Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTY60VQG9R88BVS4JTWQTC4

Run Details

Duration:
4m 53s
Cost:
$0.004351
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory’s fingers were sticky with soy sauce, smudged across the iron latch of the third deadbolt. She’d just finished unlocking the three locks—per Eva’s non-negotiable rule, scrawled in neon pink marker on the fridge door—when she heard the knock. Three soft raps, the exact rhythm Eva used when she came home from her shift at the bookstore. She squinted through the peephole, glad she’d grabbed her glasses from the coffee table earlier, even if they perched lopsided on her nose. The view through the tiny glass circle was blurry, but she caught a flash of platinum hair and a tailored suit, and her chest tightened to the point of ache. She twisted the latch one last time and pulled the door wide. His charcoal suit was pressed so sharp the lapels cut through the streetlamp glow, platinum hair slicked back so tight it looked like he’d run a comb through it while the gel was still wet, ivory cane propped against his thigh. The faint scratch along the ivory handle caught her eye first—she’d made that mark last summer, on a hike in the Brecon Beacons, when she’d tripped over a root and grabbed onto his cane to keep from falling. He’d wiped the mud off it later, laughing as he’d said it adds character. “Lucien.” It came out smaller than she intended, and she shifted her grip on the delivery bags, one slipping a little, the vegetable spring rolls inside clinking against the foil. He nodded, his mouth set in a thin line, like he’d rehearsed this a hundred times but none of it felt right. “Rory.” His voice carried the soft lilt of Marseille, the same tone that had whispered sweet nothins on his balcony last summer, when they’d watched the sun set over the port. Brick Lane hummed around them. The fryers at the curry house below hissed shut for the night, a group of teen skateboarders shouted as they ollied over a curb, a vegan donut truck fired up its fryer. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, yowled from the windowsill inside, and Rory jumped a little, breaking the spell between them. She stepped back, holding the door open wider, unsure if she should invite him in or shut it in his face. The last time she’d seen him, she’d packed her backpack in the middle of the night, left a crumpled note on his kitchen counter that said I’m sorry, I can’t do this, and caught the first train to London. She’d blocked his number, deleted every text, changed her phone number, and spent six months replaying their last fight in her head, the way he’d grabbed her arm and said I can help you, and she’d screamed I don’t need your help, before running out of his apartment and never looking back. She’d thought he’d hate her for it, for bailing on him when he was in the middle of a high-stakes job for a coven of river vampires, for leaving him holding the bag. He crossed the threshold, his cane tapping once on the warped wooden entryway floor. The smell of old paper and cardamom incense wrapped around him, and Rory remembered the way Eva burned that incense when she stayed up all night researching faerie lore, scrolling through stolen British Library scrolls on her dining room table. He stopped just inside the door, looking around at the stacks of books on every surface, the scrolls taped to the walls, the cat curling around his leather dress shoe and rubbing against the ankle. “Eva’s still hoarding grimoires like they’re going out of style.” Rory set the delivery bags on the kitchen counter, next to a half-empty mug of chamomile tea Eva had left out, and wiped her sticky fingers on her jeans. “She found a new 17th-century one last week. Says it’s got secrets about faerie portals in the Thames. She’s been begging for a hardcover copy for months.” She was deflecting, she knew it, but she couldn’t think of anything else to say. She’d spent months trying to forget the way he’d looked at her when she left, like she’d stabbed him in the heart, like she didn’t care about the years they’d spent together, the plans they’d made to move to Marseille together, to open a tiny bookstore and a bar on the port. She’d thought he’d forgotten all about that, too. Lucien leaned against the kitchen counter, his cane tapping once, twice on the tile floor. “I sent her a hardcover copy last week. Thought she’d prefer it over a digitized PDF.” Rory’s head snapped up, and for a second she forgot how to breathe. “You didn’t have to do that.” “I wanted to.” He stepped closer, and she could smell sea salt on his skin, mixed with the faint cigar smoke from his hidden Shoreditch office, the same scent he’d worn the night they’d first kissed, on the Brecon Beacons, after they’d finished hiking and sat by a campfire drinking spiked hot chocolate. “I’ve been looking for you, Rory. For six months.” She sank onto the arm of Eva’s scuffed couch, where a stack of research notes was piled high, and ran a hand through her shoulder-length black hair, mussing it up. “Why?” She whispered it, like saying it too loud would break the fragile moment between them. “Because I love you. Or I did, before you ran off in the middle of the night and vanished without a word.” His voice was quiet, raw, nothing like the polished fixer she’d known for the last two years. He’d never sounded like that before, not even when his father’s coven had threatened to disown him for dating a human, not even when he’d had to take down a rogue demon terrorizing a small village in the south of France. Rory’s throat tightened, and she wiped at her eyes with the back of her hand, laughing a little at the absurdity of it all. The crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed, like it was remembering the last time Evan had grabbed her, six months before she’d fled to London. Evan, who’d followed her to Cardiff, who’d broken into her apartment and smashed all her mother’s old teacups, who’d screamed that she couldn’t leave him, that he owned her. She’d called Lucien that night, sobbing, and he’d come over and held her while she cried, and she’d promised herself she’d never let him get hurt again. “I didn’t run off because I didn’t love you.” The words tumbled out, the ones she’d been holding in for six months. “I ran off because I didn’t want to drag you into it. Evan was sick, Lucien. He’d find out about you, about your father, about all of this supernatural crap, and he’d use it against you. He’d hurt you, just like he hurt me, and I couldn’t let that happen.” He crossed the rest of the distance between them, and reached out, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist, light enough that she could pull away if she wanted. Rory didn’t pull away. He ran a single finger along the crescent mark, and a shiver snaked down her spine. “This scar. Evan did this to you.” It was a statement, not a question, and she nodded, her eyes stinging. “I should have told you sooner. About my father, about the demon stuff. I should have trusted you enough to let you choose, instead of keeping it from you until it was too late.” His amber eye softened, his black pupil dilated, and his thumb brushed over the scar again. “I never stopped loving you, either. I just thought you’d never want to see me again. I thought you hated me for not dropping my job to come with you to London.” Rory leaned forward, her hands cupping his face, her thumbs brushing the corners of his eyes, and she kissed him. It started soft, like they were both afraid to break the fragile moment, but then it deepened, his hands wrapping around her waist, pulling her closer, and she could forget about Evan, about the three deadbolts, about the stacks of grimoires scattered across Eva’s flat. She could just feel the warmth of his body, the taste of mint on his tongue, the way his fingers dug gently into her hips, like he was afraid she’d vanish again. Ptolemy jumped onto the couch, rubbing between their legs, and they pulled apart, laughing, a little breathless. Rory rested her head on Lucien’s shoulder, and he wrapped his arm around her, setting his cane down next to the couch. “I’m not going anywhere this time.” He murmured it into her hair, and she nodded, her eyes closing, listening to the steady thud of his heartbeat against her cheek. “I know.” She whispered it, and for the first time in six months, she felt safe. The hum of Brick Lane filtered through the windows, the smell of cardamom and old paper wrapped around them, and for a second, the world felt exactly like it should.
created_at"2026-03-03T22:47:59.619Z" 3/3/2026, 10:47:59 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.647
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"lilt"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"lilt"
1"throbbed"
2"down her spine"
3"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences51
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences57
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1507
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1271
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva7
Brecon2
Beacons2
Marseille2
Brick2
Lane2
Rory9
London2
British1
Library1
Shoreditch1
France1
Evan3
Cardiff1
Lucien3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Brecon"
1"Marseille"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"London"
5"British"
6"Library"
7"France"
8"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
47.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like he’d run a comb through it wh"
1"sounded like that before, not even when hi"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1507
matches(empty)
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences57
matches
0"made that mark"
1"burned that incense"
2"screamed that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean88.65
std48.1
cv0.543
sampleLengths
0122
1123
253
3200
499
5131
631
719
862
946
1080
11178
1270
1382
1497
1568
1646
91.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences51
matches
0"was pressed"
1"was piled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs221
matches
0"was deflecting"
1"was remembering"
42.61% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences57
ratio0.035
matches
0"She’d just finished unlocking the three locks—per Eva’s non-negotiable rule, scrawled in neon pink marker on the fridge door—when she heard the knock."
1"The faint scratch along the ivory handle caught her eye first—she’d made that mark last summer, on a hike in the Brecon Beacons, when she’d tripped over a root and grabbed onto his cane to keep from falling."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1278
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.026604068857589983
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001564945226917058
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences57
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences57
mean26.44
std12.69
cv0.48
sampleLengths
016
123
218
323
430
512
641
738
814
930
1022
1131
125
1332
1418
1521
1639
1752
1833
1914
2040
2135
2210
2329
2442
2552
268
2715
2816
2913
306
3153
329
3330
3416
3539
3641
3724
3826
3929
4027
4122
4250
4330
444
4516
4620
4750
4832
4920
37.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.2982456140350877
totalSentences57
uniqueOpeners17
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences51
matches
0"She’d just finished unlocking the"
1"She squinted through the peephole,"
2"She twisted the latch one"
3"His charcoal suit was pressed"
4"He’d wiped the mud off"
5"It came out smaller than"
6"He nodded, his mouth set"
7"His voice carried the soft"
8"She stepped back, holding the"
9"She’d blocked his number, deleted"
10"She’d thought he’d hate her"
11"He crossed the threshold, his"
12"He stopped just inside the"
13"She was deflecting, she knew"
14"She’d spent months trying to"
15"She’d thought he’d forgotten all"
16"He stepped closer, and she"
17"She sank onto the arm"
18"She whispered it, like saying"
19"His voice was quiet, raw,"
ratio0.588
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences51
matches
0"Rory’s fingers were sticky with"
1"She’d just finished unlocking the"
2"She squinted through the peephole,"
3"The view through the tiny"
4"She twisted the latch one"
5"His charcoal suit was pressed"
6"The faint scratch along the"
7"He’d wiped the mud off"
8"It came out smaller than"
9"He nodded, his mouth set"
10"His voice carried the soft"
11"Brick Lane hummed around them."
12"The fryers at the curry"
13"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, yowled from"
14"She stepped back, holding the"
15"The last time she’d seen"
16"She’d blocked his number, deleted"
17"She’d thought he’d hate her"
18"He crossed the threshold, his"
19"The smell of old paper"
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory leaned forward, her hands cupping his face, her thumbs brushing the corners of his eyes, and she kissed him."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she nodded, her eyes stinging"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She whispered (whisper)"
1"He murmured (murmur)"
2"She whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.353
72.7592%