Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZNK3BB7MAWPRYJ082KSAN

Run Details

Duration:
3m 31s
Cost:
$0.003769
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swings fully open, and the sharp retort about loud late-night visitors dies on my tongue. I’d been sorting crumpled Golden Empress delivery receipts on the hallway table, the stack teetering beside a half-empty mug of chai with a chipped ceramic handle, when the third knock rattled the frame. I’d fumbled the first two deadbolts, then jammed the third into place, ready to snap at whoever was wasting my time on a Thursday night. Now the person standing on the top Brick Lane stairwell is the last one I ever expected to see. He’s clad in tailored charcoal suit, the fabric crisp enough to cut glass, slicked-back platinum blond hair catching the sodium glow from the corner shop down the road. One amber eye, one black, locks onto mine, and I recognize the ivory-handled cane hooked over his forearm before I register the faint tremor in his hand. It’s been six months since I last saw him, six months since he left me holding a starlight ward that seared the crescent scar into my left wrist, six months since I blocked his number and swore off every part of this supernatural underworld he drags people into. I flex my left hand unconsciously, the faint raised skin prickling under the cuff of my faded Golden Empress hoodie. Ptolemy rubs against my calf, loud chirps breaking the silence, and I kick my foot lightly to move the tabby out of the doorway. The smell of spiced vegetable curry drifts up from the shop below, thick and sweet, wrapping around the edge of the flat where piles of leather-bound tomes and rolled scrolls cover every available surface. “Rory,” he says, his voice low, the soft lilt of Marseille under every word. He shifts his weight, and his cane taps once against the concrete step, the sound sharp in the quiet. I don’t move to let him in. He steps closer, one boot resting on the bottom stair, and I notice the exhaustion under his eyes, the faint smudge of ash on the collar of his suit. His tailored sleeve rides up slightly, showing a thin silver bracelet etched with runes, matching the ones I saw on the hands of the Camden cultists that night. He moves to push the door wider, but his ivory cane catches on the warped floorboard by the step, and he stumbles a little, catching himself on the brick wall of the stairwell. The tremor in his hand is more obvious now, and I haven’t seen him unsteady since the day his mother died, back when he first told me about his demon father. “I know this is out of line,” he says, straightening up. He reaches into his suit pocket, pulls out a folded slip of paper, and holds it out to me. I don’t take it. “I tried every other contact in the supernatural circuit. You’re the only one who knows how to work Eva’s starlight ward research.” He nods past me, to the stacks of blue notebooks on the coffee table, the pages covered in Eva’s scrawled blue ink, the margins filled with doodles of Ptolemy curled up in teacups. “She’s at her sister’s in Cardiff. Won’t be back till tomorrow morning.” “I’m not your go-to problem-solver anymore, Moreau,” I say, my voice tighter than I intend it to be. I haven’t spoken his last name since that night in Camden, when I stormed away and left him standing in the middle of the Camden market, covered in ward ash and my half-burned hand towel. He lets out a quiet breath, and the bag under his eyes darkens. “I know you’re angry. I didn’t tell you about the ward because I knew you’d say no. I didn’t think it would bond to your skin, leave that scar. I’m sorry.” I snort, but my throat feels tight. “Sorry doesn’t un-sear my wrist, Luc.” The nickname slips out before I can stop it, the same one Eva uses when she’s teasing me about my obsession with cutting delivery times down to the minute. He nods, like he expected the nickname, like it’s a crack in the wall I’ve built around myself. He reaches into his other suit pocket, pulls out a small leather pouch, and sets it on the windowsill beside my chai mug. The metal inside clinks softly, and when he steps back, I see the faint glow of runes stamped into the dark brown leather. “Thieves took the Avaros core,” he says, his voice dropping so low I barely hear it over the distant chatter of late-night kebab shop patrons down the road. “They’re using it to track everyone who worked the Camden job. If they find me, they’ll find every contact I’ve ever had. Including you. Including Eva.” I stare at the pouch, then at the crescent scar on my wrist, then back at his heterochromatic eyes. The starlight ward that burned me was tied directly to that Avaros core. If they’re tracking people who touched it, I’m next too. I’d spent three weeks hiding out in Eva’s flat, avoiding every phone call and every knock on the door, because I didn’t want to get dragged back into this. But now the threat is sitting on my friend’s stairwell, looking like he hasn’t slept in a week, and I can’t just walk away from it. I step back from the door, holding it open wider, and Ptolemy darted around my legs, rubbing against Lucien’s calf. He pauses, tilting his head, and Lucien’s lips twitch into a faint smile, the first one I’ve seen in six months. It’s tight, uncomfortable, like he hasn’t smiled in just as long. “Fine,” I say, shutting the door behind him and shooting the three deadbolts home with sharp, quick clicks. “But you buy the chai. And you explain every single part of this, no lies. No omissions. No keeping secrets about wards that burn people.” He nods, and I start to turn toward the main room, where the stack of Eva’s research notebooks sits beside the empty delivery receipt stack, when a loud crash echoes from the back of the flat, followed by a low, guttural growl that’s nothing like anything I’ve ever heard. The overhead light flickers once, then goes dark, and the only light left is the faint, pulsing glow from the rune pouch on the windowsill.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.636
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1060
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1060
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"lilt"
2"weight"
3"etched"
4"echoes"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences41
matches(empty)
38.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences41
filterMatches
0"notice"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"start to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences45
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1060
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount917
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Camden"
discoveredNames
Golden2
Empress2
Thursday1
Brick1
Lane1
Marseille1
Camden3
Eva4
Ptolemy3
Avaros1
Lucien2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1060
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
75.68% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean66.25
std27.49
cv0.415
sampleLengths
017
177
2103
378
440
5121
6101
753
844
942
1064
1154
1297
1352
1443
1574
88.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences41
matches
0"was tied"
1"get dragged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs148
matches
0"was wasting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount924
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03463203463203463
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008658008658008658
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences45
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences45
mean23.56
std10.72
cv0.455
sampleLengths
017
133
225
319
428
527
648
720
824
934
1014
1119
127
1329
1428
1533
1631
1711
1819
194
2055
2112
2218
2335
2413
2531
267
2735
2818
2923
3023
3128
3226
3319
3413
3510
3629
3726
3820
3921
4011
4118
4225
4349
4425
48.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.35555555555555557
totalSentences45
uniqueOpeners16
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences41
matches
0"I’d been sorting crumpled Golden"
1"I’d fumbled the first two"
2"He’s clad in tailored charcoal"
3"It’s been six months since"
4"I flex my left hand"
5"he says, his voice low,"
6"He shifts his weight, and"
7"I don’t move to let"
8"He steps closer, one boot"
9"His tailored sleeve rides up"
10"He moves to push the"
11"he says, straightening up"
12"He reaches into his suit"
13"I don’t take it."
14"He nods past me, to"
15"I say, my voice tighter"
16"I haven’t spoken his last"
17"He lets out a quiet"
18"I snort, but my throat"
19"He nods, like he expected"
ratio0.707
8.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences41
matches
0"The door swings fully open,"
1"I’d been sorting crumpled Golden"
2"I’d fumbled the first two"
3"He’s clad in tailored charcoal"
4"It’s been six months since"
5"I flex my left hand"
6"Ptolemy rubs against my calf,"
7"The smell of spiced vegetable"
8"he says, his voice low,"
9"He shifts his weight, and"
10"I don’t move to let"
11"He steps closer, one boot"
12"His tailored sleeve rides up"
13"He moves to push the"
14"The tremor in his hand"
15"he says, straightening up"
16"He reaches into his suit"
17"I don’t take it."
18"He nods past me, to"
19"I say, my voice tighter"
ratio0.902
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences41
matches
0"Now the person standing on"
1"If they’re tracking people who"
ratio0.049
27.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"It’s been six months since I last saw him, six months since he left me holding a starlight ward that seared the crescent scar into my left wrist, six months sin…"
1"If they’re tracking people who touched it, I’m next too."
2"But now the threat is sitting on my friend’s stairwell, looking like he hasn’t slept in a week, and I can’t just walk away from it."
3"I step back from the door, holding it open wider, and Ptolemy darted around my legs, rubbing against Lucien’s calf."
4"He nods, and I start to turn toward the main room, where the stack of Eva’s research notebooks sits beside the empty delivery receipt stack, when a loud crash e…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"I say, my voice tighter than I intend it to be"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.0855%