Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZK6JN42QWQP5N7HFZRZDP

Run Details

Duration:
9.8s
Cost:
$0.002769
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts on Eva’s front door were a comfort until they were rattled from the outside. Rory froze, the half-eaten container of cold lo mein hovering midway to her mouth. She hadn't been expecting anyone, certainly not at this hour, not when the neon signs of Brick Lane had already blurred into the smudged orange haze of an East London night. She set the container down on a stack of dusty folklore journals and moved to the door. "Eva? If that’s you, you’ve got your keys," she called out, her voice tight. The knocking stopped, replaced by the distinct, rhythmic tap of a cane against the hardwood floor of the landing. Rory’s breath hitched. She squeezed her eyes shut for a second, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throbbing with a phantom ache that had nothing to do with injury and everything to do with muscle memory. She slid the bolts back, one by one. The final movement of the latch sounded like a gunshot in the cramped hallway. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, looking like he’d just stepped out of a private rail car in 1920s Marseille instead of the cramped, spice-scented stairwell of a Brick Lane curry house. His charcoal suit was impeccable, the fabric catching the dim light of the landing. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and his mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—cut through the gloom to lock onto hers with a predatory precision that made her knees feel entirely too thin. "You’ve moved up in the world, Carter," he said, his voice a rich, accented purr that teased at the edges of her resolve. He didn’t wait for an invitation, stepping into the flat with that poised, feline grace that betrayed his demonic lineage. Rory shut the door, leaving her hand on the deadbolt like a lifeline. "I didn't ask for a visit, Luc." "And yet, here I am." He walked toward the center of the room, his ivory-handled cane tapping a steady beat. He bypassed a precarious tower of occult texts, his gaze sweeping over the chaos of Eva’s research. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, emerged from beneath a mountain of loose-leaf parchment and hissed, arching his back at the stranger. Lucien offered a thin, amused smile, leaning down to offer the cat a gloved hand. Ptolemy sniffed, decided he didn't like the sulfurous undertone of the man's aura, and stalked off toward the kitchen. "You look tired," Lucien remarked, turning to face her. He wasn't looking at the research notes anymore. He was tracking the line of her throat, the way her shoulder-length black hair fell in a restless curtain against her face. "I’m working. I’m living. I’m doing just fine without you poking around in the periphery," Rory said, pushing off the door and crossing her arms to hide the way her hands were trembling. "What is so important that it required the Frenchman to haunt my doorstep?" Lucien leaned against a sturdy mahogany table that groaned under the weight of several ancient tomes. He looked perfectly at home, which was exactly the problem. Every time he entered a room, he seemed to rewrite the geography to suit his own narrative. "I had intel regarding your former… entanglement. Evan’s people are sniffing around the perimeter of your new life. I thought you might prefer to know before they decided to make their presence less abstract." Rory’s blood ran cold. The memories of Cardiff, the fear that had sent her fleeing into the night, the crushing weight of a life built on someone else’s terms—it all surged forward. "I handled Evan. I’m done with that." "You are never done with people like him, Rory. You are merely inconvenient for them at the moment." He moved closer, the scent of expensive cologne and ozone closing the distance between them. He stopped just past the threshold of her personal space, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye. "You haven't been answering your messages." "I haven't felt like talking," she shot back. "You felt like hiding." He reached out, his hand hovering for a second before his thumb traced the edge of the crescent scar on her wrist. His touch was burning, a stark contrast to the chill that clung to his coat. "You ran because you were afraid of what you were becoming, or because you were afraid of what you were leaving behind?" "Don't do that," she whispered, her voice cracking. "Don't psychoanalyze me. Not tonight." "Why not tonight?" He stepped completely into her space, his hand now cupping her jaw. His skin was warm, vibrant with the hidden heat of his heritage, and she felt the static of it creeping up her spine, setting her nerves on edge. "Is it because you’ve spent the last six months pretending I don't exist? Because I can tell you, Laila—the space you left in my life is remarkably loud." She gasped at the use of the name, the one he only ever used when he was stripped of his fixer's mask. She looked up at him, her bright blue eyes searching his. He looked like an angel carved from granite, but there was a flicker of genuine, raw desperation behind the heterochromatic gaze that she hadn't seen before. "You lied to me," she said, though the words lacked their usual conviction. "I protected you. There is a distinction, though I suppose it is lost on those who prefer the simplicity of the truth." He let his hand drop to her waist, pulling her flush against him. The ivory cane clattered to the floor, rolling into the shadows, forgotten. Rory’s heartbeat hammered against her ribs, a frantic rhythm that matched the tension coiling between them. "I should throw you out." "You could," he murmured, his breath fanning across her skin. "But we both know you’d only be inviting the silence back in. And you’ve always hated the quiet, haven't you?" She leaned into him, the surrender as inevitable as it was infuriating. She rested her forehead against his chest, smelling the rain-damp wool of his coat and the faint, unsettling scent of raw power that always clung to him. "You’re an arrogant, infuriating devil." "A half-devil," he corrected, his voice a low vibration against her temple. He kissed the hairline above her ear, a gesture so tender it made tears prick at her eyes. "And I have traveled too far to be insulted without a proper rebuttal." He tilted her chin up, and when he kissed her, it was like a sudden, violent shift in the weather. It was hungry and desperate, a collision of two people who had been circling each other in the dark for far too long. She grabbed the lapels of his charcoal coat, pulling him closer, needing to anchor herself to something solid, something real. The flat felt smaller, the books and the scrolls falling away into the periphery as if they were nothing more than props in a play. In the dim light of the room, with the city of London churning outside the window, there was only the heat of him, the memory of why she had run, and the terrifying, magnetic truth of why she couldn't stay away. When they finally broke apart for air, both of them breathing hard, Lucien looked down at her with a look of possessive clarity that smoothed over the hurt of their parting, leaving only the complicated, burning need for what came next. "Don't ever leave without telling me again," he whispered, his thumb brushing her lip. Rory looked at him, the cool-headed, intelligent woman she was fighting to remain, and for the first time in months, she let herself drop the shield. "I’m not the one who needs to be worried about leaving, Lucien." He smiled then, a small, genuine expression that transformed his face. "Fair enough."
created_at"2026-03-03T23:12:40.033Z" 3/3/2026, 11:12:40 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stepped completely [completely]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.517
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
92.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"resolve"
count1
3
word"sturdy"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"churning"
count1
12
word"magnetic"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"gloom"
2"resolve"
3"sturdy"
4"weight"
5"traced"
6"stark"
7"chill"
8"flicker"
9"tension"
10"silence"
11"churning"
12"magnetic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1322
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1035
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Brick2
Lane2
East1
London2
Moreau1
Marseille1
Lucien5
Cardiff1
Rory7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"East"
3"London"
4"Marseille"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like a gunshot in the cramped hall"
1"looked like an angel carved from granite"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1322
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean45.59
std25.28
cv0.555
sampleLengths
062
131
257
322
485
543
620
791
839
946
1077
1139
1263
138
1463
1513
1671
1759
1813
1947
2021
2130
2244
2343
2463
25107
2614
2738
2813
93.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"were rattled"
1"was slicked"
33.33% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs160
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was tracking"
2"was burning"
3"was fighting"
64.58% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences73
ratio0.027
matches
0"His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and his mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—cut through the gloom to lock onto hers with a predatory precision that made her knees feel entirely too thin."
1"The memories of Cardiff, the fear that had sent her fleeing into the night, the crushing weight of a life built on someone else’s terms—it all surged forward."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1046
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"cramped, spice-scented stairwell"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.030592734225621414
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008604206500956023
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean18.11
std9.49
cv0.524
sampleLengths
017
114
231
317
414
519
63
735
88
914
1032
1114
1239
1323
1420
1513
167
1720
1817
1920
2015
2119
229
238
2422
2533
2613
2716
2810
2917
3034
314
3228
337
3433
3524
366
378
3826
3915
4022
418
425
4315
4428
4528
4622
4711
4826
4913
40.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3013698630136986
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences59
matches
0"She hadn't been expecting anyone,"
1"She set the container down"
2"she called out, her voice"
3"She squeezed her eyes shut"
4"She slid the bolts back,"
5"His charcoal suit was impeccable,"
6"His platinum blond hair was"
7"he said, his voice a"
8"He didn’t wait for an"
9"He walked toward the center"
10"He bypassed a precarious tower"
11"He wasn't looking at the"
12"He was tracking the line"
13"He looked perfectly at home,"
14"He moved closer, the scent"
15"He stopped just past the"
16"she shot back"
17"He reached out, his hand"
18"His touch was burning, a"
19"she whispered, her voice cracking"
ratio0.627
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences59
matches
0"The three deadbolts on Eva’s"
1"Rory froze, the half-eaten container"
2"She hadn't been expecting anyone,"
3"She set the container down"
4"she called out, her voice"
5"The knocking stopped, replaced by"
6"Rory’s breath hitched."
7"She squeezed her eyes shut"
8"She slid the bolts back,"
9"The final movement of the"
10"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
11"His charcoal suit was impeccable,"
12"His platinum blond hair was"
13"he said, his voice a"
14"He didn’t wait for an"
15"Rory shut the door, leaving"
16"He walked toward the center"
17"He bypassed a precarious tower"
18"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, emerged"
19"Lucien offered a thin, amused"
ratio0.966
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"She squeezed her eyes shut for a second, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throbbing with a phantom ache that had nothing to do with injury and e…"
1"His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and his mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—cut through the gloom to lock onto hers with a…"
2"He didn’t wait for an invitation, stepping into the flat with that poised, feline grace that betrayed his demonic lineage."
3"Lucien leaned against a sturdy mahogany table that groaned under the weight of several ancient tomes."
4"The memories of Cardiff, the fear that had sent her fleeing into the night, the crushing weight of a life built on someone else’s terms—it all surged forward."
5"His skin was warm, vibrant with the hidden heat of his heritage, and she felt the static of it creeping up her spine, setting her nerves on edge."
6"Rory’s heartbeat hammered against her ribs, a frantic rhythm that matched the tension coiling between them."
7"It was hungry and desperate, a collision of two people who had been circling each other in the dark for far too long."
8"The flat felt smaller, the books and the scrolls falling away into the periphery as if they were nothing more than props in a play."
9"When they finally broke apart for air, both of them breathing hard, Lucien looked down at her with a look of possessive clarity that smoothed over the hurt of t…"
10"He smiled then, a small, genuine expression that transformed his face."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she called out, her voice tight"
1"Lucien remarked, turning to face her"
2"she whispered, her voice cracking"
3"she said, though the words lacked their usual conviction"
4"he murmured, his breath fanning across her skin"
5"he corrected, his voice a low vibration against her temple"
6"he whispered, his thumb brushing her lip"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"he corrected (correct)"
4"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.276
leniency0.552
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.345
67.1037%