Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTYQRPVGQJCVJ9M6CPCDP4D

Run Details

Duration:
9.7s
Cost:
$0.002819
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The humidity in Richmond Park clung to Rory’s skin like a damp shroud. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the heavy thermal box banging against her hip with every step. The moon hung bloated and pale behind a thicket of clouds, offering enough light to trace the uneven gravel path, but not enough to banish the shadows stretching from the ancient oaks. She reached into the pocket of her jacket, fingers brushing the Heartstone pendant. It sat cold against her palm, stubborn and silent. The path twisted, narrowing as the manicured grass of the park gave way to wild, overgrown brambles. She stopped. Silence pressed in, thick and suffocating, devoid of the usual nocturnal hum of city traffic or the rustle of foraging deer. Even the wind seemed to have forgotten this corner of the world. "Eva? I’m here. Open the gate," she called, her voice falling flat against the wall of trees. The standing stones loomed ahead, their surfaces rough and gray, etched with patterns that shimmered faintly in the gloom. An unnatural frost crystallized on the velvet petals of wildflowers that shouldn't bloom in October. Rory stepped over the boundary, the air shifting from the heavy heat of the park to a dry, biting chill that smelled of, ozone and rotted earth. She turned in a slow circle. The trees here reached upward like gnarled, desperate fingers, their branches knitting together to blot out the few stars that had managed to pierce the cloud cover. "The delivery isn't worth this, Eva. Where are you?" Her pulse hammered against the crescent scar on her wrist. The Heartstone pendant stirred, a low, rhythmic thrumming radiating from the crimson gem through the silver chain against her collarbone. It pulsed once, a heartbeat of warmth that vanished as quickly as it arrived. She walked toward the center of the clearing, her boots crunching on grass that snapped like dry parchment. Ten paces in, she stopped. Every hair on her arms stood erect. A sound caught her ear—not the wind, but a wet, rhythmic sliding noise against the bark of a nearby tree. She pivoted, her gaze sweeping the periphery. A blur of movement snagged her sightline—a limb, impossibly long and spindly, flickering behind a trunk. When she focused on the spot, nothing remained but the rough, lichen-covered bark. "Who’s there?" She reached into her bag, fingers curling around a heavy flashlight, but withheld the light. Darkness felt safer, a veil between her and whatever watched from the periphery. The silence broke again—this time, a soft, raspy inhale. It sounded like air being pulled through a throat filled with silt and broken glass. It came from directly behind her. She whirled around, her breath hitching. The clearing lay empty, yet the air hovered stagnant and heavy. She scanned the ground. Her own footprints marked the path she’d walked, yet crossing them were others—elongated, multi-fingered indentations that vanished into the mulch. The Heartstone surged, turning searing hot against her sternum. It burned with an inner light, casting a desperate, flickering crimson illumination across the mossy floor. She yanked the chain away from her neck, the silver heating until it scorched her fingertips. The light revealed movement. All around the interior of the grove, the trunks of the trees seemed to shudder. Faces, bark-thick and featureless, pressed outward from the wood grain. They had no eyes, only weeping fissures where mouths should be, dripping thick, silvery sap that hissed upon hitting the frost-covered grass. "Eva!" she shouted, her voice trembling. The rasping inhale repeated, louder now, echoing from above. She tilted her head back. Figures hung suspended from the canopy, silhouettes darker than the void, limbs tangled in the branches like marionettes discarded by a tired puppeteer. They didn't breathe. They didn't slump. They waited. One of them descended, unspooling from the dark with agonizing slowness. It possessed fingers that stretched like wax in a flame, reaching toward her face. Rory backed away, her spine meeting the cold, unyielding curve of one of the standing stones. The stone hummed, vibrating with a frequency that set her teeth on edge. "I didn't come to stay," she whispered, her hands shaking as she fumbled for the edge of the stone. The creature’s movement ceased inches from her. It lacked a face, yet she felt the weight of its observation—a clinical, predatory interest that stripped away her defenses. It moved closer, its chest expanding as it mimicked the sound of her own frantic, shallow breathing. It inhaled, a perfect carbon copy of her terror, then exhaled with the sound of a thousand dry leaves skittering across pavement. She pressed the Heartstone against the surface of the stone. The gem sparked, a flare of crimson light that blinded her for a heartbeat. When her vision cleared, the creature had drawn back, its elongated limbs recoiling as if burned. The trees rattled, the faces in the bark twisting into expressions of wordless, guttural rage. "Don't come any closer," she commanded, her voice sharpening, shedding the tremor. The air inside the grove fractured. The smell of ozone spiked, turning bitter and metallic. She saw the space between the trees ripple like a reflection in disturbed water. A portal existed there—a tear in the fabric of the night, bleeding a pale, sickly light that hurt to look at. The pendant’s heat intensified, blistering her palm, urging her toward the breach. She looked toward the path she had entered through, but the standing stones were gone. The park, the city, the familiarity of the street—it had all evaporated into the mist. Only the grove remained, tethered to something vast and hungry. A sound emerged from the center of the clearing—a soft, melodic humming. It mimicked the melody her mother used to sing in the kitchen in Cardiff, the tune fluid and nostalgic, yet performed with an inflection that twisted the notes into a dissonant, mocking wail. Rory moved toward the anomaly, her boots dragging. Her legs felt heavy, as if the soil itself pulled at her heels, demanding her presence. "That's not her," she breathed, her mind reeling. The hummingbird-sound morphed into a sharp, staccato series of clicks. Behind her, the creature unfolded fully, rising to a height that mocked the trees. It didn't strike. It simply stood, its presence a physical weight that pressed the breath from her lungs. She reached the edge of the fracture, the air swirling with flecks of black ash. The pendant pulsed in sync with the tear, a rhythmic, violent light. She reached out, her fingers brushing the boundary between Earth and the reach behind it. The cold was absolute, a void that promised neither life nor death, merely a cessation of being. The creature drifted forward, its long, tapered fingers brushing the back of her hair. The touch felt like static electricity, a thousand pricks of needle-sharp fire along her scalp. "Where is she?" she demanded, twisting to face the entity. The face in the wood smoothed over, becoming a flat, blank mask before it mimicked her own features with nightmarish accuracy. It wore her skin, her eyes reflecting the crimson glow of the pendant, her mouth curling into a smile devoid of warmth. It tilted its head, a mimicry of her own habit, and raised a hand to its neck, tracing the line of a crescent scar that hadn't been there a second ago. The entity opened its mouth to speak, but no human words emerged. Instead, the grove erupted into a cacophony of sound—the screech of rusted iron on iron, the wail of a storm, and the desperate, echoed gasp of her own voice pleading for mercy. The sound tore through the clearing, shattering the frost on the flowers, leaving the ground slick with unnatural, obsidian fluid. Rory fell back, the ground beneath her yielding into soft, grasping loam. The trees leaned inward, their branches knitting into a cage of thorns and shadows, sealing the circle.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1333
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1333
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"crystallized"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count3
10
word"pulsed"
count2
11
word"warmth"
count2
12
word"scanned"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
15
word"weight"
count2
16
word"perfect"
count1
17
word"fractured"
count1
18
word"tracing"
count1
19
word"cacophony"
count1
20
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"loomed"
2"etched"
3"shimmered"
4"gloom"
5"crystallized"
6"velvet"
7"chill"
8"pulse"
9"rhythmic"
10"pulsed"
11"warmth"
12"scanned"
13"searing"
14"echoing"
15"weight"
16"perfect"
17"fractured"
18"tracing"
19"cacophony"
20"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
97.26% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1324
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount1291
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.39
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory5
Heartstone4
October1
Cardiff1
Earth1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"October"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
89.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like air being pulled through a th"
1"felt like static electricity, a thousan"
48.94% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.511
wordCount1324
matches
0"not the wind, but a wet, rhythmic sliding noise against the bark of a nearby t"
1"neither life nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean45.66
std25.82
cv0.566
sampleLengths
086
152
217
361
433
59
644
786
82
958
1041
1141
1251
136
1445
1554
1619
1766
1855
1912
2062
2140
2269
238
2469
2561
2610
2774
2893
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"being pulled"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences96
ratio0.094
matches
0"A sound caught her ear—not the wind, but a wet, rhythmic sliding noise against the bark of a nearby tree."
1"A blur of movement snagged her sightline—a limb, impossibly long and spindly, flickering behind a trunk."
2"The silence broke again—this time, a soft, raspy inhale."
3"Her own footprints marked the path she’d walked, yet crossing them were others—elongated, multi-fingered indentations that vanished into the mulch."
4"It lacked a face, yet she felt the weight of its observation—a clinical, predatory interest that stripped away her defenses."
5"A portal existed there—a tear in the fabric of the night, bleeding a pale, sickly light that hurt to look at."
6"The park, the city, the familiarity of the street—it had all evaporated into the mist."
7"A sound emerged from the center of the clearing—a soft, melodic humming."
8"Instead, the grove erupted into a cacophony of sound—the screech of rusted iron on iron, the wail of a storm, and the desperate, echoed gasp of her own voice pleading for mercy."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1305
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"rough, lichen-covered bark."
1"searing hot against her"
2"own frantic, shallow breathing."
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.022222222222222223
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.009195402298850575
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean13.79
std6.77
cv0.491
sampleLengths
013
119
232
313
49
517
62
721
812
917
1019
1115
1227
136
1427
159
1610
1720
1814
1918
205
217
2220
237
2416
2513
262
2715
2813
299
3015
316
326
3311
344
3520
369
3716
3816
394
4015
4110
4222
436
449
455
4623
473
483
492
38.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.28125
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences92
matches
0"Even the wind seemed to"
1"Only the grove remained, tethered"
2"Instead, the grove erupted into"
ratio0.033
41.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences92
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She reached into the pocket"
2"It sat cold against her"
3"she called, her voice falling"
4"She turned in a slow"
5"Her pulse hammered against the"
6"It pulsed once, a heartbeat"
7"She walked toward the center"
8"She pivoted, her gaze sweeping"
9"She reached into her bag,"
10"It sounded like air being"
11"It came from directly behind"
12"She whirled around, her breath"
13"She scanned the ground."
14"Her own footprints marked the"
15"It burned with an inner"
16"She yanked the chain away"
17"They had no eyes, only"
18"she shouted, her voice trembling"
19"She tilted her head back."
ratio0.446
19.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences92
matches
0"The humidity in Richmond Park"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The moon hung bloated and"
3"She reached into the pocket"
4"It sat cold against her"
5"The path twisted, narrowing as"
6"she called, her voice falling"
7"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
8"An unnatural frost crystallized on"
9"Rory stepped over the boundary,"
10"She turned in a slow"
11"The trees here reached upward"
12"Her pulse hammered against the"
13"The Heartstone pendant stirred, a"
14"It pulsed once, a heartbeat"
15"She walked toward the center"
16"Every hair on her arms"
17"A sound caught her ear—not"
18"She pivoted, her gaze sweeping"
19"A blur of movement snagged"
ratio0.88
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
14.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The standing stones loomed ahead, their surfaces rough and gray, etched with patterns that shimmered faintly in the gloom."
1"An unnatural frost crystallized on the velvet petals of wildflowers that shouldn't bloom in October."
2"She walked toward the center of the clearing, her boots crunching on grass that snapped like dry parchment."
3"Her own footprints marked the path she’d walked, yet crossing them were others—elongated, multi-fingered indentations that vanished into the mulch."
4"They had no eyes, only weeping fissures where mouths should be, dripping thick, silvery sap that hissed upon hitting the frost-covered grass."
5"It possessed fingers that stretched like wax in a flame, reaching toward her face."
6"The gem sparked, a flare of crimson light that blinded her for a heartbeat."
7"When her vision cleared, the creature had drawn back, its elongated limbs recoiling as if burned."
8"The pendant’s heat intensified, blistering her palm, urging her toward the breach."
9"It mimicked the melody her mother used to sing in the kitchen in Cardiff, the tune fluid and nostalgic, yet performed with an inflection that twisted the notes …"
10"Her legs felt heavy, as if the soil itself pulled at her heels, demanding her presence."
11"It simply stood, its presence a physical weight that pressed the breath from her lungs."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she called, her voice falling flat against the wall of trees"
1"she shouted, her voice trembling"
2"she commanded, her voice sharpening, shedding the tremor"
3"she breathed, her mind reeling"
4"she demanded, twisting to face the entity"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.8
70.9001%