Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZ3XJF8ETP13JDDXXBBPRV

Run Details

Duration:
8.4s
Cost:
$0.003573
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a metallic screech that set my teeth on edge. I kept my hand on the inner frame, the cold steel biting into my palm, bracing for the weight of the reinforced door. I hadn't been expecting company, not with the stacks of research notes on the floor forming a labyrinthine obstacle course, and certainly not tonight. But when the wood groaned open, the person standing in the hallway wasn't a landlord or a stray courier. Lucien stood there, his sharp silhouette cutting through the dim yellow light of the landing. He looked as though he had just stepped off a train from a different century, his charcoal suit tailored to fit with intimidating, precise intent. "The locks have become more ornate since my last foray," he said. "They're for keeping people who show up unannounced on the other side of the threshold." "A sentiment noted and discarded. May I?" Without waiting for an invite, he stepped past me. The scent of him—expensive tobacco, rain, and something sharper, like ozonated air—flooded the small room, instantly displacing the musty smell of ancient scrolls and dried ink. He carried the ivory-handled cane with the casual grace of a man who knew exactly where the hidden blade rested, his heterochromatic gaze scanning the chaotic mess of my life with a detachment that made my pulse jump. Ptolemy, my tabby cat, hissed from the safety of a precarious stack of books. Lucien paused, his black eye tracking the feline with a flick of his chin. "Charming as ever, Aurora." "Don't call me that." "I recall it being a favoured name when the circumstances were less... strained." He moved further into the living area, his polished shoes avoiding the scattered research notes with impossible, rhythmic accuracy. He stopped by the small kitchenette, turning just enough to let the light catch the sharp, predatory angle of his jaw. He didn't look at me directly. He looked at the window, then at the half-drunk glass of wine sitting precariously on a pile of textbooks. "You look tired." "I’m working. Something you wouldn't understand, seeing as you spend your professional life pulling strings from the shadows." "I am currently pulling a string that involves you directly." I crossed my arms. The crescent-shaped scar on my wrist throbbed beneath the fabric of my sleeve, a phantom reminder of the last time I let a situation spiral out of my control. "I'm not on duty for you, Lucien. Not tonight. Not ever again, if I have any say in the matter." "You never do have a say, Carter. That’s the tragedy of your position." He took a step closer. The air between us became thick, almost electric. I held my ground, though every instinct whispered for me to circle the desk and put a barrier between us. He stopped just outside my personal space, tall and imposing. His platinum hair was slicked back, not a single strand daring to defy him. "Why are you here?" "A courier package was intercepted on the outskirts of Shoreditch. It contained items that were not meant to be within a hundred miles of this city. Specifically, artefacts marked with the crest of a house that hasn't existed for three centuries." "And that’s my problem because?" "Because the last time I saw those sigils, they were etched into your father’s desk." The air left my lungs in a sharp, sudden rush. I turned, stalking toward the window to hide the flicker of recognition that must have crossed my face. I gripped the frame, my knuckles bleaching white. "My father is a barrister in Cardiff. He deals in tort law, not century-old relics." "Are you certain? The man you call father has been keeping a very expensive, very dangerous secret in his floorboards." "Liar." "Check the post, then." He reached into his breast pocket and produced a sealed, heavy envelope. He didn't hand it to me; he placed it on the closest stack of books, right next to Ptolemy. The wax seal was a deep, bruised purple, stamped with an emblem I recognised from a nightmare I hadn't had in years. "He’s in trouble, isn't he?" "He is in the middle of a transaction he cannot possibly win. And if he fails, the debris will fall on you. I find myself disliking the idea of you being collateral damage." "Since when do you care about collateral?" "I have developed a taste for long-term investments. You are, quite frankly, my most troublesome asset." "I'm not an asset." "Aren't you?" He stepped into the space I had just vacated, his presence overwhelming. He tilted his head, his amber eye searching mine. It was a dissection, cold and clinical. I wanted to look away, but the gravity of him, the way his fingers tapped a restless, rhythmic beat against the silver handle of his cane, held me captive. "You’ve been playing at being a normal girl for too long, Rory. That delivery uniform, the flat above a dive bar, the mundane little life you’ve curated. It’s a costume, and the fabric is starting to fray." "It’s not a costume. It’s a choice." "A choice made out of fear." He leaned down, his voice dropping to a low, rough murmur. "The moment you left Cardiff, you didn't become a new person. You just became a target who stopped carrying a weapon. But I know you. I know the way you think, the way you calculate angles when you’re cornered. You’re not hiding from the world. You’re waiting for an excuse to burn it down." "If you're here to recruit me for another one of your political games, you're wasting both our time." "I am here to offer you a way to keep your father alive. Or, you can ignore the envelope, pretend I never walked through that door, and wait for the repercussions to find you in the middle of the night." He stood back, adjusting his charcoal cuffs. The air seemed to thin, the temperature in the room dropping as he prepared to leave. He took a single step toward the door, then paused, his reflection captured in the glass of the window, merging with my own. "The envelope contains a train ticket and a set of keys. I suggest you decide to use them before sunrise. The people currently tracking your father don't have my penchant for delayed gratification." "And if I destroy the envelope?" "Then I suppose I shall have to see you on the battlefield instead of beside me." "I’m not fighting for you." "We shall see." He reached for the handle of the door, his movements fluid and precise. Before he turned the deadbolt, he looked back over his shoulder, his heterochromatic eyes burning with that familiar, maddening intensity. "By the way, Aurora. Keep your windows locked. Someone is already watching the street." He pulled the door open, the sound of the hallway outside rushing in like a tidal wave of noise—the distant grind of traffic, the muffled shouts from the curry house below. He stepped out into the night, the heavy door clicking shut behind him with an air of finality that made the quiet, crowded room feel suddenly, violently suffocating. I stared at the sealed purple envelope. My hands trembled. I reached out, my fingers brushing the cold, wax seal. Then, the sound of glass shattering downstairs ripped through the building. The front door of the flat shuddered under a heavy, deliberate kick.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.027
leniency0.054
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1248
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1248
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count2
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"imposing"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"calculate"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"intensity"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"scanning"
2"chaotic"
3"pulse"
4"rhythmic"
5"throbbed"
6"reminder"
7"electric"
8"imposing"
9"etched"
10"flicker"
11"calculate"
12"familiar"
13"intensity"
14"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences46
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1245
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions2
wordCount717
uniqueNames1
maxNameDensity0.28
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
persons(empty)
places
0"Ptolemy"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1245
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean24.41
std22.69
cv0.929
sampleLengths
062
159
212
315
47
573
628
74
84
913
1065
113
1218
1310
1433
1520
1613
1757
184
1941
205
2115
2236
2315
2420
251
264
2753
285
2933
307
3116
324
332
3457
3537
367
376
3811
3954
4018
4140
4246
4333
446
4516
465
473
4833
4914
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs108
matches(empty)
38.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences82
ratio0.037
matches
0"The scent of him—expensive tobacco, rain, and something sharper, like ozonated air—flooded the small room, instantly displacing the musty smell of ancient scrolls and dried ink."
1"He didn't hand it to me; he placed it on the closest stack of books, right next to Ptolemy."
2"He pulled the door open, the sound of the hallway outside rushing in like a tidal wave of noise—the distant grind of traffic, the muffled shouts from the curry house below."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount723
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.027662517289073305
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009681881051175657
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean15.18
std10.42
cv0.687
sampleLengths
015
123
224
319
415
525
612
715
87
99
1026
1138
1214
1314
144
154
1613
1719
1821
196
2019
213
2218
2310
244
2529
2620
2713
285
298
3020
3110
3214
334
3441
355
3615
3710
3818
398
4015
4120
421
434
4412
4519
4622
475
4833
497
42.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.34146341463414637
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners28
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"Then, the sound of glass"
ratio0.022
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences45
matches
0"I kept my hand on"
1"I hadn't been expecting company,"
2"He looked as though he"
3"He carried the ivory-handled cane"
4"He moved further into the"
5"He stopped by the small"
6"He didn't look at me"
7"He looked at the window,"
8"I crossed my arms."
9"He took a step closer."
10"I held my ground, though"
11"He stopped just outside my"
12"His platinum hair was slicked"
13"I turned, stalking toward the"
14"I gripped the frame, my"
15"He reached into his breast"
16"He didn't hand it to"
17"He stepped into the space"
18"He tilted his head, his"
19"It was a dissection, cold"
ratio0.667
4.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences45
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"I kept my hand on"
2"I hadn't been expecting company,"
3"Lucien stood there, his sharp"
4"He looked as though he"
5"The scent of him—expensive tobacco,"
6"He carried the ivory-handled cane"
7"Ptolemy, my tabby cat, hissed"
8"Lucien paused, his black eye"
9"He moved further into the"
10"He stopped by the small"
11"He didn't look at me"
12"He looked at the window,"
13"I crossed my arms."
14"The crescent-shaped scar on my"
15"He took a step closer."
16"The air between us became"
17"I held my ground, though"
18"He stopped just outside my"
19"His platinum hair was slicked"
ratio0.911
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"Before he turned the deadbolt,"
ratio0.022
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He looked as though he had just stepped off a train from a different century, his charcoal suit tailored to fit with intimidating, precise intent."
1"He carried the ivory-handled cane with the casual grace of a man who knew exactly where the hidden blade rested, his heterochromatic gaze scanning the chaotic m…"
2"He stepped out into the night, the heavy door clicking shut behind him with an air of finality that made the quiet, crowded room feel suddenly, violently suffoc…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.027
leniency0.054
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.7071%