Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTY7GTB12SXBKY794AVBGZN

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Duration:
5m 5s
Cost:
$0.004575
Provider:
Seed

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rusted steel stairwells of the abandoned Camden Tube platform groaned under Harlow Quinn’s weight, each footfall echoing off damp brick walls that reeked of mildew and something sweeter, something acrid—burnt sage and ozone, the scent of magic she’d first smelled in the hospital waiting room three years prior, when DS Morris’s body had been pulled from the Thames with no visible cause of death. She checked her worn leather watch on her left wrist, the seconds ticking with military precision, and spotted the full moon peeking through the grating above: bright, round, exactly as the rumors promised—this market moved locations only on full moons. She’d climbed over the rusted lip of the grating an hour prior, and tucked under the edge was a small raven tibia, polished smooth by years of dust and damp. A bone token, she realized now; the entry requirement for the Veil Market, handed to her by whoever’d sent the anonymous tip scrawled on a parking ticket: Veil Market. Body. Compass. Her salt-and-pepper cropped hair brushed the collar of her wool coat as she stepped onto the platform, and she squinted against the pale lavender glow of fairy lights strung between support beams. Stalls lined the disused tracks, draped in velvet tapestries etched with sigils that hummed when she drifted too close; jars of glowing fireflies sat next to leather-bound grimoires with cracked spines, and a vendor in a hooded black robe waved a chunk of obsidian at her, his voice a low rasp that sounded like it filtered through a wall of water. “Protection amulets, lass—keep the wraiths at bay!” But Harlow kept walking, her hand resting on the pepper spray holstered at her hip, her eyes fixed on the figure slumped against the far pillar. Her field partner, DC Jamie Tyler, was already kneeling beside the body, his notebook open in one hand, a flashlight clamped between his teeth. He looked up when she approached, his face flushed from climbing the stairs, and gestured at the body with his pen. “Thought you were kidding when you said we were investigating a ‘supernatural black market,’ Quinn. Looks like a standard Camden mugging—guy’s got a knife wound through the chest, wallet’s missing, phone’s gone. Probably got jumped after buying something from a vendor.” Harlow knelt beside him, ignoring the dust that coated her wool trousers, and leaned in to get a closer look at the body. The victim was a middle-aged man with silver hair, wearing a threadbare British Museum coat over a faded cotton shirt; a crumpled ID peeking out of his inside pocket read DR. KAI MARTELL, Curator of Ancient Near Eastern Ritual Artefacts. In his right palm, clamped so tight his knuckles were white, was a small brass compass—one exactly like the Veil Compasses Eva had rambled about for months: its face etched with twisted protective sigils, its casing dulled by a thick verdigris patina, crafted by a Shade artisan, she’d been told, to point directly to the nearest supernatural rift or portal. The same sigils she’d traced on Morris’s police badge in the hospital morgue, redacted from the official report and labeled “forensic anomalies.” “Wallet’s still in his inside pocket,” Harlow said, pointing at the frayed outer pocket of his coat, the fabric torn clean through like someone had dug through it with a sharp tool, not just grabbed it in a panicked mugging. “Torn open like they were looking for something specific, not the cash. And that wound—look at it. Clean, sharp, no jagged edges. A mugger’s switchblade wouldn’t leave that. Too precise, too deliberate.” Tyler leaned in, shining his flashlight on the wound, and frowned, flipping through his notebook to jot a note. “Huh. I just assumed… well, you know, Camden’s rough. Drunk kid with a blade, panicking, took off with whatever he could grab.” “Morris’s killer used a blade like that,” Harlow said, her voice low, her fingers brushing the edge of the compass. For a second, she was back in the morgue, the white tile floor cold beneath her knees, the chalk outline of her partner’s body stretching across the room. The sigil on Morris’s chest had been identical to the ones etched into this compass’s face, a twisted knot of lines that meant protection, but had failed to save him. “Three years ago. Same clean cut, same no trace of the weapon. The official report said he drowned, but the autopsy found no water in his lungs. Just those sigils, burned into his skin.” Tyler closed his notebook, glancing up at her with a concerned expression. “This isn’t Morris’s case, Harlow. This is a random curator with a weird trinket. Maybe he collected oddities, bought one from a vendor, got mugged.” He gestured at the compass, but Harlow shook her head, turning the device over in her hand. The needle was spinning wildly, not pointing north, but in the direction of the shimmering heat-haze rift behind the pillar—a tear in the fabric of the world, she realized, that she’d only heard Eva ramble about during their weekly curry nights. “Eva Kowalski works at the British Museum’s restricted archives,” Harlow said, her mind racing. “She’s an occult researcher, she’s talked about these compasses nonstop. Veil Compasses, she calls them—made by Shade artisans, attuned to point to the nearest supernatural rift or portal. Martell was a curator of ritual artefacts. Why would he be here with a Veil Compass, alone? And why would a mugger leave the compass behind? It’s worthless to someone who doesn’t know what it is.” She stood up, walking over to the rift behind the pillar, and leaned in. The air felt cold, like standing next to an open commercial freezer, and she could hear a faint, high-pitched hum coming from it, like a radio tuned to a dead station. Tyler followed her, shining his flashlight at the rift, and recoiled slightly, blinking rapidly. “What the hell is that? Some kind of street art?” “No,” Harlow said, her eyes scanning the stalls nearby. One of the stalls had been packed up quickly, the velvet tapestry rolled up and discarded on the ground, a single raven feather lying on the empty wooden table. Shades used raven feathers as markers, Eva had told her last month, leaving them to signal that a rift was active and the market was safe to enter. “That’s a rift. A portal between realms. Martell was here to smuggle something, or buy something, using the Veil Compass to navigate. Someone found out, followed him here to kill him and take what he had.” She turned back to the body, kneeling down again, and examined Martell’s hands more closely. There were faint scratch marks on his wrists, like he’d been tied up, but the ropes were gone—no trace left behind, no fibers, no knots. “He was restrained before he was killed,” Harlow said, her brow furrowed as she followed the trail of dust from the body to the empty stall. “Dragged here, tied up, then stabbed. The killer was looking for the Veil Compass, but when they got here, Martell had already activated it, pointing it at the rift. They couldn’t take it without disturbing the energy, right? The compass is attuned to the rift—if they tried to grab it, it would flare up, alert anyone who’s looking for this market.” A soft rustle echoed from behind a stall draped in a tapestry stitched with silver wolf sigils, the fabric fluttering even though there was no draft in the platform. Harlow’s hand shot to her hip, yanking out her service weapon, and Tyler followed suit, his flashlight beam shaking as he swept it across the dim space. “Who’s there?” Harlow called, her voice steady despite the cold dread coiling in her stomach—this was the same sound she’d heard three years ago, the sound of something hidden moving in the dark. The tapestry was pulled back slightly, and a young woman with curly red hair, freckled cheeks, and round glasses peeked out, clutching a worn leather satchel so tightly her knuckles were white. She tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear—a nervous habit Harlow recognized instantly, from the late nights they’d spent swapping takeaway curries and conspiracy theories about supernatural crime. “Eva?” Harlow said, lowering her gun slightly. “What are you doing here?” Eva stepped out, her satchel falling open as she moved, spilling a stack of dog-eared books across the dusty platform. One of them was a translation of a 12th-century grimoire about shadow realms, the cover worn thin from being carried back and forth to the British Museum archives. “I… I was following Dr. Martell,” Eva said, her voice shaking. “He said he’d found a lead on a lost ritual artefact, but he wouldn’t tell me where he was going. I followed him here, and… and I saw them kill him.” She gestured at the body, her hands trembling so badly she could barely keep her glasses on her nose. “They weren’t normal. They had black eyes, and their skin was see-through, like smoke. They were looking for something, and when they found Dr. Martell had the compass, they stabbed him. But they couldn’t pick it up—every time they tried, the compass started glowing, and the rift behind him got bigger. I hid behind the stall when I heard you coming.” Harlow knelt down, picking up one of the fallen books from Eva’s satchel, flipping through the pages to find the diagram of a Veil Compass she’d heard Eva describe. There it was, etched into the margin of a translated clay tablet: the same sigils, the same verdigris patina, the same needle pointed directly at rifts. “You knew what this was,” Harlow said, holding up the compass. “You told me about the Shade artisans who make them, how they only trade them to other occult researchers who can prove they know how to use them safely.” Eva nodded, wiping sweat from her forehead with the back of her hand. “Dr. Martell told me he was going to get one, to study the rifts beneath London. I thought he was going to the archives, not… not this.” She glanced at the body, then away, her jaw tight. “I didn’t mean to get involved. I just wanted to make sure he was safe.” Harlow stood up, looking around the platform again. The vendor with the obsidian amulets was gone, his stall empty save for a few chips of black stone. The bone token lay