| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1192 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 11.91% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1192 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "sentinels" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "navigating" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "grave" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "stark" | | 12 | "dance" | | 13 | "unreadable" | | 14 | "fleeting" | | 15 | "marble" | | 16 | "chill" | | 17 | "kaleidoscope" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "g with warmth" | | 1 | "felt the chill" |
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| 85.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1189 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Keep close, Rory whispered, her voice sounding small against the towering, ancient oaks that formed the boundary of the …" | | 1 | "The wind here carries voices, Nyx murmured, their tone a rasping echo of wind through dry leaves." | | 2 | "Isolde should be here, Rory muttered, scanning the tangle of silvered vines." | | 3 | "The visitor arrives, Isolde said, her voice melodic and empty of warmth." | | 4 | "The boundary is thin where the intent is highest, Isolde said, gesturing toward the shifting amber depth." |
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| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 67 | | wordCount | 1189 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.68 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Rory | 20 | | Golden | 2 | | Empress | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 3 | | Nyx | 6 | | Carter | 2 | | Seer | 4 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Dymas | 3 | | Veil | 2 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | You | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Carter" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Varga" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "Veil" | | 8 | "Aurora" | | 9 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Golden" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Belphegor" |
| | globalScore | 0.659 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 45.83% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sentinels that seemed to watch their progress with a heavy, lithic patience" | | 1 | "felt like Rory had blinked and forgotte" | | 2 | "looked like marble, her fingers brushing" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1189 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.19% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 45.73 | | std | 14.89 | | cv | 0.326 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 61 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 73 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 43 |
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| 81.87% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "were humped" | | 1 | "been tasked" | | 2 | "is welcomed" | | 3 | "is kneaded" | | 4 | "being unstitched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | | |
| 66.67% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.027 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her left hand against the cool metal of the Heartstone pendant tucked beneath her shirt; it wasn’t pulsing with warmth here, which meant there was no Hel portal—not yet." | | 1 | "If I have to open a new one—even one that leads to the belly of Hel—I will." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1198 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.022537562604340568 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00667779632721202 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 15.85 | | std | 6.67 | | cv | 0.421 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 57.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.38666666666666666 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 88.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it smelled of crushed" | | 1 | "Just tell me how to" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 92.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "It carried no trace of" | | 1 | "She pressed her left hand" | | 2 | "They are only the regrets" | | 3 | "She reached for the small" | | 4 | "She had been tasked with" | | 5 | "She didn't stand, but a" | | 6 | "She didn't leave footprints, Rory" | | 7 | "She peered over the top" | | 8 | "I’m looking for the way" | | 9 | "I need to know why" | | 10 | "You seek the banquet of" | | 11 | "You carry a blade of" | | 12 | "She pulled the dagger out," | | 13 | "I’m here because I have" | | 14 | "My life in London is" | | 15 | "She reached out with a" | | 16 | "You seek the Heartstone’s twin." | | 17 | "Your riddles don't keep the" | | 18 | "You walk with a shadow," | | 19 | "It had thinned into a" |
| | ratio | 0.32 | |
| 53.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove" | | 1 | "It carried no trace of" | | 2 | "Rory stepped over the mossy" | | 3 | "She pressed her left hand" | | 4 | "The shade didn't walk so" | | 5 | "The standing stones were humped" | | 6 | "Nyx drifted alongside her, their" | | 7 | "The wind here carries voices," | | 8 | "They are only the regrets" | | 9 | "Rory nodded, keeping her gaze" | | 10 | "She reached for the small" | | 11 | "She had been tasked with" | | 12 | "Flowers with petals like spun" | | 13 | "A stream cut across the" | | 14 | "Isolde should be here, Rory" | | 15 | "A figure stirred near an" | | 16 | "Isolde Varga sat upon a" | | 17 | "She didn't stand, but a" | | 18 | "She didn't leave footprints, Rory" | | 19 | "The visitor arrives, Isolde said," |
| | ratio | 0.813 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "If I have to open" | | 1 | "If you find the banquet" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 37.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "It carried no trace of diesel exhaust, rain-slicked pavement, or the stale fryer oil that clung to Rory’s jacket from her shift at the Golden Empress." | | 1 | "She pressed her left hand against the cool metal of the Heartstone pendant tucked beneath her shirt; it wasn’t pulsing with warmth here, which meant there was n…" | | 2 | "The shade didn't walk so much as bleed into the space, their violet eyes flickering in the dim, golden twilight that radiated from no visible sun." | | 3 | "Keep close, Rory whispered, her voice sounding small against the towering, ancient oaks that formed the boundary of the grove." | | 4 | "The standing stones were humped with lichen, ancient sentinels that seemed to watch their progress with a heavy, lithic patience." | | 5 | "She reached for the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a nervous habit that grounded her when the world felt too wide." | | 6 | "A stream cut across the path, but the water moved in a jagged, spiraling pattern, defying gravity as it flowed upward toward the canopy of leaves that shimmered…" | | 7 | "The Fae-forged blade was cold against her thigh, a stark, biting temperature that reminded her of the winters she’d spent in Cardiff, huddled with her father ov…" | | 8 | "She reached out with a hand that looked like marble, her fingers brushing the air just inches from Rory’s tunic." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |