Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZBNZ82QZ08K3345KBFYT3

Run Details

Duration:
5m 27s
Cost:
$0.004823
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
She locked her delivery bike to the iron park gate, fumbling with the combination lock even though the padlock on the gate’s hasp had rusted shut for months. Her scuffed work boots scraped against the wet tarmac, and she pulled the faded Golden Empress hoodie tighter against the November wind. An itch prickled under the cuff of her sweatshirt, at the crescent scar on her left wrist—old habit, scratching at it when her nerves spiked. She’d walked three miles off her Friday night delivery route, detoured through the side streets off Kingston Road, slipped through the gap in the hedgerow that the park’s rangers nailed over with sheet metal. No one would find her out here tonight. The hedgerow’s brambles snagged at her hoodie sleeves as she pushed through, and when she stepped into the wooded stretch beyond, the sharp, moldy smell of fallen beech leaves and rotting wood vanished. In its place: warm honey and crushed jasmine, even though jasmine does not bloom in November. She paused, squinting through the dim starlight, and noticed the first weird thing: clover with bright, unblemished green leaves pushed through the crust of frozen leaf litter, tiny purple blooms clustered at its base. Not a flower she recognized, and none that should survive a frost. She brought her phone flashlight, tapped the screen to wake it. 11:23pm. She left the gate at 11:19. Four minutes of walking, but she covered what felt like a mile. She tucked the phone back into her hoodie pocket, and that’s when she heard it: a trill, like a flute but clear, sharp, not a bird she’d ever heard before. She froze, her hand still on the pocket seam, and the trill cut off instantly. Nothing but the quiet of the night, except—crickets. They chirped in the underbrush, loud, steady, even though the temperature dipped below 40 degrees. Crickets do not survive November cold. She stepped forward again, flashlight beam cutting through the dark. The trees grew denser, their branches weaving a thick canopy that blocked almost all the starlight. Then she saw them: the standing stones, a circle of ancient oak, their bark blackened with age, moss hanging in thick, shaggy clumps. They glinted under her flashlight, the grain of the wood twisted into strange, swirling patterns she’d never noticed on oak before. The Heartstone pendant under her hoodie heated up, seeping warmth through the fabric against her chest. She unzipped the hoodie, pulled the silver chain over her head, and held the deep crimson gem up to the flashlight. It glowed with an inner light, brighter now, pulsing in time with the beat of her heart. She stepped through the gap between two of the tallest stones, and the air shifted again. No wind, no chill, just warm summer air that fogged her breath when she exhaled, even though the pendant’s heat burned into her palm. She turned a full circle, shining the flashlight across the clearing. Wildflowers bloomed everywhere: bluebells, daisies, yellow buttercups, even in the middle of winter. The ground under her boots was soft, damp soil, no frozen leaf litter, no frost. She’d read about this place, once, a hidden clearing in Richmond Park that locals called the Fae Grove, a pocket between worlds. She’d laughed at the TikTok videos, called them stoner folklore. Now her hands shook slightly, the pendant warm enough that she’d need to put it down soon. She took a step towards the center of the circle, and the trill started again, closer this time, right behind her left shoulder. She spun, flashlight beam slashing through the dark, and for a split second she saw it: a figure, tall and slender, with skin that glowed pale green, hair like spun silver, wearing a dress that shimmered like dewdrops on grass. Then it was gone, like it had never been there, leaving only the hum of something too high for human ears. Her breath caught. She told herself it was a trick of the light, the way the flashlight bounced off the moss and the stone twists. She’d worked 12-hour shifts for three weeks, surviving on energy drinks and frozen dumplings. Her eyes played tricks on her. She tightened her grip on the pendant, and the glow flared brighter, so bright she squinted. She noticed the flowers then. They did not just sway in a non-existent wind. Each petal twisted, turned, pointed directly at her. She shone the flashlight down at a cluster of bluebells, and they curved like tiny, pointed fingers, reaching towards her boots. She stepped back, tripping over something hard buried under the soil. She fell to her knees, catching herself on a standing stone, and her left wrist scraped against the rough oak bark. The crescent scar stung, and when she pulled her wrist back, there was a thin, silver line next to it, oozing clear, honey-scented sap. She wiped it on her jeans, the smell clinging to her denim. She stood up, and the flashlight died. No screen light, no flash—just the glow of the Heartstone in her hand, casting a tiny, crimson circle of light around her feet. She fumbled in her pocket for her portable charger, and found nothing. She’d packed it that morning, must have left it on the counter at the restaurant. Her throat went dry. The trills multiplied, now three, four, harmonizing into a thin, high song that she felt in her bones, in the scar on her wrist, in the tips of her fingers. She shone the crimson light all around the circle, and saw them now, not just the one figure: dozens of them, darting behind the standing stones, their skin glowing in every color of the spectrum—pale green, deep blue, burnished gold, even a ghostly white. Some were tall, some were small, their forms shifting slightly when she looked away, like she could only catch them out of the corner of her eye. She backed away towards the gap between the two stones she’d stepped through, and stopped. The gap was gone. In its place, a wall of ivy, thick and tangled, with silver leaves that shimmered under the pendant’s glow. She reached out to touch it, and her fingers sank into the soft, damp foliage, but she could not push through. The ivy was too thick, and when she pulled her hand back, her nails were coated in that same honey-scented sap. “Hello?” She tried to calculate how long she’d been trapped here, but the numbers did not add up. She’d left the park gate at 11:19, but it felt like she’d been in this clearing for days, not just minutes. The song stopped. For a long, silent moment, the only sound was her own ragged breathing. Then a voice spoke, not in her ears, but in her head, clear and cold, no warmth to it: You do not belong here. “Who are you?” Her voice thinner than she intended, she leaned against a standing stone, her shoulders slumping. “Is this about Evan? Did he send you?” The figure stepped out from behind the largest standing stone, the one in the center of the circle. It was taller than the others, its skin a burnished gold, its hair like long, wispy smoke that drifted in the non-existent wind. Its eyes were black, empty voids, no pupils, no irises. It raised a hand, and a thin, silver rope floated down from its fingers, coiling in the air between them. The rope glinted like the pendant’s chain, and Aurora noticed that the crescent scar on her wrist glowed again, brighter now, matching the pendant’s light. The silver rope seemed pulled towards her scar, like a magnet. She stepped back, tripping over a pile of loose soil. She fell to her knees again, and the silver rope wrapped around her left wrist, just above the crescent scar. It did not hurt, exactly, but it pulled tight, like it was trying to yank her arm out of its socket. A strand of her shoulder-length black hair fell forward into her face, and she brushed it back, her fingers sticky with honey sap. She thought of the flat above Silas’ bar, the way Eva would knock on her door at 2pm every Saturday with coffee, the way she’d hidden her bike in the back alley for three months to avoid Evan. She could not let him find her here. She grabbed the pendant with her right hand, squeezing it until her knuckles turned white, and the glow flared so bright it made the figure step back, its golden skin dimming slightly.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1434
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1434
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count2
3
word"calculate"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"chill"
2"shimmered"
3"calculate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1430
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1386
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.22
worstName"November"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"November"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
November3
Friday1
Kingston1
Road1
Heartstone2
Richmond1
Park1
Fae1
Grove1
TikTok1
You1
Aurora1
persons
0"You"
1"Aurora"
places
0"November"
1"Kingston"
2"Road"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
5"Fae"
6"Grove"
7"TikTok"
globalScore1
windowScore1
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a mile"
1"felt like she’d been in this clearing f"
2"seemed pulled towards her scar, like a magnet"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.699
wordCount1430
matches
0"not in her ears, but in her head, clear"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"noticed that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean68.1
std35.9
cv0.527
sampleLengths
0117
195
230
374
470
594
688
784
861
9111
1061
11101
1280
131
1438
1540
163
1723
18107
19120
2032
87.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences81
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
2"were coated"
3"been trapped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs218
matches
0"was trying"
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences84
ratio0.048
matches
0"An itch prickled under the cuff of her sweatshirt, at the crescent scar on her left wrist—old habit, scratching at it when her nerves spiked."
1"Nothing but the quiet of the night, except—crickets."
2"No screen light, no flash—just the glow of the Heartstone in her hand, casting a tiny, crimson circle of light around her feet."
3"She shone the crimson light all around the circle, and saw them now, not just the one figure: dozens of them, darting behind the standing stones, their skin glowing in every color of the spectrum—pale green, deep blue, burnished gold, even a ghostly white."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1356
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"clear, honey-scented sap."
1"same honey-scented sap."
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.038348082595870206
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.00663716814159292
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean17.02
std9.15
cv0.538
sampleLengths
028
122
225
334
48
533
616
734
812
911
101
116
1212
1330
1415
158
1615
176
1810
1916
2023
2121
2216
2321
2417
2516
2624
2711
2813
2915
3022
3110
3217
3323
3440
3521
363
3722
3814
396
4016
415
429
438
4421
4511
4621
4724
4812
497
33.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"Then she saw them: the"
1"Then it was gone, like"
2"Then a voice spoke, not"
ratio0.038
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences80
matches
0"She locked her delivery bike"
1"Her scuffed work boots scraped"
2"She’d walked three miles off"
3"She paused, squinting through the"
4"She brought her phone flashlight,"
5"She left the gate at"
6"She tucked the phone back"
7"She froze, her hand still"
8"They chirped in the underbrush,"
9"She stepped forward again, flashlight"
10"They glinted under her flashlight,"
11"She unzipped the hoodie, pulled"
12"It glowed with an inner"
13"She stepped through the gap"
14"She turned a full circle,"
15"She’d read about this place,"
16"She’d laughed at the TikTok"
17"She took a step towards"
18"She spun, flashlight beam slashing"
19"Her breath caught."
ratio0.613
35.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences80
matches
0"She locked her delivery bike"
1"Her scuffed work boots scraped"
2"An itch prickled under the"
3"She’d walked three miles off"
4"The hedgerow’s brambles snagged at"
5"She paused, squinting through the"
6"She brought her phone flashlight,"
7"She left the gate at"
8"She tucked the phone back"
9"She froze, her hand still"
10"Nothing but the quiet of"
11"They chirped in the underbrush,"
12"Crickets do not survive November"
13"She stepped forward again, flashlight"
14"The trees grew denser, their"
15"They glinted under her flashlight,"
16"The Heartstone pendant under her"
17"She unzipped the hoodie, pulled"
18"It glowed with an inner"
19"She stepped through the gap"
ratio0.85
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Now her hands shook slightly,"
ratio0.013
88.74% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The trees grew denser, their branches weaving a thick canopy that blocked almost all the starlight."
1"No wind, no chill, just warm summer air that fogged her breath when she exhaled, even though the pendant’s heat burned into her palm."
2"She spun, flashlight beam slashing through the dark, and for a split second she saw it: a figure, tall and slender, with skin that glowed pale green, hair like …"
3"She shone the crimson light all around the circle, and saw them now, not just the one figure: dozens of them, darting behind the standing stones, their skin glo…"
4"It was taller than the others, its skin a burnished gold, its hair like long, wispy smoke that drifted in the non-existent wind."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.0312%