"“You’re being pulled,” they’d whispered, their voice like wind through a cracked window, the sound making her skin prickle even as she relaxed—she’d gotten used to their quiet, lulling tone, the way their shadow always seemed to linger just close enough to feel safe."
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"She stepped over the threshold of the oak circle, her boot crunching on a bed of moss that smelled like jasmine and ripe blackberries—wildflowers, she realized, when her eyes landed on a patch of bluebells growing at the base of one oak, their petals glowing faint violet, even though late October in London should have left them long dead."
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"She’d never seen anything like it—wildflowers bloomed in every color, clustered at the base of every trellis, even as far as her eyes could see, and the air was so sweet it made her head spin a little, like she’d inhaled a whiff of something alcoholic."
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"The crescent scar on her left wrist prickled, a familiar tingle that had started the day a stranger in a frayed black coat had left the velvet pouch containing …"
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"Despite having seen them a dozen times, the sight still made her chest tighten: they were tall, just over six feet, their body a living silhouette that shifted …"
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"She stepped over the threshold of the oak circle, her boot crunching on a bed of moss that smelled like jasmine and ripe blackberries—wildflowers, she realized,…"
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"A stream glowed like liquid honey cut through with amethyst, winding between the vines, and fireflies the size of sparrows buzzed above the water, their lights …"
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"Rory let out a quiet gasp, and she couldn’t stop herself from stepping forward, her boots sinking into soft, green grass that felt like velvet underfoot."
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"Long tables stretched the length of the hall, heaped with food that made her stomach growl despite her unease: glistening roasted meats piled high on pewter pla…"
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"Rory spotted an orchard off to the side, its trees heavy with peaches that glowed bright red, their scent so strong it made her mouth water."
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"They continued walking, their boots crunching on the velvet grass, the firefly sprites circling around their heads."
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"They just kept walking, their trays clinking, their hollow eyes fixed on the feast hall, their steps slow and mechanical."
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"Rory took a deep breath, and she pressed a hand to her chest, feeling the Heartstone thrumming faster now, as if pulling her toward the feast hall."
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"Nyx nodded, their form shifting a little, as if they were straining to see it."
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"As they drew closer to the feast hall, Rory spotted a chef standing next to a giant cauldron by the entrance, stirring a stew that bubbled with blue steam, the …"
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"Nyx whispered that the chef was a former CEO who’d embezzled millions from his company, forcing his employees to take pay cuts until they quit, so he’d been sen…"
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"He was tall, with dark hair and a goatee, and he wore a ring on his finger that glowed bright crimson, matching the Heartstone in her palm."
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"Rory froze, her hand tightening around the Fae Blade, her breath catching in her throat."