| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 88.73% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1331 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1331 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "vibrated" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "calculating" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "beacon" | | 12 | "aftermath" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1327 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Keep your eyes to the ground, Nyx whispered, their voice a dry rustle of dead leaves against stone." | | 1 | "To close a door, one must be willing to exist on the side that remains behind, Nyx murmured." | | 2 | "The riddles are for those who have the luxury of time, she said, her expression softening into something uncharacteristi…" | | 3 | "Do it, Nyx whispered, their voice sharpening to the edge of a blade." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 1327 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 6 | | London | 3 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 5 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 8 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Wardens | 2 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Isolde | 4 | | You | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Wardens" | | 5 | "Carter" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Heartstone" | | 6 | "Cardiff" | | 7 | "Gluttony" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 89.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like ten minutes, yet the sun hung" | | 1 | "felt like a person who had wandered beh" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.261 | | wordCount | 1327 | | matches | | 0 | "not with malice, but with a terrifying, detached curiosity" | | 1 | "not an impact, but a scream" | | 2 | "not with water, but with a shockwave of force" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 78.01% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 53.08 | | std | 22.46 | | cv | 0.423 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 90 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 77 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 80 | | 12 | 87 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 64 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 68 | | 24 | 69 |
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| 89.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "is buried" | | 1 | "are terrified" | | 2 | "was forged" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 73.02% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 210 | | matches | | 0 | "was cloying" | | 1 | "was pulsing" | | 2 | "was freezing" | | 3 | "was returning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, the London fog hung cold and grey against the horizon; the next, the Fae Grove yawned open, bathed in an eternal, golden-hour light that made the very atmosphere feel honey-thick." | | 1 | "The water didn't ripple; it swirled, reflecting a sky that wasn't the one above them." | | 2 | "The scent wafting from the pool wasn't just sweet; it was cloying, the heavy fragrance of a feast meant to sate an infinite hunger." | | 3 | "Rory understood the logic—the cold, calculating out-of-the-box thinking that had saved her more than once back in London." | | 4 | "She looked for the distortion—the shimmering, jagged tear that sat just above the surface of the water, unseen by eyes that didn't know how to look for the lie." | | 5 | "She didn't stab the water; she drove the moonsilver blade upward, striking into the empty air directly above the pool." | | 6 | "The sound was not an impact, but a scream—a high, discordant note that vibrated through her teeth and rattled her bones." | | 7 | "The iridescent trees had dulled, the golden light had muted to a pale, realistic afternoon sun, and the pool was just a pool—still, murky, and utterly ordinary." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1337 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.033657442034405384 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010471204188481676 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 14.58 | | std | 7.44 | | cv | 0.51 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 36.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.32967032967032966 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 37.04% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it showed the jagged," |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 46.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers, still marked by" | | 1 | "It was cold, unnervingly steady" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes flickered, casting" | | 3 | "They moved with the silent" | | 4 | "She moved with a rhythmic," | | 5 | "She didn't look back." | | 6 | "She simply pushed aside the" | | 7 | "It wants to keep you," | | 8 | "She hadn't expected the Grove" | | 9 | "They had been walking for" | | 10 | "They reached a central clearing" | | 11 | "Her lavender eyes searched Aurora’s" | | 12 | "You carry the stone, child" | | 13 | "It was pulsing." | | 14 | "It hadn't done that since" | | 15 | "She pulled the pendant out," | | 16 | "It glowed with a frantic," | | 17 | "It’s reacting to the door," | | 18 | "She looked at the pool," | | 19 | "They reached out a hand," |
| | ratio | 0.433 | |
| 54.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the heart" | | 1 | "The transition was not a" | | 2 | "Rory drew in a breath" | | 3 | "Her fingers, still marked by" | | 4 | "It was cold, unnervingly steady" | | 5 | "Nyx materialized from the periphery," | | 6 | "Their violet eyes flickered, casting" | | 7 | "They moved with the silent" | | 8 | "Isolde walked at the lead," | | 9 | "She moved with a rhythmic," | | 10 | "She didn't look back." | | 11 | "She simply pushed aside the" | | 12 | "The beauty here is a" | | 13 | "It wants to keep you," | | 14 | "Rory adjusted the weight of" | | 15 | "The moonlight-cold steel against her" | | 16 | "She hadn't expected the Grove" | | 17 | "They had been walking for" | | 18 | "They reached a central clearing" | | 19 | "The water didn't ripple; it" |
| | ratio | 0.811 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "To close a door, one" | | 1 | "If you open this, you" | | 2 | "If you wish to protect" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 65.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, the London fog hung cold and grey against the horizon; the next, the Fae Grove yawned open, bathed in an eternal, golden-hour light that made the ve…" | | 1 | "It was cold, unnervingly steady despite the hum of magic that vibrated through the soles of her boots." | | 2 | "Nyx materialized from the periphery, their humanoid silhouette shifting as if composed of smoke caught in a gale." | | 3 | "Their violet eyes flickered, casting a faint, sickly glow over the wildflowers that carpeted the forest floor." | | 4 | "She simply pushed aside the overhanging branches of a weeping willow that shimmered with an iridescent, almost metallic sheen." | | 5 | "Isolde stepped toward the pool, her silver hair flowing upward as if she were underwater." | | 6 | "She looked for the distortion—the shimmering, jagged tear that sat just above the surface of the water, unseen by eyes that didn't know how to look for the lie." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |