Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTYQSP6QNHJJ5T3QYWKVVTA

Run Details

Duration:
7.4s
Cost:
$0.002632
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gate groaned like a dying beast as Rory pushed through the heavy perimeter of Richmond Park. Beyond the rusted latch, the air thickened. The humidity clung to her skin, tasting of damp earth and crushed petals. Somewhere behind her, the London city smog whispered promises of safety, but here, the silence possessed weight. It pressed against her eardrums, tuned to the frequency of a held breath. She reached for the Heartstone pendant tucked beneath her heavy woolen coat. The silver chain bit into the back of her neck as she adjusted the gem. It remained cold, as still as the grave, yet the hair on her arms stood upright. The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, jagged teeth puncturing the velvet expanse of the night sky. The wildflowers at her feet glowed with a sickly, bioluminescent pallor, casting long, frantic shadows that seemed to claw at the soles of her boots. She checked the crescent scar on her left wrist, rubbing the skin until it turned raw, a grounding habit from nights in her flat above Silas’ bar. This place—the Fae Grove—should have been empty at three in the morning. Instead, the rustle of dry leaves skittered in a circle around her, perfectly mimicking the rhythm of her own footfalls. Stop following me. She spun around, her voice cracking the stillness. Nothing moved but the low-hanging mist curling around the oaks like spindly fingers. The only reply came from the dark canopy, a wet, rhythmic clicking sound, like teeth tapping against wet stone. She stepped toward the central clearing, her heart hammering against her ribs. The logic she usually relied on—the quick, lateral thinking that navigated her through Cardiff’s law halls or the delivery routes of the Golden Empress—deserted her now. There was no case to plead, no package to deliver. There was only the creeping sensation of spiders crawling beneath her scalp. The pendant suddenly burned. A sharp, searing heat blossomed against her chest, spreading outward like ink in water. She gasped and ripped the chain from her neck, the metal glowing with a fierce, pulsating crimson light that painted the surrounding trees in blood-dark hues. Look, I didn’t come here to play whatever game you’re running. Just show your face. The clicking halted. A heavy, rhythmic thrum replaced it, vibrating through the soles of her shoes. It felt synthetic, cold, like the ticking of a grandfather clock located inside her own lungs. She turned, the pendant’s glow illuminating a shifting patch of fog. Something stood by the largest oak, a figure stretched thin as parchment. It lacked depth, existing as a flat silhouette against the deeper black of the woods. A long, spindly arm elongated, the limb stretching three times the length of an average human’s, ending in fingers that tapered into needles. It didn't step toward her; it poured itself into a new position, an impossible movement that defied muscle and bone. Stay back. I mean it. Her hand drifted to the pocket of her coat where she carried the blunt, heavy key-ring from the restaurant. It offered no comfort, just a pathetic weight against the void looming before her. She retreated, her heels sinking into the mud, but the grove seemed to elongate with every step she took backward. The standing stones, once a manageable distance behind her, now stood miles away, blurred by the shifting, oily fog. The creature’s head tilted sideways, a motion so fluid it suggested a neck made of water. A faint, low hum emanated from it, the sound of a swarm of bees trapped in a glass jar. It drifted closer, its form flickering like a faulty fluorescent bulb. Every time the light pulsed, the creature occupied a different space, inches closer to her throat. You shouldn't have opened the gate, Aurora. The voice didn't come from the creature. It echoed from the earth itself, vibrating up through her ankles. It tasted of old vinegar and rot, a sound she hadn't heard since she left her father’s chambers. She shivered, the cold sinking past her skin and settling deep into her marrow. I never asked to be here. I never asked for any of this. Her breath hitched as the creature’s silhouette coalesced, revealing a face composed of shifting, translucent planes. It lacked eyes, simply harboring two deep, hollow pits that drained the light from the Heartstone pendant. As the creature reached out, the air around it frosted over, crystallizing the wildflowers into fragile, glass-like corpses. The pendant flared one last time, a desperate, blinding strobe that silhouetted the nightmare standing before her. Rory stumbled back, her spine colliding with the rough, unforgiving surface of a standing stone. The bark of the oak was wet, pulsing like a vein beneath her shoulder blades. There was no escape; the grove had folded in on itself, turning the clearing into an impenetrable amphitheater of ancient stone. The creature’s hand rested on the air inches from her face, the heat of it sickeningly sweet, smelling of ozone and ozone-charred hair. Does the stone still whisper to you, little thief? She couldn't speak, her throat constricted by a terror so absolute it felt like iron bands tightening around her windpipe. She looked at the creature’s hand—it didn't have skin, just a shimmering membrane that showed a distorted reflection of her own terrified face. Find it yourself if you want it so badly. She hurled the crimson pendant into the darkness. It didn't hit the ground. It hung suspended in mid-air for a heartbeat, casting a final, frantic glow on the twisting, gnarl-rooted floor of the grove. The creature lunged, its body snapping like a discarded fan, its movement blurred into a singular, predatory strike aimed not at her, but at the light. Rory didn't wait to see if it caught. She spun away, digging her fingers into the crevice of the standing stone and scrambling toward the gap where the park perimeter fence should have been. The world spun, the trees turning into smeary streaks of charcoal. She ran until her lungs burned like she’d inhaled ground glass, her boots churning up tufts of glowing flora that flickered and died at her touch. The clicking sound returned, louder this time, coming from the sky directly above her. She didn't look up. She kept her eyes locked on a singular, dim light in the distance—the sickly yellow glow of a city streetlamp. It was her only anchor in a world that had rewritten its laws. Just let me get back to the pavement. Please. She didn't know who she was pleading with—the Fae, her own shadow, or the thing currently tearing the silence apart behind her. She reached the perimeter, not caring about the jagged wire that shredded the palms of her hands as she hauled herself over. She dropped to the other side, hitting the asphalt of the London street with a bone-jarring thud. The city hummed, a cacophony of sirens and distant traffic. She scrambled to her feet, heedless of the blood dripping from her torn clothes, and sprinted toward the glowing sign of the bar, not daring to look back at the park entrance. Behind her, the grove remained silent. The gate was shut tight, the rustle of leaves long forgotten. She pressed her back against the brick wall of the flat, her breath coming in ragged, shallow gasps. Her hands shook, the crescent scar on her wrist throbbing, pulsed in time with an echo of the Heartstone’s vanished light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"grave"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count2
6
word"navigated"
count1
7
word"searing"
count1
8
word"synthetic"
count1
9
word"looming"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count2
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"churning"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"cacophony"
count1
16
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"grave"
3"loomed"
4"velvet"
5"rhythmic"
6"navigated"
7"searing"
8"synthetic"
9"looming"
10"pulsed"
11"echoed"
12"whisper"
13"churning"
14"flickered"
15"cacophony"
16"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1249
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1247
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.24
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Richmond1
Park1
London2
Heartstone3
Fae2
Grove1
Cardiff1
Golden1
Empress1
Aurora1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Grove"
3"Empress"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
85.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"shadows that seemed to claw at the soles of her boots"
1"felt like iron bands tightening around"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.801
wordCount1249
matches
0"not at her, but at the light"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean43.07
std25.44
cv0.591
sampleLengths
068
143
269
332
43
540
660
744
815
970
1043
115
1272
1362
147
1550
1613
1751
1868
1923
209
2143
229
2360
2471
2551
269
2761
2898
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs205
matches
0"was pleading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences86
ratio0.081
matches
0"This place—the Fae Grove—should have been empty at three in the morning."
1"The logic she usually relied on—the quick, lateral thinking that navigated her through Cardiff’s law halls or the delivery routes of the Golden Empress—deserted her now."
2"It didn't step toward her; it poured itself into a new position, an impossible movement that defied muscle and bone."
3"There was no escape; the grove had folded in on itself, turning the clearing into an impenetrable amphitheater of ancient stone."
4"She looked at the creature’s hand—it didn't have skin, just a shimmering membrane that showed a distorted reflection of her own terrified face."
5"She kept her eyes locked on a singular, dim light in the distance—the sickly yellow glow of a city streetlamp."
6"She didn't know who she was pleading with—the Fae, her own shadow, or the thing currently tearing the silence apart behind her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount178
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.016853932584269662
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0056179775280898875
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean14.52
std6.76
cv0.465
sampleLengths
018
17
213
317
413
512
615
716
817
925
1027
1112
1220
133
148
1513
1619
1712
1826
1910
2012
214
2214
2326
2411
254
263
2713
2816
2911
3012
3115
3223
3320
342
353
3619
3714
3820
3919
4016
4119
4211
4316
447
457
4611
4718
4814
496
38.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.29069767441860467
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners25
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences84
matches
0"Somewhere behind her, the London"
1"Instead, the rustle of dry"
2"Just show your face."
3"Just let me get back"
ratio0.048
29.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences84
matches
0"It pressed against her eardrums,"
1"She reached for the Heartstone"
2"It remained cold, as still"
3"She checked the crescent scar"
4"She spun around, her voice"
5"She stepped toward the central"
6"She gasped and ripped the"
7"It felt synthetic, cold, like"
8"She turned, the pendant’s glow"
9"It lacked depth, existing as"
10"It didn't step toward her;"
11"I mean it."
12"Her hand drifted to the"
13"It offered no comfort, just"
14"She retreated, her heels sinking"
15"It drifted closer, its form"
16"You shouldn't have opened the"
17"It echoed from the earth"
18"It tasted of old vinegar"
19"She shivered, the cold sinking"
ratio0.476
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences84
matches
0"The iron gate groaned like"
1"The humidity clung to her"
2"It pressed against her eardrums,"
3"She reached for the Heartstone"
4"The silver chain bit into"
5"It remained cold, as still"
6"The ancient oak standing stones"
7"The wildflowers at her feet"
8"She checked the crescent scar"
9"This place—the Fae Grove—should have"
10"She spun around, her voice"
11"Nothing moved but the low-hanging"
12"The only reply came from"
13"She stepped toward the central"
14"The logic she usually relied"
15"The pendant suddenly burned."
16"A sharp, searing heat blossomed"
17"She gasped and ripped the"
18"The clicking halted."
19"A heavy, rhythmic thrum replaced"
ratio0.833
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
42.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The wildflowers at her feet glowed with a sickly, bioluminescent pallor, casting long, frantic shadows that seemed to claw at the soles of her boots."
1"The logic she usually relied on—the quick, lateral thinking that navigated her through Cardiff’s law halls or the delivery routes of the Golden Empress—deserted…"
2"She gasped and ripped the chain from her neck, the metal glowing with a fierce, pulsating crimson light that painted the surrounding trees in blood-dark hues."
3"A long, spindly arm elongated, the limb stretching three times the length of an average human’s, ending in fingers that tapered into needles."
4"It lacked eyes, simply harboring two deep, hollow pits that drained the light from the Heartstone pendant."
5"The pendant flared one last time, a desperate, blinding strobe that silhouetted the nightmare standing before her."
6"She looked at the creature’s hand—it didn't have skin, just a shimmering membrane that showed a distorted reflection of her own terrified face."
7"She ran until her lungs burned like she’d inhaled ground glass, her boots churning up tufts of glowing flora that flickered and died at her touch."
8"She reached the perimeter, not caring about the jagged wire that shredded the palms of her hands as she hauled herself over."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.5715%