Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTXTMFQ6D1SP7A15XYWFQSD

Run Details

Duration:
9.1s
Cost:
$0.002823
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knocking came at the door with a rhythmic, impatient cadence that rattled the three deadbolts. Rory ignored it at first, hunched over a stack of yellowing research notes that smelled of dust and stale tea. Ptolemy, the tabby, shifted his weight on top of her laptop, emitting a soft, vibrating protest as the sound persisted. Rory sighed, the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itching with the dull ache that usually accompanied a change in the weather. She stood, smoothing her jumper, and crossed the cramped living space of Eva’s flat. She shouldn’t have been surprised. Brick Lane was a magnet for the kind of trouble she’d spent the last year trying to outrun, but the specific vibration of this knock carried a weight she recognized too clearly. She threw the bolts—one, two, three—and swung the door open, ready to tell whoever it was to get lost. The air in the hallway shifted, turning sharp with the scent of expensive cologne and ozone. Lucien stood there, his platinum blond hair slicked back with ruthless precision, his amber and black eyes cutting through the dim light of the landing. He looked like an anomaly in the hallway’s peeling paint and flickering fluorescent bulb, his tailored charcoal suit defying the humidity of East London. Held loosely in his right hand was his ivory-handled cane, a piece of equipment she knew better than anyone was as much a weapon as a vanity accessory. Rory didn’t move aside. She gripped the edge of the door frame, her bright blue eyes narrowing. You have a hell of a nerve, Lucien. He didn't blink, his gaze sweeping over her with a predatory languor that tightened the breath in her chest. A pleasure to see you too, Rory. Though I seem to recall a more hospitable reception in the past. The past was a minefield she wasn’t interested in crossing. She shifted, her shoulder pressed against the jamb. Eva’s out. And I’m exhausted. If this is about the information broker bullshit, find someone else to bother. I’m just delivering noodles these days. Lucien leaned forward, the motion fluid and deceptive, closing the distance between them until he was standing within the threshold. He smelled of rain and distant fires. He didn’t step inside, but he didn’t retreat, either. He possessed a stillness that made the surrounding books and scrolls feel peripheral. I am not here for information, he said, his voice low, sliding over her like velvet against raw skin. And I am quite aware of your current employment. The Golden Empress has excellent pork buns, though you are remarkably slow on the delivery route when it rains. She felt a hot spike of irritation. You’ve been following me? I have been keeping watch, he corrected, tilting his head. There is a distinction. She opened her mouth, a retort primed and ready, but the words withered. Seeing him here, in the sanctuary of Eva’s cramped life, brought the jagged edges of their last encounter back to the surface. It had been messy. It had been high-stakes, and it had involved a betrayal of trust that she hadn't quite forgiven, even if her body still hummed in a betrayal of its own every time he flickered into her periphery. Get out, she managed, her voice lacking the bite she wanted. Lucien’s expression softened, just for a heartbeat. The amber eye held a flicker of something that looked dangerously like regret. I came because I heard whispers in the city, Rory. Things are moving beneath the surface. You have a target on your back you aren't even aware of yet, and while you are clever—remarkably so—you are also human. And humans are fragile things. She scoffed, a brittle sound. I’ve survived Evan. I’ve survived Cardiff. I think I can handle whatever is crawling around beneath London. He stepped inside then, unbidden, and she had to retreat or be touched. He moved to the center of the room, his boots making no sound on the floorboards. He looked at the stacks of books, his eyes scanning the titles as if he were reading their memories. We had an arrangement, he said, his back to her. We both agreed that distance was the safest path. Yet here you are, living above a bar, working a job that keeps you on the street corner at strange hours, making yourself a beacon for those who hunt for people like you. I like my life, she shot back, closing the door and bolting it behind her. She didn't want him here. She wanted to shove him back into the hallway and bury her head in her research until he ceased