Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZM8T34P422SE9BBVS2C6T

Run Details

Duration:
13.5s
Cost:
$0.003851
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a metallic screech that echoed down the narrow hallway. Rory pulled the door open, the scent of stale curry and damp paper swirling around her. She expected Eva, perhaps a landlord with a grievance, but the sight of the charcoal suit pressed against the peeling wallpaper drove the air from her lungs. Lucien stood there, his platinum hair caught in the harsh yellow light of the landing bulb. His amber eye held her gaze, steady and sharp, while the black one seemed to swallow the dim light of the hallway. He leaned against his ivory-handled cane, a faint smirk playing on his lips. "The security leaves something to be desired, Aurora. A simple tap would have sufficed." Rory gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles turning white. The small crescent scar on her wrist burned, a phantom ache from the day they had walked away from the wreckage of their last job. She moved to shut the door, but the tip of his cane hooked into the gap, pinning it against the frame. "I didn't invite you here, Lucien. I didn't invite you anywhere." "Etiquette was never our strong suit, was it? Besides, the city has a way of shrinking when certain debts remain unpaid." He stepped past her without waiting for an invitation, his expensive wool coat brushing against her shoulder. The room smelled of ozone and secrets. Ptolemy the cat hissed from atop a stack of precarious, water-damaged scrolls, tail bushed out like a bottle brush. Lucien didn't flinch. He walked into the center of the living area, his eyes sweeping over the clutter—the open journals, the diagrams of shielding spells, the half-eaten container of food Rory had abandoned an hour ago. He stopped before the window that overlooked the rain-slicked chaos of Brick Lane. "You live like a student on the run. It suits you, I suppose." "I like the quiet. Or at least, I did until five seconds ago." Rory trailed him, keeping a deliberate distance. She smoothed her hair, feeling the rough texture of the frayed carpet under her feet. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a rhythmic reminder that she had spent six months trying to scrub the memory of his cologne—sandalwood and expensive tobacco—from her own skin. "Why now, Lucien? The trail went cold in Brussels. I thought you had the sense to move along." He turned, the amber light of his eye catching the glow from the streetlamps. He held a small, leather-bound notebook he had plucked from the table. He fanned the pages, his movements precise, calculated. "Brussels was a distraction. You know that. We both played our parts well enough to keep the others off our scent, but pretending you stopped looking at the occult archives is beneath us both. You’re still digging. And you’re still getting into trouble that requires a specific kind of finesse." "I handle my own problems." "You handle them with all the grace of a sledgehammer." He crossed the distance between them, his stride fluid, almost predatory. He stopped just inside her personal space, close enough that she could see the faint lines of exhaustion etched around his mouth. The air between them thickened, charged with the static of unfinished arguments and the heavy, undeniable pull of history. Rory looked up, forced to meet his gaze. She wanted to shove him, to tell him to vanish back into the shadows of the underworld, but her hand stayed pinned to her side. "You left me in that hotel, Lucien. No note. No word. Just an empty room and a bill marked as paid." He let out a short, sharp laugh that held no mirth. His thumb traced the ivory handle of his cane, his fingers white-knuckled against the polished surface. "I left you safe. Staying would have turned you into a target they could aim at. I am the one with the demon blood, Rory, not you. They wanted the information I carried, and they wanted it through the softest path available. That was you." "I was never the soft path." "No. You were the only thing that made the path worth walking, which made it a liability." He took another step, his presence overwhelming the small room. He reached out, his hand hovering for a second near the thin skin of her wrist before he dropped it back to his side. The restraint was a palpable weight in the room. Rory felt the wall behind her, the peeling paint scratching her palms. She bit the inside of her cheek. "You don't get to decide what I can handle." "I don't. I only decided what I couldn't bear to lose." The silence stretched, filled only by the rhythmic ticking of a clock and the distant siren of a police car wailing through the East End. Rory looked at him—really looked at him—and saw the cracks in the facade, the way he seemed to be holding himself together with sheer, arrogant will. She reached out, her fingers trembling as she brushed the lapel of his charcoal suit. The fabric was cold, stark against the feverish heat radiating from her fingertips. "You look terrible, Lucien." "And you look as though you haven't slept since November." "I have excellent reasons for insomnia." He leaned closer, his scent wrapping around her, drowning out the curry and the damp. He shifted his weight, and for a fleeting moment, the cool, detached persona slipped. He looked at her with a desperation he had spent years perfecting the art of hiding. "We are here, in this cramped, miserable, delightful flat. Neither of us left. Neither of us walked away for good." "That doesn't mean I forgive it." "I don't expect forgiveness. I expect an alliance. Maybe something else, if you’re feeling reckless." Rory let out a breath she hadn’t realized she was holding. She tilted her head, her gaze dropping to the thin, lethal line of the blade hidden within his cane, then back to his heterochromatic stare. The anger was still there, a jagged edge in her gut, but it was blunted by the sheer gravity of his arrival. "reckless isn't a word I use anymore, Lucien. Dangerous is." "Dangerous is precisely where we shine." He tapped the cane on the floor, once, twice. It sounded like a drumbeat. "I have a lead on the Avaros shipment. The one we were interrupted pursuing. If you want to finish it, you need someone who knows the language and someone who doesn't mind bleeding for a result." Rory pushed off the wall. She paced the length of the room, passing Ptolemy, who watched them both with slitted, judgmental eyes. She paused by the window, catching her reflection—tired eyes, pale skin, the look of a woman who had spent months preparing for a confrontation she wasn't sure she wanted to win. "If I say yes, we do this my way. No vanishing acts. No paid bills in the dead of night. We finish the job, and we decide what comes after. If we even survive it." "I never had a problem with your terms, Aurora. I only ever had a problem with the distance." She turned back to face him, the small crescent scar on her wrist pulsing with a dull, frantic rhythm. She walked up to him, stopping inches away, asserting her space in a room he had just violated. "Then sit down. And start explaining exactly how you found out about the shipment." Lucien gestured toward the cramped kitchen table, his expression unreadable, though a shadow of relief flickered through the black of his eye. He pulled out a wooden chair, the legs screeching against the floorboards. "It started in Marseille. My mother’s side of the family had ghosts they wanted put to rest." Rory pulled out the chair opposite him, the wood catching on her sweater. She watched him, waiting for the truth he had been hoarding. "Marseille is a long way to go for a ghost story." "It was the only place they couldn't follow us, or so I thought." He leaned forward, his elbows on the cluttered table, his gaze dropping to her hands. He reached across the debris of research, his fingers hovering momentarily before covering her hand with his own. His skin was unnaturally cool, a stark contrast to the heat blooming across her chest. "I couldn't stay away, Rory. I tried the distance. It only made the world feel small and colorless. Every room I entered, every deal I brokered, felt like a rehearsal for this." "That sounds like a line." "It’s a tragedy. There’s a distinct difference." She didn't pull her hand away. Instead, she turned it over, her skin pale against his tailored sleeve. "Tell me the truth, Lucien. The version that doesn't involve your charming, self-deprecating wit." He looked at her, his expression softening just enough to be dangerous. The amber eye glowed in the low light, reflecting the intensity of the moment. "I found out that they were tracking you through the connections I made in London. The moment I realized my presence was the beacon, I left. I thought if I cut the tie, they would stop hunting you. But they didn't stop. They just changed tactics." Rory leaned into him, the space between them humming with the tension of every word left unsaid over the last six months. "So you didn't just come here to offer me a job." "I came here because I am tired of playing the martyr." He squeezed her hand, a firm, grounding sensation. "I don't want a martyr, Lucien. I want a partner. And if you think you’re going to walk into my life and start making decisions for me again, you are sorely mistaken." "I wouldn't dream of it. I’ve realized it’s far more effective to let you lead and simply ensure you have an exit strategy I’ve vetted." He stood up, his movement graceful, and walked toward the small, makeshift kitchen counter where her electric kettle rested. He moved with a familiarity that made her skin prickle. He started the water, the familiar clicking of the appliance echoing in the room. "Do you still take it with that atrocious amount of honey?" "I take it however I want." Rory stood up and walked over to him, leaning against the counter. She watched him sift through her sparse cupboards, his movements precise and efficient. The anger she had harbored for months felt thin now, like a garment that no longer fit. "Lucien." He turned, the kettle beginning to steam in the silence. "Yes?" "Why are you really in London?" He looked at her, his eyes searching, stripping away the defenses she had built. For a moment, the fixer, the broker, the demon-blooded man ceased to exist, leaving only the man who had abandoned her and the woman who couldn't quite bring herself to hate him. "Because you were the only thing I saw when I closed my eyes, and I hated the darkness of the alternative."
created_at"2026-03-03T23:13:15.088Z" 3/3/2026, 11:13:15 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1844
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1844
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"calculated"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"palpable"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"facade"
count1
11
word"stark"
count2
12
word"fleeting"
count1
13
word"unreadable"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"intensity"
count1
16
word"beacon"
count1
17
word"tension"
count1
18
word"ensure"
count1
19
word"electric"
count1
20
word"familiar"
count1
21
word"echoing"
count1
22
word"efficient"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"rhythmic"
2"reminder"
3"calculated"
4"etched"
5"charged"
6"traced"
7"palpable"
8"weight"
9"silence"
10"facade"
11"stark"
12"fleeting"
13"unreadable"
14"flickered"
15"intensity"
16"beacon"
17"tension"
18"ensure"
19"electric"
20"familiar"
21"echoing"
22"efficient"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1838
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.62% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1124
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Rory12
Brick1
Lane1
East1
End1
Ptolemy2
Lucien3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"East"
3"End"
globalScore0.966
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite bring herself to hate him"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1838
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean26.26
std22.63
cv0.862
sampleLengths
0109
114
257
311
421
592
613
713
851
918
1034
1150
125
1310
1485
1521
1627
1745
186
1917
2062
219
2211
2379
244
2510
266
2745
2820
296
3015
3158
3210
336
3414
3536
3653
3735
3818
3937
4014
4134
4217
4324
4411
4513
4648
4732
485
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"was blunted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs188
matches
0"was holding"
45.18% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences117
ratio0.034
matches
0"He walked into the center of the living area, his eyes sweeping over the clutter—the open journals, the diagrams of shielding spells, the half-eaten container of food Rory had abandoned an hour ago."
1"Her heart hammered against her ribs, a rhythmic reminder that she had spent six months trying to scrub the memory of his cologne—sandalwood and expensive tobacco—from her own skin."
2"Rory looked at him—really looked at him—and saw the cracks in the facade, the way he seemed to be holding himself together with sheer, arrogant will."
3"She paused by the window, catching her reflection—tired eyes, pale skin, the look of a woman who had spent months preparing for a confrontation she wasn't sure she wanted to win."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1137
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"precarious, water-damaged scrolls,"
1"small, leather-bound notebook"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.026385224274406333
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0043975373790677225
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean15.71
std8.99
cv0.572
sampleLengths
015
116
227
316
422
513
614
711
825
921
1011
1121
1217
137
1419
153
1633
1713
1813
1913
207
2115
2229
2318
2414
2512
268
2750
285
2910
3011
3122
3219
338
3425
3521
3611
3716
3845
396
4017
4110
4224
439
4412
457
469
4711
4825
4926
38.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2564102564102564
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners30
46.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Instead, she turned it over,"
ratio0.014
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences72
matches
0"She expected Eva, perhaps a"
1"His amber eye held her"
2"He leaned against his ivory-handled"
3"She moved to shut the"
4"He stepped past her without"
5"He walked into the center"
6"He stopped before the window"
7"She smoothed her hair, feeling"
8"Her heart hammered against her"
9"He turned, the amber light"
10"He held a small, leather-bound"
11"He fanned the pages, his"
12"He crossed the distance between"
13"He stopped just inside her"
14"She wanted to shove him,"
15"He let out a short,"
16"His thumb traced the ivory"
17"He took another step, his"
18"He reached out, his hand"
19"She bit the inside of"
ratio0.625
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences72
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"She expected Eva, perhaps a"
3"Lucien stood there, his platinum"
4"His amber eye held her"
5"He leaned against his ivory-handled"
6"Rory gripped the edge of"
7"The small crescent scar on"
8"She moved to shut the"
9"He stepped past her without"
10"The room smelled of ozone"
11"Ptolemy the cat hissed from"
12"Lucien didn't flinch."
13"He walked into the center"
14"He stopped before the window"
15"Rory trailed him, keeping a"
16"She smoothed her hair, feeling"
17"Her heart hammered against her"
18"He turned, the amber light"
19"He held a small, leather-bound"
ratio0.972
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
59.52% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"He walked into the center of the living area, his eyes sweeping over the clutter—the open journals, the diagrams of shielding spells, the half-eaten container o…"
1"He stopped before the window that overlooked the rain-slicked chaos of Brick Lane."
2"She paused by the window, catching her reflection—tired eyes, pale skin, the look of a woman who had spent months preparing for a confrontation she wasn't sure …"
3"He reached across the debris of research, his fingers hovering momentarily before covering her hand with his own."
4"He moved with a familiarity that made her skin prickle."
5"He looked at her, his eyes searching, stripping away the defenses she had built."
6"For a moment, the fixer, the broker, the demon-blooded man ceased to exist, leaving only the man who had abandoned her and the woman who couldn't quite bring he…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.7435%