Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZ1YTJ9095GARSZFYZ6HVG

Run Details

Duration:
6m 13s
Cost:
$0.005277
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The key turns three times in the lock. Rory shoves the last deadbolt back with her hip, shouldering the door inward. She dumps her frayed Golden Empress delivery bag by the scuffed shoe rack, the spicy tang of chicken tikka masala clinging to the straps. Her shoulder-length black hair sticks to the back of her neck, pulled loose from a messy bun she’d tossed together halfway through her third round of bike deliveries. She yanks the stained red apron over her head, tossing it onto the stack of coats and scuffed leather boots by the door, and reaches for the overhead light switch by the frame. Freezes. The room glows with pale gold streetlight seeping through the grimy front window. He stands right in the clutter that makes Eva’s flat feel like home: stacks of weathered books teeter on the coffee table, scrolls tied with twine line the shelf above the tiny fireplace. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, lifts his head from his perch on the well-worn sofa, blinks, then goes back to grooming his paw. Lucien Moreau leans against the windowsill, ivory cane propped against the frame. His tailored charcoal suit, fabric pressed so smooth it catches the streetlight, fits like a glove. Platinum blond hair is slicked back tight against his skull. One eye burns amber, the color of burnt honey; the other is deep, unyielding black. They fix on her. The black one flickers to the crescent-shaped scar wrapping around her left wrist, skin pink and raw from the broken bottle she’d tripped over that afternoon. His right hand rests lightly on the ivory handle, the way he always does when he’s not trying to pretend he’s entirely in control. She’d spent three months trying to forget him. Scrub the scent of sandalwood and cedar from her clothes. Erase the sound of his low laugh at her terrible jokes. Let go of the way he’d held her after she’d mustered the courage to tell him about Evan. Then he’d vanished, left a half-paid invoice on her kitchen counter and no note, no explanation. Lucien. “Rory.” The word hangs in the air, thick with the smell of old paper and the burnt remains of Eva’s forgotten chamomile tea, left to cool on the counter. No extra flair, no practiced smoothness. Just his voice, low and tight. She slams the door shut, flipping the three deadbolts back into place with shaking hands. Her grip slips on the final bolt, and she has to curse under her breath to steady herself. “What are you doing here?” The words are sharp, edged with the anger she’s carried for three months. He pushes off the windowsill, cane tapping once against the warped floorboards. The movement sends a clatter of books off the coffee table. Ptolemy darted under the sofa to avoid the mess. Lucien doesn’t even glance at the spilt stack. His eyes never leave her face. “I came to talk.” “Talk?” A laugh cuts through the hum of the curry house below, sharp and unforgiving. “You left without a word. Three months ago. Now you show up at Eva’s door?” He reaches into his suit jacket pocket, pulls out a small folded sheet of cream paper, and tosses it onto the coffee table. It lands next to a stack of scrolls, Cardiff University logo stamped in the corner. Her old pre-law paperwork, the stack she’d dumped on Silas’ bar counter the night she’d run from Evan. “I picked that up the other day. Stopped by the bar to check in.” She’d forgotten all about that folder. The day she’d packed her bags and fled, she’d left it behind, too overwhelmed to carry it. “You stalk me?” “Not stalk. Watch.” He shifts closer, and she can smell his cologne again—sandalwood, cedar, the same scent that wrapped around her that night, when he’d sat on the fire escape of her flat above Silas’ bar and listened to her talk about her father, about growing up in Cardiff, about how she’d never wanted to be a barrister, never wanted the life her parents had mapped out for her. “I’ve watched you for a month. Saw you confront Evan outside the tube station. Saw you get that scar.” His eyes flick back to her wrist. He takes a step closer, reaches out, hesitates, then brushes the edge of the scar with his fingertips. She sucks in a sharp breath, the touch sending a shiver down her spine. “I was two seconds away from pulling my cane blade and taking him down. You didn’t ask for help. You didn’t need me to. You handled it.” She pulls away, stepping back until her shoulder hits the doorframe. Her hands curl into loose fists. “You didn’t handle it. You left me to handle it alone.” His jaw tightens, and he runs a hand through his slicked-back hair, a rare break from his perfect composure. “I know. I didn’t have a choice. Not then. My father—he’s a demon from Avaros, the realm my kind comes from. He summoned me back to Marseille three months ago. A rival clan threatened his business. I was stuck there for ten weeks. The wards on the realm block all magical communication. Tried to send you a message once, through a local coven in London. Came back charred to ash. Couldn’t reach you. Couldn’t even let you know I was alive.” The anger in her chest softens. She’d always known Lucien was half-demon, but she’d never heard him sound so vulnerable. Never seen the cracks in his perfectly polished mask. “Why are you here now?” He pulls something else from his suit pocket, holding it out. A small jade pendant, carved into the shape of a raven, stone warm from being held in his hand for hours. She’d mentioned this pendant once, months ago, when she’d stumbled through a curio shop on Brick Lane and sighed that you could never have too many anti-evil trinkets. Forgotten she’d even told him that. “I was supposed to deliver this to you the night I left.” He sets the pendant in her palm. Her fingers curl around it, smooth stone fitting perfectly against her skin. “Went to your flat above Silas’ bar the next morning. You were gone. Moved in with Eva. Tracked the forwarding address from your old mail here. Couldn’t come sooner. The wards in Avaros didn’t lift until last week.” She looks up at him. See the faint stubble along his jaw, dark and unkempt, something he never has when he’s working as a fixer. When he’s always polished, always in control. He’s been hurting too. “I’m sorry I left without saying anything.” He steps closer, their chests inches apart. His hand brushes a strand of loose hair from her face, his fingertips light as a feather. “Sorry I didn’t trust you enough to tell you what was happening. Sorry I made you feel alone.” She’d carried that hurt for three months. Anger, betrayal, the hollow feeling of being abandoned by the only person who’d seemed to care. Now, holding the jade pendant, looking into his heterochromatic eyes, it all melts away. Remembers the night they spent together, how he’d stayed up with her until dawn, stitching up her wrist after Evan had grabbed her. How he’d laughed when he spilled wine on Eva’s rug, even though she’d yelled at him for ruining her favorite throw. How he’d told her she was smarter than she gave herself credit for. “I missed you.” The words slip out before she can stop herself. Her cheeks heat up, the first time she’s admitted that out loud, even to herself. Lucien’s face relaxes. A small, genuine smile tugs at the corner of his mouth, something she hasn’t seen before. “I missed you too. More than I thought possible.” He leans in. This time, she doesn’t pull away. His lips press against hers, soft and gentle. She can taste mint, faint sweetness from the glass of wine he’s been drinking. His arm wraps around her waist, pulling her closer. She can feel the steady beat of his heart under his suit jacket. Ptolemy meows from under the sofa. Loud, indignant. They pull apart, laughing softly. Rory’s hand rests on his chest, fingers brushing the fabric of his shirt. Lucien’s thumb traces the edge of the jade pendant in her other hand, slow and deliberate.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1396
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"perfectly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1396
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"down her spine"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"down her spine"
1"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen82
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1394
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1074
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Eva4
Moreau1
Evan2
Cardiff1
University1
Lucien6
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1394
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"sighed that you"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean51.63
std29.88
cv0.579
sampleLengths
0106
11
268
3107
463
51
641
738
863
930
1070
1126
1288
1366
1428
15100
1634
1766
1869
1936
2049
2194
2227
2328
2453
258
2634
88.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences82
matches
0"is slicked"
1"carried"
2"being held"
3"being abandoned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs169
matches(empty)
82.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences95
ratio0.021
matches
0"One eye burns amber, the color of burnt honey; the other is deep, unyielding black."
1"“Not stalk. Watch.” He shifts closer, and she can smell his cologne again—sandalwood, cedar, the same scent that wrapped around her that night, when he’d sat on the fire escape of her flat above Silas’ bar and listened to her talk about her father, about growing up in Cardiff, about how she’d never wanted to be a barrister, never wanted the life her parents had mapped out for her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount997
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02708124373119358
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004012036108324975
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean14.67
std11.69
cv0.797
sampleLengths
08
113
224
328
433
51
613
733
822
912
1016
1110
1215
134
1426
1524
168
1710
1811
1918
2016
211
2229
236
246
2515
2618
275
2813
2912
3011
319
328
336
344
3515
3615
3723
3815
3918
4014
416
4217
433
4469
4519
467
4718
4814
4927
65.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners38
84.39% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Then he’d vanished, left a"
1"Just his voice, low and"
ratio0.025
17.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences79
matches
0"She dumps her frayed Golden"
1"Her shoulder-length black hair sticks"
2"She yanks the stained red"
3"He stands right in the"
4"His tailored charcoal suit, fabric"
5"They fix on her."
6"His right hand rests lightly"
7"She’d spent three months trying"
8"She slams the door shut,"
9"Her grip slips on the"
10"He pushes off the windowsill,"
11"His eyes never leave her"
12"He reaches into his suit"
13"It lands next to a"
14"Her old pre-law paperwork, the"
15"She’d forgotten all about that"
16"He shifts closer, and she"
17"His eyes flick back to"
18"He takes a step closer,"
19"She sucks in a sharp"
ratio0.506
54.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences79
matches
0"The key turns three times"
1"Rory shoves the last deadbolt"
2"She dumps her frayed Golden"
3"Her shoulder-length black hair sticks"
4"She yanks the stained red"
5"The room glows with pale"
6"He stands right in the"
7"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, lifts"
8"Lucien Moreau leans against the"
9"His tailored charcoal suit, fabric"
10"Platinum blond hair is slicked"
11"They fix on her."
12"The black one flickers to"
13"His right hand rests lightly"
14"She’d spent three months trying"
15"Scrub the scent of sandalwood"
16"The word hangs in the"
17"She slams the door shut,"
18"Her grip slips on the"
19"The words are sharp, edged"
ratio0.81
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"When he’s always polished, always"
1"Now, holding the jade pendant,"
ratio0.025
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He stands right in the clutter that makes Eva’s flat feel like home: stacks of weathered books teeter on the coffee table, scrolls tied with twine line the shel…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He steps, their chests inches apart"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.8448%