| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 92.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1290 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1290 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "scanned" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "sanctuary" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "beacon" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "reminder" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "navigated" | | 11 | "pang" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "fleeting" | | 14 | "shattered" | | 15 | "silk" | | 16 | "chill" | | 17 | "sense of" | | 18 | "desire" | | 19 | "resolve" | | 20 | "echoing" | | 21 | "symphony" | | 22 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 52.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1286 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The gate is hungry, Isolde said, her expression serene despite the gravity of her words." | | 1 | "The first step is always the heaviest, Isolde whispered, turning to walk back toward the oak boundaries." |
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| 99.46% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1286 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | London | 3 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Grove | 6 | | Rory | 13 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Dymas | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Varga" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Pendant" | | 6 | "Yu-Fei" | | 7 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.995 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "hum that seemed to resonate in the marrow of her bones" | | 1 | "sound that seemed to originate from the air right behind Rory’s ear" | | 2 | "felt like a beacon, or perhaps a warnin" | | 3 | "spirals that seemed to twist if Rory stared at them for too long" | | 4 | "felt like a dream she had woken up from" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.778 | | wordCount | 1286 | | matches | | 0 | "not from physical force, but as if the plants themselves were bowing to someone they had" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.21% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 51.44 | | std | 19.82 | | cv | 0.385 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 98 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 96 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 58 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 66 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 73 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 64 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 61 |
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| 96.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "was carpeted" | | 1 | "was shattered" |
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| 68.64% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 203 | | matches | | 0 | "was like looking" | | 1 | "were bowing" | | 2 | "was fleeting" | | 3 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't walk so much as glide; the tall grass beneath her feet remained perfectly unbent, as if she were a ghost haunting her own life." | | 1 | "The ground here was carpeted in wildflowers that shouldn't have been blooming—iridescent, translucent petals that glowed with a faint, bioluminescent pulse mirroring the rhythm of her own heart." | | 2 | "Above, the sky wasn't the London grey she knew; it was a deep, bruised violet, swirling with clouds that moved too fast for the windless sanctuary." | | 3 | "The glimpse was fleeting—a flash of a vineyard where the grapes bled gold and the air was thick with the scent of overripe fruit and decay." | | 4 | "The world of Dymas roared into her mind—a symphony of excess, a hunger that defied satiation—but she didn't look at the gardens." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1298 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "swirling bruise-colored sky," |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.032357473035439135 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006933744221879815 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 16.28 | | std | 7.81 | | cv | 0.48 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 38.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.2911392405063291 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 42.74% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Still trapped between the inhale" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 91.79% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "They pooled around Nyx’s feet," | | 1 | "It was like looking at" | | 2 | "She didn't walk so much" | | 3 | "She stopped at the center" | | 4 | "It holds the scent of" | | 5 | "They had shifted into a" | | 6 | "It felt warm, and she" | | 7 | "It felt like a beacon," | | 8 | "You carry the cold metal" | | 9 | "It was unnaturally cold, a" | | 10 | "She had watched it glow" | | 11 | "They moved like oil on" | | 12 | "She thought of the restaurant" | | 13 | "It felt like a dream" | | 14 | "She looked at the stone." | | 15 | "It remembers the taste of" | | 16 | "It remembers the feast that" | | 17 | "She stood her ground, her" | | 18 | "She wasn't just a delivery" | | 19 | "She was a bridge, a" |
| | ratio | 0.321 | |
| 49.74% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 2 | "They pooled around Nyx’s feet," | | 3 | "There, where the trees should" | | 4 | "It was like looking at" | | 5 | "Isolde Varga moved ahead of" | | 6 | "She didn't walk so much" | | 7 | "She stopped at the center" | | 8 | "It holds the scent of" | | 9 | "Rory stepped across the threshold" | | 10 | "The transition was instantaneous." | | 11 | "The roar of distant traffic" | | 12 | "The ground here was carpeted" | | 13 | "Nyx let out a long," | | 14 | "They had shifted into a" | | 15 | "This place has not changed," | | 16 | "Rory reached into her bag," | | 17 | "It felt warm, and she" | | 18 | "The crimson gemstone pulsed in" | | 19 | "It felt like a beacon," |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "If a rift were to" | | 1 | "If the rift breathes out," | | 2 | "If it breathes in, the" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park was thin, edged with a sudden, startling drop in temperature that made the heat of the late-afternoon sun feel like a distant, flickeri…" | | 1 | "They pooled around Nyx’s feet, stretching and contracting like living ink, while their violet eyes scanned the periphery of the ancient oaks ahead." | | 2 | "It was like looking at a road through a heat haze, a shimmering distortion that promised something far beyond the mundane scrub of London." | | 3 | "She didn't walk so much as glide; the tall grass beneath her feet remained perfectly unbent, as if she were a ghost haunting her own life." | | 4 | "The ground here was carpeted in wildflowers that shouldn't have been blooming—iridescent, translucent petals that glowed with a faint, bioluminescent pulse mirr…" | | 5 | "Above, the sky wasn't the London grey she knew; it was a deep, bruised violet, swirling with clouds that moved too fast for the windless sanctuary." | | 6 | "Nyx let out a long, shuddering sound that was less of a breath and more like leaves skittering over pavement." | | 7 | "They had shifted into a more solid form, their ink-black features settling into a sharp, angular human likeness that hovered just at the edge of three-dimension…" | | 8 | "This place has not changed, Nyx whispered, their voice a phantom sound that seemed to originate from the air right behind Rory’s ear." | | 9 | "She had watched it glow back in her flat, but here, under the swirling bruise-colored sky, it hummed with a low-frequency vibration that rattled her teeth." | | 10 | "As they approached, the grass parted, not from physical force, but as if the plants themselves were bowing to someone they had waited centuries to see." | | 11 | "They moved like oil on water, their edges blurring and sharpening as they navigated the space." | | 12 | "A sense of overwhelming, predatory desire spilled out from the rift, a dark gravity that clawed at Rory’s resolve, whispering promises of indulgence and power." | | 13 | "The world of Dymas roared into her mind—a symphony of excess, a hunger that defied satiation—but she didn't look at the gardens." | | 14 | "The sound of the rift snapping shut was like a thunderclap that leveled the nearby wildflowers." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |