Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZAYHHD7HQ8QYGJTJ61AWF

Run Details

Duration:
4m 37s
Cost:
$0.004361
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The shimmer clung to Rory’s hair for three steps after she pushed through the tear. Thin silvery threads that dissolved when she flicked her wrist, leaving only the faint tang of ozone on her fingertips. She’d grabbed the Fae-Forged Blade from her jacket pocket before crossing, its cold moonsilver metal a bite against her palm through the thick wool. Even across the distance of the Veil, she’d felt the pull of this place—warm, hungry, thrumming under her skin like a live wire. Her boots hit packed earth that didn’t crunch like the damp London mud she’d tramped through all morning. It hummed, low and steady, like a beehive left undisturbed. She blinked, wiping stinging grit from her bright blue eyes, and took in the sky. No sun, just a wash of warm amber, mild enough that it did not glare but bright enough to paint everything in honeyed light. Behind her, Isolde’s silver waist-length hair caught the glow, strands shifting like polished moonbeams. Nyx solidified at her elbow, their shadowy form stretching to just over six feet tall, faintly glowing violet eyes cutting through the amber haze. “Easy.” Isolde kicked at a cluster of tiny glowing fungi clustered at the base of a nearby tree. The caps pulsed pale green, rising and falling in time with the earth’s hum. Rory knelt, leaning in, and breathed in the scent—pine, and something sweet, like overripe blackberries left in the sun. A vine wrapped around the tree trunk, thick as her wrist, dripping clear sap that sparkled when it hit the ground. Rory’s fingers brushed the silver chain around her neck, the Heartstone pendant warm against her chest. It had been pulsing nonstop since they stepped through, a steady thrum that matched the earth under her feet. She’d gotten it six months prior, from an unknown benefactor, and only learned its use when Isolde had tracked the stone’s signal to a rift in Richmond Park. Back then, the pulse had been faint, barely noticeable. Now it burned, like a brand pressed to her skin. Nyx drifted ahead, their shadowy form slipping into a crack in the tree’s bark, reappearing a moment later. Their voice came as a whisper carried on the wind, no louder than a breath. Helbound souls. Working the vines. They don’t see living flesh unless you wave a blade at them. Rory stood, tucking the Fae blade back into her pocket. A row of grapevines stretched out before her, their leaves iridescent, shifting from deep purple to gold as the wind blew through them. The grapes hung in clusters, plump and deep crimson, glowing faint red from within. She reached out, her fingers hovering over a cluster, and Isolde’s hand brushed her wrist. Not for eating. She spoke without turning, her eyes fixed on the vines. The earth here claims what you take. It gives gifts only to those who ask. Rory pulled her hand back, rubbing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist without thinking. It was a habit she’d picked up after the accident behind the campus library, after Evan had cornered her and she’d broken a bottle over his head. The scar was small, easy to miss, but it always ached when she was nervous. She followed Nyx past the vineyard, the hum of the earth growing louder, mixed with the distant clink of plates and a soft, oily laugh that echoed over the rows. When she turned to look, all she saw was the glowing fungi and the iridescent leaves. No source for the noise. Just the warm amber glow bathing everything. They reached a stone archway, carved from black basalt, twisted with vines that dripped the same sweet sap as the trees. The carvings covered every inch: people leaning over overflowing plates, wine flowing in rivers, their faces slack with hunger, never full. Rory paused, her breath catching. The Heartstone pulsed so hard now it almost pulled against the chain, almost slipped over her head. Dymas. Isolde’s voice was soft, steady. The realm of excess. Prince Belphegor’s domain. Rory had heard the name once, when Nyx had talked about the spaces between realms. Hel’s seven sins, each with their own realm. Gluttony was one of them. She’d never imagined stepping foot inside one. They passed through the archway, and the noise grew louder. Hundreds of voices, all hungry, all begging. Tables stretched out for as far as the eye could see, covered in mountains of food—roasted meats, fruits she’d never seen, loaves of bread steaming with heat. But the people sitting at the tables were translucent, their skin pale, their eyes hollow. They picked at the food, shoveling it into their mouths, but their plates always refilled the moment they set their forks down. One of them reached out, his fingers brushing Rory’s sleeve. She flinched, pulling back, and his hand passed right through her, like she was a ghost. He didn’t even seem to notice. Hungry. He mumbled the word over and over, shoveling a pile of berries into his mouth. Nyx stepped in front of her, their shadowy form flaring slightly. Stay close. Their whisper was thin, carried on the wind. These souls are trapped here. They’ll eat you if they can, but only if you let them. Rory nodded, her grip tight on the Fae blade in her pocket. She could feel the weight of the unspoken thing behind her eyes— the fear that she’d end up like them, trapped forever, never full, never free. She rubbed her scar again, harder this time. Ahead, a stream cut through the feast hall. It wasn’t water flowing through it, but a thick, golden liquid that shimmered like honey. The air around it smelled like vanilla, and when Rory knelt and dipped her finger in, it was warm, like liquid sunlight. She pulled her finger out, and a tiny bead of the golden liquid clung to her skin, dissolving into her palm within seconds. The grease and dirt from her morning delivery shifts vanished, leaving her hands soft and clean, like she’d just washed them with the best soap money could buy. Isolde laughed, a soft, clear sound that cut through the hum of the feast hall. The rivers of Dymas give what the taker does not know they need. Before Rory could ask what she meant, Nyx’s form tensed. Their violet eyes flicked to the east, and their voice dropped to an almost inaudible whisper. Guards. Coming fast. Rory stood, yanking the Fae blade out of her pocket and holding it behind her back, out of sight. Isolde folded her hands behind her back, her silver hair shifting in the breeze, and didn’t move a muscle. Five shadowy figures rounded the corner of the feast hall, their forms like Nyx’s but darker, their eyes glowing bright red. They wore black armor plated with basalt, and carried swords forged from the same black stone as the archway. Their boots thudded against the packed earth, loud enough to drown out the hum of the feast hall for a moment. They marched past the group, their heads turning from side to side, but they didn’t spot Rory, Isolde, or Nyx. Nyx had slipped into a crack in the stone wall, their shadow merging with the darkness until they were almost invisible. Isolde stood perfectly still, her feet not leaving a single print in the earth. Rory held her breath, her heart pounding in her chest, until the guards were out of sight around another corner of the feast hall. When the noise of the guards’ boots faded, Nyx reappeared, their form solidifying next to Isolde. The prince’s hunting party. They patrol the outer feast halls. We need to move deeper. Rory nodded, tucking the Fae blade back into her pocket. She followed Nyx past the feast hall, toward a line of trees that glowed with soft purple light. Beyond the trees, she could see a grand stage, raised high above the ground, with a long table covered in dishes she’d never seen before. A chef stood at the center of the stage, stirring a cauldron that glowed with crimson fire. His hands were steady, even though the cauldron bubbled with a liquid that smoked and sparkled. The chef plated a dish, using the glowing grapes from the vineyard, a drizzle of the golden river water, and slices of a fruit that looked like a cross between a peach and a pomegranate. The dish looked perfect, like something out of a luxury restaurant back in London. Rory leaned in, her curiosity getting the better of her, and Isolde stepped beside her. The champion of the culinary games. He has won every competition for a century. He serves the prince’s personal table. The chef looked up, his eyes locking onto Rory’s. He smiled, and his teeth were sharp, like a wolf’s. Rory froze, her hand tightening around the Heartstone pendant, which pulsed so hard now it almost burned through her shirt.
