| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 82.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1156 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1156 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "gloom" | | 12 | "rhythmic" | | 13 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 48.87% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1154 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1154 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.95 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Aurora | 11 | | London | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Blade | 3 | | Dymas | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.75% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking through a curtain of" | | 1 | "felt like velvet, warm and springy" | | 2 | "orchards that seemed to stretch into eternity" | | 3 | "looked like it had been torn from the ver" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1154 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 41.21 | | std | 25.21 | | cv | 0.612 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 73 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 68 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 67 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 61 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 75 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 72 | | 27 | 23 |
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| 96.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "been torn" | | 1 | "being denied" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 204 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.67% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground bucked, throwing her off-balance, and the bioluminescent moss beneath her feet shrieked—a high, discordant sound that rattled her teeth." | | 1 | "The smell of rot deepened, and in the distance, a sound began—the heavy, rhythmic thud of something massive moving through the orchard, snapping branches and crushing fruit under a weight that didn't belong to the wandering souls." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1162 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "long, shadow-wrought hand" |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.022375215146299483 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00946643717728055 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 15.18 | | std | 7.87 | | cv | 0.519 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 36 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 43.86% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.34210526315789475 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 44.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the dirt feels like" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 97.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped forward." | | 1 | "She stood on the edge" | | 2 | "Her boots sank into soil" | | 3 | "She reached out to touch" | | 4 | "She pulled her hand away," | | 5 | "She clutched the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 6 | "They were gaunt, their skin" | | 7 | "They did not notice her," | | 8 | "They look like souls who" | | 9 | "They just want the next" | | 10 | "She found a clearing dominated" | | 11 | "She walked closer, her eyes" | | 12 | "She withdrew the Fae-Forged Blade." | | 13 | "She leaned over the basin," | | 14 | "Your heartbeat is quickening, Aurora." | | 15 | "It wants to consume your" | | 16 | "She plunged the moonsilver edge" | | 17 | "She felt a phantom resistance," | | 18 | "She braced her boots against" | | 19 | "She didn't wait to see" |
| | ratio | 0.307 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora gripped the cold silver" | | 1 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 2 | "The stones themselves are breathless" | | 3 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form" | | 4 | "Aurora hesitated, the crescent scar" | | 5 | "She stepped forward." | | 6 | "The transition felt like walking" | | 7 | "She stood on the edge" | | 8 | "The sky above hung a" | | 9 | "Nature here is a glutton," | | 10 | "Nyx swept a long, shadow-wrought" | | 11 | "A waterfall descended from floating" | | 12 | "Aurora pushed aside a curtain" | | 13 | "Her boots sank into soil" | | 14 | "She reached out to touch" | | 15 | "The moment her skin connected" | | 16 | "Everything is alive." | | 17 | "She pulled her hand away," | | 18 | "She clutched the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 19 | "The air grew thicker, heavier," |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "If I pull that out," | | 1 | "Now we have to decide" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form passing through an ancient oak standing stone as if it were nothing more than mist." | | 1 | "In the distance, sprawling vineyards climbed impossibly steep terraces, the vines hung heavy with fruit that pulsated like open veins." | | 2 | "The air grew thicker, heavier, saturated with a perfume that made her lungs ache with a strange, sugary longing." | | 3 | "Aurora felt the pendant burn, a searing heat that forced her to adjust the fabric of her coat to keep it from bruising her skin." | | 4 | "She found a clearing dominated by a single, colossal stone fountain, its basin overflowing with liquid that smelled of fermented spice and ancient wine." | | 5 | "A series of carvings lined the stone, depicting banquet tables that stretched for miles, crowded with figures who looked identical to those currently ravaging t…" | | 6 | "Floating in the center, barely visible beneath the golden surface of the wine-like liquid, laid a sliver of darkness, a jagged shard that looked like it had bee…" | | 7 | "The ground bucked, throwing her off-balance, and the bioluminescent moss beneath her feet shrieked—a high, discordant sound that rattled her teeth." | | 8 | "The figures in the distance stopped their feasting, their heads snapping toward her position in unison, eyes glowing with a hungry, predatory light." | | 9 | "The shard within the basin cracked as the moonsilver edge made contact, shattering into a spray of obsidian dust that dissolved into the liquid." | | 10 | "The amber sky overhead flickered, losing its warmth, turning a muted, sickly gray." | | 11 | "She stepped backward into the shadows cast by the trees, finding where Nyx already stood, their silhouette merging perfectly with the approaching darkness." | | 12 | "The smell of rot deepened, and in the distance, a sound began—the heavy, rhythmic thud of something massive moving through the orchard, snapping branches and cr…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |