Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTYZP4TKMZP04P3VX0YDC2C

Run Details

Duration:
4m 48s
Cost:
$0.004341
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above The Raven’s Nest door flickered once, then settled into a soft glow, painting the Soho street outside in sickly lime. Inside, the last of the night’s regulars had stumbled out ten minutes prior, their laughter fading into the hum of distant traffic. Silas Blackwood leaned against the bar, his left knee clicking when he shifted his weight, polishing a half-empty tumbler with a frayed linen rag. The walls were lined with old maps and frayed black-and-white photographs—some pinned with rusted thumbtacks, others taped to the scuffed bartop, where rings from forgotten pints had baked into the grain over decades. Rory Carter slouched on a stool at the far end, her delivery bag propped between her feet, the strap digging into her shoulder. She’d finished her final drop of the night ten minutes before, a plate of vegetable dim sum for a couple holed up in a flat above a kebab shop, and had stuck around to grab a pint before trundling up the stairs to her flat above the bar. Her straight black hair fell in a curtain over her bright blue eyes, and she twisted the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist between her fingers, a habit she’d picked up when she was nervous. She’d hidden that scar from almost everyone except Jessa, once, after crashing her dad’s bike and scraping her wrist on a metal fence behind their childhood school. Now she let it glint for a second before tucking her hand under the bar, out of sight. The bell above the door jingled. Silas looked up, his hazel eyes softening when he saw who stood there, then went back to polishing his glass without a word. Rory followed his gaze, and for a second, she thought she was hallucinating. The woman outside carried a leather briefcase, her hair straightened to a sharp, glossy bob that stopped at her jawline. She wore a tailored navy blazer over a cream silk blouse, the fabric crisp enough to crackle when she shifted her weight, and her loafers clicked against the wooden floorboards as she stepped inside. A silver necklace glinted at her throat, and her lips were painted a deep red that matched the lipstick stain on the rim of the first glass she picked up from the bar. She scanned the room, her gaze flicking over the maps and photographs before landing on Rory. Her breath caught, just a fraction, and she set the briefcase on the bar with a solid thud that made the coasters slide an inch. “Just draft ale and whisky tonight,” Silas called, not looking up from his rag. “No fancy spirits.” The woman’s gaze flicked to him, then back to Rory. Her voice was the same warm, rough edge it had always had, the kind that made Rory feel like she could tell her anything. “Rory?” Rory’s throat went dry. She’d heard that voice once, a hundred times, back when they shared a flat in Cardiff, back when they’d stay up until 3 AM eating cold pizza and complaining about pre-law lectures, back when she’d first started seeing Evan. It had been four years, almost to the day, since she’d blocked her number, since she’d packed her bags and fled to London with Eva. She’d thought she’d never hear it again. “Jessa?” The woman smiled, but it was tight, strained, nothing like the wide, toothy grins they’d shared in their flat. She pulled out the stool next to Rory and sat down, adjusting her blazer so it sat smooth over her hips. “I saw the neon sign last week. Followed the bike route, saw you out front with the delivery bags. Didn’t want to say anything until I was sure.” Rory stared at her. “You followed my route?” Jessa nodded, tapping her briefcase with her index finger. “Moved to London six months ago. Works in the city now. Corporate law. Told you I’d end up here, remember?” Rory laughed, but it didn’t reach her eyes. “You said you’d move to a commune in Cornwall and paint murals on abandoned barns. Not wear a blazer to 12-hour meetings.” Jessa’s cheeks flushed, and she ran a hand through her bob, a nervous tick Rory had forgotten she had. “Life happened. Got a job offer, took it. Paid off my student loans. Bought a flat in Camden.” She paused, nodding at the bar. “Silas is still here, then?” “Lives above the shop, too,” Rory said, nodding at the stairs behind the bar. She gestured at the pint glass Silas had set in front of her, then at the one Jessa was now pointing at. “Draft ale. Hits harder than the pre-law lecture energy drinks we used to chug.” Jessa laughed, a real laugh this time, bright and warm, and Rory felt a twist in her chest. It had been so long since she’d heard that sound. Silas brought over their pints, setting one in front of Jessa, his right hand flashing the silver signet ring he never took off. He gave Rory a quick, knowing nod, then limped back behind the bar to restock the taps. Jessa picked up her pint, sniffed it, then took a sip, letting the ale coat her tongue in bitter, warm waves. Her eyes flicked to Rory’s left wrist, where she’d tucked her hand under the bar, and Rory felt her skin prickle. She’d forgotten that Jessa noticed the scar, that she’d been the one to help Rory clean it up after the bike crash, when their teacher had made them stay after school for disrupting class. “I tried to find you,” Jessa said, her voice quiet. “After you left. Called your flat, your mom said you’d moved somewhere and didn’t leave a forwarding address. Said you didn’t want anyone to contact you.” Rory’s jaw tightened. “I didn’t. Not after Evan.” Jessa’s face fell. “I’m so sorry. I should have called the cops that night. Should have fought him off when he came to the flat. I froze. I—” “You didn’t have to,” Rory said, cutting her off. She reached across the bar, grabbing her pint glass, and took a long sip. The ale was sharp, perfect, cutting through the tightness in her chest. “He told me if I ever told anyone, he’d make sure I never saw another person again. I didn’t want you to get hurt.” Jessa nodded, her eyes glistening. “I get it. I get why you left. I just… I wish you’d let me come with you. Eva called me a month after you left, said you were in London. I tried to reach out, but you didn’t answer any of my texts. I didn’t know what else to do.” Rory looked down at her pint, at the foam at the top, swirling with the movement of the bar. She’d not talked about that time with anyone except Eva, not in four years. Silas knew bits and pieces, but he’d never pushed. She’d thought she’d buried that part of her life, buried Evan, buried the way she’d felt small and scared and trapped. But now Jessa was sitting here, looking at her like she was still the girl who’d shared a flat with her, like she still mattered. “You look good,” Jessa said, after a long silence. “Really good. Not like… like when you were with him.” Rory laughed, bitter this time. “I deliver dim sum for a living. Sleep in a flat above a bar. Wear the same faded delivery t-shirt three days a week.” “Your eyes are brighter,” Jessa said, leaning forward a little. “You used to dim them down when he was around. I remember that. You’d wear baggy sweaters, hide your wrists, just so he wouldn’t get mad.” Rory tucked her left wrist under the bar again, then felt a pang of guilt. She should stop hiding it, now that Jessa was here. She pulled her hand out, holding it up to the dim light, and the crescent scar glinted in the neon glow. “Got this when I was 12. Crashed my dad’s bike. You helped me clean it up.” Jessa reached across the bar, her hand slow, gentle, and touched the scar with her index finger. Rory didn’t flinch this time. She didn’t feel the tightness in her chest, didn’t feel like she was back in that flat, with Evan screaming at her. She felt like she was 19 again, sitting on the floor of their flat, eating cold pizza, talking about their future. “I’m glad you’re safe,” Jessa said, her voice soft. “I was so worried about you.” Rory nodded, and for the first time all night, she let herself relax. She leaned back against the stool, her delivery bag slipping off the edge, and she didn’t care. She looked at Jessa, at her blazer, her bob, her red lipstick, and she saw the girl who’d stayed up with her until 3 AM, who’d lent her her favorite sweater when she was cold, who’d laughed at her bad jokes. She saw the girl she’d left behind in Cardiff, the girl who’d thought her future was pre-law and law school and a boring office job. But now she was here, in Soho, working a part-time delivery job, living above a bar run by a retired spy, and she was safe. “Me too,” Rory said, and she meant it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.321
leniency0.643
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1561
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1561
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count2
6
word"disrupting"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"glistening"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"pang"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"glint"
3"silk"
4"scanned"
5"flicked"
6"disrupting"
7"perfect"
8"glistening"
9"silence"
10"pang"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences69
matches
0"was nervous"
1"a pang of guilt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1560
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1198
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Blackwood1
Carter1
Jessa18
Rory24
Cardiff2
Evan3
London1
Eva2
Silas6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Carter"
3"Jessa"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Eva"
7"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.498
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like she was 19 again, sitting on"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1560
matches(empty)
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount5
totalSentences88
matches
0"hidden that scar"
1"heard that voice"
2"heard that sound"
3"forgotten that Jessa"
4"buried that part"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean48.75
std37.91
cv0.778
sampleLengths
0104
1151
26
336
4128
517
634
71
875
91
1068
118
1229
1330
1448
1550
1668
1776
1836
198
2028
2159
2256
2388
2419
2529
2636
2762
2865
2915
30121
318
95.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"were lined"
1"were painted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs213
matches
0"was hallucinating"
1"was sitting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences88
ratio0.011
matches
0"The walls were lined with old maps and frayed black-and-white photographs—some pinned with rusted thumbtacks, others taped to the scuffed bartop, where rings from forgotten pints had baked into the grain over decades."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1204
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same warm, rough edge"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.02574750830564784
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008305647840531562
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean17.73
std10.4
cv0.586
sampleLengths
025
122
224
333
423
548
635
727
818
96
1023
1113
1220
1334
1433
1516
1625
1714
183
1910
2024
211
224
2339
2425
257
261
2719
2821
2928
304
314
329
3320
348
3522
3619
3724
385
3914
4022
4114
4218
4310
4423
4517
4621
4721
4834
4910
43.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2840909090909091
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences69
matches
0"She’d finished her final drop"
1"Her straight black hair fell"
2"She’d hidden that scar from"
3"She wore a tailored navy"
4"She scanned the room, her"
5"Her breath caught, just a"
6"Her voice was the same"
7"She’d heard that voice once,"
8"It had been four years,"
9"She’d thought she’d never hear"
10"She pulled out the stool"
11"She paused, nodding at the"
12"She gestured at the pint"
13"It had been so long"
14"He gave Rory a quick,"
15"Her eyes flicked to Rory’s"
16"She’d forgotten that Jessa noticed"
17"She reached across the bar,"
18"She’d not talked about that"
19"She’d thought she’d buried that"
ratio0.391
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences69
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Silas Blackwood leaned against the"
2"The walls were lined with"
3"Rory Carter slouched on a"
4"She’d finished her final drop"
5"Her straight black hair fell"
6"She’d hidden that scar from"
7"The bell above the door"
8"Silas looked up, his hazel"
9"Rory followed his gaze, and"
10"The woman outside carried a"
11"She wore a tailored navy"
12"A silver necklace glinted at"
13"She scanned the room, her"
14"Her breath caught, just a"
15"Silas called, not looking up"
16"The woman’s gaze flicked to"
17"Her voice was the same"
18"Rory’s throat went dry."
19"She’d heard that voice once,"
ratio0.942
72.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Now she let it glint"
ratio0.014
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Silas Blackwood leaned against the bar, his left knee clicking when he shifted his weight, polishing a half-empty tumbler with a frayed linen rag."
1"The woman outside carried a leather briefcase, her hair straightened to a sharp, glossy bob that stopped at her jawline."
2"She scanned the room, her gaze flicking over the maps and photographs before landing on Rory."
3"Silas brought over their pints, setting one in front of Jessa, his right hand flashing the silver signet ring he never took off."
4"She looked at Jessa, at her blazer, her bob, her red lipstick, and she saw the girl who’d stayed up with her until 3 AM, who’d lent her her favorite sweater whe…"
5"She saw the girl she’d left behind in Cardiff, the girl who’d thought her future was pre-law and law school and a boring office job."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Silas called, not looking up from his rag"
1"Jessa said, her voice quiet"
2"Jessa said, her voice soft"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.4537%