| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 96.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1380 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.29% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1380 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "encounter" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "beacon" | | 9 | "intensity" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "cataloged" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "tension" | | 15 | "vibrated" | | 16 | "desire" | | 17 | "charged" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 61.22% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seem to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1374 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "I am not here for information, he said, his voice low, sliding over her like velvet against raw skin." | | 1 | "I have been keeping watch, he corrected, tilting his head." | | 2 | "We had an arrangement, he said, his back to her." | | 3 | "Stop it, she hissed, pulling her hand away." | | 4 | "I tried, he whispered." | | 5 | "You are impossible, she breathed, her pulse thudding in her throat." | | 6 | "And you, he said, his lips just inches from hers, are the only thing in this city that feels real." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1374 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | Lane | 1 | | East | 1 | | London | 3 | | Lucien | 7 | | Rory | 8 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | You | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Empress" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Ptolemy" | | 6 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Lane" | | 1 | "East" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 58.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like an anomaly in the hallway’s p" | | 1 | "quite forgiven, even if her body still hummed in a betrayal of its own every time he flickered into her periphery" | | 2 | "felt like the first" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1374 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 45.8 | | std | 25.55 | | cv | 0.558 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 93 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 75 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 63 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 100 | | 16 | 61 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 76 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 43 | | 21 | 60 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 71 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 80 |
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| 98.58% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "been surprised" | | 1 | "was filled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 252 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "were reading" |
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| 34.01% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "She threw the bolts—one, two, three—and swung the door open, ready to tell whoever it was to get lost." | | 1 | "You have a target on your back you aren't even aware of yet, and while you are clever—remarkably so—you are also human." | | 2 | "It wasn't a choice; it was an inevitability, like gravity." | | 3 | "She knew it wouldn't last—with Lucien, it never did—but for now, she let her eyes close, and she simply breathed him in." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1386 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.03535353535353535 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008658008658008658 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 13.09 | | std | 8.25 | | cv | 0.63 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 30.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.2857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood, smoothing her jumper," | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have been surprised." | | 2 | "She threw the bolts—one, two," | | 3 | "He looked like an anomaly" | | 4 | "She gripped the edge of" | | 5 | "You have a hell of" | | 6 | "He didn't blink, his gaze" | | 7 | "She shifted, her shoulder pressed" | | 8 | "I’m just delivering noodles these" | | 9 | "He smelled of rain and" | | 10 | "He didn’t step inside, but" | | 11 | "He possessed a stillness that" | | 12 | "I am not here for" | | 13 | "She felt a hot spike" | | 14 | "You’ve been following me?" | | 15 | "I have been keeping watch," | | 16 | "She opened her mouth, a" | | 17 | "It had been messy." | | 18 | "It had been high-stakes, and" | | 19 | "I came because I heard" |
| | ratio | 0.634 | |
| 49.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The knocking came at the" | | 1 | "Rory ignored it at first," | | 2 | "Ptolemy, the tabby, shifted his" | | 3 | "Rory sighed, the crescent-shaped scar" | | 4 | "She stood, smoothing her jumper," | | 5 | "She shouldn’t have been surprised." | | 6 | "Brick Lane was a magnet" | | 7 | "She threw the bolts—one, two," | | 8 | "The air in the hallway" | | 9 | "Lucien stood there, his platinum" | | 10 | "He looked like an anomaly" | | 11 | "Rory didn’t move aside." | | 12 | "She gripped the edge of" | | 13 | "You have a hell of" | | 14 | "He didn't blink, his gaze" | | 15 | "A pleasure to see you" | | 16 | "The past was a minefield" | | 17 | "She shifted, her shoulder pressed" | | 18 | "I’m just delivering noodles these" | | 19 | "Lucien leaned forward, the motion" |
| | ratio | 0.822 | |
| 99.01% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Though I seem to recall" | | 1 | "If this is about the" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 39.17% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The knocking came at the door with a rhythmic, impatient cadence that rattled the three deadbolts." | | 1 | "He didn't blink, his gaze sweeping over her with a predatory languor that tightened the breath in her chest." | | 2 | "He possessed a stillness that made the surrounding books and scrolls feel peripheral." | | 3 | "He looked at the stacks of books, his eyes scanning the titles as if he were reading their memories." | | 4 | "Yet here you are, living above a bar, working a job that keeps you on the street corner at strange hours, making yourself a beacon for those who hunt for people…" | | 5 | "He walked toward her, and Rory felt the heat radiating off him, the sheer physical intensity that had once made her weak-kneed and foolish." | | 6 | "He reached out, his thumb brushing the skin of her left wrist, just beneath the sleeve of her jumper, tracing the crescent scar." | | 7 | "He leaned in, his hands coming up to rest on the wall on either side of her head, caging her." | | 8 | "Lucien groaned, a sound that vibrated through her chest, and his hands moved to her waist, pulling her flush against him." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |