Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTYT9TD0BQ6YW01MRX0RSM4

Run Details

Duration:
8.9s
Cost:
$0.002853
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The damp air of the decommissioned Camden station tasted of iron and ancient soot. Quinn stepped onto the platform, her boots clicking against the cracked tiles. The yellow line had long since faded into a sickly, jaundiced smear, but down here, in the bowels of the city, the silence hit harder than the noise of the streets above. She caught the scent of ozone and something sweet, like rotting lilies. A few feet away, a body lay sprawled across the tracks, limbs twisted at angles that defied basic anatomy. The uniform officers had taped off the area, but their faces looked pale, their eyes darting anywhere but the corpse. Quinn knelt, the leather of her watch band creaking as she focused on the victim. A man, middle-aged, tailor-made suit looking remarkably pristine despite the filth of the station floor. No blood. No exit wounds. Just the stillness of a marionette whose strings had been cut. "Multiple organ failure, Detective. Looks like a seizure brought on by some rare neurotoxin," the duty sergeant remarked, standing over her shoulder. He kept his hands stuffed deep into his coat pockets. "London's crawling with junkies and bad batches these days. I want to clear this mess before the morning shift hits." Quinn traced the dead man’s jaw with her gaze. Her brown eyes narrowed. The skin around the victim’s eyes held a faint, shimmering residue, almost like pulverized sea glass. She reached into her pocket, thumbing the edge of a brass object she’d confiscated from a scene three moons ago, but her fingers stopped. She didn't need the compass to know that reality felt thin here, peeled back like sun-bleached wallpaper. "A seizure doesn't crystallize sweat into silica," she said, her voice cutting through the hollow echoes of the station. "Look at the palms. They aren't dirty. He didn't die here. He was placed." "The cameras in the station entrance haven't picked up a live soul in forty-eight hours," the sergeant countered, his voice tight. "We checked the logs. It's a closed set. Maybe he crawled down the vents." Quinn ignored him, her attention shifting to the gap between the subway tracks. There, half-hidden in the ballast, lay a small, calcified token—a shard of bone, intricately carved with symbols that made her pupils throb. It hummed, a low-frequency vibration that rattled her teeth. "You're seeing shadows, Detective. This is a simple overdose." "Simple never leaves behind a calling card of carved marrow." She reached out, ignoring the sting of static electricity that jumped to her fingertips, and plucked the bone token from the gravel. The moment her skin touched the object, the air in the station curdled. Her vision splintered, showing her not the damp walls covered in graffiti, but a shimmering, transient architecture—arches built of fog and flickering black flame. The Veil Market. It had moved, and it had left a casualty in its wake. Quinn stood, her military bearing solidifying. She pocketed the token. The sergeant’s face remained a mask of stubborn denial, a man desperate to keep his worldview intact. He didn't see the way the dust swirled in patterns around the corpse, forming a perfect, geometric seal. "Get the forensics team to scrub the site for bio-residue, not toxins," Quinn ordered, her tone brooks no argument. "And call the basement archives. I need someone who knows the occult history of this line." "That’s a waste of time, Quinn. You're chasing ghosts again. Ever since Morris went missing, you’ve been looking for things that aren't there." Quinn looked at him, her sharp jaw set tight. The sergeant shifted, his gaze finally faltering. She walked toward the edge of the platform, the vibration of the bone token rhythmic against her thigh, pulsing like a second heart. She remembered Eva Kowalski, the curly-haired girl with the satchel full of ancient, rotting scrolls. If anyone could decipher the sigils etched into the marrow, it was her. "I’m not chasing ghosts, Sergeant. I’m chasing the people who left this man behind to bleed out into a different dimension." "That’s nonsense." She turned, her coat sweeping against the stagnant air. The station lights flickered, a sudden, violent surge of power that left black spots dancing in her vision. "Check the ventilation shafts again. Not for footprints. For ash. The kind that comes from burning pages, not wood." She left him standing there, his mouth agape. Upstairs, the rumble of modern London felt fake, a thin veneer stretched over a reality that was jagged and hungry. Quinn walked toward the exit, her hand hovering near her sidearm, though she knew the iron and lead were useless against what lived beneath the tracks. She reached the street level and immediately pulled her phone, typing a quick, encrypted message to Eva. *The Market moved. Found a bone token at the Camden station. I need you to translate the geometry.* She looked at her watch. The leather was worn, softened by years of grip and tension. Morris had worn a similar watch, right up until the night he had stepped into a room that didn't exist on any map and never walked back out. Quinn didn't wait for a reply. She headed toward the museum, her steps measured, her mind dissecting the scene—the lack of struggle, the pristine clothes, the way the body had been centered between the rails, as if it were an offering. A trade. A life for a passage. The city moved around her in a blur of commuters and neon, oblivious to the fact that just below their feet, the barrier was fraying. She knew the clique had been active. She knew they were trading, buying things that shouldn't exist, and dragging the remnants of the old world into the light of the new. She turned the corner, the wind whipping through her cropped hair. Every instinct she had, honed by nearly two decades of hunting killers, told her that this wasn't a murder. It was a transaction. And someone had paid a very steep price. She reached the university district, the architecture shifting from Victorian brick to imposing, brutalist concrete. She pushed open the heavy doors of the archive building, her pulse steady, her focus narrow. Eva was already waiting in the lobby, her green eyes wide behind round glasses, her finger caught in the nervous habit of tucking a red curl behind her ear. Beside her sat the worn leather satchel, stuffed so full it groaned under the weight of its contents. "You found something," Eva said, her voice barely a whisper, eyes darting to the hallway where the night security guard sat slumped over a crossword puzzle. Quinn didn't speak. She reached into her pocket and slid the bone token across the polished mahogany of the reception desk. The breath hitched in Eva’s throat. She didn't touch it. She leaned in, her gaze scanning the indentations as if they were lines of blood. "This isn't from the city," Eva murmured, her hand tremors visible despite her attempt to steady them. "This is a key, Quinn. It’s not just a token; it’s a coordinate." "Where?" "To the place you shouldn't be looking." "Tell me anyway." Quinn stared her down, the weight of the investigation pinning them both to the spot. The station had been a warning. The man on the tracks had been an omen. She didn't care about the risk, not anymore. Not since the case file of her partner had gathered dust for three years, and not while the city continued to pretend the monsters were just in the movies. She looked at the token again, the carvings seeming to shift and writhe in the dim artificial light. The detective leaned into the space between them, her gaze cold and lethal. "Break it down, Evie. Every stroke. I want to know who held the blade that carved this."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"pristine"
count2
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"echoes"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"dancing"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"measured"
count1
12
word"imposing"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"weight"
count2
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pristine"
2"traced"
3"echoes"
4"throb"
5"perfect"
6"rhythmic"
7"etched"
8"flickered"
9"dancing"
10"tension"
11"measured"
12"imposing"
13"pulse"
14"weight"
15"whisper"
16"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords18
totalWords1306
ratio0.014
matches
0"The Market moved. Found a bone token at the Camden station. I need you to translate the geometry."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1061
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Quinn11
Veil1
Market2
Eva6
Kowalski1
London1
Victorian1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Market"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
places
0"Camden"
1"London"
2"Victorian"
globalScore0.982
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.766
wordCount1306
matches
0"not the damp walls covered in graffiti, but a shimmering, transient architecture"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"know that reality"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean35.3
std19.58
cv0.555
sampleLengths
058
151
246
352
470
533
635
744
89
910
1074
1145
1235
1323
1467
1521
162
1727
1819
1954
2035
2144
2248
2356
2442
2531
2647
2726
2821
2925
3030
311
327
333
3467
3531
3617
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"been centered"
80.95% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs168
matches
0"was fraying"
1"were trading"
2"was already waiting"
21.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences94
ratio0.043
matches
0"There, half-hidden in the ballast, lay a small, calcified token—a shard of bone, intricately carved with symbols that made her pupils throb."
1"Her vision splintered, showing her not the damp walls covered in graffiti, but a shimmering, transient architecture—arches built of fog and flickering black flame."
2"She headed toward the museum, her steps measured, her mind dissecting the scene—the lack of struggle, the pristine clothes, the way the body had been centered between the rails, as if it were an offering."
3"\"This is a key, Quinn. It’s not just a token; it’s a coordinate.\""
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1070
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"middle-aged, tailor-made suit"
1"wide behind round glasses,"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.020560747663551402
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008411214953271028
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean13.89
std7.67
cv0.552
sampleLengths
014
112
232
312
419
520
615
715
82
93
1011
1122
1210
1320
149
154
1616
1724
1817
1919
2014
2121
2214
2313
2422
259
269
2710
2822
2913
3024
313
3212
336
344
3517
3618
3719
3816
3923
409
417
4223
4315
4413
4521
462
479
4818
4919
49.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3617021276595745
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners34
43.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Just the stillness of a"
ratio0.013
58.96% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences77
matches
0"She caught the scent of"
1"He kept his hands stuffed"
2"Her brown eyes narrowed."
3"She reached into her pocket,"
4"She didn't need the compass"
5"she said, her voice cutting"
6"It hummed, a low-frequency vibration"
7"She reached out, ignoring the"
8"Her vision splintered, showing her"
9"It had moved, and it"
10"She pocketed the token."
11"He didn't see the way"
12"She walked toward the edge"
13"She remembered Eva Kowalski, the"
14"She turned, her coat sweeping"
15"She left him standing there,"
16"She reached the street level"
17"I need you to translate"
18"She looked at her watch."
19"She headed toward the museum,"
ratio0.403
18.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences77
matches
0"The damp air of the"
1"Quinn stepped onto the platform,"
2"The yellow line had long"
3"She caught the scent of"
4"The uniform officers had taped"
5"Quinn knelt, the leather of"
6"A man, middle-aged, tailor-made suit"
7"the duty sergeant remarked, standing"
8"He kept his hands stuffed"
9"Quinn traced the dead man’s"
10"Her brown eyes narrowed."
11"The skin around the victim’s"
12"She reached into her pocket,"
13"She didn't need the compass"
14"she said, her voice cutting"
15"the sergeant countered, his voice"
16"Quinn ignored him, her attention"
17"There, half-hidden in the ballast,"
18"It hummed, a low-frequency vibration"
19"She reached out, ignoring the"
ratio0.883
64.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"If anyone could decipher the"
ratio0.013
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"There, half-hidden in the ballast, lay a small, calcified token—a shard of bone, intricately carved with symbols that made her pupils throb."
1"It hummed, a low-frequency vibration that rattled her teeth."
2"Upstairs, the rumble of modern London felt fake, a thin veneer stretched over a reality that was jagged and hungry."
3"She knew they were trading, buying things that shouldn't exist, and dragging the remnants of the old world into the light of the new."
4"She leaned in, her gaze scanning the indentations as if they were lines of blood."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice cutting through the hollow echoes of the station"
1"the sergeant countered, his voice tight"
2"Eva murmured, her hand tremors visible despite her attempt to steady them"
54.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn ordered (order)"
1"Eva murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.381
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.19
78.9083%