Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTY00T9VK4HNCMJRPJCAK93

Run Details

Duration:
8.2s
Cost:
$0.002908
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The scent of ozone and wet rot clung to the damp walls of the abandoned Camden station. Deep beneath the city, the air thickened with a pressure that pressed against Harlow Quinn’s eardrums. She adjusted her grip on the flashlight, the beam slicing through centuries of soot. Her boots crunched against shattered glass and bone fragments that crunched with a hollow, rhythmic snap. A cluster of uniforms stood huddled near the edge of the abandoned platform. Beyond them, a jagged rip in the air shimmered, casting flickering shadows against the grime-stained tiles. It wasn't a structural flaw or an act of vandalism. It was a tear in the fabric of the space itself, bleeding a faint, bioluminescent hue that bathed the tracks in sickly violet light. Detective Inspector Miller blocked her path, his face a mask of annoyance. He gestured toward the rip with a calloused thumb, his breath hitching in the cold. "High-voltage leak tore the station up. Some kind of experimental turbine gone wrong in the tunnels below. We need the area cordoned off before the civilians start wandering down here." Harlow stepped past him, her eyes tracking the peculiar lack of debris surrounding the rift. Usually, an explosion of energy scattered stone and steel. Here, the silt on the rail tracks remained undisturbed, even close to the pulsing energy. She knelt, checking her watch. The leather strap tightened against her wrist, the worn surface familiar. The needle of the internal compass she carried—a small, brass tool with sigils etched deep into its face—spun erratically, then locked toward the tear. "Turbines don't leave residual shadow, Miller. Look at the shadows on the wall. They’re cast toward the light source, not away from it." "Physics is messy in close quarters, Quinn. Don't go making a mystery out of a maintenance disaster." She ignored him, reaching into her pocket to pull out a single, jagged bone token she had confiscated from a low-level snuffler three weeks ago. The object vibrated in her palm, humming a low, discordant note that vibrated through her marrow. She walked toward the rift, the air growing colder with every inch. Where the light touched the floor, the rust on the tracks disappeared entirely, replaced by a pristine, silver sheen that looked like quicksilver. She traced the edge of the light with her fingertip, her skin prickling as if stung by a thousand invisible needles. No surge of electricity could strip away metal fatigue. This was intentional. This was an excavation. "Whatever caused this didn't come from the tunnels," she muttered, rising to her full height. She turned to find Miller watching her with narrowed eyes, his hand resting on the holster at his hip. "Enough of the superstition. The commissioner wants this report on his desk by morning. We call it an electrical fault, we bring in the transit guys to seal the tunnel, and we move on. That is the order." "An order based on a lie creates a paper trail that haunts the next person tasked with this beat, Miller. I lost a partner to this kind of 'fault' three years ago. I’m not signing off on another ghost." Harlow knelt again, shining her light on a series of faint, geometric scratches etched into the platform’s concrete lip. They matched the markings on the Veil Compass she had seen in the restricted catalogs years ago. They were not vandalism; they were anchors. Small pieces of the Veil Market had been dragged into the living world, tethered by these markings to keep the rift from collapsing. She felt the weight of the station above them. If this rift opened fully, the physical boundaries of the city would dissolve. The Market would spill out into the tunnels, or worse, into the streets above. "Someone went through a lot of effort to pull a piece of that nightmare into our reality," she said, her voice dropping to a low, serrated edge. "This wasn't a leak. It was a threshold." "You need to step back, Quinn. You’re talking nonsense." "Am I?" She swung the flashlight toward the back of the platform, where a satchel lay abandoned against a rusted pillar. It was an old leather thing, identical to the one Eva Kowalski carried to the library every single Tuesday. The bag was open, books spilled across the floor—not textbooks, but archaic, leather-bound manuscripts that defied the modern light. Miller stepped forward, his boots heavy, but Harlow moved faster. She snatched a leather-bound book from the pile before Miller could stop her. The cover felt like drying skin. She flipped it open, scanning lines written in shifting ink that reorganized themselves into legible English under her touch. *The Veil requires a blood price for passage.* "If your 'electrical fault' can carry a library of forbidden artifacts, Miller, then I’m a ghost." "That evidence is compromised, Quinn. Hand it over." "Compromised by who? You were here when the scene broke. How did you know to come down here before the monitors even registered the power spike?" Miller hesitated. A flicker of something cold passed through his eyes—a momentary lapse in the military precision he usually displayed. He hadn't been waiting for the report; he had been protecting the site. Harlow stood, holding the book loosely at her side. The rift behind her pulsed, the violet glow deepening into a bruised, blackened hue. The sound of shifting metal echoed from deep within the rift, like a giant clock mechanism turning in the dark. "You didn't call this in because you didn't trust the forensics team to miss the anomalies," she stated, her gaze pinned to his throat. "You called me because you thought I was still too broken by Morris’s death to see the threads." "You were the best detective on the force, Harlow. We need someone who can see behind the curtain to help manage the overflow. The city is changing. The Market is hungry. Surely you of all people understand the necessity of keeping the public blind." "I understand the necessity of burying men who treat the city like an open grave." She tucked the book into her coat and pulled her service weapon, the steel cold and familiar in her hand. The hum from the rift grew until it became a physical roar, shaking the rusted advertisements off the station walls. Dust poured from the ceiling, clouding the air in a thick, gray shroud. "The rules of the precinct don't apply down here, Miller. You know that. You’ve been selling access to the Market for months." "I’ve been ensuring we don’t get overrun, Quinn. Evolution is coming. You can either be the one to guide it or the one who gets crushed when it arrives." Harlow didn't wait for his next move. She moved to the side, her steps measured, keeping the pillar between her and the rift. The light from the tear began to elongate, twisting into a serpentine shape that hung in the middle of the air. It wasn't just a portal; it was a hungry, sentient thing. She looked at her watch again. The hands had stopped moving