Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTYJDTV4YQ302RFQHE3VCBD

Run Details

Duration:
7.3s
Cost:
$0.003263
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a metallic screech that set my teeth on edge. I yanked the door open, my hand still gripping the heavy iron poker from the fireplace, ready to strike anything that wasn't Eva. The air in the hallway of the Brick Lane flat hung thick, stale with the scent of old paper and the lingering spice of the curry house below. Before me stood Lucien, his charcoal suit tailored to such exacting standards that he looked like a razor blade wrapped in wool. He leaned heavily on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto mine with the intensity of a predator who had finally cornered his fix. "You look like you've seen a ghost, Aurora." "I see a Frenchman who doesn't know how to knock. Or stay dead." I didn't lower the poker. The cold metal bit into my palm, grounding me as my pulse did a frantic, uneven rhythm against my ribs. He didn't flinch. He just stepped across the threshold, bringing with him the sharp, clean scent of ozone and expensive cologne. His gaze raked over the stacks of books and research notes covering every square inch of Eva’s floor, lingering on a stray scroll before settling back on my face. "Is that any way to greet an old acquaintance? Particularly one who brings news of the Sanguis faction." "You aren't an acquaintance, Lucien. You're a liability." "A useful one." He nudged a pile of journals aside with the tip of his cane. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed from the safety of the bookshelf, arching his back as Lucien passed. Lucien ignored the animal, his movement fluid despite the limp he claimed was purely ornamental. "I didn't ask for your help. I didn't ask for a visit." "The world rarely consults us on what it provides." He stopped just inside the room, filling the space with his presence until the walls felt like they were shrinking. "You’ve been careless, Rory. Cardiff is a long way from London, and Evan is not a man who forgets a grudge." "I handled Evan." "Clearly." He tilted his head, his black eye capturing the dim lamplight while the amber one seemed to burn. "By hiding in a flat that smells of cat hair and cheap takeout. A noble strategy." "Get out." I moved to block his path, but my foot caught on a stray volume of grimoires. I stumbled. Before my knees could hit the floor, his hand was at my waist, steady and firm, pulling me upright. The contact was brief, yet it seared through the thin fabric of my shirt like a brand. His fingers remained for a second too long, the heat of his touch a silent, taunting reminder of the night in Marseille we’d both agreed—tacitly and desperately—never to revisit. I shoved him back, the poker clattering against the radiator. "Don't." "I merely prevented a fall." "You always did like the theatrical approach." "And you always preferred to keep your guard up, even when the war was already won." He walked to the window, peering through the grime-streaked glass at the neon-lit chaos of Brick Lane below. Outside, the city lived in a constant, frenetic thrum, a stark contrast to the stifling tension in the room. He turned back, the ivory handle of his cane glistening in the harsh, flat light of the overhead bulb. "The faction knows you’re in London. They know exactly which floor you haunt." "Why are you here, Lucien? Truly." The room grew quiet, save for the low, rhythmic ticking of a clock somewhere beneath a mound of parchment. He stepped closer, abandoning the calculated nonchalance. His expression hardened, the sharp lines of his jaw tightening under the slicked-back platinum hair. "Because if they find you, they won't just kill you. They want the contents of that satchel you took from the vault." My stomach lurched. The satchel was tucked under the hollow floorboard beneath the bed, hidden since the day I fled Cardiff, an insurance policy I hadn't dared to examine. I hadn't told anyone about it. Not even Eva. "You have no proof I took anything." "I watched you walk out with it." He stepped into my personal space, his stature imposing, his voice dropping to a low, velvet purr that made the fine hairs on my arms stand up. "Do you honestly think you could hide from the Avaros bloodline?" "I've done a decent job so far." "You've been lucky. Luck is a fickle companion." He reached out, his thumb tracing the jagged, crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist. His touch was clinical, yet his gaze held a simmering, hidden hunger that sent a jolt of alarm through my veins. It was the same look he’d worn just before he betrayed me, just before the world fell apart. "Your pulse, Rory. It betrays you." "My pulse is fine." "Is it?" He leaned down, his lips brushing the shell of my ear. The closeness was suffocating, a dangerous, intoxicating cocktail of memory and immediate threat. "The vault didn't hold gold. It held a legacy. One that the Sanguis will burn this city to the ground to reclaim. And right now, you are the only one standing in their way." He pulled back, his eyes dancing with a manic, dark mirth. "Which leaves us with a choice." "Us?" "We leave. Now. Or we wait for them to kick down the three deadbolts and find out exactly what’s inside that bag." A heavy thud echoed from the corridor outside—the sound of a boot connecting with wood. The doorframe splintered. Another tremor shook the flat, louder this time, followed by the jagged crack of metal giving way to superior, unnatural force. I yanked the floorboard up, my fingers brushing the cold, worn leather of the satchel. "Who else knows?" "Only those who are currently turning the handle." The first deadbolt snapped. The second groaned. I looked at the window, then back at the door. Lucien retrieved a thin, razor-sharp blade from the hollow of his cane, the steel flashing with a cold, pale light. "I suggest you run, Rory. Unless you plan on using that poker to stop a raiding party." The final bolt gave way with a screech, and the door swung wide, revealing the shadow of a man standing in the threshold, eyes glowing with a malice that turned the air to ice.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stopped just [just]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.176
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.059
95.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1069
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1069
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"predator"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count3
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"glistening"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"calculated"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"lurched"
count1
11
word"imposing"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
14
word"simmering"
count1
15
word"dancing"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"predator"
2"pulse"
3"reminder"
4"stark"
5"tension"
6"glistening"
7"rhythmic"
8"calculated"
9"stomach"
10"lurched"
11"imposing"
12"velvet"
13"tracing"
14"simmering"
15"dancing"
16"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1066
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount739
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Brick2
Lane2
Lucien4
Marseille1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
21.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a razor blade wrapped in wool"
1"felt like they were shrinking"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1066
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean21.76
std19.92
cv0.916
sampleLengths
038
175
28
313
425
550
618
78
83
945
1012
1150
123
1335
142
1583
1610
171
185
197
2016
2156
2213
236
2441
2522
2638
277
2845
297
308
3153
326
334
342
3524
3634
3711
386
391
4022
4139
4215
433
448
457
4630
4717
4834
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"was tucked"
84.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs115
matches
0"were shrinking"
1"was suffocating"
69.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences78
ratio0.026
matches
0"His fingers remained for a second too long, the heat of his touch a silent, taunting reminder of the night in Marseille we’d both agreed—tacitly and desperately—never to revisit."
1"A heavy thud echoed from the corridor outside—the sound of a boot connecting with wood."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount748
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"jagged, crescent-shaped scar"
1"thin, razor-sharp blade"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03074866310160428
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0066844919786096255
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean13.67
std8.63
cv0.632
sampleLengths
015
123
228
322
425
58
613
75
820
93
1018
1129
1218
138
143
1513
1617
1715
1812
1929
2021
213
2219
2316
242
2516
262
2719
2817
2929
3010
311
325
337
3416
3518
3619
3719
3813
396
4019
417
4215
4322
443
4526
466
473
487
4934
55.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3717948717948718
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences46
matches
0"I yanked the door open,"
1"He leaned heavily on his"
2"I didn't lower the poker."
3"He didn't flinch."
4"He just stepped across the"
5"His gaze raked over the"
6"He nudged a pile of"
7"He stopped just inside the"
8"He tilted his head, his"
9"I moved to block his"
10"His fingers remained for a"
11"I shoved him back, the"
12"He walked to the window,"
13"He turned back, the ivory"
14"He stepped closer, abandoning the"
15"His expression hardened, the sharp"
16"My stomach lurched."
17"I hadn't told anyone about"
18"He stepped into my personal"
19"He reached out, his thumb"
ratio0.565
3.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences46
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"I yanked the door open,"
2"The air in the hallway"
3"He leaned heavily on his"
4"I didn't lower the poker."
5"The cold metal bit into"
6"He didn't flinch."
7"He just stepped across the"
8"His gaze raked over the"
9"He nudged a pile of"
10"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed"
11"Lucien ignored the animal, his"
12"He stopped just inside the"
13"He tilted his head, his"
14"I moved to block his"
15"The contact was brief, yet"
16"His fingers remained for a"
17"I shoved him back, the"
18"He walked to the window,"
19"He turned back, the ivory"
ratio0.913
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences46
matches
0"Before me stood Lucien, his"
1"Before my knees could hit"
ratio0.043
37.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"I yanked the door open, my hand still gripping the heavy iron poker from the fireplace, ready to strike anything that wasn't Eva."
1"He leaned heavily on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto mine with the intensity of a predator who had finally cornered his fix."
2"His gaze raked over the stacks of books and research notes covering every square inch of Eva’s floor, lingering on a stray scroll before settling back on my fac…"
3"His touch was clinical, yet his gaze held a simmering, hidden hunger that sent a jolt of alarm through my veins."
4"The final bolt gave way with a screech, and the door swung wide, revealing the shadow of a man standing in the threshold, eyes glowing with a malice that turned…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.8184%