Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTXYQN04E3AMD3WSQACVS2X

Run Details

Duration:
6.6s
Cost:
$0.002295
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the London pavement, turning the asphalt into a black mirror reflecting the frantic pulse of Soho’s neon. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots hammered against the cobblestones, each impact sending a spray of cold gray slush onto her trousers. Her gaze remained locked on the silhouette darting through the shadows ahead. Tomás Herrera moved with a frantic, desperate gait, his shoulders hunched against the biting wind. He rounded a corner, his figure blurring into the gloom of a narrow alleyway. Quinn checked her left wrist. The leather strap of her watch dug into the skin as she crested the incline, her breathing rhythmic despite the sprint. Three years of grinding investigative work fueled her stride. She gained ground, her sharp jaw set tight as she rounded the corner just in time to see his jacket snag on a rusted chain-link fence. Stop right there. Hands where I can see them. Tomás spun, his breath hitching as he scrambled backward, eyes darting toward the crumbling brick façade of an abandoned service stairwell. He reached instinctively for the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat, his thumb rubbing the metal until his knuckles turned white. You should have stayed in the shadows, Detective. The law doesn't hold much weight where I’m going. He shoved a heavy metal door inward, the hinges shrieking a protest that vibrated through the damp air. Quinn surged forward, her hand moving toward the holster at her hip, though her finger stayed off the trigger. She grabbed the edge of the door before it could swing shut, her fingers biting into the cold iron. The path ahead plunged downward into total darkness, the metallic scent of ozone and rot rising to meet her. A flickering torchlight hummed deep within the bowels of the earth, casting long, erratic shadows against the tile walls of a disused Underground station. She ignored the warning bells clanging in her mind, the military precision of her training screaming for backup, for a perimeter, for anything other than this blind descent. She descended the concrete stairs, her heels clicking a staccato rhythm that echoed into the abyss. Each step took her further from the hum of the city, into a silence punctuated only by the drip of stagnant water. At the base of the stairs, the architecture shifted. Gone were the familiar grit of London’s subway tiles, replaced by slabs of worn obsidian etched with symbols she couldn't decipher. A heavy archway loomed ahead, framed by flickering green neon that barely pierced the suffocating gloom. The air grew thick, vibrating with a low, dissonant tone that rattled her teeth. She pulled her flashlight from her belt, the beam cutting a violent path through the darkness. It landed momentarily on a figure standing near the turnstiles. Tomás didn't turn back, but he paused, his gaze fixed on a small, pale object sitting on a pedestal of bone. Turn around. We can do this in the interrogation room, or we can do this here. Your choice, Herrera. I don't think you realize what you’re standing in, Harlow. Look at the walls. Quinn scanned the chamber. Hundreds of items hung from ropes made of woven hair: glass vials filled with shifting smoke, rusted blades pulsing with internal heat, and books bound in scales that shimmered under her strobe. A heavy, iron-wrought gate marked the entrance to the market proper, its padlock fashioned from a human skull. She realized then that there was no light here other than the necromantic glow of the goods on display. Keep moving. I didn't come this far to watch you window-shop. He took a step toward the gate, his boots crunching on a layer of ash covering the floor. He drew a small, jagged bone token from his pocket, pressing it into a groove on the iron frame. The metal groaned. The gate rolled open a fraction, revealing a sprawling cavern beneath the earth where figures draped in tattered velvet bartered over crates of glowing alchemical reagents. This isn't a crime scene. It's a sanctuary you aren't invited to. Quinn reached out, grabbing his sleeve, but he slipped from her grip with a fluidity that shouldn't have been possible. He dove through the gap in the gates and turned, his warm brown eyes reflecting the sickly luminescence of the market floor. He seemed older suddenly, the lines on his face deepened by the subterranean light. He didn't look like a man fleeing an arrest; he looked like a man returning home to a master he feared far more than the police. Cross that threshold and you’re no longer operating under the Metropolitan Police handbook. The weight of her badge felt like a cold stone against her chest. She stared past him, into the shifting, twilight mass of the market, where creatures with too many limbs haggled with merchants whose faces shifted like liquid. Her partner Morris had disappeared investigating this very periphery. Every instinct she possessed told her to turn back, to call for a containment unit, to burn this place to the ground from the outside. Yet, the ghost of the evidence he held—a vial of something that defied the laws of biology—dangled just out of reach. She stood on the precipice, the stale, metallic air of the underground sucking the heat from her lungs. She looked at the bone token slot, the way the ancient material seemed to pulse in time with her own heartbeat. Step away from the gate and lower your hands. Now. She stepped over the threshold, her boot splashing into a puddle of thick, violet liquid. The gate slammed shut behind her, the lock clicking into place with the finality of a coffin lid. The sound echoed into the deeper reaches of the tunnels, drawing the attention of a dozen silhouetted figures who slowly turned as one. They didn't watch her with the curious stare of civilians; they looked at her like a predator watching a rabbit stumble into a lion’s den. You just made the biggest mistake of your career, Detective. Tomás stepped away, vanishing into the dense throng of market-goers. Quinn raised her light, but the beam died as if smothered by a wet curtain. The air went deathly cold, and the only sound remaining was the heavy, rhythmic thumping of something massive moving somewhere far below the market floor. She drew her service weapon, the steel cold and useless in her grip, and turned to find her way back, but the archway she had just passed through no longer existed. Only solid, damp, weeping concrete stood behind her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
86.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1096
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1096
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"gloom"
count2
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count1
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"shimmered"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"sanctuary"
count1
14
word"predator"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"gloom"
2"rhythmic"
3"weight"
4"vibrated"
5"echoed"
6"silence"
7"familiar"
8"etched"
9"loomed"
10"scanned"
11"shimmered"
12"velvet"
13"sanctuary"
14"predator"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
82.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences71
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"realize"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1094
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1094
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London2
Soho1
Harlow2
Quinn6
Herrera2
Saint1
Christopher1
Detective3
Underground1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Morris1
Tomás4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Underground"
6"Morris"
7"Tomás"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
27.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed older suddenly, the lines on his face deepened by the subterranean light"
1"looked like a man returning home to a mas"
2"felt like a cold stone against her ches"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1094
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Cross that threshold"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean47.57
std29.46
cv0.619
sampleLengths
080
161
29
342
417
556
671
768
877
919
1014
1173
1211
1366
1412
1582
1613
1773
1860
1910
2081
2110
2289
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs175
matches(empty)
22.13% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences71
ratio0.042
matches
0"He didn't look like a man fleeing an arrest; he looked like a man returning home to a master he feared far more than the police."
1"Yet, the ghost of the evidence he held—a vial of something that defied the laws of biology—dangled just out of reach."
2"They didn't watch her with the curious stare of civilians; they looked at her like a predator watching a rabbit stumble into a lion’s den."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1100
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, iron-wrought gate"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03090909090909091
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.00909090909090909
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean15.41
std7.66
cv0.497
sampleLengths
019
120
212
315
414
55
621
79
826
93
106
1121
1221
138
149
1518
1619
1719
1819
1924
2028
2116
2222
239
2421
2516
2614
2716
2810
2921
302
3114
323
3310
344
354
3632
3718
3819
392
409
4118
4219
433
4426
455
467
4720
4822
4914
65.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4507042253521127
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners32
49.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Only solid, damp, weeping concrete"
ratio0.015
43.53% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences68
matches
0"Her gaze remained locked on"
1"He rounded a corner, his"
2"She gained ground, her sharp"
3"He reached instinctively for the"
4"You should have stayed in"
5"He shoved a heavy metal"
6"She grabbed the edge of"
7"She ignored the warning bells"
8"She descended the concrete stairs,"
9"She pulled her flashlight from"
10"It landed momentarily on a"
11"We can do this in"
12"Your choice, Herrera."
13"I don't think you realize"
14"She realized then that there"
15"I didn't come this far"
16"He took a step toward"
17"He drew a small, jagged"
18"It's a sanctuary you aren't"
19"He dove through the gap"
ratio0.441
26.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences68
matches
0"Rain slicked the London pavement,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots hammered"
2"Her gaze remained locked on"
3"Tomás Herrera moved with a"
4"He rounded a corner, his"
5"Quinn checked her left wrist."
6"The leather strap of her"
7"She gained ground, her sharp"
8"Hands where I can see"
9"Tomás spun, his breath hitching"
10"He reached instinctively for the"
11"You should have stayed in"
12"The law doesn't hold much"
13"He shoved a heavy metal"
14"Quinn surged forward, her hand"
15"She grabbed the edge of"
16"The path ahead plunged downward"
17"A flickering torchlight hummed deep"
18"She ignored the warning bells"
19"She descended the concrete stairs,"
ratio0.868
73.53% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Yet, the ghost of the"
ratio0.015
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Tomás spun, his breath hitching as he scrambled backward, eyes darting toward the crumbling brick façade of an abandoned service stairwell."
1"He shoved a heavy metal door inward, the hinges shrieking a protest that vibrated through the damp air."
2"She ignored the warning bells clanging in her mind, the military precision of her training screaming for backup, for a perimeter, for anything other than this b…"
3"She descended the concrete stairs, her heels clicking a staccato rhythm that echoed into the abyss."
4"The air grew thick, vibrating with a low, dissonant tone that rattled her teeth."
5"Hundreds of items hung from ropes made of woven hair: glass vials filled with shifting smoke, rusted blades pulsing with internal heat, and books bound in scale…"
6"He took a step toward the gate, his boots crunching on a layer of ash covering the floor."
7"Yet, the ghost of the evidence he held—a vial of something that defied the laws of biology—dangled just out of reach."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.3743%