entirely. The verdigris on the watch casing spread, creeping outward like a disease, consuming the leather strap. "You haven't been keeping them out, Miller," she said, raising her weapon. "You've been inviting them in." "Maybe you should have just looked the other way like everyone else." Miller pulled his weapon, the movement practiced and fluid, but Harlow was already behind the turnstile. She didn't aim for him. She aimed for the concrete floor beneath the rift, where the geometric sigils glowed with a frantic, pulsing rhythm. One shot. Two. The force of the bullets shattered the concrete, splintering the anchors. The rift groaned, a sound like tearing metal, and the violet light began to fray at the edges, collapsing inward. Miller lunged, but the vacuum created by the imploding rift pulled at their coats, dragging them toward the center of the swirling dark. Harlow braced her feet against the platform, the book tucked tight under her arm, staring into the heart of the tear as it swallowed itself. The station plunged into absolute, crushing blackness, leaving nothing but the sound of labored breathing and the lingering, metallic stench of the Void.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1379
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1379
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"shattered"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"etched"
count2
5
word"vibrated"
count2
6
word"pristine"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"grave"
count1
14
word"ensuring"
count1
15
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"rhythmic"
2"shimmered"
3"familiar"
4"etched"
5"vibrated"
6"pristine"
7"traced"
8"weight"
9"scanning"
10"flicker"
11"pulsed"
12"echoed"
13"grave"
14"ensuring"
15"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
61.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords8
totalWords1375
ratio0.006
matches
0"The Veil requires a blood price for passage."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount966
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow8
Quinn1
Inspector1
Miller7
Veil3
Compass1
Market2
Eva1
Kowalski1
Tuesday1
English1
Void1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Inspector"
3"Miller"
4"Veil"
5"Market"
6"Eva"
7"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like quicksilver"
1"felt like drying skin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.727
wordCount1375
matches
0"not textbooks, but archaic, leather-bound manuscripts"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
99.63% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean37.16
std18.53
cv0.499
sampleLengths
063
163
227
330
479
523
617
753
860
934
1038
1139
1266
1336
1435
159
162
1757
1856
1916
208
2126
2233
2343
2442
2544
2615
2753
2822
2929
3055
3128
3217
3312
3454
3543
3648
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"been dragged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs161
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences88
ratio0.068
matches
0"The needle of the internal compass she carried—a small, brass tool with sigils etched deep into its face—spun erratically, then locked toward the tear."
1"They were not vandalism; they were anchors."
2"The bag was open, books spilled across the floor—not textbooks, but archaic, leather-bound manuscripts that defied the modern light."
3"A flicker of something cold passed through his eyes—a momentary lapse in the military precision he usually displayed."
4"He hadn't been waiting for the report; he had been protecting the site."
5"It wasn't just a portal; it was a hungry, sentient thing."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount974
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"archaic, leather-bound manuscripts"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.01642710472279261
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008213552361396304
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean15.63
std8.16
cv0.522
sampleLengths
017
116
214
316
413
516
610
724
812
915
1030
1115
129
1315
145
1511
1624
1723
1817
1925
2016
2112
2223
2321
249
253
264
2715
2819
2938
3039
3119
3217
337
3423
359
3613
3714
3827
398
409
412
4219
4319
4419
4510
4613
476
4819
498
53.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3977272727272727
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners35
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Usually, an explosion of energy"
ratio0.015
52.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences67
matches
0"She adjusted her grip on"
1"Her boots crunched against shattered"
2"It wasn't a structural flaw"
3"It was a tear in"
4"He gestured toward the rip"
5"She knelt, checking her watch."
6"She ignored him, reaching into"
7"She walked toward the rift,"
8"She traced the edge of"
9"she muttered, rising to her"
10"She turned to find Miller"
11"They matched the markings on"
12"They were not vandalism; they"
13"She felt the weight of"
14"she said, her voice dropping"
15"She swung the flashlight toward"
16"It was an old leather"
17"She snatched a leather-bound book"
18"She flipped it open, scanning"
19"He hadn't been waiting for"
ratio0.418
12.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences67
matches
0"The scent of ozone and"
1"She adjusted her grip on"
2"Her boots crunched against shattered"
3"A cluster of uniforms stood"
4"It wasn't a structural flaw"
5"It was a tear in"
6"Detective Inspector Miller blocked her"
7"He gestured toward the rip"
8"Harlow stepped past him, her"
9"Here, the silt on the"
10"She knelt, checking her watch."
11"The leather strap tightened against"
12"The needle of the internal"
13"She ignored him, reaching into"
14"The object vibrated in her"
15"She walked toward the rift,"
16"She traced the edge of"
17"This was intentional."
18"This was an excavation."
19"she muttered, rising to her"
ratio0.896
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"If this rift opened fully,"
ratio0.015
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"It was a tear in the fabric of the space itself, bleeding a faint, bioluminescent hue that bathed the tracks in sickly violet light."
1"Harlow stepped past him, her eyes tracking the peculiar lack of debris surrounding the rift."
2"The object vibrated in her palm, humming a low, discordant note that vibrated through her marrow."
3"Where the light touched the floor, the rust on the tracks disappeared entirely, replaced by a pristine, silver sheen that looked like quicksilver."
4"She traced the edge of the light with her fingertip, her skin prickling as if stung by a thousand invisible needles."
5"She turned to find Miller watching her with narrowed eyes, his hand resting on the holster at his hip."
6"The bag was open, books spilled across the floor—not textbooks, but archaic, leather-bound manuscripts that defied the modern light."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice dropping to a low, serrated edge"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she stated (state)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.182
76.3740%