Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTYMA9JW95ARVBD4B465CJW

Run Details

Duration:
8.5s
Cost:
$0.002684
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt clicked back, a heavy metallic rasp that reverberated through the cramped hallway of the Brick Lane flat. The second lock turned, followed by the slide of the security chain. Ptolemy wound around Aurora’s ankles, his tail a vertical question mark against her jeans. She pulled the door inward, ready to snap at Eva for forgetting her key again. The air in the stairwell turned stagnant. Lucien loomed in the threshold, his charcoal suit absorbing the weak light of the landing. He leaned on the ivory-handled cane, the black of his right eye fixated on her with the weight of a physical blow. The damp scent of London rain clung to his wool coat, mingling with the sharp, metallic tang of ozone that always trailed his wake. You look tired, Aurora. She blocked the doorway, her palm pressed flat against the wood. The crescent scar on her wrist traced a pale line against her skin as her knuckles went white. She did not move to let him in. I don’t recall asking for a house call, especially not from someone who vanished into thin air three months ago. Lucien shifted his weight. The floorboards groaned. He brought his gaze to the stacks of scrolls lining the shelves just past her shoulder. He tapped his cane against the threshold, the tip clicking rhythmically. The Underworld doesn't offer vacation days, even for the sentimental. I had business in Lambeth. The path back seemed to curve toward this floor. He didn’t wait for an invite. He pushed a fraction further, forcing her to retreat or be crowded into the stack of journals by the door. She moved back, her heels catching on a rug. The scent of him—cedar and something colder—filled the narrow entryway. Business. Is that what we’re calling it now? Or is it just another way to avoid saying you found somewhere more interesting to spend your evenings? She swept a hand toward the clutter of research notes covering the table. Her movement was sharp, defensive. She needed the distance between them, yet every inch of space felt consumed by the heat radiating off his frame. Nothing in this city qualifies as interesting compared to the mess you manufacture, Rory. He stepped fully inside, leaving the door slightly ajar. He didn't look at the mess of her life with judgment; he looked at it with an aching familiarity that made her skin prickle. He reached out, his gloved fingers hovering near a stack of law texts he knew she hadn't touched in weeks. He didn't make contact. He withdrew, his amber eye tracking the tremor in her hands. Go back to Avaros if you’re looking for a fight. I’m off the clock. She turned her back to him, picking up a cold mug of tea from the sideboard. Her pulse thrummed behind her ears. She could hear his fabric rustle as he adjusted his posture by the window. I’m not here for a fight. I’m here because the last time we spoke, you left a statement unfinished. It’s been haunting the back of my mind since the solstice. Aurora set the mug down with a clatter. She pivoted, bracing her hips against the worn edge of the kitchen counter. You left. You didn't give me a chance to finish it, and you certainly didn't wait around for a rebuttal. Don't act like this is about my unfinished sentences when you’re the one who walked out of Silas’ bar without a word. He took a slow step forward. The tip of his cane carved a shallow dent into the linoleum. At this distance, the heterochromia was a stark divide, a mirror to the fractured nature of their entire arrangement. He looked at her throat, his expression devoid of his usual polished, detached mask. I walked out because staying another minute would have anchored me to this realm permanently. I have responsibilities you couldn't comprehend, Rory. She let out a sharp, jagged laugh. She stepped into his personal space, the challenge burning in her bright blue eyes. Responsibilities. You hide behind that word like it’s a shield. You were scared. Admit it. You saw what happens when someone like me gets too close to the periphery of your world, and you tucked tail and ran to keep your hands clean. He dropped the cane. It clattered to the floor, rolling toward the cat, who batted at it with a disinterested paw. Lucien gripped her shoulders, his fingers firm through the thin fabric of her shirt. The shock of his touch was electric, a sudden grounding force that silenced the ringing in her head. His scent enveloped her completely. My hands have never been clean, Aurora. You were the only thing that made me want to scrub them. The words were raw, stripped of his typical linguistic flair. She stared up at him, the frustration dissolving into a desperate, hollow ache. Her hands found the lapels of his jacket, her fingers bunching the expensive wool. She could feel the steady, heavy beat of his heart through the layers. It was too much and not nearly enough. Then why are you here? If I’m just a risk, why show up at midnight? He let his forehead drop to rest against hers. His breath felt like a sigh against her lips, warm and shaky. Because the silence in my flat became louder than all the whispers in Avaros. I tried to stay away. I made every effort to keep the distance. But the city kept throwing reminders of you against my feet, and eventually, I stopped fighting the current. She stiffened, her jaw tightening. She remembered the nights pacing this exact room, the way she had stared at the window, waiting for the shadow of a man in a charcoal suit to manifest in the brickwork below. She had told herself she was over it. She had lied. You’re selfish. You show up, you rattle the cage, and you expect me to just forget the months of radio silence. I don't expect. I only hope. He slid his hands down, his palms cupping her elbows. He pulled her closer, just enough that the heat of their bodies closed the final gap. The room felt smaller, the walls constricting as the pressure of the moment spiked. She leaned into him, a traitorous submission she cursed herself for. Do you have any idea how many times I almost left a message? How many times I thought about coming to that hellhole you call an office? I know exactly how many times. I kept track of every near-miss. She looked up, pinning him with a gaze that searched for the truth behind the amber and black. He didn't look away. He didn't offer a platitude. He just held her, the rigidity of his posture finally breaking into something vulnerable. Tell me you’re not going to vanish again when the sun rises. He pressed his face into the side of her neck, his breath ghosting over her pulse point. The sun doesn't dictate where I belong, Aurora. Not anymore. She exhaled, the tension in her shoulders cascading away. She moved her hand, her thumb brushing the jagged line of her scar near her wrist, then settling against the sharp angle of his jaw. She pushed him back just a fraction to see his face, to catch the flicker of hesitation before he leaned down to close the distance for good. Ptolemy wove between their legs, snagging Lucien’s trousers with a soft mewl. Neither of them moved. The world outside the flat faded into the backdrop of the city’s hum, distant and irrelevant. Don't talk, Lucien. Just stay.
created_at"2026-03-03T22:55:48.03Z" 3/3/2026, 10:55:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1281
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1281
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"reverberated"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"stark"
count1
6
word"fractured"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"cascading"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"reverberated"
1"loomed"
2"weight"
3"traced"
4"pulse"
5"stark"
6"fractured"
7"electric"
8"could feel"
9"silence"
10"tension"
11"cascading"
12"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
92.73% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences114
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1279
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1274
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Aurora5
Eva1
London1
Underworld1
Lambeth1
Rory2
Avaros2
Lucien5
You9
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Underworld"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
5"You"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Lambeth"
4"Avaros"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a sigh against her lips, warm"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1279
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean31.98
std18.04
cv0.564
sampleLengths
061
168
24
337
420
534
624
745
826
938
1014
1168
1214
1336
1430
1521
1642
1751
1822
1921
2043
2158
2219
2358
2415
2521
2645
2749
2821
296
3051
3127
3212
3341
3412
3517
3610
3761
3832
395
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs218
matches(empty)
92.73% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences114
ratio0.018
matches
0"The scent of him—cedar and something colder—filled the narrow entryway."
1"He didn't look at the mess of her life with judgment; he looked at it with an aching familiarity that made her skin prickle."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount580
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.029310344827586206
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008620689655172414
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean11.22
std6.54
cv0.583
sampleLengths
020
112
214
315
47
515
622
724
84
911
1018
118
1220
134
143
1516
1611
1710
185
199
206
2120
229
2310
241
257
2618
2713
285
2920
3014
319
3224
3320
344
3511
3610
374
3816
396
4014
416
4213
4311
448
4513
462
4718
4822
496
28.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.2719298245614035
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners31
31.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"Then why are you here?"
ratio0.009
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount71
totalSentences107
matches
0"She pulled the door inward,"
1"He leaned on the ivory-handled"
2"You look tired, Aurora."
3"She blocked the doorway, her"
4"She did not move to"
5"I don’t recall asking for"
6"He brought his gaze to"
7"He tapped his cane against"
8"I had business in Lambeth."
9"He didn’t wait for an"
10"He pushed a fraction further,"
11"She moved back, her heels"
12"She swept a hand toward"
13"Her movement was sharp, defensive."
14"She needed the distance between"
15"He stepped fully inside, leaving"
16"He didn't look at the"
17"He reached out, his gloved"
18"He didn't make contact."
19"He withdrew, his amber eye"
ratio0.664
20.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences107
matches
0"The first deadbolt clicked back,"
1"The second lock turned, followed"
2"Ptolemy wound around Aurora’s ankles,"
3"She pulled the door inward,"
4"The air in the stairwell"
5"Lucien loomed in the threshold,"
6"He leaned on the ivory-handled"
7"The damp scent of London"
8"You look tired, Aurora."
9"She blocked the doorway, her"
10"The crescent scar on her"
11"She did not move to"
12"I don’t recall asking for"
13"Lucien shifted his weight."
14"The floorboards groaned."
15"He brought his gaze to"
16"He tapped his cane against"
17"The Underworld doesn't offer vacation"
18"I had business in Lambeth."
19"The path back seemed to"
ratio0.879
93.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"If I’m just a risk,"
1"Because the silence in my"
ratio0.019
86.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The first deadbolt clicked back, a heavy metallic rasp that reverberated through the cramped hallway of the Brick Lane flat."
1"He didn't look at the mess of her life with judgment; he looked at it with an aching familiarity that made her skin prickle."
2"It clattered to the floor, rolling toward the cat, who batted at it with a disinterested paw."
3"The shock of his touch was electric, a sudden grounding force that silenced the ringing in her head."
4"She moved her hand, her thumb brushing the jagged line of her scar near her wrist, then settling against the sharp angle of his jaw."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.3004%