| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He stopped just [just]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.088 | | leniency | 0.176 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 95.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1069 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 11.13% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1069 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "intensity" | | 1 | "predator" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "stark" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "glistening" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "calculated" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "lurched" | | 11 | "imposing" | | 12 | "velvet" | | 13 | "tracing" | | 14 | "simmering" | | 15 | "dancing" | | 16 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1066 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 739 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.54 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Lucien | 4 | | Marseille | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Marseille" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 21.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a razor blade wrapped in wool" | | 1 | "felt like they were shrinking" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1066 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 21.76 | | std | 19.92 | | cv | 0.916 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 83 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 56 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 53 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 39 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 34 |
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| 97.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | |
| 84.06% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "were shrinking" | | 1 | "was suffocating" |
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| 69.60% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "His fingers remained for a second too long, the heat of his touch a silent, taunting reminder of the night in Marseille we’d both agreed—tacitly and desperately—never to revisit." | | 1 | "A heavy thud echoed from the corridor outside—the sound of a boot connecting with wood." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 748 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "jagged, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "thin, razor-sharp blade" |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.03074866310160428 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0066844919786096255 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 13.67 | | std | 8.63 | | cv | 0.632 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 34 |
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| 55.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3717948717948718 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "I yanked the door open," | | 1 | "He leaned heavily on his" | | 2 | "I didn't lower the poker." | | 3 | "He didn't flinch." | | 4 | "He just stepped across the" | | 5 | "His gaze raked over the" | | 6 | "He nudged a pile of" | | 7 | "He stopped just inside the" | | 8 | "He tilted his head, his" | | 9 | "I moved to block his" | | 10 | "His fingers remained for a" | | 11 | "I shoved him back, the" | | 12 | "He walked to the window," | | 13 | "He turned back, the ivory" | | 14 | "He stepped closer, abandoning the" | | 15 | "His expression hardened, the sharp" | | 16 | "My stomach lurched." | | 17 | "I hadn't told anyone about" | | 18 | "He stepped into my personal" | | 19 | "He reached out, his thumb" |
| | ratio | 0.565 | |
| 3.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt slid back" | | 1 | "I yanked the door open," | | 2 | "The air in the hallway" | | 3 | "He leaned heavily on his" | | 4 | "I didn't lower the poker." | | 5 | "The cold metal bit into" | | 6 | "He didn't flinch." | | 7 | "He just stepped across the" | | 8 | "His gaze raked over the" | | 9 | "He nudged a pile of" | | 10 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed" | | 11 | "Lucien ignored the animal, his" | | 12 | "He stopped just inside the" | | 13 | "He tilted his head, his" | | 14 | "I moved to block his" | | 15 | "The contact was brief, yet" | | 16 | "His fingers remained for a" | | 17 | "I shoved him back, the" | | 18 | "He walked to the window," | | 19 | "He turned back, the ivory" |
| | ratio | 0.913 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "Before me stood Lucien, his" | | 1 | "Before my knees could hit" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 37.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "I yanked the door open, my hand still gripping the heavy iron poker from the fireplace, ready to strike anything that wasn't Eva." | | 1 | "He leaned heavily on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto mine with the intensity of a predator who had finally cornered his fix." | | 2 | "His gaze raked over the stacks of books and research notes covering every square inch of Eva’s floor, lingering on a stray scroll before settling back on my fac…" | | 3 | "His touch was clinical, yet his gaze held a simmering, hidden hunger that sent a jolt of alarm through my veins." | | 4 | "The final bolt gave way with a screech, and the door swung wide, revealing the shadow of a man standing in the threshold, eyes glowing with a malice that turned…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |