| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1136 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1136 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "navigating" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "depths" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "grave" | | 9 | "electric" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "cataloged" | | 12 | "variables" | | 13 | "footsteps" | | 14 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1133 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1127 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.98 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Harlow | 11 | | Quinn | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Herrera | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Victorian | 2 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 1 | | Tomás | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Herrera" | | 3 | "Raven" | | 4 | "Saint" | | 5 | "Christopher" | | 6 | "Tomás" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Soho" | | 2 | "Market" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 66.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like nothing more than a toy in th" | | 1 | "felt like a labor" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.883 | | wordCount | 1133 | | matches | | 0 | "not for a weapon, but for the piece of evidence she had lifted from the locker roo" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 53.95 | | std | 29.3 | | cv | 0.543 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 121 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 95 | | 7 | 76 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 72 | | 16 | 68 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 75 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 68 |
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| 73.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "being hunted" | | 1 | "been unlocked" | | 2 | "were lined" | | 3 | "was blocked" | | 4 | "been stitched" | | 5 | "was obscured" |
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| 5.07% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "was suffocating" | | 1 | "was weaving" | | 2 | "was heading" | | 3 | "was like grinding" | | 4 | "was looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0.087 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain in London did not fall; it conspired." | | 1 | "She didn’t care about his medical license; she cared about the trail of strange, unexplainable recoveries he had left in his wake—cases that echoed the hollow silence of her partner’s death three years ago." | | 2 | "He didn't look back; he simply hauled the iron door upward with a grunt of exertion and vanished into the darkness of the subterranean labyrinth." | | 3 | "The air rising from the depths smelled of ozone, stagnant water, and something metallic—like blood mixed with wet copper." | | 4 | "Stalls were lined up like jagged teeth along the rusted tracks, selling items that defied rational classification: vials of swirling, captured mist; trinkets crafted from bone that hummed with a low, bone-deep frequency; and jars containing glowing embers that refused to go cold." | | 5 | "He pulled a small, white slip of bone from his pocket—a token—and held it aloft." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1133 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "low, bone-deep frequency;" | | 1 | "dense, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.02383053839364519 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01235657546337158 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 16.42 | | std | 8.82 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 34.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.2608695652173913 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 49.75% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it reached out a" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 28.96% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a freezing, erratic" | | 1 | "She hadn't lost sight of" | | 2 | "He dodged a group of" | | 3 | "She had been tracking him" | | 4 | "She didn’t care about his" | | 5 | "She felt the ghost of" | | 6 | "He didn't look back; he" | | 7 | "She withdrew her flashlight, the" | | 8 | "She descended the iron ladder," | | 9 | "She was in a hollowed-out" | | 10 | "She had heard whispers of" | | 11 | "He was heading toward a" | | 12 | "He looked back, his eyes" | | 13 | "He pulled a small, white" | | 14 | "She had a badge in" | | 15 | "She surged forward, ignoring the" | | 16 | "She didn't break stride." | | 17 | "She focused on the back" | | 18 | "Her voice sounded thin, alien" | | 19 | "He vaulted over a decaying" |
| | ratio | 0.478 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain in London did" | | 1 | "It was a freezing, erratic" | | 2 | "Detective Harlow Quinn tightened her" | | 3 | "She hadn't lost sight of" | | 4 | "Tomás Herrera moved with the" | | 5 | "He dodged a group of" | | 6 | "Harlow increased her pace, her" | | 7 | "She had been tracking him" | | 8 | "She didn’t care about his" | | 9 | "Tomás veered away from the" | | 10 | "Harlow checked her watch, the" | | 11 | "She felt the ghost of" | | 12 | "Tomás was thirty yards ahead," | | 13 | "He didn't look back; he" | | 14 | "Harlow reached the opening and" | | 15 | "The air rising from the" | | 16 | "She withdrew her flashlight, the" | | 17 | "She descended the iron ladder," | | 18 | "The descent felt endless, a" | | 19 | "She was in a hollowed-out" |
| | ratio | 0.94 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 35.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a freezing, erratic mist that coated the pavement in a slick, dark sheen, reflecting the neon hum of the city." | | 1 | "She didn’t care about his medical license; she cared about the trail of strange, unexplainable recoveries he had left in his wake—cases that echoed the hollow s…" | | 2 | "She was in a hollowed-out cavern of Victorian brickwork, the walls damp with a shimmering, bioluminescent moss that bled a sickly violet light." | | 3 | "This was a grave of Victorian engineering, an abandoned Tube station that felt older than the city above." | | 4 | "Stalls were lined up like jagged teeth along the rusted tracks, selling items that defied rational classification: vials of swirling, captured mist; trinkets cr…" | | 5 | "He vaulted over a decaying crate and pushed through the heavy iron turnstiles that served as the entrance to the deeper tunnels." | | 6 | "A massive, motionless figure stood in her path, wearing a tattered trench coat that looked as though it had been stitched together from a dozen different shroud…" | | 7 | "It was a shard of something that resembled obsidian, cold and pulsating with a faint, rhythmic heat." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow snapped, her hand falling instinctively to her holster" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |