| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 96.20% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1317 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1317 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shattered" | | 1 | "porcelain" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "furrowed" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 5 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 97.18% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "She listened to the sharp bark of Miller’s weapon, a sound that wasn't the metallic crack of a handgun but the wet,撕裂 (tearing) sound of something rending through fabric and skin." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1313 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1313 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.69 | | worstName | "Miller" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "You" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 8 | | Camden | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Miller | 9 | | Harlow | 3 | | Morris | 3 | | Veil | 2 | | Compass | 2 | | Market | 2 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | You | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Miller" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Market" | | 4 | "Police" | | 5 | "You" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 96.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "smoke that seemed to hang motionless in the humid air" | | 1 | "felt like packed soil" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.762 | | wordCount | 1313 | | matches | | 0 | "not like metal, but like a curtain being drawn back" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 61.45% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 41.03 | | std | 14.98 | | cv | 0.365 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 71 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 67 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 59 | | 30 | 61 | | 31 | 16 |
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| 95.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "are meant" | | 1 | "was made" | | 2 | "being drawn" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 231 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 12.99% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist; its sweeping second hand stuttered against the pervasive hum vibrating through the floorboards." | | 1 | "She saw a flicker of movement—a silhouette, taller and thinner than any man—dart behind the support pillar." | | 2 | "She recognized the pattern from the classified folders in her private safe—files Morris had hidden before the raid." | | 3 | "They weren't just vandalism; they were seals." | | 4 | "Beneath her skin, she felt a shift in the temperature—absolute zero biting into her fingertips." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1321 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.02043906131718395 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009084027252081756 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 11.94 | | std | 5.91 | | cv | 0.495 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 38.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.2727272727272727 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 30.58% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "Just street trash clearing its" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 36.51% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots crunched against shattered" | | 1 | "She checked the worn leather" | | 2 | "She fished a penlight from" | | 3 | "It shimmered with an oily," | | 4 | "It walked with the rhythmic," | | 5 | "He kicked a piece of" | | 6 | "She swept her light over" | | 7 | "He shook his head, the" | | 8 | "It felt wrong." | | 9 | "They erased the space between" | | 10 | "She turned to face Miller." | | 11 | "He stared at the ceiling," | | 12 | "He didn't look at the" | | 13 | "He looked only at the" | | 14 | "You’re hearing things that aren't" | | 15 | "She thumbed the catch, and" | | 16 | "It vibrated with a high-pitched," | | 17 | "It responded to the breach." | | 18 | "She tapped the glass." | | 19 | "He stayed fixed on the" |
| | ratio | 0.459 | |
| 15.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 97 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp air of the" | | 1 | "Her boots crunched against shattered" | | 2 | "Rats skittered into the dark," | | 3 | "She checked the worn leather" | | 4 | "A chalk outline marred the" | | 5 | "The trajectory defied geometry." | | 6 | "Physics didn't work in the" | | 7 | "Quinn knelt, tracing the arc" | | 8 | "Each droplet elongated at the" | | 9 | "She fished a penlight from" | | 10 | "It shimmered with an oily," | | 11 | "A shadow detached itself from" | | 12 | "It walked with the rhythmic," | | 13 | "Detective Miller appeared, his brow" | | 14 | "He kicked a piece of" | | 15 | "The kid had it coming," | | 16 | "Quinn stood, the movement sharp" | | 17 | "She swept her light over" | | 18 | "The metal looked scorched, the" | | 19 | "The blood spray pattern suggests" |
| | ratio | 0.89 | |
| 45.87% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "Whoever stood here, they didn't" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 54.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The kid had it coming, probably a scuffle over territory that went sour in the dark." | | 1 | "He stared at the ceiling, exhaling a plume of gray smoke that seemed to hang motionless in the humid air." | | 2 | "The brass casing felt heavy, stained with a patina of verdigris that felt colder than the surrounding air." | | 3 | "His stature, usually rigid, seemed to sag, his shoulders slumped as if he carried an invisible weight." | | 4 | "The gouges in the iron began to shift, the metal weeping a viscous, black fluid that defied gravity, crawling upward toward the ceiling." | | 5 | "The ground beneath her boots groaned, the concrete softening into something that felt like packed soil." | | 6 | "His hand moved toward his waistband, shifting his coat back to reveal a holster that didn't belong to the Metropolitan Police force." | | 7 | "She listened to the sharp bark of Miller’s weapon, a sound that wasn't the metallic crack of a handgun but the wet,撕裂 (tearing) sound of something rending throu…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |