Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZ8V4BS4EWDA9PX7Z8W3F4

Run Details

Duration:
7.0s
Cost:
$0.002390
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The security chain rattled against the doorframe, a discordant screech of metal on metal that cut through the low hum of the street below. Three deadbolts clicked home, one after the other, before the heavy oak barrier swung inward. Eva’s flat smelled of burnt sage and damp paper, the air thick with the dust of centuries-old scrolls. Aurora stood in the sliver of space between the door and the overstuffed bookshelf, her hand catching on the jagged crescent scar at her wrist. The bright blue of her eyes sharpened, snapping to the man framed against the dim yellow lights of the hallway. Lucien leaned against the peeling wallpaper, his charcoal suit pressed to a razor edge, the ivory handle of his cane resting beneath his chin. His heterochromatic gaze, one amber and one void-black, tracked the tension in her shoulders. Don't look at me like that, like I’m a ghost haunting my own grave. Lucien eased his weight off the wall, his movements fluid, predator-like despite the polished shoes. He stepped into the threshold without an invite. The ivory cane tapped rhythms against the floorboards, a staccato pulse that vibrated in the small, cramped space. Ptolemy the tabby cat darted between his legs, arching its back before vanishing into the labyrinth of research notes piled in the corner. You have a flair for the dramatic, Lucien, leaving the underworld to haunt my doorstep at this hour. He closed the door behind him, the lack of space forcing him into her personal orbit. The scent of ozone and expensive cologne clung to him, sharp enough to drown out the lingering curry grease from downstairs. He reached into his coat, producing a slip of parchment sealed with black wax, and held it out. His fingers brushed hers—a brief, electric contact that made her skin prickle with the memory of nights spent in shadows she had tried to unlearn. The courier didn't arrive, Rory. The delivery you were supposed to make never crossed the threshold of the Avaros perimeter. Aurora snatched the parchment, her grip bruising, and fanned it open. The ink pulsed with a rhythmic, dying light. She turned her back on him, walking toward the window that overlooked the erratic sprawl of Brick Lane. The neon signs below blurred into streaks of red and blue, casting long, fractured shadows across her face. You think I’m still running your errands, picking up the scraps of your deals when the world tilts sideways? Lucien moved closer, his stillness a stark contrast to her agitation. He parked his cane against the edge of a stack of books and leaned against the radiator, his presence turning the room into a cage. He looked at the nape of her neck, his expression unreadable, a flicker of something raw and untethered dancing in his amber eye. I think you are the only person in this city with the nerve to look into the void and tell it to wait its turn. She spun around, the parchment crumpled in her hand. The light from the streetlamp caught the pale curve of her throat, highlighting the pulse erratic and fast beneath her skin. She stepped into his space, the height difference trivialized by the sheer force of her defiance. We left this where it was, under the bridge in Marseille, buried in saltwater and silence. You don’t get to come back with a frantic errand and expect the ghost of who I was to answer the door. He didn't flinch. Instead, he reached out, his thumb tracing the small white crescent on her wrist, a touch light as a moth’s wing but heavy with the weight of everything they had never voiced. The air grew heavy, the static charge of the room thickening until it felt like climbing a mountain against the wind. The silence between us wasn’t a burial, Aurora. It was a holding pattern. And I am tired of holding my breath while you pretend the air in London doesn't taste like ash. She pulled away, the movement bordering on violent, and slammed her palms against the desk. A stack of scrolls slid, tumbling to the floor in a flurry of dust. She needed the mess, the disarray, to anchor her, but Lucien’s presence felt like a tide pulling the foundation out from beneath her feet. Go to the bar downstairs. Silas has whiskey that burns just enough to make you forget you ever knew my name. He didn't move toward the door. He straightened his cuffs, the platinum hair slicked back with such precision it looked like armor. He stepped forward again, closing the final inch of distance. The heat radiating off him was palpable, a reminder of the demon blood humming in his veins, a fever that had scorched her own skin more than once. I could drink until the sun comes up to scour this street, but I would still see your shadow on the wall. I came to tell you the deal is off, and the people we stepped on are no longer satisfied with silence. She looked up at him, searching for the mask he usually wore, the one that kept the broker and the fixer separate from the man who had looked at her with something resembling worship. All she found was the fractured reflection of a life she couldn't escape. You put a target on my back the moment you walked through that door, and you know it. He tilted his head, his gaze dropping to her mouth, lingering there with a predatory hunger that made her knees feel like water. He leaned in, stopping just shy of the point where sense would fail them both. I put a target on us both, Rory. But at least now, we aren't standing in the dark alone. A radiator pipe groaned, a metallic shriek that tore through the sudden, suffocating intimacy of the room. She stood frozen, the parchment still crushed in her hand, staring into the abyss of his mismatched eyes. She recognized the look—the same recklessness that had driven her to leave everything in Cardiff, the same jagged hunger that kept her from closing the door completely. Give me the details, then. And if we die, do it quickly. Lucien reached out, tucking a loose strand of black hair behind her ear, his fingers lingering on her jawline. The touch was possessive, a claim staked in the middle of a war zone. I’ve never been one for quick endings, you know that perfectly well. Tell me you’re coming, or I walk out that door and let the fire swallow both of us. She didn't answer with words. She stepped closer, closing the final, terrifying gap, the scent of him overwhelming her senses. Outside, the rain began to lash against the glass, a rhythmic beating that drowned out the world, leaving only the two of them in the cramped, airless quiet of the flat. Tonight, Lucien. Anything, just get it done.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
