Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
67
glossingSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"figurines that seemed to shift when she looked away"
1
"quite register as human speech—toward a wooden stall piled high with small brass compasses, their casings dusted with verdigris patina, the faces etched with protective sigils"
"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair was pulled back in a tight bun, exposing her sharp jawline, and her left wrist’s worn leather watch ticked slow, precise, military time—she’d been trained to measure every gap, every pause, back when she’d worn a uniform instead of a scuffed detective’s windbreaker, back when DS Morris was still at her side."
1
"Thal’s description—blue-tinged skin, gossamer fingertips, a scar snaking up his left forearm—matched the victim she’d found pushing through the murmur of strange voices a hundred feet down the platform."
2
"She pushed through a cluster of gossamer-faced people—Shades, she realized, their skin tinged pale blue, their movements too fluid, too slow, their voices a soft murmur that didn’t quite register as human speech—toward a wooden stall piled high with small brass compasses, their casings dusted with verdigris patina, the faces etched with protective sigils."
3
"The needle continued to spin, a silent signal that a rift was active nearby—something Rainer would never pick up on, not without training in the Veil, not without seeing the things she’d seen."
4
"The vials of glowing liquid, the carved amulets, the piles of brass compasses—all of it was untouched, not a single box ripped open, not a single item disturbed beyond the single wooden stool knocked over ten feet from the counter."
5
"She tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear—nervous habit, Harlow noted, having memorized every detail of the clique she’d been tasked with investigating—and stepped into the golden glow of the fairy lights."
6
"Lying half-buried in the concrete grit was a small, weathered animal bone token—dog-shaped, chewed at the ends, etched with a tiny protective sigil."
7
"The stall had a handwritten sign tucked under a pile of compasses, written in the same coded occult script Harlow had decoded from Morris’s case notes, that read *Custom Rift Compasses—No Payments Accepted for Law Enforcement*."
8
"It didn’t feel solid, didn’t feel like concrete—it felt like a thin sheet of glass, pulled tight over a rift."
9
"The full moon would peak in an hour, according to her phone’s weather app—exactly the time the Veil Market’s schedule said the threshold between worlds would be thinnest."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
53
technicalSentenceCount
9
matches
0
"But Harlow had seen the faint blue tinge to his skin, the way his fingers had curled around a shard of brass that no lab had been able to identify, the faint oz…"
1
"The damp iron smell of the tunnel melted into sandalwood and burnt myrrh, cut with a faint, prickling ozone that tickled the back of her throat."
2
"She pushed through a cluster of gossamer-faced people—Shades, she realized, their skin tinged pale blue, their movements too fluid, too slow, their voices a sof…"
3
"Eva’s hands shook as she pulled a crumpled sheet of paper from her satchel, unfolding it to reveal a sketch of the exact compass Thal had been clutching, its fa…"
4
"Eva’s face paled, her hands tightening around her sketch, her freckled cheeks flushing."
5
"There was a faint shimmer there, a thin veil of energy that she’d learned to spot after Morris’s death, the same shimmer that had covered the warehouse where he…"
6
"The compass in her hand, the loose one she’d picked up from the stall, suddenly stopped spinning, its needle pointing directly at that shimmering wall."
7
"She held it up to her eye, watching the needle lock into place, pointing directly at the shimmering wall behind the column."
8
"The stall had a handwritten sign tucked under a pile of compasses, written in the same coded occult script Harlow had decoded from Morris’s case notes, that rea…"