to exist. I like the noise. I like the anonymity. And I don’t need a half-demon informant acting like my guardian angel. He turned back to her, the movement sharp. He tossed his cane onto the sofa where Ptolemy immediately sniffed it and scrambled away. He walked toward her, and Rory felt the heat radiating off him, the sheer physical intensity that had once made her weak-kneed and foolish. Guardian angel? He chuckled, a dark, rich sound. I am far from an angel, Rory. You know that better than anyone. He stopped a foot from her, his presence forcing her to tilt her head back to meet his gaze. He reached out, his thumb brushing the skin of her left wrist, just beneath the sleeve of her jumper, tracing the crescent scar. She shivered, a betrayal she cursed herself for. Your heart rate says otherwise. Stop it, she hissed, pulling her hand away. Can you just leave? Can you just go back to your ivory towers and your information games and leave me to fix my own messes? I tried, he whispered. I counted the days. I cataloged the silence. I even tried to find someone else to annoy, someone whose wit wasn't as sharp as a razor and whose eyes didn't look like an ocean I shouldn't be swimming in. He moved closer then, backing her against the wall. The space behind her was filled with shelves, but his shadow eclipsed everything. He leaned in, his hands coming up to rest on the wall on either side of her head, caging her. It was a move he’d made a hundred times before, and every time, it felt like the first. You are impossible, she breathed, her pulse thudding in her throat. And you, he said, his lips just inches from hers, are the only thing in this city that feels real. The tension that had kept her rigid for months finally snapped. It wasn't a choice; it was an inevitability, like gravity. She reached up, hooking her fingers into the lapels of his charcoal suit, and pulled him down. The kiss was desperate, tasting of frustration, silence, and the iron-scent of a connection severed and forced back together. Lucien groaned, a sound that vibrated through her chest, and his hands moved to her waist, pulling her flush against him. He was solid, unyielding, a contrast to the fragile, theoretical world she lived in. For a moment, the books, the research, the threat of the supernatural, and the ache of her past disappeared, replaced only by the heat of his skin and the overwhelming, maddening desire to just let go. He drew back just enough to look at her, his mismatched eyes dark with an intensity that burned. He ran a hand down her hair, his fingers lingering at the nape of her neck. You are never going to make this easy for me, are you? She laughed, a ragged, breathless sound, and leaned her forehead against his. Easy has never been our thing, Lucien. He hummed, pressing a firm kiss to her temple. No. It hasn't. He didn't pull away. He stayed there, holding her as the evening light began to fade through the dusty windows, the silence in the flat no longer heavy, but charged with a new, dangerous kind of promise. Outside, the city of London continued its roar, but inside, Rory felt the first quiet moment she’d had in a year. She knew it wouldn't last—with Lucien, it never did—but for now, she let her eyes close, and she simply breathed him in.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1380
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1380
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"encounter"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"beacon"
count1
9
word"intensity"
count2
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"cataloged"
count1
12
word"silence"
count3
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
16
word"desire"
count1
17
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"weight"
2"velvet"
3"sanctuary"
4"encounter"
5"flickered"
6"flicker"
7"scanning"
8"beacon"
9"intensity"
10"tracing"
11"cataloged"
12"silence"
13"pulse"
14"tension"
15"vibrated"
16"desire"
17"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences105
matches
0"was desperate"
61.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"think"
2"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1374
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions7
matches
0"I am not here for information, he said, his voice low, sliding over her like velvet against raw skin."
1"I have been keeping watch, he corrected, tilting his head."
2"We had an arrangement, he said, his back to her."
3"Stop it, she hissed, pulling her hand away."
4"I tried, he whispered."
5"You are impossible, she breathed, her pulse thudding in her throat."