on the concrete next to her boot, polished smooth, a silent clue left by someone who’d wanted her to find this case. Someone who knew about Morris’s death, too. “Tyler,” Harlow said, turning to her partner, who was still leaning against the pillar, his notebook open again, scribbling notes faster than she’d ever seen him move. “Get forensics down here. Tell them to bring a rift detector, and to watch for anyone with black eyes or see-through skin. And call the British Museum—ask for records on Dr. Martell’s work with ritual artefacts, especially anything linked to Shade artisans.” She turned back to Eva, who was gathering her books into her satchel, tucking a strand of red hair behind her left ear again. “You’re coming with me. You’re a witness, and you know more about this stuff than anyone else on the force. I need your help.” As they walked back toward the stairwell, Harlow held the Veil Compass in her hand, the needle now pointing steadily at the rift behind the pillar. Three years ago, she’d thought Morris’s death was a random accident, a tragic mistake, a dead end she’d never be able to solve. Now, she knew it was part of something bigger, something hidden beneath the streets of London, something that was finally starting to show itself. The evidence hadn’t added up at first—mugging, random violence, a strange trinket—but she’d looked closer, seen the details everyone else had missed: the torn pocket, the clean wound, the sigils she knew by heart. This case wasn’t just a murder. It was a clue. And it was leading her straight back to the night Morris died, and the truth she’d been running from for three years.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.552
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
87.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2044
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"quickly"
2"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2044
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"footfall"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count2
4
word"etched"
count4
5
word"standard"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"tapestry"
count3
10
word"navigate"
count1
11
word"restrained"
count1
12
word"furrowed"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"footfall"
2"echoing"
3"velvet"
4"etched"
5"standard"
6"traced"
7"racing"
8"scanning"
9"tapestry"
10"navigate"
11"restrained"
12"furrowed"
13"echoed"
14"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2028
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1415
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Harlow18
Quinn1
Morris6
Thames1
Veil5
Market2
Jamie1
Tyler5
British2
Museum2
Curator1
Ancient1
Eastern1
Ritual1
Artefacts1
Compasses1
Eva9
Shade1
One2
Martell1
Compass3
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Market"
4"Jamie"
5"Tyler"
6"Museum"
7"Compasses"
8"Eva"
9"Martell"
places
0"Thames"
1"British"
2"Eastern"
3"Compass"
4"London"
globalScore0.864
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like it filtered through a wall of"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.493
wordCount2028
matches
0"not pointing north, but in the direction of the shimmering heat-haze rift behind the"
77.78% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"realized, that she’d"
1"signal that a"
55.12% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean101.4
std34.77
cv0.343
sampleLengths
0166
1126
286
3145
472
541
6112
795
878
969
10102
11127
1289
1374
14170
1595
1665
1760
18117
19139
59.99% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences62
matches
0"been pulled"
1"been told"
2"been packed"
3"been tied"
4"were gone"
5"was pulled"
6"being carried"
7"was, etched"
8"was gone"
36.07% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs244
matches
0"was already kneeling"
1"was spinning"
2"was still leaning"
3"was gathering"
4"was finally starting"
5"was leading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences75
ratio0.147
matches
0"The rusted steel stairwells of the abandoned Camden Tube platform groaned under Harlow Quinn’s weight, each footfall echoing off damp brick walls that reeked of mildew and something sweeter, something acrid—burnt sage and ozone, the scent of magic she’d first smelled in the hospital waiting room three years prior, when DS Morris’s body had been pulled from the Thames with no visible cause of death."
1"She checked her worn leather watch on her left wrist, the seconds ticking with military precision, and spotted the full moon peeking through the grating above: bright, round, exactly as the rumors promised—this market moved locations only on full moons."
2"A bone token, she realized now; the entry requirement for the Veil Market, handed to her by whoever’d sent the anonymous tip scrawled on a parking ticket: Veil Market."
3"Stalls lined the disused tracks, draped in velvet tapestries etched with sigils that hummed when she drifted too close; jars of glowing fireflies sat next to leather-bound grimoires with cracked spines, and a vendor in a hooded black robe waved a chunk of obsidian at her, his voice a low rasp that sounded like it filtered through a wall of water."
4"The victim was a middle-aged man with silver hair, wearing a threadbare British Museum coat over a faded cotton shirt; a crumpled ID peeking out of his inside pocket read DR."
5"In his right palm, clamped so tight his knuckles were white, was a small brass compass—one exactly like the Veil Compasses Eva had rambled about for months: its face etched with twisted protective sigils, its casing dulled by a thick verdigris patina, crafted by a Shade artisan, she’d been told, to point directly to the nearest supernatural rift or portal."
6"The needle was spinning wildly, not pointing north, but in the direction of the shimmering heat-haze rift behind the pillar—a tear in the fabric of the world, she realized, that she’d only heard Eva ramble about during their weekly curry nights."
7"There were faint scratch marks on his wrists, like he’d been tied up, but the ropes were gone—no trace left behind, no fibers, no knots."
8"“Who’s there?” Harlow called, her voice steady despite the cold dread coiling in her stomach—this was the same sound she’d heard three years ago, the sound of something hidden moving in the dark."
9"She tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear—a nervous habit Harlow recognized instantly, from the late nights they’d spent swapping takeaway curries and conspiracy theories about supernatural crime."
10"The evidence hadn’t added up at first—mugging, random violence, a strange trinket—but she’d looked closer, seen the details everyone else had missed: the torn pocket, the clean wound, the sigils she knew by heart."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1431
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"grating above: bright, round,"
1"faint, high-pitched hum"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.029350104821802937
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.014675052410901468
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean27.04
std15.46
cv0.572
sampleLengths
065
140
230
329
41
51
632
761
833
924
1021
1141
1223
1331
149
1560
1622
1740
1832
1919
2022
2120
2228
2330
2434
2512
2642
2741
2814
2964
3014
3131
3214
3310
349
3529
3628
3736
3815
3925
4026
4161
4229
4327
4433
4532
4630
477
485
4920
83.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5333333333333333
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences60
matches
0"She checked her worn leather"
1"She’d climbed over the rusted"
2"Her salt-and-pepper cropped hair brushed"
3"Her field partner, DC Jamie"
4"He looked up when she"
5"He gestured at the compass,"
6"She stood up, walking over"
7"She turned back to the"
8"She tucked a strand of"
9"She gestured at the body,"
10"She glanced at the body,"
11"She turned back to Eva,"
12"It was a clue."
ratio0.217
51.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences60
matches
0"The rusted steel stairwells of"
1"She checked her worn leather"
2"She’d climbed over the rusted"
3"A bone token, she realized"
4"Her salt-and-pepper cropped hair brushed"
5"Stalls lined the disused tracks,"
6"Her field partner, DC Jamie"
7"He looked up when she"
8"Harlow knelt beside him, ignoring"
9"The victim was a middle-aged"
10"KAI MARTELL, Curator of Ancient"
11"The same sigils she’d traced"
12"Harlow said, pointing at the"
13"Tyler leaned in, shining his"
14"Harlow said, her voice low,"
15"The sigil on Morris’s chest"
16"Tyler closed his notebook, glancing"
17"He gestured at the compass,"
18"The needle was spinning wildly,"
19"Harlow said, her mind racing"
ratio0.817
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Now, she knew it was"
ratio0.017
14.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The rusted steel stairwells of the abandoned Camden Tube platform groaned under Harlow Quinn’s weight, each footfall echoing off damp brick walls that reeked of…"
1"Stalls lined the disused tracks, draped in velvet tapestries etched with sigils that hummed when she drifted too close; jars of glowing fireflies sat next to le…"
2"The sigil on Morris’s chest had been identical to the ones etched into this compass’s face, a twisted knot of lines that meant protection, but had failed to sav…"
3"Harlow’s hand shot to her hip, yanking out her service weapon, and Tyler followed suit, his flashlight beam shaking as he swept it across the dim space."
4"Eva stepped out, her satchel falling open as she moved, spilling a stack of dog-eared books across the dusty platform."
5"Harlow knelt down, picking up one of the fallen books from Eva’s satchel, flipping through the pages to find the diagram of a Veil Compass she’d heard Eva descr…"
6"Now, she knew it was part of something bigger, something hidden beneath the streets of London, something that was finally starting to show itself."
31.25% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Harlow said, her mind racing"
1"Harlow said, her eyes scanning the stalls nearby"
2"Eva said, her voice shaking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.69
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.7048%