Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTYRDTE7CWZ41PR4QY46EHA

Run Details

Duration:
7.6s
Cost:
$0.002495
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed, casting a sickly emerald glow across the rain-slicked pavement of the Soho street. Inside, the bar smelled of stale hops, floor wax, and the ghost of charcoal tobacco. Rory leaned against the scarred mahogany bar, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped mark on her left wrist. The frantic rhythm of the city’s traffic muffled into a low, oceanic roar beyond the heavy oak door. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the weight of a lukewarm order of takeout pressing against her hip. Silas stood behind the pumps, his cloth moving in circles over a glass. He stopped, his hazel eyes locking onto the doorway as it swung inward. A man stepped out of the drizzle, shaking rainwater from a charcoal trench coat that looked far too expensive for this part of London. He scanned the room, his gaze catching on the maps and sepia-toned photographs glued to the walls. When he turned, his eyes landed on Rory. He froze. The man stepped forward, the floorboards groaning under his weight. He had a sharp, angular face, lines etched deep around the mouth that hadn't been there when they were children playing in the Cardiff docks. How do you survive a place like this, Rory? Rory dropped her gaze to the glass. She felt the sudden constriction in her chest, the ghost of an old, familiar panic. It’s just a job, Brendan. The city doesn't care who you were before you walked through the door. Brendan reached the bar, pulling out a stool and sitting with a calculated, fluid grace. He reached out, his hand hovering near hers before he pulled it back, closing his palm into a tight fist. You look different. The barrister facade suits the clothes, but the eyes belong to someone else entirely. Tell me, do you still memorize statutes to keep the nightmares at bay? I don’t keep nightmares anymore. I deliver noodles. She slid a receipt toward the register. Silas didn’t intervene; he kept his eyes on the shelf of scotches, his fingers absentmindedly twisting the silver signet ring on his right hand. He was the silent sentry, the anchor in a room full of shifting currents. Evan is looking for you. He sits in the office on Cathedral Road and stares at the wall, waiting for a ghost to wander back into his trap. He thinks you still fear the dark rooms. My life is three miles of London streets and a flat with a leaky roof. Don't mention his name here. Rory grabbed her bag, the leather strap biting into her shoulder. She turned fully to face him. The man who had once been her lifeline, the one who had promised he would always be there to haul her out of the fire, looked brittle. He clutched his glass as if it were the only thing separating him from the void. You abandoned your father, you abandoned the practice, and you left me waiting by the docks for a girl who had gone up in smoke. Was it worth it? Leaving the prestige for a dishwashing gig and a man who limps like he’s haunted by a lost war? A muscle ticked in Silas’s jaw, but he said nothing. He turned his attention to a customer at the far end of the bar, leaving the space between them heavy with the scent of damp wool and old decisions. The life I lived in Cardiff was a cage wrapped in silk. You knew that. You just didn't care because you liked the view from the outside. I loved you, Rory. The truth hung between them like a blade. It lacked the warmth of a confession. It sounded like an accusation. Rory watched the way he held his posture, perfectly vertical, as if he were still arguing a case before a judge who had already decided his guilt. Love doesn't demand that you stop breathing just to keep the air quiet for someone else. You’re talking to a memory, Brendan. I stopped being that girl the moment I realized I had to choose between disappearing or dying. I chose to disappear. She glanced at the bookshelf behind Silas, the secret hinge hidden behind a framed photo of a dockside pub from thirty years ago. It was a portal she had used a dozen times, but tonight, she felt the barrier of her own past pressing against the physical walls of the bar. Father thinks you’re dead. He stopped asking after the second year. He stopped asking because he knew the law wouldn’t help him find me in a city this deep. Tell him I’m dead if it makes the dinner table quieter. Brendan let out a jagged laugh, his eyes scanning her face as if searching for a fracture in the facade. He downed his drink in one swallow. It was the motion of a man who traveled heavy, laden with the luggage of every regret he’d ever nurtured. I came here because I wanted to see if you were cold. If you were starving. I thought I might find a shattered spirit I could piece back together. Instead, I find you running errands for a man who trades in secrets. You’ve traded one cage for a colder one. I’m standing here, aren't I? I’m breathing. You’re the one vibrating with the urge to reach for a gavel that isn't there. Rory moved away from the counter, the weight of the delivery bag suddenly manageable. She looked toward the door, where the rain had thinned into a fine, freezing mist. Silas finally turned, his hazel gaze landing on Brendan with a chilling, clinical precision. The silence in the room grew thick, vibrating with a decade of unspoken history and the sharp, jagged edges of their unresolved youth. You should leave. She isn't the file you’re looking for. Brendan stood, his coat swaying around his legs. He didn't look at Silas. He kept his eyes on Rory, his disappointment a visible weight in the air. I’ll tell him nothing. Keep your secrets, Rory. But remember, shadows stretch longer as the sun sets. You can't outrun the light forever. He walked out, the bell above the door jingling with a hollow, cheerful sound that shamed the gravity left behind. Rory stood frozen, her fingers gripped white-knuckled around the strap. Silas walked over, his limp subtle but present, and began to wipe the spot where Brendan had placed his glass. He didn't look at her, yet his presence acted as a calm. Are you alright? The question wasn't a request for comfort. It was a test of orientation. Rory looked at the maps on the wall, the lines representing territories she no longer claimed. I’m just delivering dinner, Silas. She pushed toward the exit, the damp air rushing in to meet her, stripping away the ghost of the courtroom, the arguments, and the boy who had never learned to let go. She stepped into the night, the neon sign hissing behind her as the street swallowed her whole.
created_at"2026-03-03T22:58:02.713Z" 3/3/2026, 10:58:02 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1179
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1179
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"weight"
count4
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"calculated"
count1
6
word"facade"
count2
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"chilling"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"weight"
2"scanned"
3"etched"
4"familiar"
5"calculated"
6"facade"
7"silk"
8"warmth"
9"scanning"
10"shattered"
11"chilling"
12"silence"
13"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1179
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.11% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1179
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
London2
Rory12
Cardiff2
Brendan7
Cathedral1
Road1
Silas8
You9
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Brendan"
4"Silas"
5"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Cathedral"
4"Road"
globalScore0.991
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if searching for a fracture in the facade"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1179
matches(empty)
96.49% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"demand that you"
1"being that girl"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean31.86
std18.93
cv0.594
sampleLengths
092
167
210
335
49
522
618
735
830
98
1045
1136
1220
1360
1448
1539
1627
174
1847
1943
2051
2111
2229
2347
2450
2522
2629
2737
2810
2927
3023
3130
3232
333
3429
355
3649
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs212
matches
0"were still arguing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences95
ratio0.011
matches
0"Silas didn’t intervene; he kept his eyes on the shelf of scotches, his fingers absentmindedly twisting the silver signet ring on his right hand."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1183
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.024513947590870666
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006762468300929839
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean12.41
std7.31
cv0.589
sampleLengths
022
115
217
318
420
513
613
724
817
98
102
1110
1225
139
147
1515
165
1713
1815
1920
203
2114
2213
235
243
257
2624
2714
285
2923
308
3115
325
3311
346
3527
3616
3725
384
3919
4010
4129
4212
433
4412
454
468
477
485
4927
40.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2736842105263158
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners26
35.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Instead, I find you running"
ratio0.011
0.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences93
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"He stopped, his hazel eyes"
2"He scanned the room, his"
3"He had a sharp, angular"
4"She felt the sudden constriction"
5"It’s just a job, Brendan."
6"He reached out, his hand"
7"You look different."
8"I don’t keep nightmares anymore."
9"I deliver noodles."
10"She slid a receipt toward"
11"He was the silent sentry,"
12"He sits in the office"
13"He thinks you still fear"
14"My life is three miles"
15"She turned fully to face"
16"He clutched his glass as"
17"You abandoned your father, you"
18"He turned his attention to"
19"You knew that."
ratio0.548
29.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences93
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory leaned against the scarred"
2"The frantic rhythm of the"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"Silas stood behind the pumps,"
5"He stopped, his hazel eyes"
6"A man stepped out of"
7"He scanned the room, his"
8"The man stepped forward, the"
9"He had a sharp, angular"
10"Rory dropped her gaze to"
11"She felt the sudden constriction"
12"It’s just a job, Brendan."
13"The city doesn't care who"
14"Brendan reached the bar, pulling"
15"He reached out, his hand"
16"You look different."
17"The barrister facade suits the"
18"I don’t keep nightmares anymore."
19"I deliver noodles."
ratio0.86
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"If you were starving."
ratio0.011
51.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"A man stepped out of the drizzle, shaking rainwater from a charcoal trench coat that looked far too expensive for this part of London."
1"He reached out, his hand hovering near hers before he pulled it back, closing his palm into a tight fist."
2"He clutched his glass as if it were the only thing separating him from the void."
3"Leaving the prestige for a dishwashing gig and a man who limps like he’s haunted by a lost war?"
4"Brendan let out a jagged laugh, his eyes scanning her face as if searching for a fracture in the facade."
5"He walked out, the bell above the door jingling with a hollow, cheerful sound that shamed the gravity left behind."
6"She pushed toward the exit, the damp air rushing in to meet her, stripping away the ghost of the courtroom, the arguments, and the boy who had never learned to …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.1134%