created_at"2026-03-03T23:08:09.662Z" 3/3/2026, 11:08:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1495
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1495
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flicked"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count3
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"pulsed"
2"pulse"
3"whisper"
4"echoed"
5"could feel"
6"weight"
7"unspoken"
8"shimmered"
9"pounding"
10"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences107
matches
0"was nervous"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1492
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.19% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1480
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory18
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Veil1
London2
Isolde10
Heartstone3
Richmond1
Park1
Fae5
Evan1
Nyx10
Belphegor1
Dymas2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Blade"
2"Isolde"
3"Evan"
4"Nyx"
5"Belphegor"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Dymas"
globalScore0.892
windowScore1
93.82% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like vanilla, and when Rory knelt"
1"looked like a cross between a peach and a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1492
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
75.25% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean62.17
std25.7
cv0.413
sampleLengths
082
1105
272
382
450
590
657
758
864
913
1035
1181
1248
1338
1446
1596
1628
1729
1899
1979
2031
2186
2284
2339
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs247
matches(empty)
36.05% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences107
ratio0.037
matches
0"Even across the distance of the Veil, she’d felt the pull of this place—warm, hungry, thrumming under her skin like a live wire."
1"Rory knelt, leaning in, and breathed in the scent—pine, and something sweet, like overripe blackberries left in the sun."
2"Tables stretched out for as far as the eye could see, covered in mountains of food—roasted meats, fruits she’d never seen, loaves of bread steaming with heat."
3"She could feel the weight of the unspoken thing behind her eyes— the fear that she’d end up like them, trapped forever, never full, never free."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1262
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03486529318541997
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.0071315372424722665
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean13.94
std7.48
cv0.536
sampleLengths
015
120
224
323
418
510
615
724
814
924
1018
1114
1219
1321
1416
1519
1628
179
1810
1918
2015
212
223
2312
2410
2523
2614
2715
283
2910
307
318
3215
3327
3415
3530
3616
375
387
3921
4021
415
4217
431
445
454
463
4715
488
495
62.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3925233644859813
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners42
33.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Just the warm amber glow"
ratio0.01
73.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences101
matches
0"She’d grabbed the Fae-Forged Blade"
1"Her boots hit packed earth"
2"It hummed, low and steady,"
3"She blinked, wiping stinging grit"
4"It had been pulsing nonstop"
5"She’d gotten it six months"
6"Their voice came as a"
7"They don’t see living flesh"
8"She reached out, her fingers"
9"She spoke without turning, her"
10"It gives gifts only to"
11"It was a habit she’d"
12"She followed Nyx past the"
13"They reached a stone archway,"
14"She’d never imagined stepping foot"
15"They passed through the archway,"
16"They picked at the food,"
17"She flinched, pulling back, and"
18"He didn’t even seem to"
19"He mumbled the word over"
ratio0.366
49.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences101
matches
0"The shimmer clung to Rory’s"
1"She’d grabbed the Fae-Forged Blade"
2"Her boots hit packed earth"
3"It hummed, low and steady,"
4"She blinked, wiping stinging grit"
5"Nyx solidified at her elbow,"
6"Isolde kicked at a cluster"
7"The caps pulsed pale green,"
8"Rory knelt, leaning in, and"
9"A vine wrapped around the"
10"Rory’s fingers brushed the silver"
11"It had been pulsing nonstop"
12"She’d gotten it six months"
13"Nyx drifted ahead, their shadowy"
14"Their voice came as a"
15"They don’t see living flesh"
16"Rory stood, tucking the Fae"
17"A row of grapevines stretched"
18"The grapes hung in clusters,"
19"She reached out, her fingers"
ratio0.822
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"Even across the distance of"
1"Now it burned, like a"
2"Before Rory could ask what"
ratio0.03
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Her boots hit packed earth that didn’t crunch like the damp London mud she’d tramped through all morning."
1"It had been pulsing nonstop since they stepped through, a steady thrum that matched the earth under her feet."
2"Nyx drifted ahead, their shadowy form slipping into a crack in the tree’s bark, reappearing a moment later."
3"She followed Nyx past the vineyard, the hum of the earth growing louder, mixed with the distant clink of plates and a soft, oily laugh that echoed over the rows…"
4"It wasn’t water flowing through it, but a thick, golden liquid that shimmered like honey."
5"She followed Nyx past the feast hall, toward a line of trees that glowed with soft purple light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.8545%