Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTY814V84RSXF3YTM24Q3PF

Run Details

Duration:
8.2s
Cost:
$0.002703
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon hum of the sign outside hummed like a trapped hornet, flickering against the damp Soho pavement. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air tasted of stale stout and old mahogany. Rory wiped the mahogany counter, the wood grain worn smooth by decades of spilled pints and elbows, her shoulder-length black hair shielding her face. She focused on the rhythm of her cloth, a repetitive circular motion that acted as a barrier against the low-frequency drone of the evening crowd. The front door groaned, admitting a gust of wet city air. A woman stepped inside, her silhouette sharp against the streetlights. She shed a trench coat, revealing a tailored charcoal suit that cost more than Rory’s annual rent. The woman paused, her gaze sweeping over the maps and photographs on the walls before landing on the bar. Eva stopped dead. Her fingers toyed with a heavy pearl earring, a habit she’d had since they were teenagers in Cardiff. She stepped toward the bar, each heel strike deliberate and precise. "I thought the address was a mistake," Eva murmured, her voice stripped of the girlish lilt Rory remembered. She leaned against the wood, her perfume, something sharp and citrusy, cutting through the smell of hops. "A dive bar in Soho? This isn't the life we mapped out on those library napkins, Laila." Rory’s hand froze mid-circle. She tucked the wet cloth into her apron, tracing the small, familiar crescent scar on her wrist with her thumb before looking up. The bright blue of her eyes caught the light from the overhead bulbs, searching the other woman's face for the girl who had smuggled her out of Cardiff in the trunk of a battered Ford. The face was the same, but the softness had hardened into something like glass—transparent, but lethal to the touch. "Addresses change, Eva. People do, too," Rory said, her voice steady. She grabbed a clean glass and held it under the tap, watching the beer spiral. "You’re a long way from the barrister’s chambers. The last I heard, you were chasing senior partnerships in the City." "I am." Eva traced the perimeter of a coaster with a manicured nail. The lack of gold on her left hand spoke louder than a wedding announcement. "High stakes, higher blood pressure. And you? You're playing bartender for an ex-spook. Silas hasn't lost his touch for recruiting lost causes, has he?" Silas sat at the far end of the bar, his grey-streaked auburn beard catching the dim light. He didn’t look up from his ledger, but his right hand, adorned with the silver signet ring, tapped once against the wood—a warning, or perhaps a salute. "I'm not a lost cause, Eva. I’m employed," Rory said, pushing the pint toward the edge of the counter. "What brings you to my side of the ledger? Surely you didn't come to Soho just to critique my career trajectory." Eva didn't take the drink. She signaled for a wine, something dry and unpronounceable. She watched Rory work, her eyes tracking the way Rory shifted her weight, favoring her right side, always scanning the door. "Evan stopped by the office last week," Eva said, the name dropping into the space between them like a stone in a well. Rory’s movements slowed. The glass hit the drip tray with a hollow thud. "He asked if I’d heard from you," Eva continued, her gaze locked on Rory’s face. "He looked hollow. The kind of hollow that starts in the marrow and works its way out. He talked about the time at the docks, about the way you used to look at the horizon before the world turned ugly. He sounded like a man drowning in his own shadow." "He was the one who drew the map," Rory said, her voice dropping into a register that didn't allow for protest. She stepped around the counter, putting distance between herself and the register, drawn to the quiet corner near the bookshelf. "He drew the lines and told me where I wasn't allowed to step. If he’s drowning, he’s doing it in a pool he dug himself." Eva followed her, her movements fluid, contrasting with the slight limp Silas displayed as he stood and moved toward his office. The air in the room grew heavy, the weight of years thickening behind their throats. "I didn't stay because I wanted to leave you behind, Laila," Eva said, her voice cracking only once, a small fissure in an otherwise perfect facade. "I stayed to make sure he didn't follow. I spent three years scrubbing your existence from the records. Do you have any idea what it costs to erase a person?" "I don't think you did it for me," Rory said. She gestured to the wall of photographs, images of faces that no longer existed in any database. "You did it because you couldn't stand the idea of him owning a piece of someone you loved. You didn't save me. You just changed masters for me." Eva let out a short, hollow laugh that didn't reach her eyes. She stood inches from the bookshelf, the secret entrance hidden in plain sight. "Maybe I did," Eva conceded, her shoulders slumping just enough to show the fatigue she’d spent the last hour masking. "Look at us. You’re pouring drinks in a fortress, living in the shadow of a man who makes his living from secrets. And I’m lying to partners every day just to keep a seat at a table that’s rotting from the inside out." "We chose our corners," Rory said. She reached out, stopping just before she touched the fabric of Eva’s sleeve. "I’m not the scared girl from Cardiff anymore. I don't need someone to hide my tracks. I’m making my own road now." Eva looked at the shelf, then back to Rory. The distance between them felt like a canyon. "Is it worth it? The silence? The distance?" Eva asked. Rory looked at the door, where the neon sign flickered, the green light washing her face in an aquatic, ghostly hue. "It’s quiet," Rory said. "That’s all I needed." Eva nodded once, a gesture of finality. She pulled a crisp bill from her purse and laid it on the edge of the shelf. She didn't offer a hand to shake, and she didn't ask for a phone number. "Keep the change, Laila," Eva said, her voice returning to that polished, impenetrable tone. "It suits the place." She turned, her coat billowing as she reclaimed the night outside. Rory stood still, watching the door swing shut, the bell chiming a thin, lonely note that vanished into the haze of the bar. Silas moved from the shadows of his office, his limp rhythmic and steady as the ticking of a clock. He stopped next to her, looking at the bill on the shelf, then at the empty stool where Eva had sat. "A ghost from a previous life?" Silas asked, his voice a low rasp. Rory picked up the glass Eva hadn't touched and emptied it into the sink. The bubbles vanished, leaving nothing but a wet, empty void. "Just a reminder of how much effort it takes to stay gone," Rory said, tucking a strand of dark hair behind her ear. She turned back to the bar, her gaze fixed on the door, watching for the next shadow to cross the threshold. The neon sign outside sputtered, buzz-hum-buzz, a rhythmic pulse in the dark.
created_at"2026-03-03T22:49:05.45Z" 3/3/2026, 10:49:05 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"lilt"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"facade"
count1
8
word"database"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count2
12
word"reminder"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"lilt"
1"tracing"
2"familiar"
3"traced"
4"weight"
5"scanning"
6"perfect"
7"facade"
8"database"
9"silence"
10"flickered"
11"rhythmic"
12"reminder"
13"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1242
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount851
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.23
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Rory19
Cardiff2
Ford1
Eva17
Silas4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.384
windowScore0.333
55.66% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like glass—transparent, but lethal"
1"felt like a canyon"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1242
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean40.06
std20.8
cv0.519
sampleLengths
081
157
232
352
481
546
651
744
840
935
1023
1113
1265
1366
1436
1556
1655
1725
1863
1941
2017
2110
2221
238
2439
2518
2674
2713
2824
2923
3033
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
65.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences74
ratio0.027
matches
0"The face was the same, but the softness had hardened into something like glass—transparent, but lethal to the touch."
1"He didn’t look up from his ledger, but his right hand, adorned with the silver signet ring, tapped once against the wood—a warning, or perhaps a salute."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount859
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02211874272409779
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0034924330616996507
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean16.78
std8.48
cv0.505
sampleLengths
019
113
224
325
411
510
617
719
83
918
1011
1118
1217
1317
144
1523
1635
1719
1811
1915
2020
2113
2214
2324
2417
2527
2619
2721
285
299
3021
3123
323
3310
3415
3550
3621
3720
3825
3921
4015
4126
4230
4310
4417
4528
4612
4713
4820
4943
42.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3108108108108108
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
88.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences58
matches
0"She focused on the rhythm"
1"She shed a trench coat,"
2"Her fingers toyed with a"
3"She stepped toward the bar,"
4"She leaned against the wood,"
5"She tucked the wet cloth"
6"She grabbed a clean glass"
7"He didn’t look up from"
8"She signaled for a wine,"
9"She watched Rory work, her"
10"She stepped around the counter,"
11"She gestured to the wall"
12"She stood inches from the"
13"She reached out, stopping just"
14"She pulled a crisp bill"
15"She didn't offer a hand"
16"She turned, her coat billowing"
17"He stopped next to her,"
18"She turned back to the"
ratio0.328
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences58
matches
0"The green neon hum of"
1"Rory wiped the mahogany counter,"
2"She focused on the rhythm"
3"The front door groaned, admitting"
4"A woman stepped inside, her"
5"She shed a trench coat,"
6"The woman paused, her gaze"
7"Eva stopped dead."
8"Her fingers toyed with a"
9"She stepped toward the bar,"
10"Eva murmured, her voice stripped"
11"She leaned against the wood,"
12"Rory’s hand froze mid-circle."
13"She tucked the wet cloth"
14"The bright blue of her"
15"The face was the same,"
16"Rory said, her voice steady"
17"She grabbed a clean glass"
18"Eva traced the perimeter of"
19"The lack of gold on"
ratio0.983
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She focused on the rhythm of her cloth, a repetitive circular motion that acted as a barrier against the low-frequency drone of the evening crowd."
1"She tucked the wet cloth into her apron, tracing the small, familiar crescent scar on her wrist with her thumb before looking up."
2"The bright blue of her eyes caught the light from the overhead bulbs, searching the other woman's face for the girl who had smuggled her out of Cardiff in the t…"
3"She watched Rory work, her eyes tracking the way Rory shifted her weight, favoring her right side, always scanning the door."
31.25% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory said, her voice steady"
1"Eva said, her voice returning to that polished, impenetrable tone"
2"Silas asked, his voice a low rasp"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
1"Eva continued (continue)"
2"Eva conceded (concede)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.536
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
75.6850%