"He’s dressed to the nines, tailored charcoal suit not a single crease out of place, slicked-back platinum blond hair catching the neon glow, and she recognizes him before she sees his eyes—before the amber and black heterochromatic irises cut through the pink light like shards of something dangerous and beautiful."
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"She’d forgotten how good he was at tracking people—an annoying skill, back when they’d been together, when he’d tracked down her abusive ex Evan after he’d followed her to Cardiff, when he’d fixed every mess she’d made before she even knew she’d made it."
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"“I didn’t come here to fight,” he says, softening his grip on the cane just enough that she can push the door a little wider, lean against the frame and breathe in the smell of her flat—cumin and coriander from the curry shop below, old paper and cat litter from Eva’s stacks of research scrolls, the faint sweetness of the chamomile tea she’d left steeping on the windowsill."
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"Rory’s chest tightens—she’d forgotten how good he was with animals, how he could calm even the skittest strays with a single word and a gentle touch."
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"He doesn’t move closer, but he doesn’t pull away either, standing just far enough away that she can smell his cologne—sandalwood and citrus, exactly the same as the day they’d met, the day she’d delivered extra naan to his Soho office and fixed his spilled lassi with a napkin and a lime."
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"She crosses her arms, pulling her sleeve down over the crescent scar on her left wrist—the scar from the childhood bike accident, the one she’d shown him on a quiet night on his couch, when they’d been cuddling and she’d rolled up her sleeve to point out a random bump on her arm."
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"“Understood,” he says, and he reaches out, taking her free hand—her left hand, the one with the crescent scar—and runs his thumb over the faint, curved line of skin, gently, like he’s handling something fragile."
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"The world fades away for a minute— the scrolls, the fryers, the distant pub music— and it’s just the two of them, and the korma, and the unsaid things hanging between them, finally starting to break through."
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"She slams the door shut, her heart hammering against her ribs, but he slips his ivory-handled cane between the frame and the wood before it latches, chipping a …"
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"She picks it up, her hands shaking, and it’s a photo: her and Lucien, laughing on a Soho pub patio, his arm slung over her shoulders, the sun setting behind the…"
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"She crosses her arms, pulling her sleeve down over the crescent scar on her left wrist—the scar from the childhood bike accident, the one she’d shown him on a q…"
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"He nods, his jaw tightening, and she catches a glimpse of the hidden blade in his cane when he shifts his weight, the metal glinting faintly under the streetlam…"
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"She sets the thermal bag on the cluttered coffee table, which is covered in Eva’s rune scrolls and a half-empty mug of cold tea, and she sits down on the worn v…"
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"Ptolemy jumps onto her lap, curling up and purring, and she absentmindedly scratches his ears."