6"And you, he said, his lips just inches from hers, are the only thing in this city that feels real."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1374
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.58
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Lane1
East1
London3
Lucien7
Rory8
Golden1
Empress1
Evan1
Cardiff1
Ptolemy2
You6
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Empress"
4"Evan"
5"Ptolemy"
6"You"
places
0"Lane"
1"East"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
58.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like an anomaly in the hallway’s p"
1"quite forgiven, even if her body still hummed in a betrayal of its own every time he flickered into her periphery"
2"felt like the first"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1374
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"agreed that distance"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean45.8
std25.55
cv0.558
sampleLengths
056
173
219
393
425
538
642
749
847
911
1014
1175
1211
1363
1422
15100
1661
1747
1876
1933
2043
2160
2211
2320
2457
2571
2646
2719
2812
2980
98.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"been surprised"
1"was filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs252
matches
0"was standing"
1"were reading"
34.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences105
ratio0.038
matches
0"She threw the bolts—one, two, three—and swung the door open, ready to tell whoever it was to get lost."
1"You have a target on your back you aren't even aware of yet, and while you are clever—remarkably so—you are also human."
2"It wasn't a choice; it was an inevitability, like gravity."
3"She knew it wouldn't last—with Lucien, it never did—but for now, she let her eyes close, and she simply breathed him in."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1386
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.03535353535353535
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.008658008658008658
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean13.09
std8.25
cv0.63
sampleLengths
016
120
220
322
414
55
632
719
816
925
1024
1128
124
1313
148
1519
167
1712
1810
198
202
213
2213
236
2420
257
269
2713
2819
299
3019
317
324
3310
344
3513
3622
374
3836
3911
407
4113
4210
436
4422
455
465
473
483
4911
30.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount64
totalSentences101
matches
0"She stood, smoothing her jumper,"
1"She shouldn’t have been surprised."
2"She threw the bolts—one, two,"
3"He looked like an anomaly"
4"She gripped the edge of"
5"You have a hell of"
6"He didn't blink, his gaze"
7"She shifted, her shoulder pressed"
8"I’m just delivering noodles these"
9"He smelled of rain and"
10"He didn’t step inside, but"
11"He possessed a stillness that"
12"I am not here for"
13"She felt a hot spike"
14"You’ve been following me?"
15"I have been keeping watch,"
16"She opened her mouth, a"
17"It had been messy."
18"It had been high-stakes, and"
19"I came because I heard"
ratio0.634
49.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences101
matches
0"The knocking came at the"
1"Rory ignored it at first,"
2"Ptolemy, the tabby, shifted his"
3"Rory sighed, the crescent-shaped scar"
4"She stood, smoothing her jumper,"
5"She shouldn’t have been surprised."
6"Brick Lane was a magnet"
7"She threw the bolts—one, two,"
8"The air in the hallway"
9"Lucien stood there, his platinum"
10"He looked like an anomaly"
11"Rory didn’t move aside."
12"She gripped the edge of"
13"You have a hell of"
14"He didn't blink, his gaze"
15"A pleasure to see you"
16"The past was a minefield"
17"She shifted, her shoulder pressed"
18"I’m just delivering noodles these"
19"Lucien leaned forward, the motion"
ratio0.822
99.01% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"Though I seem to recall"
1"If this is about the"
ratio0.02
39.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The knocking came at the door with a rhythmic, impatient cadence that rattled the three deadbolts."
1"He didn't blink, his gaze sweeping over her with a predatory languor that tightened the breath in her chest."
2"He possessed a stillness that made the surrounding books and scrolls feel peripheral."
3"He looked at the stacks of books, his eyes scanning the titles as if he were reading their memories."
4"Yet here you are, living above a bar, working a job that keeps you on the street corner at strange hours, making yourself a beacon for those who hunt for people…"
5"He walked toward her, and Rory felt the heat radiating off him, the sheer physical intensity that had once made her weak-kneed and foolish."
6"He reached out, his thumb brushing the skin of her left wrist, just beneath the sleeve of her jumper, tracing the crescent scar."
7"He leaned in, his hands coming up to rest on the wall on either side of her head, caging her."
8"Lucien groaned, a sound that vibrated through her chest, and his hands moved to her waist, pulling her flush against him."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.2421%