperature plummeted, turning her breath into ragged plumes of white mist that hung suspended like ghosts."
2"It originated from everywhere and nowhere, a constant, shifting vibration that seemed to emanate from the very roots beneath her feet."
3"A dozen pale shapes detached themselves from the base of the standing stones, towering, spindly silhouettes that possessed no discernable faces."
4"She spun on her heel, her breath hitching as the pendant flared again, burning hot enough to blister her skin."
5"The air grew dense, viscous, forcing her to slog through it as if submerged in deep water."
6"She lunged forward, her hand hitting the side of an massive, pulsating column that felt disturbingly like a chest cavity."
7"She stared into the nothingness, searching for a sign of anything that wasn't the reflection of her own terrified eyes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.7437%