| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 92.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1310 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 4.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1310 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "chilling" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "down her spine" | | 10 | "gloom" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "echoing" | | 16 | "silence" | | 17 | "desire" | | 18 | "whisper" | | 19 | "variable" | | 20 | "maw" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1301 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "This is the threshold, Isolde said, her voice a melodic ripple that seemed to emanate from the very trees." | | 1 | "Stay close, Nyx whispered." | | 2 | "You carry fire from the pits of Dymas, Isolde said." | | 3 | "Dymas, Isolde whispered, her voice echoing in the sudden silence." |
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| 92.35% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 1301 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 15 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 3 | | Nyx | 4 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Isolde | 9 | | Veil | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Dymas | 4 | | Hel | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | You | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Dymas" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.924 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 42.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like velvet beneath her soles" | | 1 | "ripple that seemed to emanate from the very trees" | | 2 | "looked like pressed metal; a stream nearb" |
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| 46.27% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.537 | | wordCount | 1301 | | matches | | 0 | "not into the mud of Richmond Park, but into a carpet of silver-tipped moss" | | 1 | "not the grey-blue of a London afternoon, but a deep, bruised amethyst, swirling with clouds" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 56.57 | | std | 28.6 | | cv | 0.506 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 106 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 89 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 73 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 107 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 74 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 124 |
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| 92.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "was unlined" | | 1 | "are tangled" | | 2 | "was owed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 203 | | matches | | 0 | "was glowing" | | 1 | "was pulling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, the bustle of London—the distant hum of traffic and the grumble of city life—simply ceased, cut off by the monoliths of twisted oak that acted as sentinels to this pocket of reality." | | 1 | "Far above, she could see a faint shimmering distortion—a ripple in the air like heat rising from a road—that marked the boundary between this pocket and the true thin places of the world." | | 2 | "Every step forward revealed a new impossibility: lilies that bloomed in reverse, spiraling outward from the dust; trees with bark that looked like pressed metal; a stream nearby that flowed uphill, its water a translucent, glowing blue." | | 3 | "She found herself focusing on the small, human details to keep from drifting away—the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, the texture of her damp sleeve, the steady, rhythmic pulse of the Heartstone." | | 4 | "In its place was a glimpse of a world saturated in agonizing warmth—a landscape of lush, sprawling vineyards where the grapes hung heavy and bloated like bruised fruit, and orchards where the branches dripped with translucent, amber sap." | | 5 | "She saw flashes of movement—pale, elongated figures moving through the tall grass, their mouths stitched shut, their eyes wide and weeping." | | 6 | "She pulled the Heartstone from beneath her coat; it was glowing brightly now, a deep, pulsating crimson that matched the color of the sky in the rift." | | 7 | "She turned to Isolde, the clarity of her legal training—the ability to dissect a case, to find the one hidden variable that ruined the entire argument—surging to the surface." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1319 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "sickly, over-ripe aroma" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.028051554207733132 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006823351023502654 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 16.26 | | std | 9.56 | | cv | 0.588 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 38.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 42.19% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Ever since the benefactor had" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 42.78% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed aside a heavy" | | 1 | "She did not walk so" | | 2 | "She stopped at the center" | | 3 | "It was warm against her" | | 4 | "She felt the weight of" | | 5 | "It made her eyes ache." | | 6 | "She had always prided herself" | | 7 | "It was vision that demanded" | | 8 | "They hovered close to Rory," | | 9 | "It was beautiful, but it" | | 10 | "She found herself focusing on" | | 11 | "They moved toward a cluster" | | 12 | "She turned, her lavender eyes" | | 13 | "She did not blink." | | 14 | "You carry fire from the" | | 15 | "You hold the key to" | | 16 | "It’s just a piece of" | | 17 | "She shifted her weight, sensing" | | 18 | "You would be peeled and" | | 19 | "You think this gift protects" |
| | ratio | 0.443 | |
| 48.61% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove" | | 1 | "She pushed aside a heavy" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted alongside her, their" | | 3 | "Isolde moved ahead, her silver" | | 4 | "She did not walk so" | | 5 | "She stopped at the center" | | 6 | "Rory reached instinctively for the" | | 7 | "It was warm against her" | | 8 | "She felt the weight of" | | 9 | "This is the threshold, Isolde" | | 10 | "The Veil is thin here," | | 11 | "Rory looked up." | | 12 | "The sky was not the" | | 13 | "It made her eyes ache." | | 14 | "She had always prided herself" | | 15 | "It was vision that demanded" | | 16 | "The sound was like dry" | | 17 | "They hovered close to Rory," | | 18 | "The shadows here are hungry," | | 19 | "Rory nodded, her gaze sweeping" |
| | ratio | 0.823 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "If we are standing in" | | 1 | "If you peek behind the" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 21.79% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove tasted of ozone and crushed violets, a sharp, cloying sweetness that clung to the back of Rory’s throat." | | 1 | "She pushed aside a heavy curtain of weeping willow branches, her boots sinking not into the mud of Richmond Park, but into a carpet of silver-tipped moss that f…" | | 2 | "Behind her, the bustle of London—the distant hum of traffic and the grumble of city life—simply ceased, cut off by the monoliths of twisted oak that acted as se…" | | 3 | "Where Rory cast a shadow that stretched long and human across the earth, Nyx seemed to drink the light, their faintly glowing violet eyes flickering like distan…" | | 4 | "It was warm against her sternum, pulsating with a rhythmic, steady heat that mimicked a heartbeat." | | 5 | "Far above, she could see a faint shimmering distortion—a ripple in the air like heat rising from a road—that marked the boundary between this pocket and the tru…" | | 6 | "Every step forward revealed a new impossibility: lilies that bloomed in reverse, spiraling outward from the dust; trees with bark that looked like pressed metal…" | | 7 | "As they neared, Rory felt the pendant thrum violently, a tremor that traveled up her chest and settled in her teeth." | | 8 | "The sky there was a permanent, heavy gold, and the air that bled through carried the scent of roasting meat and honey, a sickly, over-ripe aroma that made Rory’…" | | 9 | "She pulled the Heartstone from beneath her coat; it was glowing brightly now, a deep, pulsating crimson that matched the color of the sky in the rift." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |