Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZ0GYBDK8DET900VK4JEQV

Run Details

Duration:
9.7s
Cost:
$0.002805
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The damp air of the subterranean platform clung to Quinn’s skin like a burial shroud. Her boots crunched against shattered porcelain and rusted rail spikes. Rats skittered into the dark, their claws clicking against the discarded debris of an era long buried. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist; its sweeping second hand stuttered against the pervasive hum vibrating through the floorboards. Ahead, flickering halogen lamps cast long, jagged shadows against the graffiti-stained tiles. A chalk outline marred the grime of the concrete, but it lay askew from the blood spatter fanning across the wall. The trajectory defied geometry. Physics didn't work in the abandoned Camden Tube station the way it did on the surface. Quinn knelt, tracing the arc of the crimson splatter. Each droplet elongated at the edge, pointing toward a solid support pillar rather than the victim. She fished a penlight from her pocket, the beam cutting through the gloom to reveal a fine, metallic dust coating the floor. It shimmered with an oily, iridescent sheen. A shadow detached itself from the gloom of the tunnel entrance. It walked with the rhythmic, heavy tread of someone used to boots. Detective Miller appeared, his brow furrowed beneath the brim of his hat. He kicked a piece of debris aside, his face etched with impatient indifference. The kid had it coming, probably a scuffle over territory that went sour in the dark. Just street trash clearing its own clutter, no need to overcomplicate the scene for the brass upstairs. Quinn stood, the movement sharp and precise. She swept her light over the pillar, lingering on a series of jagged gouges in the iron plating. The metal looked scorched, the edges melted into strange, swirling patterns that reminded her of smoke trapped in amber. The blood spray pattern suggests a central point of impact, not a struggle. Look at the wall. The velocity required to force shrapnel into the iron implies an explosion, but there's no wreckage, no scent of combusted fuel. Miller leaned against the wall, lighting a cigarette. The flame flared, illuminating his tired eyes. He shook his head, the smoke curling around his shoulders. Cases like this happen in the abandoned tunnels because the tunnels want bodies to hide. Forget the ballistics, Harlow. The coroner's already labeled it a blunt force trauma incident from a fall, a classic tumble down the disused ventilation shaft. Quinn ignored him, her fingers brushing the cold, slick surface of a decorative iron bracket near the ceiling. It felt wrong. A static charge danced across her knuckles, making the fine hairs on her arms stand upright. Beneath her touch, she felt the faint, rhythmic pulse of something buried deep within the concrete masonry. Falls don't melt steel. This wasn't a struggle between two thugs. Whoever stood here, they didn't just kill the victim. They erased the space between him and that pillar. She turned to face Miller. He stared at the ceiling, exhaling a plume of gray smoke that seemed to hang motionless in the humid air. He didn't look at the blood, or the gouges, or the strange, iridescent dust. He looked only at the exit. You’re hearing things that aren't there again, just like you did after Morris vanished in the wreckage of the precinct raid. The department thinks you need time off, maybe a long, quiet stretch away from the streets. Quinn retrieved the Veil Compass from her inner coat pocket. The brass casing felt heavy, stained with a patina of verdigris that felt colder than the surrounding air. She thumbed the catch, and the lid swung open. The needle spun erratically before locking onto the wall behind the victim’s chalk outline. It vibrated with a high-pitched, harmonic hum, the sigils etched into the face glowing with a faint, sickly violet luminescence. The instrument didn't react to magnets, iron, or earth. It responded to the breach. She tapped the glass. The needle didn't budge. Behind the pillar, the air began to warp, distorting the light of her penlight like a heat haze over summer tarmac. A faint scent of ozone and rotting lilies saturated the stagnant air. Look at the walls, Miller. Not at me, at the station. Does that look like natural decay to you? Miller didn't turn. He stayed fixed on the tunnel mouth, his hand resting on his service weapon. His stature, usually rigid, seemed to sag, his shoulders slumped as if he carried an invisible weight. I see a cold station. I see a dead junkie. I see a partner who needs to stop looking for ghosts in the architecture of a dying city. It’s a waste of time, Harlow. Some rifts are meant to stay closed. Quinn stepped closer to the wall. The gouges in the iron began to shift, the metal weeping a viscous, black fluid that defied gravity, crawling upward toward the ceiling. The compass needle spun violently, snapping back and forth between two points with enough force to click audibly against the casing. She saw a flicker of movement—a silhouette, taller and thinner than any man—dart behind the support pillar. She reached for her sidearm, her grip sure and disciplined. She planted her feet, military precision keeping her grounded despite the vertigo pulling at her senses. The air tasted metallic, like pennies held in a sweaty palm. You know why I'm here, don't you? You didn't come to close the case. You came to make sure I didn't find the catalyst. Miller dropped his cigarette, the ember dying instantly against the damp floor. He faced her, his expression devoid of the exhaustion he’d worn earlier. His eyes were flat, mirroring the void in the station's dark reaches. The catalyst serves a purpose you’re too stubborn to accept. You spent three years hunting for Morris, but you never stopped to ask what he saw before the light swallowed him. Quinn shifted her weight, the leather of her holster creaking in the silence. She didn't let him distract her. Her gaze shifted from Miller to the space where the gouges now pulsed with an internal, rhythmic glow. She recognized the pattern from the classified folders in her private safe—files Morris had hidden before the raid. They weren't just vandalism; they were seals. The victim was a runner. He carried something meant for the Veil Market. You aren't here to keep the peace. You’re here to intercept the cargo before it hits the brokers. She stepped into the center of the warped space. The ground beneath her boots groaned, the concrete softening into something that felt like packed soil. A low, guttural vibration rattled her teeth. The compass needle swung wildly, eventually settling on Miller’s chest. He smiled, a humorless expression that didn't reach his eyes. His hand moved toward his waistband, shifting his coat back to reveal a holster that didn't belong to the Metropolitan Police force. It was made of something dark, matte, and organic. The Market doesn't care about justice, Harlow. It only cares about the exchange. And you have become a very expensive commodity. Quinn didn't wait for his next move. She surged forward, shoulder-checking the heavy support pillar and using the momentum to pivot behind the cover of the concrete beam. She listened to the sharp bark of Miller’s weapon, a sound that wasn't the metallic crack of a handgun but the wet,撕裂 (tearing) sound of something rending through fabric and skin. A bullet thudded into the pillar where her chest had been a second before. She didn't blink. She reached out, her fingers finding the cold, jagged gouges in the iron. Beneath her skin, she felt a shift in the temperature—absolute zero biting into her fingertips. The Compass in her left hand reached a fever pitch of sound, the sigils burning white-hot. She pulled. The iron gave way, not like metal, but like a curtain being drawn back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1317
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1317
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"porcelain"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count2
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count3
6
word"furrowed"
count1
7
word"etched"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"porcelain"
2"tracing"
3"gloom"
4"shimmered"
5"rhythmic"
6"furrowed"
7"etched"
8"pulse"
9"vibrated"
10"weight"
11"flicker"
12"silence"
13"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
25.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
2"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
97.18% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0.009
matches
0"She listened to the sharp bark of Miller’s weapon, a sound that wasn't the metallic crack of a handgun but the wet,撕裂 (tearing) sound of something rending through fabric and skin."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1313
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1313
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Miller"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Quinn8
Camden1
Tube1
Miller9
Harlow3
Morris3
Veil2
Compass2
Market2
Metropolitan1
Police1
You7
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Miller"
2"Morris"
3"Market"
4"Police"
5"You"
places
0"Metropolitan"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smoke that seemed to hang motionless in the humid air"
1"felt like packed soil"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.762
wordCount1313
matches
0"not like metal, but like a curtain being drawn back"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"Does that look"
61.45% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean41.03
std14.98
cv0.365
sampleLengths
065
153
254
348
433
544
638
725
840
954
1029
1145
1237
1371
1414
1541
1619
1734
1841
1967
2037
2124
2236
2331
2462
2531
2642
2741
2821
2959
3061
3116
95.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences110
matches
0"are meant"
1"was made"
2"being drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs231
matches(empty)
12.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences110
ratio0.045
matches
0"She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist; its sweeping second hand stuttered against the pervasive hum vibrating through the floorboards."
1"She saw a flicker of movement—a silhouette, taller and thinner than any man—dart behind the support pillar."
2"She recognized the pattern from the classified folders in her private safe—files Morris had hidden before the raid."
3"They weren't just vandalism; they were seals."
4"Beneath her skin, she felt a shift in the temperature—absolute zero biting into her fingertips."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1321
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02043906131718395
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.009084027252081756
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean11.94
std5.91
cv0.495
sampleLengths
015
110
217
323
412
521
64
716
89
916
1022
117
1211
1312
1412
1513
1616
1717
187
1918
2019
2113
224
2321
248
257
2610
2715
284
2921
3018
313
3216
3317
344
357
369
379
385
3920
4014
416
4221
4316
4410
4518
469
4714
4820
499
38.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2727272727272727
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners30
30.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"Just street trash clearing its"
ratio0.009
36.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences109
matches
0"Her boots crunched against shattered"
1"She checked the worn leather"
2"She fished a penlight from"
3"It shimmered with an oily,"
4"It walked with the rhythmic,"
5"He kicked a piece of"
6"She swept her light over"
7"He shook his head, the"
8"It felt wrong."
9"They erased the space between"
10"She turned to face Miller."
11"He stared at the ceiling,"
12"He didn't look at the"
13"He looked only at the"
14"You’re hearing things that aren't"
15"She thumbed the catch, and"
16"It vibrated with a high-pitched,"
17"It responded to the breach."
18"She tapped the glass."
19"He stayed fixed on the"
ratio0.459
15.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences109
matches
0"The damp air of the"
1"Her boots crunched against shattered"
2"Rats skittered into the dark,"
3"She checked the worn leather"
4"A chalk outline marred the"
5"The trajectory defied geometry."
6"Physics didn't work in the"
7"Quinn knelt, tracing the arc"
8"Each droplet elongated at the"
9"She fished a penlight from"
10"It shimmered with an oily,"
11"A shadow detached itself from"
12"It walked with the rhythmic,"
13"Detective Miller appeared, his brow"
14"He kicked a piece of"
15"The kid had it coming,"
16"Quinn stood, the movement sharp"
17"She swept her light over"
18"The metal looked scorched, the"
19"The blood spray pattern suggests"
ratio0.89
45.87% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"Whoever stood here, they didn't"
ratio0.009
54.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The kid had it coming, probably a scuffle over territory that went sour in the dark."
1"He stared at the ceiling, exhaling a plume of gray smoke that seemed to hang motionless in the humid air."
2"The brass casing felt heavy, stained with a patina of verdigris that felt colder than the surrounding air."
3"His stature, usually rigid, seemed to sag, his shoulders slumped as if he carried an invisible weight."
4"The gouges in the iron began to shift, the metal weeping a viscous, black fluid that defied gravity, crawling upward toward the ceiling."
5"The ground beneath her boots groaned, the concrete softening into something that felt like packed soil."
6"His hand moved toward his waistband, shifting his coat back to reveal a holster that didn't belong to the Metropolitan Police force."
7"She listened to the sharp bark of Miller’s weapon, a sound that wasn't the metallic crack of a handgun but the wet,撕裂 (tearing) sound of something rending throu…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.7324%