Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTYQ3HBCFAHDSRM94HPAYW1

Run Details

Duration:
4m 58s
Cost:
$0.004593
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon Raven’s Nest sign glowed through sheets of rain behind her, the dimly lit bar’s back door propped open just enough for her to see the stack of old maps and black-and-white photos hanging on the walls. The rain soaked Harlow’s wool coat through to her skin, salt-and-pepper cropped hair plastered tight to her scalp. Her left wrist’s worn leather watch ticked a steady, staccato rhythm against her pulse as she veered around a stacked heap of waterlogged cardboard boxes dumped on the Tottenham Court Road sidewalk. She chased the scuff of leather boots and the shrill shush of raindrops hitting puddles split open by her stride. Ahead, Tomás Herrera’s olive skin glinted under the sodium streetlamps, rain beading on his short curly dark brown hair. His Saint Christopher medallion swung against his chest with every sharpened breath, and the thin scar running along his left forearm stretched taut when he hunched over to dodge a delivery bike’s blaring horn. He’d bolted out of the Raven’s Nest ten minutes prior, Harlow having spotted him slipping a canvas satchel stuffed with vials behind the bar’s back shelf. She’d seen the faint, phosphorescent glow sloshing inside—substances banned under the Met’s newest supernatural containment regulations, the kind that only turned up in black markets. He’d caught her staring mid-lift, cursed under his breath in rapid, accented Spanish, and ran. The alley narrowed, brick walls streaked with rain and graffiti tags faded to pale gray. Tomás skidded to a metal staircase leading down into Camden’s abandoned Tube station, a half-obscured by rotting cardboard and a tarp slung over the metal grates. Harlow’s boots slipped on the wet steps, and she grabbed a rusted iron handrail, knuckles white as she steadied herself. Tomás fumbled in the flannel pocket of his jacket, pulled something small, polished and off-white, a chipped dog tibia, and pressed it into a narrow slot cut into the metal grate at the bottom of the stairs. The grate slid open with a low, rusted whine, and he ducked through, the metal clanging shut hard behind him. Harlow halted on the top step, rain dripping off her coat, her breath fogging the cold night air. She’d never set foot in an underground supernatural market—had only heard whispers of the Veil Market, the case files stating it moved to a new location every full moon, hidden in abandoned transit hubs to evade Met patrols. Her partner, DS Morris, had died in one such supernatural case three years prior, their case file locked in an evidence locker she hadn’t dared open since. She should turn back. The rain splashed in a puddle at her feet, and she stared at the closed grate. She checked her worn leather watch, its face glowing faint under the streetlamp light, and saw the time read 11:32. She remembered the vials she’d seen in Tomás’s satchel, the exact unregistered alchemicals listed in Morris’s case file, the substances that had fueled the ritual that killed him. She clicked her baton extended, the metal clicking sharp in the rain-soaked dark, and stepped down the last stair. The air shifted the second she passed the threshold of the grate. Rain still dripped off her shoulders, and the stench of damp earth, rot, and sharp jasmine and iron wrapped around her—sharp, metallic, the smell of supernatural traces she’d hunted for three years. She grabbed the metal grate and slid it open, the slot catching as the grate swung shut behind her, locking itself. A hooded man with greasy black hair leaning against a stack of crates just inside the station barked, “Only guests with a bone token allowed on the platform! No exceptions!” Harlow fumbled in her inner coat pocket, pulling out the chipped dog tibia she’d tucked there three years prior—the same bone she’d dug from the rubble where Morris took his last breath, the smooth, worn edge catching on her coat lining. She pressed it into the vendor’s outstretched, cold fingers, and the vendor grunted, nodding to a narrow passage off the main platform. The market stretched out before her, neon signs flickering purple and green across the damp concrete tracks. Stalls lined the curved wall of the abandoned station, vendors shouting in half a dozen languages, holding up vials glowing blue, silvered amulets, rolled parchments scrawled in ink that glowed pale in the dark. A stack of crates piled with animal bones, a man holding up a jar of glowing red liquid, a woman selling small, feathered trinkets that looked plucked from ravens. In the middle of the platform, Tomás stood leaning against a stack of cardboard, handing over his canvas satchel to another man in a faded leather jacket. Harlow recognized the man from the Raven’s Nest’s back room meetings, the clique she’d been tailing for six weeks. Tomás exchanged the satchel for a stack of crisp, folded cash, and the man pressed a small, sealed envelope into his palm. Tomás’s warm brown eyes caught hers across the platform, and he froze mid-step. His left forearm’s scar glinted in the neon lights, and his hand flew to the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat. He took a step forward, olive skin bleaching pale under the flickering signs. “What the hell are you doing here, Quinn?” Harlow’s sharp jaw set, military precision keeping her from flinching, even as a chill crawled up her spine. She’d planned to tail Tomás, collect evidence, arrest the clique for selling banned supernatural substances, but she hadn’t planned to step foot in the Veil Market. “I know what you’re peddling, Herrera. Drop the envelope.” Tomás’s shoulders tensed, and he reached into his flannel jacket pocket, but he didn’t move to hand over the envelope. He leaned against a nearby stall, the neon sign reflecting off his olive skin. “You don’t have a warrant. You can’t step in here without a warrant. This isn’t your jurisdiction.” Harlow glanced around the market, vendors peddling their wares, rain still dripping off her coat onto the concrete. She’d crossed the threshold, stepping into the same territory Morris had walked three years prior, the stench of supernatural evidence she’d tracked for months, the way the market’s chatter fading as she stepped closer. “Morris came to you. She’d never said the words out loud, never admitted out loud what she’d suspected for three years, the Clique had orchestrated her partner’s death. Tomás’s face softened for a beat, the scar on his left forearm pulling tight across his skin. He reached up to scratch at it, and she saw the Saint Christopher medallion clinking against his collarbone. “I didn’t kill him,” Tomás said, his accented voice low, sharp. “He came to me. He was hurt, and I treated him. I didn’t know the substances he got from the clique was the ones that made him sick.” Harlow froze, the rain dripping off her hair, her left wrist’s leather watch ticking a steady rhythm. She’d always suspected the clique had been involved in Morris’s death, but she’d never had proof. She shifted her weight, the baton still in her grip, and stared at Tomás’s olive skin, his scar, the medallion at his throat. A shout cut through the market’s chatter, and a group of figures in black leather jackets yelled across the platform, reaching for their own batons, for their own weapons. Harlow turned toward the sound, and Tomás grabbed her wrist, his scarred left forearm pressing against her pulse. “Wait. You don’t want this.” The group of men moved toward them, their boots squelching on the damp concrete, and Harlow pulled away from Tomás, her baton raised, ready to strike. The rain still fell through the open stairwell, the neon signs flickering over the group of men, and she saw the satchel of vials in one of their jackets, the same faint phosphorescent glow sloshing inside.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"chill"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences50
matches(empty)
57.14% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences50
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences55
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1305
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1244
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Raven3
Nest3
Harlow11
Tottenham1
Court1
Road1
Tomás14
Herrera1
Saint3
Christopher3
Met2
Spanish1
Camden1
Tube1
Veil2
Market2
Morris5
Clique1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Met"
8"Camden"
9"Market"
10"Morris"
11"Clique"
places
0"Tottenham"
1"Court"
2"Road"
3"Veil"
globalScore0.937
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1305
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean62.14
std43.71
cv0.703
sampleLengths
0109
1119
2118
3103
4132
593
6148
747
88
944
109
1134
1217
1352
144
1559
1639
1756
1847
195
2062
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"been involved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs214
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences55
ratio0.073
matches
0"She’d seen the faint, phosphorescent glow sloshing inside—substances banned under the Met’s newest supernatural containment regulations, the kind that only turned up in black markets."
1"She’d never set foot in an underground supernatural market—had only heard whispers of the Veil Market, the case files stating it moved to a new location every full moon, hidden in abandoned transit hubs to evade Met patrols."
2"Rain still dripped off her shoulders, and the stench of damp earth, rot, and sharp jasmine and iron wrapped around her—sharp, metallic, the smell of supernatural traces she’d hunted for three years."
3"A hooded man with greasy black hair leaning against a stack of crates just inside the station barked, “Only guests with a bone token allowed on the platform! No exceptions!” Harlow fumbled in her inner coat pocket, pulling out the chipped dog tibia she’d tucked there three years prior—the same bone she’d dug from the rubble where Morris took his last breath, the smooth, worn edge catching on her coat lining."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1031
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"shut hard behind him."
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.014548981571290009
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0038797284190106693
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences55
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences55
mean23.73
std14.32
cv0.604
sampleLengths
039
118
232
320
419
534
626
725
815
915
1026
1120
1237
1320
1418
1538
1627
174
1816
1920
2028
2119
2212
2332
2421
2571
2622
2717
2834
2929
3027
3119
3222
3313
3421
3513
368
3718
3826
399
4020
4114
4217
4318
4434
454
4659
4715
487
4917
44.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3090909090909091
totalSentences55
uniqueOpeners17
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
36.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences50
matches
0"Her left wrist’s worn leather"
1"She chased the scuff of"
2"His Saint Christopher medallion swung"
3"He’d bolted out of the"
4"She’d seen the faint, phosphorescent"
5"He’d caught her staring mid-lift,"
6"She’d never set foot in"
7"Her partner, DS Morris, had"
8"She should turn back."
9"She checked her worn leather"
10"She remembered the vials she’d"
11"She clicked her baton extended,"
12"She grabbed the metal grate"
13"She pressed it into the"
14"His left forearm’s scar glinted"
15"He took a step forward,"
16"She’d planned to tail Tomás,"
17"He leaned against a nearby"
18"She’d crossed the threshold, stepping"
19"She’d never said the words"
ratio0.46
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences50
matches
0"The green neon Raven’s Nest"
1"The rain soaked Harlow’s wool"
2"Her left wrist’s worn leather"
3"She chased the scuff of"
4"His Saint Christopher medallion swung"
5"He’d bolted out of the"
6"She’d seen the faint, phosphorescent"
7"He’d caught her staring mid-lift,"
8"The alley narrowed, brick walls"
9"Tomás skidded to a metal"
10"Harlow’s boots slipped on the"
11"Tomás fumbled in the flannel"
12"The grate slid open with"
13"Harlow halted on the top"
14"She’d never set foot in"
15"Her partner, DS Morris, had"
16"She should turn back."
17"The rain splashed in a"
18"She checked her worn leather"
19"She remembered the vials she’d"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Harlow halted on the top step, rain dripping off her coat, her breath fogging the cold night air."
1"She remembered the vials she’d seen in Tomás’s satchel, the exact unregistered alchemicals listed in Morris’s case file, the substances that had fueled the ritu…"
2"Stalls lined the curved wall of the abandoned station, vendors shouting in half a dozen languages, holding up vials glowing blue, silvered amulets, rolled parch…"
3"A stack of crates piled with animal bones, a man holding up a jar of glowing red liquid, a woman selling small, feathered trinkets that looked plucked from rave…"
4"The group of men moved toward them, their boots squelching on the damp concrete, and Harlow pulled away from Tomás, her baton raised, ready to strike. The rain …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Tomás said, his accented voice low, sharp"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the station barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.222
73.2754%