Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZ4AV3CGNCWVHVH5V89H68

Run Details

Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.002781
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green sign buzzed, a dying insect trapped in a glass cage above the door of The Raven’s Nest. Rory stepped inside, the humid London air clinging to her skin beneath the sleeves of her delivery jacket. She smelled of stale takeaway boxes and damp pavement. Behind the mahogany bar, Silas wiped a smudge from a glass with a cloth worn thin at the edges. He nodded once, a brief acknowledgment of her presence, before his hazel eyes flicked toward the shadow-drenched corner booth. A woman sat there, nursing a neat bourbon. She wore a tailored wool coat that cost more than Rory’s annual rent, her hair chopped into a sharp, architectural bob that screamed of high-end salons in Mayfair. She checked her watch, the movement precise, devoid of the frantic energy Rory remembered. "Another shift, another stack of receipts." Silas set the glass down, his left knee locking with a dry click as he shifted his weight. He gestured toward the booth with the cloth. "Someone’s been waiting. Did not give a name, but she knows the back room code." Rory’s stomach tightened. She walked toward the booth, her boots silent on the sawdust-strewn floor. As she drew closer, the woman looked up. The sharp, feline tilt of her eyes stirred a memory that had been buried under years of Cardiff rain and legal textbooks. It was Eva. But not the Eva who used to hide in the back of the campus library to split a stolen sandwich. This woman looked like a polished blade, cold and tempered. The soft curve of her jaw had hardened, and the vibrant, chaotic spirit that once fueled their late-night escapes had been replaced by a vacant, terrifying stillness. "You look like you’ve walked through fire, Rory." Rory slid into the opposite side of the booth, the leather creaking under her weight. She traced the faint crescent scar on her wrist, a nervous tick she had never managed to break. "London’s a furnace, you know that. What are you doing in the Nest, Eva? This isn't exactly the kind of place for someone with your... wardrobe." Eva traced the rim of her glass. A small, humorless smile played across her lips. A diamond stud caught the low amber light of the lantern above them. "People change. Needs evolve. I got tired of surviving on scraps and promises. You, however, look exactly as I imagined. Still running. Still hiding in the pockets of men like Silas." "I work for a living, Eva. I deliver food. I pay my rent. I don't need to apologize for keeping my head down." "It’s not just your head that’s down, Ror. It’s your life. Look at this place. Maps of cities that don’t exist anymore, photos of people who are likely dead or in prison. You’re playing house in a museum of ghosts." Rory leaned back, eyes scanning the bar. Silas was watching them, his hand resting idly on the counter near the hidden mechanism that triggered the bookshelf gate. The silence between them felt heavy, pressed thin by the weight of the years they had spent living in different worlds. "I left Cardiff because of Evan. You told me to. You were the one who held the door open while I ran. Don't act like this life is a tragedy just because it isn't yours." "I held the door open because I was terrified you’d end up as a shallow grave in the Brecon Beacons. I saved you, didn't I? Look where that landed me. A life of precision. A life of knowing exactly how much a person’s silence is worth." Eva pulled a thick envelope from her coat and slid it across the table. It sat between them, a dead weight on the sticky wooden surface. Rory didn't touch it. "I don't want your money, Eva. If that’s what this is, you can take it back to whatever ivory tower you crawled out of." "It isn't money. It’s an invitation. Or a warning, depending on how you read the maps on these walls." "Why now? After five years of silence, you show up here? I almost forgot what you sounded like when you weren't screaming at me to keep moving." Eva’s hand shot across the table, pinning Rory’s wrist to the wood. Her grip was iron, professional. Years ago, that hand had trembled when the local thugs circled their dorm windows. Now, she was as steady as a heartbeat monitor. "I didn't come to reminisce. The past is a liability, Ror. Look at your records, your job, this bar. Everything is linked back to that apartment in Cardiff. You think he stopped looking? Evan doesn't let go of property." Rory pulled her hand away, the scar on her wrist throbbing against the table. "He’s in prison. He’s been in there for three years." "Three years is a long time for a man with his resources. He’s out. He’s currently tracking every connection you’ve built, every path you’ve walked. Silas knows, doesn't he? He’s been letting you live in this fantasy, keeping you under his thumb as an asset." Rory glanced at Silas. He was currently polishing a shot glass, but his gaze was sharp, alert, fixed on the tension vibrating between the two women. "You're trying to scare me into running again." "I'm trying to keep you from becoming a headline. When you walk out of here tonight, don't go to the flat. Walk toward the tube, take the Northern line, and get off at Belsize Park. Someone will meet you. They have the resources to scrub your existence clean. Truly clean this time." "And you? Do you get a bounty for delivery? Is that the new career path?" Eva stood up, straightening her coat. She looked down at Rory, her blue eyes reflecting the flickering, dying light of the bar sign. There was no pity there, only a cold, mechanical recognition of a job that needed completing. "I’m an insurance policy, Ror. I couldn't let you die on the street after I worked so hard to get you off it." "I never asked for your help back then, and I don't want it now." "You never did know when you were drowning. That was always your fatal flaw. You try to breathe water and call it swimming." Eva turned to leave, her footsteps muffled by the carpet. She stopped at the door, the green light casting a sickly glow over her silhouette. "If that envelope is still on the table when the sun hits the glass, you’ve made your choice. You’ll be just another ghost in Silas’s collection." She stepped out into the Soho fog, the door clicking shut with a finality that seemed to rattle the old photographs on the walls. Rory looked at the envelope. It was sealed with heavy, cream-colored wax. Silas moved from behind the bar, his limp noticeable as he paced the distance between them. He stopped at the edge of the booth, his silver ring glinting under the dim lights. "She’s changed, hasn't she?" Rory met his gaze. The warmth she usually felt in the Nest had evaporated, leaving only the chill of the damp London night seeping through the floorboards. "She’s a stranger, Silas. Someone wearing my friend’s face." "Sometimes the mask starts to fit the wearer. That is the nature of the work we keep here." He gestured to the envelope with his chin, his expression unreadable behind his neatly trimmed beard. "Are you going to open it, or are you going to let the night bury the decision for you?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"weight"
count4
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"traced"
count2
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"grave"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"mechanical"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"glinting"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"chill"
count1
15
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"weight"
2"stomach"
3"chaotic"
4"traced"
5"scanning"
6"silence"
7"grave"
8"trembled"
9"tension"
10"mechanical"
11"footsteps"
12"glinting"
13"warmth"
14"chill"
15"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
55.39% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences49
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1265
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.52% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount660
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
London2
Silas5
Rory13
Mayfair1
Cardiff1
Eva7
Soho1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Mayfair"
2"Cardiff"
3"Soho"
globalScore0.515
windowScore0.667
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a polished blade, cold and te"
1"finality that seemed to rattle the old photographs on the walls"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1265
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean30.12
std20.17
cv0.67
sampleLengths
085
150
26
326
415
5105
68
733
826
928
1031
1123
1240
1348
1435
1546
1630
1724
1819
1927
2040
2139
2214
2310
2445
2526
268
2752
2815
2939
3023
3114
3223
3325
3426
3568
364
3727
389
3918
4016
4119
83.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences49
matches
0"been buried"
1"been replaced"
2"was sealed"
65.32% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs99
matches
0"was watching"
1"was currently polishing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences75
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount665
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, cream-colored wax."
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.01804511278195489
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010526315789473684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean16.87
std10.39
cv0.616
sampleLengths
020
118
29
319
419
58
628
714
86
918
108
1115
123
1312
148
1522
163
1720
1810
1927
208
2115
2218
2326
247
258
2613
2731
2823
2940
307
3120
3221
3335
3446
3514
3612
374
3824
3919
4027
4112
425
4314
449
4539
4614
4710
4845
494
56.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.37333333333333335
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences49
matches
0"She smelled of stale takeaway"
1"He nodded once, a brief"
2"She wore a tailored wool"
3"She checked her watch, the"
4"He gestured toward the booth"
5"She walked toward the booth,"
6"It was Eva."
7"She traced the faint crescent"
8"It sat between them, a"
9"Her grip was iron, professional."
10"He was currently polishing a"
11"She looked down at Rory,"
12"She stopped at the door,"
13"She stepped out into the"
14"It was sealed with heavy,"
15"He stopped at the edge"
16"He gestured to the envelope"
ratio0.347
11.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences49
matches
0"The neon green sign buzzed,"
1"Rory stepped inside, the humid"
2"She smelled of stale takeaway"
3"He nodded once, a brief"
4"A woman sat there, nursing"
5"She wore a tailored wool"
6"She checked her watch, the"
7"Silas set the glass down,"
8"He gestured toward the booth"
9"Rory’s stomach tightened."
10"She walked toward the booth,"
11"The sharp, feline tilt of"
12"It was Eva."
13"This woman looked like a"
14"The soft curve of her"
15"Rory slid into the opposite"
16"She traced the faint crescent"
17"Eva traced the rim of"
18"A small, humorless smile played"
19"A diamond stud caught the"
ratio0.898
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"Now, she was as steady"
ratio0.02
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She wore a tailored wool coat that cost more than Rory’s annual rent, her hair chopped into a sharp, architectural bob that screamed of high-end salons in Mayfa…"
1"The sharp, feline tilt of her eyes stirred a memory that had been buried under years of Cardiff rain and legal textbooks."
2"Silas was watching them, his hand resting idly on the counter near the hidden mechanism that triggered the bookshelf gate."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.5026%