Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTY6T0ZB1P6F945SF2ZMFB7

Run Details

Duration:
5m 15s
Cost:
$0.004846
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The drizzle clung to Rory’s shoulder-length black hair, leaving cool beads that trickled down the nape of her neck under the bun she’d slapped together that morning. She tucked the empty delivery bag under her arm, the plastic crinkling loud against the hum of Soho traffic, and rubbed at the ache in her left calf where her scooter's footrest had rubbed a blister that afternoon. The crescent scar on her left wrist peeked out when she pushed her sleeve up, a faint silver line that had followed her from Cardiff’s cobblestone side streets to this flat above the green-neon glow of The Raven’s Nest. She’d clocked out an hour ago, but she’d stopped to grab a pack of mint gum from the corner shop, and now she was finally heading home, after a 10-hour shift hauling dumpling and chowder orders across West London. She’d been avoiding this block for three months. Ever since she’d signed the lease on the studio above the bar, ever since she’d heard the soft thud of a limp through the floorboards and recognized the rough, quiet voice of the man who’d knocked on her door on moving day, offering her a free pint and a warning not to scratch the vintage jukebox’s vinyl inserts. Silas Blackwood, the bar’s owner, had vanished before she could say thank you, and after that, Rory had stuck to the back alleys when she came home late, skirting the green neon sign like it was a landmine. She’d heard him through the ceiling some nights: low, clipped conversations with people who spoke in coded phrases, the clink of crystal glasses, the soft scrape of a chair being dragged across the scuffed wooden floor. She’d never gone inside. Until tonight, when a plume of mint and tobacco smoke billowed out from the bar’s back alley entrance, and a woman leaned against the brick wall, cigarette between her fingers, head tilted like she was waiting for someone she’d been waiting years to see. Rory stopped short, her gum packet slipping from her grasp and plopping onto the wet pavement. She stared, and for a second she was back in 2012, sitting on Eva’s bedroom floor in Canton, painting each other’s nails neon pink, Eva laughing so hard she snort-laughed when Rory accidentally dabbed a blob of polish on her own knee. The woman in front of her had cropped auburn hair, the same tight curls that had once tangled in Rory’s bike basket when they’d ridden to the seaside two summers in a row, a tiny silver moon charm swinging from a thin chain around her neck, and a nose ring that glinted in the neon green light. She’d gotten a tattoo on her left wrist, a thin crescent mirroring the faint scar on Rory’s own, and her faded black jeans were fitted tight over her hips, instead of the high-waisted denim overalls she’d worn every day to school. A silver stud peeked out from her earlobe, next to a tiny hoop, and her lips were painted a deep red, nothing like the clear gloss she’d slathered on every morning in Cardiff. “Rory?” the woman said, her voice hoarse, like she hadn’t spoken in a week. She flicked her cigarette into the gutter, and stitched her hands together in front of her, a nervous habit Rory hadn’t seen since the day she’d tried to tell Eva she was dating Evan. Rory’s throat closed up. She’d spent five years avoiding this, five years pretending that the girl in Cardiff had stayed there, that she hadn’t left a trail of broken promises and silent goodbyes behind her. “Eva?” she said, her voice coming out smaller than she meant it to, like she was afraid the woman would vanish if she spoke too loud. The woman blew out a cloud of smoke, and her eyes widened—bright brown, the same color as the day she’d shown up at Rory’s dorm with a carton of fish and chips, crying because Evan had yelled at Rory for forgetting their third anniversary. “Is that actually you?” Rory nodded, and Eva stepped forward, and they hugged, tight, like they were afraid the other would disappear. Eva’s shoulder was hard from carrying heavy bartender trays, and her hair smelled like peppermint and cigarette smoke, but it was still the same girl who’d sat with her in the hospital after she’d fallen off her bike and gotten the crescent scar, who’d held her hand while the doctor stitched her up. “I didn’t know you were in London,” Rory said, pulling back, and wiping at the tear that had slipped down her cheek. Eva laughed, a sharp, dry sound that didn’t reach her eyes. “I moved here six months ago. Got a job at this bar— Silas hired me. Didn’t think I’d ever step foot in a place this fancy, to be honest. Back in Cardiff, I was working at a bookstore that smelled like old paper and cat litter, and I couldn’t afford a coffee that didn’t come from a gas station.” She nodded at Rory’s uniform shirt, the red and gold embroidery of Golden Empress peeking out under her frayed denim jacket. “What about you? Last I heard, you were pre-law at Cardiff. You were gonna follow your dad’s footsteps, make him proud.” Rory’s face heated up. She’d never told Eva that she’d dropped out of pre-law, that she’d packed her backpack in the middle of the night and left Cardiff without a word, that she’d run all the way to London because Evan had found out where she was staying with Eva’s cousin. “I— I didn’t follow the plan.” “No shit,” Eva said, and then she winced, like she’d said too much. “Sorry. I just— I waited. For three years. You promised you’d call every Sunday. You even wrote it on a sticky note and stuck it to my fridge, right after you left Cardiff. Said you’d text me every week, no matter what. Then one day, the note was gone, and you didn’t answer any of my texts, and I thought you’d dead, or— or that you hated me.” Rory’s throat tightened. She’d forgotten the sticky note. She’d forgotten that Eva had put it on her fridge, that she’d stared at it every morning until the day Evan had shown up at her cousin’s flat in Roath, screaming and slamming doors. She’d grabbed her laptop and her backpack and run out the back gate, leaving her phone behind, leaving all of her notes and clothes and the sticky note behind. She’d thought she’d never see Eva again, but here she was, standing in front of her, with a crescent tattoo on her wrist and a nose ring and a life in London that Rory didn’t even know about. “I didn’t hate you,” she said, her voice breaking. “Evan found me. He tracked me to Eva’s cousin’s place. I had to leave. I didn’t have time to grab my phone, or your number, or— anything. I didn’t even know how to reach you.” Eva’s eyes softened, and she reached up to touch the crescent scar on Rory’s wrist. “I got this tattoo after you left,” she said, tapping the crescent on her own wrist. “Told myself I’d never forget the best friend I had. I thought you’d left me for dead, Rory. For a guy who made you scared to breathe.” Rory shook her head, and she leaned against the brick wall next to Eva, and they both watched the traffic pass by. “I never left you. I just— I was scared. I was scared he’d find me again, scared he’d hurt you if he found out where I was, scared I’d let you down by not being the pre-law student my dad wanted.” She laughed, a bitter, tight sound. “I’ve been working delivery for Golden Empress for three months. I live in a flat above this bar, the one with the leaky faucet in the bathroom and the broken window that faces the alley. I haven’t told my dad anything. He still thinks I’m in pre-law in Cardiff.” Eva’s face fell, a little. “You never told him? He’s gonna kill you.” “I know,” Rory said, and she ran a hand through her bun, pulling at the hair tie. “I’ve been putting it off. I don’t know how to face him. He always wanted me to be a barrister, just like him. I let him talk me into pre-law, and then I realized I didn’t want that life. I didn’t want to be in a courtroom, arguing with people for money. I just wanted to be safe.” Silas’s voice cut through the quiet, and they both turned to see him standing in the bar’s doorway, his grey-streaked auburn hair pulled back into a loose bun, his neatly trimmed beard dusted with a little rain, his silver signet ring glinting on his right hand. He leaned against the doorframe, his slight left limp making him favor the wall a little. “You two should come inside. It’s raining harder, and I’ve got a bottle of Irish whiskey hidden behind the bar, the good stuff. Brendan’s favorite.” Rory’s eyes widened. “You know my dad?” Silas smiled, a faint, tired smile. “Brendan and I worked a few cases together back when I was still in MI6. He came to me a year before you left Cardiff, worried about you. Said you were dating a guy who had a temper, who’d been hitting you. I told him I’d keep an eye out. When you moved into the flat above the bar, I recognized your last name. I figured it was you. I didn’t say anything because you asked me not to. Figured you’d come around when you were ready.” He nodded at the bar’s entrance. “Come on. It’s slow tonight. I’ll make you both a drink. On the house.” Eva glanced at Rory, and she nodded, and together they followed Silas inside the bar, the green neon light fading behind them as the door clicked shut. The walls were lined with old maps of London and black-and-white photographs of people Rory didn’t recognize, mostly men in suits, holding guns and smiling for the camera. The air smelled like roasted nuts and malt whiskey, and the jukebox in the corner was playing a slow, soft folk song that Rory recognized, one that Eva and her had listened to on repeat in Cardiff. Silas pulled two glasses from the shelf behind the bar, and poured a generous amount of Irish whiskey into each, handing one to Rory and one to Eva. “So,” he said, leaning against the bar, “tell me everything. From the moment you left Cardiff.” Eva slid into a stool at the bar, and Rory sat next to her, and for the next hour, they talked. Eva told Rory about her divorce, about how she’d moved to London to start over, about how Silas had hired her after she’d de-escalated a drunk customer who’d refused to pay for his drink by matching his bourbon order and listening to his war stories until he calmed down. Rory told Eva about leaving Evan, about living in the flat above the bar, about working delivery, about how she’d lied to her father every week about her “crime seminar” and her “library study sessions.” Silas listened, quiet, sipping his own whiskey, and occasionally added a detail that Rory had forgotten, like the night she’d called him from a payphone outside the bus station, crying, because she’d lost her wallet and her scooter had broken down. Rory had forgotten that call. She’d thought she’d never talked to anyone from her old life again, but here she was, sitting in a bar she’d been avoiding for three months, talking to her best friend and the man who’d helped her without even knowing it. For the first time in five years, she didn’t feel like she was running. She felt like she was home.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1993
