| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1087 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1087 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "velvet" | | 7 | "structure" | | 8 | "fractured" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "crystalline" | | 12 | "crystal" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "chaotic" | | 15 | "desire" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1084 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1084 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.92 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 6 | | Richmond | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Seer | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Dymas | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Dymasian | 1 | | Isolde | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 74.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a ripple in a stagnant pond," | | 1 | "lavender eyes seemingly looking through Ror" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.923 | | wordCount | 1084 | | matches | | 0 | "not a line, but a breath" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 37.38 | | std | 24.99 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 61 | | 12 | 62 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 60 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 67 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 74 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 69 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "She did not walk; she glided, her feet hovering inches above the mossy loam." | | 1 | "A sound echoed through the grove—a melodic, rhythmic thrumming that felt less like music and more like a heartbeat." | | 2 | "She felt the pull—a gravitational drag toward the Dymasian excess, a desire to sink into the warmth and the feast." | | 3 | "It was cold—bitterly, agonizingly cold compared to the sweltering gluttony of the grove." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1089 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "jagged, ink-black contour." |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.020202020202020204 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006427915518824609 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 14.08 | | std | 6.94 | | cv | 0.493 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 37.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.2857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 43.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it vanished into the" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 51.58% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "She hauled the moonsilver blade" | | 1 | "She did not walk; she" | | 2 | "She crouched low, eyes tracking" | | 3 | "Their violet gaze swept the" | | 4 | "It masks the rot beneath" | | 5 | "It looked like a ripple" | | 6 | "She nudged a pebble with" | | 7 | "It didn't clatter." | | 8 | "She rested a hand on" | | 9 | "She turned her head, her" | | 10 | "They pushed deeper into the" | | 11 | "She reached up, touching the" | | 12 | "It vibrated in the marrow" | | 13 | "She drew the moonsilver dagger" | | 14 | "They have teeth." | | 15 | "She landed in a crouch," | | 16 | "She ignored the encroaching darkness," | | 17 | "She felt the environment shifting," | | 18 | "She watched as a puddle" | | 19 | "She jumped back, her heartstone" |
| | ratio | 0.421 | |
| 25.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove" | | 1 | "Rory stepped through the circle" | | 2 | "She hauled the moonsilver blade" | | 3 | "The path does not end" | | 4 | "Isolde stood ten paces ahead," | | 5 | "She did not walk; she" | | 6 | "Rory tightened her grip on" | | 7 | "The heartstone pulsed against her" | | 8 | "She crouched low, eyes tracking" | | 9 | "The roots here are deep," | | 10 | "Nyx solidified, the edges of" | | 11 | "Their violet gaze swept the" | | 12 | "The flowers tracked the movement" | | 13 | "The scent is cloying." | | 14 | "It masks the rot beneath" | | 15 | "Rory nodded, keeping her gaze" | | 16 | "It looked like a ripple" | | 17 | "She nudged a pebble with" | | 18 | "It didn't clatter." | | 19 | "Isolde stopped near a monolith" |
| | ratio | 0.868 | |
| 65.79% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Before the gate closes." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 35.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She hauled the moonsilver blade from her belt, the metal biting into her palm with a frost that numbed her nerves." | | 1 | "Behind her, a canopy of glass-like leaves shimmered with an amber hue that had no source in the sky above." | | 2 | "The heartstone pulsed against her chest, a rhythmic, frantic heat that mirrored the thumping of her own pulse." | | 3 | "She crouched low, eyes tracking the way the shadows stretched in wrong directions, hooking themselves around the bases of trees that bled perfume instead of sap…" | | 4 | "She turned her head, her lavender eyes seemingly looking through Rory rather than at her, tracking the invisible threads of fate that coiled around the girl’s s…" | | 5 | "A sound echoed through the grove—a melodic, rhythmic thrumming that felt less like music and more like a heartbeat." | | 6 | "Rory lunged toward a cluster of oversized, pulsing fungi, using the momentum to vault over a tangle of thorny vines that twitched with reptilian intent." | | 7 | "She jumped back, her heartstone burning against her chest, the sensation of warmth spreading to her fingertips." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |