| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1256 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1256 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "grave" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "velvet" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "navigated" | | 7 | "searing" | | 8 | "synthetic" | | 9 | "looming" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "churning" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "cacophony" | | 16 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1249 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1247 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.24 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Aurora | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Empress" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 85.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to claw at the soles of her boots" | | 1 | "felt like iron bands tightening around" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.801 | | wordCount | 1249 | | matches | | 0 | "not at her, but at the light" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 43.07 | | std | 25.44 | | cv | 0.591 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 70 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 72 | | 13 | 62 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 68 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 71 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 61 | | 28 | 98 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 205 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.081 | | matches | | 0 | "This place—the Fae Grove—should have been empty at three in the morning." | | 1 | "The logic she usually relied on—the quick, lateral thinking that navigated her through Cardiff’s law halls or the delivery routes of the Golden Empress—deserted her now." | | 2 | "It didn't step toward her; it poured itself into a new position, an impossible movement that defied muscle and bone." | | 3 | "There was no escape; the grove had folded in on itself, turning the clearing into an impenetrable amphitheater of ancient stone." | | 4 | "She looked at the creature’s hand—it didn't have skin, just a shimmering membrane that showed a distorted reflection of her own terrified face." | | 5 | "She kept her eyes locked on a singular, dim light in the distance—the sickly yellow glow of a city streetlamp." | | 6 | "She didn't know who she was pleading with—the Fae, her own shadow, or the thing currently tearing the silence apart behind her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 178 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 3 | | adverbRatio | 0.016853932584269662 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0056179775280898875 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 14.52 | | std | 6.76 | | cv | 0.465 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 38.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.29069767441860467 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere behind her, the London" | | 1 | "Instead, the rustle of dry" | | 2 | "Just show your face." | | 3 | "Just let me get back" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 29.52% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "It pressed against her eardrums," | | 1 | "She reached for the Heartstone" | | 2 | "It remained cold, as still" | | 3 | "She checked the crescent scar" | | 4 | "She spun around, her voice" | | 5 | "She stepped toward the central" | | 6 | "She gasped and ripped the" | | 7 | "It felt synthetic, cold, like" | | 8 | "She turned, the pendant’s glow" | | 9 | "It lacked depth, existing as" | | 10 | "It didn't step toward her;" | | 11 | "I mean it." | | 12 | "Her hand drifted to the" | | 13 | "It offered no comfort, just" | | 14 | "She retreated, her heels sinking" | | 15 | "It drifted closer, its form" | | 16 | "You shouldn't have opened the" | | 17 | "It echoed from the earth" | | 18 | "It tasted of old vinegar" | | 19 | "She shivered, the cold sinking" |
| | ratio | 0.476 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate groaned like" | | 1 | "The humidity clung to her" | | 2 | "It pressed against her eardrums," | | 3 | "She reached for the Heartstone" | | 4 | "The silver chain bit into" | | 5 | "It remained cold, as still" | | 6 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 7 | "The wildflowers at her feet" | | 8 | "She checked the crescent scar" | | 9 | "This place—the Fae Grove—should have" | | 10 | "She spun around, her voice" | | 11 | "Nothing moved but the low-hanging" | | 12 | "The only reply came from" | | 13 | "She stepped toward the central" | | 14 | "The logic she usually relied" | | 15 | "The pendant suddenly burned." | | 16 | "A sharp, searing heat blossomed" | | 17 | "She gasped and ripped the" | | 18 | "The clicking halted." | | 19 | "A heavy, rhythmic thrum replaced" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 42.41% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers at her feet glowed with a sickly, bioluminescent pallor, casting long, frantic shadows that seemed to claw at the soles of her boots." | | 1 | "The logic she usually relied on—the quick, lateral thinking that navigated her through Cardiff’s law halls or the delivery routes of the Golden Empress—deserted…" | | 2 | "She gasped and ripped the chain from her neck, the metal glowing with a fierce, pulsating crimson light that painted the surrounding trees in blood-dark hues." | | 3 | "A long, spindly arm elongated, the limb stretching three times the length of an average human’s, ending in fingers that tapered into needles." | | 4 | "It lacked eyes, simply harboring two deep, hollow pits that drained the light from the Heartstone pendant." | | 5 | "The pendant flared one last time, a desperate, blinding strobe that silhouetted the nightmare standing before her." | | 6 | "She looked at the creature’s hand—it didn't have skin, just a shimmering membrane that showed a distorted reflection of her own terrified face." | | 7 | "She ran until her lungs burned like she’d inhaled ground glass, her boots churning up tufts of glowing flora that flickered and died at her touch." | | 8 | "She reached the perimeter, not caring about the jagged wire that shredded the palms of her hands as she hauled herself over." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |