Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZNV8DWDE1WNVGP5CXHNZ9

Run Details

Duration:
7.0s
Cost:
$0.002484
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The triple deadbolt slid back with a series of metallic clacks, each snap echoing through the narrow hallway of the Brick Lane flat. The door groaned on burdened hinges, revealing Rory. She stood with a half-empty mug of tea in one hand, her black hair tangled from a restless night of sleep that had not come. When her gaze fell upon the man standing in the threshold, her fingers tightened around the ceramic until her knuckles turned a stark, bloodless white. Lucien leaned against the doorframe, his charcoal coat pristine, untouched by the biting London wind. One amber eye tracked the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, while the other—the abyss of black—searched her face for a reason to stay or leave. His ivory-handled cane rested against his forearm like a dormant viper. Your definition of unannounced needs adjustment, Lucien. She stepped back, leaving the door wide to the drafty corridor. Ptolemy, the ginger tabby, wove between her ankles, his motor-like purr vibrating through the floorboards as he rubbed his chin against the Frenchman’s polished leather oxfords. The city is loud tonight, Rory. My office felt too small. He didn't wait for an invite. He stepped inside, the sharp, metallic scent of cold rain and expensive sandalwood filling the cramped space. He moved through the maze of discarded notes and leather-bound occult texts with an ease that bordered on insolence. He reached out, his gloved fingers skimming the spine of an open scroll on the small kitchen table, before he turned to face her. The amber eye caught the light, gleaming with an intensity that burned. You have a nerve, turning up here after Cardiff. After I spent months convincing myself the silence was a mercy. She set the tea mug down on a stack of research papers, the liquid sloshing over the brim and staining the edges of a parchment map. She didn't bother to wipe it. The hurt, sharp and jagged, pricked at her chest. She remembered the way he looked at her back then, the way his hand had felt against the small of her back in the dim light of his study, promising things they both knew he couldn't keep. Silence is a tool, not a mercy. You grew up in law, Aurora. You know the difference between an honest admission and a strategic exit. He stopped, barely an arm's length away. His height felt oppressive in the dim room, the air suddenly thin and charged with the static of unspoken grievances. He adjusted his cuff, the diamond-tipped cane shifting slightly in his grasp. The sight of his hands, long and elegant yet capable of the violence he kept folded away, sent a familiar shiver down her spine that she immediately braced against. I didn't leave because of strategy. I left because you were folding me into your shadow, and I forgot what it was like to stand in the sun. She turned away, burying her hands in the pockets of her worn hoodie. She paced the small stretch of floor, the weight of his presence cataloging every corner of her temporary refuge. He watched her back, his stillness a direct contrast to her frantic energy. He looked at the books, the scattered pens, the evidence of her life without him. The sun doesn't suit you, Rory. You thrive in the twilight. You always have. He took a step forward, the floorboard beneath him creaking. It wasn't the sound of a threat, but an invitation. A bridge laid over the chasm of their history. He looked at her reflection in the darkened window, the city lights below casting a distorted, neon glow across her shoulders. I’m tired of thriving. I’m tired of reading your tea leaves and wondering if the next knock at this door is you coming to offer a contract or an apology. He moved then, swift and sure, closing the distance until the heat radiating from him pressed against her skin. He didn't touch her, but his shadow eclipsed hers, grounding her in the space. He smelled of rain and iron, a sensory echo of every argument and every stolen moment they had shared in his study, beneath the heavy velvet curtains that muted the world. I don't apologise for who I am. I only regret that you had to find out in such a clumsy fashion. He reached out, his hand hovering inches from her shoulder. The hesitation was uncharacteristic, a crack in his composure that made her breath hitch. She turned, meeting his stare—the amber and the black—and for a second, the years of anger vanished into the space between them. She reached out, her fingers grazing the fabric of his lapel, checking the reality of him. It was solid. It was him. Clumsy doesn't begin to cover it. You broke things, Lucien. Things I hadn't even named yet. He brought his hand up, cupping her jaw with a thumb that traced the line of her cheekbone. His touch was cool, a sharp contrast to the feverish heat rising in her blood. He tilted her face upward, forcing her to look at nothing but him. The books, the maps, the life she had tried to build to replace him—it all fell away. Then let me help you put the pieces back in a different order. He moved closer, his lips brushing the shell of her ear. The whisper sent a jolt of recognition through her, an electric tether that had never truly been severed. She didn't pull away. She leaned into the touch, her resolve liquefying like wax near a flame. The history between them wasn't a weight anymore; it was a gravity, pulling them into each other's orbit once more. You have a habit of making promises you don't keep. Why should I believe that this isn't just another negotiation? He pulled back just enough so she could see the genuine frustration in his features, the struggle behind his gaze. He wasn't playing a role now, he was just a man caught between his own nature and the woman who held the only key to his steadying. He let the cane drop to the floor with a dull thud, both hands coming up to frame her face, his thumbs pressing against the damp skin beneath her eyes. Because I’m here without my armor. Because I didn’t bring the blade. Look around you, Rory. I am entirely at your mercy. She looked at his hands, then up to the dark, bottomless iris of his left eye. She knew the danger. She knew the scars he left behind were rarely skin-deep. But when he tilted his head, a ghost of a smile tugging at the corner of a mouth that had tasted all the secrets of her soul, she felt the barrier break. She leaned forward, the final inch of space closing, and caught his bottom lip between her teeth, an act of silent defiance and desperate hunger. Everything else—the law, her past, the city outside—ceased to exist. There was only the pull, the ache, and the man who should have been her undoing.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
87.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"intensity"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"oppressive"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"echo"
count1
13
word"velvet"
count1
14
word"traced"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"electric"
count1
17
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"stark"
2"pristine"
3"gleaming"
4"intensity"
5"silence"
6"oppressive"
7"charged"
8"unspoken"
9"familiar"
10"down her spine"
11"weight"
12"echo"
13"velvet"
14"traced"
15"whisper"
16"electric"
17"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
92.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"begin to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1182
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1182
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Rory4
London1
Lucien3
Frenchman1
Cardiff1
Aurora1
You7
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Frenchman"
3"You"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1182
matches(empty)
88.24% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"regret that you"
1"believe that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean45.46
std27.98
cv0.616
sampleLengths
081
152
27
337
411
578
620
778
825
968
1028
1160
1214
1350
1430
1564
1621
1768
1816
1963
2013
2166
2220
2377
2422
25113
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"been severed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs192
matches
0"were folding"
1"wasn't playing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences85
ratio0.059
matches
0"One amber eye tracked the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, while the other—the abyss of black—searched her face for a reason to stay or leave."
1"She turned, meeting his stare—the amber and the black—and for a second, the years of anger vanished into the space between them."
2"The books, the maps, the life she had tried to build to replace him—it all fell away."
3"The history between them wasn't a weight anymore; it was a gravity, pulling them into each other's orbit once more."
4"Everything else—the law, her past, the city outside—ceased to exist."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1195
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03430962343096234
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008368200836820083
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean13.91
std8.07
cv0.58
sampleLengths
023
18
225
325
415
526
611
77
811
926
106
115
126
1317
1419
1524
1612
179
1811
1926
206
219
2237
237
246
2512
267
2720
2812
2929
306
3122
3213
3319
3413
3515
366
375
383
3910
4010
419
4221
434
4426
4519
4614
4731
487
4914
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.29411764705882354
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners25
39.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then let me help you"
ratio0.012
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences85
matches
0"She stood with a half-empty"
1"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
2"Your definition of unannounced needs"
3"She stepped back, leaving the"
4"My office felt too small."
5"He didn't wait for an"
6"He stepped inside, the sharp,"
7"He moved through the maze"
8"He reached out, his gloved"
9"You have a nerve, turning"
10"She set the tea mug"
11"She didn't bother to wipe"
12"She remembered the way he"
13"You grew up in law,"
14"You know the difference between"
15"He stopped, barely an arm's"
16"His height felt oppressive in"
17"He adjusted his cuff, the"
18"I didn't leave because of"
19"I left because you were"
ratio0.671
24.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences85
matches
0"The triple deadbolt slid back"
1"The door groaned on burdened"
2"She stood with a half-empty"
3"Lucien leaned against the doorframe,"
4"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
5"Your definition of unannounced needs"
6"She stepped back, leaving the"
7"Ptolemy, the ginger tabby, wove"
8"The city is loud tonight,"
9"My office felt too small."
10"He didn't wait for an"
11"He stepped inside, the sharp,"
12"He moved through the maze"
13"He reached out, his gloved"
14"The amber eye caught the"
15"You have a nerve, turning"
16"She set the tea mug"
17"She didn't bother to wipe"
18"The hurt, sharp and jagged,"
19"She remembered the way he"
ratio0.871
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Because I’m here without my"
1"Because I didn’t bring the"
ratio0.024
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She stood with a half-empty mug of tea in one hand, her black hair tangled from a restless night of sleep that had not come."
1"He moved through the maze of discarded notes and leather-bound occult texts with an ease that bordered on insolence."
2"The hesitation was uncharacteristic, a crack in his composure that made her breath hitch."
3"She reached out, her fingers grazing the fabric of his lapel, checking the reality of him."
4"He brought his hand up, cupping her jaw with a thumb that traced the line of her cheekbone."
5"He wasn't playing a role now, he was just a man caught between his own nature and the woman who held the only key to his steadying."
6"He let the cane drop to the floor with a dull thud, both hands coming up to frame her face, his thumbs pressing against the damp skin beneath her eyes."
7"But when he tilted his head, a ghost of a smile tugging at the corner of a mouth that had tasted all the secrets of her soul, she felt the barrier break."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.2563%