87.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"quickly"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"grave"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"predator"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count2
9
word"fractured"
count2
10
word"stark"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"dancing"
count1
14
word"silence"
count3
15
word"tracing"
count1
16
word"palpable"
count1
17
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"grave"
2"weight"
3"predator"
4"pulse"
5"vibrated"
6"electric"
7"pulsed"
8"rhythmic"
9"fractured"
10"stark"
11"unreadable"
12"flicker"
13"dancing"
14"silence"
15"tracing"
16"palpable"
17"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
2.01% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences71
filterMatches
0"think"
1"know"
2"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1160
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1160
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien7
Rory2
Avaros1
Brick1
Lane1
Marseille1
Aurora3
London1
Cardiff1
You4
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
2"Aurora"
3"You"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like climbing a mountain against t"
1"felt like a tide pulling the foundation"
2"looked like armor"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1160
matches(empty)
72.77% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"like that, like"
1"out that door"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean40
std20.37
cv0.509
sampleLengths
057
183
214
364
418
580
620
755
819
959
1025
1146
1238
1356
1432
1553
1621
1760
1843
1947
2018
2138
2219
2362
2412
2533
2630
2751
287
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"were supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs184
matches(empty)
62.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences71
ratio0.028
matches
0"His fingers brushed hers—a brief, electric contact that made her skin prickle with the memory of nights spent in shadows she had tried to unlearn."
1"She recognized the look—the same recklessness that had driven her to leave everything in Cardiff, the same jagged hunger that kept her from closing the door completely."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1164
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03006872852233677
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005154639175257732
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean16.34
std7.23
cv0.443
sampleLengths
024
115
218
325
420
524
614
714
815
98
1018
1123
1218
1316
1421
1518
1625
175
1815
1911
208
2118
2218
2319
2411
2525
2623
2725
289
2921
3016
3116
3222
333
3432
3521
368
375
3819
3915
4014
4124
425
4316
446
4516
4610
4728
4822
4921
48.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.36619718309859156
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners26
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Instead, he reached out, his"
ratio0.014
25.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences70
matches
0"His heterochromatic gaze, one amber"
1"He stepped into the threshold"
2"You have a flair for"
3"He closed the door behind"
4"He reached into his coat,"
5"His fingers brushed hers—a brief,"
6"She turned her back on"
7"You think I’m still running"
8"He parked his cane against"
9"He looked at the nape"
10"I think you are the"
11"She spun around, the parchment"
12"She stepped into his space,"
13"We left this where it"
14"You don’t get to come"
15"He didn't flinch."
16"It was a holding pattern."
17"She pulled away, the movement"
18"She needed the mess, the"
19"He didn't move toward the"
ratio0.486
38.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences70
matches
0"The security chain rattled against"
1"Eva’s flat smelled of burnt"
2"Aurora stood in the sliver"
3"The bright blue of her"
4"Lucien leaned against the peeling"
5"His heterochromatic gaze, one amber"
6"Lucien eased his weight off"
7"He stepped into the threshold"
8"The ivory cane tapped rhythms"
9"Ptolemy the tabby cat darted"
10"You have a flair for"
11"He closed the door behind"
12"The scent of ozone and"
13"He reached into his coat,"
14"His fingers brushed hers—a brief,"
15"The courier didn't arrive, Rory."
16"The delivery you were supposed"
17"Aurora snatched the parchment, her"
18"The ink pulsed with a"
19"She turned her back on"
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The ivory cane tapped rhythms against the floorboards, a staccato pulse that vibrated in the small, cramped space."
1"Ptolemy the tabby cat darted between his legs, arching its back before vanishing into the labyrinth of research notes piled in the corner."
2"His fingers brushed hers—a brief, electric contact that made her skin prickle with the memory of nights spent in shadows she had tried to unlearn."
3"She turned her back on him, walking toward the window that overlooked the erratic sprawl of Brick Lane."
4"The heat radiating off him was palpable, a reminder of the demon blood humming in his veins, a fever that had scorched her own skin more than once."
5"She looked up at him, searching for the mask he usually wore, the one that kept the broker and the fixer separate from the man who had looked at her with someth…"
6"He tilted his head, his gaze dropping to her mouth, lingering there with a predatory hunger that made her knees feel like water."
7"She recognized the look—the same recklessness that had driven her to leave everything in Cardiff, the same jagged hunger that kept her from closing the door com…"
8"Lucien reached out, tucking a loose strand of black hair behind her ear, his fingers lingering on her jawline."
9"Outside, the rain began to lash against the glass, a rhythmic beating that drowned out the world, leaving only the two of them in the cramped, airless quiet of …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.3589%