"She knelt beside the gnarled cluster of oaks known locally as the Hanging Oaks, their branches twisted like gnarled fingers, and spotted the faint shimmering distortion in the air just ten feet away— the Veil, Isolde had explained last week, the thin barrier between Earth and the other realms, visible only to those who carried supernatural markers or had been touched by magic."
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"She wore a gown of moss green that seemed to blend with the surrounding ferns, and her bare feet didn’t leave so much as a dust print on the packed earth— a quirk of her half-fae blood, Aurora had learned, that left no footprints when she walked."
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"The air was thick with the sound of laughter— loud, hollow laughter, like the sound of a drumbeat coming from a distant cave— and the clatter of plates and goblets being slammed down onto the table."
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"“Is that… alive?” Aurora murmured, pointing at a platter of sliced pink meat that twitched slightly, even as a nearby servant— another helbound soul, Aurora realized, this one carrying a tray of mead goblets— reached over and cut a slice with a sharp knife, popping it into the mouth of a lordling who whooped with delight."
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"As she knelt to pick up the box, the cuff of her sweater rode up, exposing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist— the one from the childhood accident with a kitchen knife, the one she’d tried so hard to forget since fleeing Cardiff."
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"The Heartstone pendant burned through Aurora’s gray delivery sweater, a steady thrumming against her sternum that had not let up since she’d navigated the clogg…"
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"Isolde stepped through without hesitation, her gown swishing through the invisible barrier, and Aurora glanced at Nyx, who nodded, their shadowy form solidifyin…"
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"Aurora, who stood five foot six with a half-inch lift from her scuffed delivery boots, tilted her head back to meet their gaze, slung her delivery bag tighter o…"
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"The first thing that hit her was the smell: a heady mix of roasted figs and honeyed mead, overlaid with a sharp, metallic tang like burnt lard and smoking ash."
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"The warm amber breeze tousled her straight shoulder-length black hair, and the ground beneath her boots wasn’t packed earth or grass, but crushed amber-colored …"
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"Nyx’s hand settled lightly on her shoulder, their fingers a wisp of shadow that didn’t leave a mark, but sent a shiver of warmth down her arm."
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"Aurora’s brow furrowed, and she reached up to adjust the Heartstone, which was now thrumming so loud she could feel it through her bones."
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"There were towers of pastries dusted with silver leaf, bowls of fruit that glowed with a faint golden light, roasted peacock with a honeyed glaze, and platters …"
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"She took a step back, her boot catching on a loose piece of amber stone, and she stumbled, catching herself on the edge of the buffet table."
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"She brushed a strand of hair away from her face, staring at the scar for a split second before focusing back on the box."
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"She glanced up at Isolde, who nodded, and a faint glow of green light spilled from her fingertips, melting the silver lock open without a sound."
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"Resting on a bed of dried grapevines was a slender, leaf-shaped dagger, its blade made of a silvery metal that glowed faintly in the amber light, and it was col…"
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"A group of lordlings at the buffet table turned toward them, their eyes glazing over with the same hungry glaze that coated the helbound grape pickers, and the …"
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"He let out a gasp, his eyes bulging, but before Nyx could squeeze any harder, Isolde placed a hand on their arm, her green glow seeping into their shadowy skin."
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"Aurora grabbed the Fae-Forged Blade from her bag, slipping it into the waistband of her jeans, and glanced back at the Veil rift, which shimmered faintly in the…"
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"Aurora glanced back once, at the sprawling feasts and glowing fruit, at the black stone archway that glowed with faint green light, and she tightened her grip o…"