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1993
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"coded"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"charm"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"coded"
1"crystal"
2"charm"
3"flicked"
4"footsteps"
5"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences58
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen93
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1992
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions81
wordCount1447
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory29
Soho1
Cardiff5
Raven1
Nest1
West1
London5
Blackwood1
Eva20
Canton1
Evan5
Golden1
Empress1
Roath1
Silas7
Irish1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Blackwood"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Empress"
6"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"West"
3"London"
globalScore0.498
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like peppermint and cigarette smok"
1"smelled like roasted nuts and malt whiskey"
2"felt like she was home"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1992
matches(empty)
23.81% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"pretending that the"
1"forgotten that Eva"
2"forgotten that call"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean83
std46.84
cv0.564
sampleLengths
0143
1144
244
3189
448
561
648
771
822
9112
1057
1181
12153
1358
14118
1513
1675
1787
187
19113
2092
2144
22146
2366
87.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences58
matches
0"being dragged"
1"were painted"
2"were lined"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs219
matches
0"was finally heading"
1"was waiting"
2"was dating"
3"was staying"
4"was, standing"
5"was playing"
6"was running"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences70
ratio0.014
matches
0"The woman blew out a cloud of smoke, and her eyes widened—bright brown, the same color as the day she’d shown up at Rory’s dorm with a carton of fish and chips, crying because Evan had yelled at Rory for forgetting their third anniversary."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1456
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"fitted tight over her"
1"slight left limp making"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.02197802197802198
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.003434065934065934
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean28.46
std20.17
cv0.709
sampleLengths
027
138
239
339
48
558
638
736
84
944
1016
1142
1257
1341
1433
1514
1634
174
1831
1926
2044
214
2218
2353
2422
2511
2680
2721
284
2947
306
3113
3268
333
345
3534
3629
3738
389
3935
4015
4116
4227
4322
4447
4549
465
478
4817
4958
35.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners21
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Ever since she’d signed the"
ratio0.017
54.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences58
matches
0"She tucked the empty delivery"
1"She’d clocked out an hour"
2"She’d been avoiding this block"
3"She’d heard him through the"
4"She’d never gone inside."
5"She stared, and for a"
6"She’d gotten a tattoo on"
7"She flicked her cigarette into"
8"She’d spent five years avoiding"
9"she said, her voice coming"
10"She nodded at Rory’s uniform"
11"She’d never told Eva that"
12"She’d forgotten the sticky note."
13"She’d forgotten that Eva had"
14"She’d grabbed her laptop and"
15"She’d thought she’d never see"
16"she said, her voice breaking"
17"she said, tapping the crescent"
18"She laughed, a bitter, tight"
19"He leaned against the doorframe,"
ratio0.414
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences58
matches
0"The drizzle clung to Rory’s"
1"She tucked the empty delivery"
2"The crescent scar on her"
3"She’d clocked out an hour"
4"She’d been avoiding this block"
5"Silas Blackwood, the bar’s owner,"
6"She’d heard him through the"
7"She’d never gone inside."
8"Rory stopped short, her gum"
9"She stared, and for a"
10"The woman in front of"
11"She’d gotten a tattoo on"
12"A silver stud peeked out"
13"the woman said, her voice"
14"She flicked her cigarette into"
15"Rory’s throat closed up."
16"She’d spent five years avoiding"
17"she said, her voice coming"
18"The woman blew out a"
19"Rory nodded, and Eva stepped"
ratio0.948
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The crescent scar on her left wrist peeked out when she pushed her sleeve up, a faint silver line that had followed her from Cardiff’s cobblestone side streets …"
1"Ever since she’d signed the lease on the studio above the bar, ever since she’d heard the soft thud of a limp through the floorboards and recognized the rough, …"
2"She’d heard him through the ceiling some nights: low, clipped conversations with people who spoke in coded phrases, the clink of crystal glasses, the soft scrap…"
3"The woman in front of her had cropped auburn hair, the same tight curls that had once tangled in Rory’s bike basket when they’d ridden to the seaside two summer…"
4"Eva’s shoulder was hard from carrying heavy bartender trays, and her hair smelled like peppermint and cigarette smoke, but it was still the same girl who’d sat …"
5"Eva told Rory about her divorce, about how she’d moved to London to start over, about how Silas had hired her after she’d de-escalated a drunk customer who’d re…"
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice breaking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.083
72.8358%