| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 87.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1189 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.90% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1189 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "stark" | | 2 | "pristine" | | 3 | "gleaming" | | 4 | "intensity" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "charged" | | 8 | "unspoken" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "down her spine" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "echo" | | 13 | "velvet" | | 14 | "traced" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "electric" | | 17 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1182 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1182 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.59 | | worstName | "You" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "You" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Rory | 4 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 3 | | Frenchman | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | You | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Frenchman" | | 3 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1182 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.24% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "regret that you" | | 1 | "believe that this" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 45.46 | | std | 27.98 | | cv | 0.616 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 78 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 78 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 68 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 64 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 68 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 63 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 66 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 77 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 113 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "were folding" | | 1 | "wasn't playing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "One amber eye tracked the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, while the other—the abyss of black—searched her face for a reason to stay or leave." | | 1 | "She turned, meeting his stare—the amber and the black—and for a second, the years of anger vanished into the space between them." | | 2 | "The books, the maps, the life she had tried to build to replace him—it all fell away." | | 3 | "The history between them wasn't a weight anymore; it was a gravity, pulling them into each other's orbit once more." | | 4 | "Everything else—the law, her past, the city outside—ceased to exist." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1195 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.03430962343096234 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008368200836820083 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 13.91 | | std | 8.07 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 25.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.29411764705882354 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 39.22% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood with a half-empty" | | 1 | "His ivory-handled cane rested against" | | 2 | "Your definition of unannounced needs" | | 3 | "She stepped back, leaving the" | | 4 | "My office felt too small." | | 5 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 6 | "He stepped inside, the sharp," | | 7 | "He moved through the maze" | | 8 | "He reached out, his gloved" | | 9 | "You have a nerve, turning" | | 10 | "She set the tea mug" | | 11 | "She didn't bother to wipe" | | 12 | "She remembered the way he" | | 13 | "You grew up in law," | | 14 | "You know the difference between" | | 15 | "He stopped, barely an arm's" | | 16 | "His height felt oppressive in" | | 17 | "He adjusted his cuff, the" | | 18 | "I didn't leave because of" | | 19 | "I left because you were" |
| | ratio | 0.671 | |
| 24.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The triple deadbolt slid back" | | 1 | "The door groaned on burdened" | | 2 | "She stood with a half-empty" | | 3 | "Lucien leaned against the doorframe," | | 4 | "His ivory-handled cane rested against" | | 5 | "Your definition of unannounced needs" | | 6 | "She stepped back, leaving the" | | 7 | "Ptolemy, the ginger tabby, wove" | | 8 | "The city is loud tonight," | | 9 | "My office felt too small." | | 10 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 11 | "He stepped inside, the sharp," | | 12 | "He moved through the maze" | | 13 | "He reached out, his gloved" | | 14 | "The amber eye caught the" | | 15 | "You have a nerve, turning" | | 16 | "She set the tea mug" | | 17 | "She didn't bother to wipe" | | 18 | "The hurt, sharp and jagged," | | 19 | "She remembered the way he" |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Because I’m here without my" | | 1 | "Because I didn’t bring the" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood with a half-empty mug of tea in one hand, her black hair tangled from a restless night of sleep that had not come." | | 1 | "He moved through the maze of discarded notes and leather-bound occult texts with an ease that bordered on insolence." | | 2 | "The hesitation was uncharacteristic, a crack in his composure that made her breath hitch." | | 3 | "She reached out, her fingers grazing the fabric of his lapel, checking the reality of him." | | 4 | "He brought his hand up, cupping her jaw with a thumb that traced the line of her cheekbone." | | 5 | "He wasn't playing a role now, he was just a man caught between his own nature and the woman who held the only key to his steadying." | | 6 | "He let the cane drop to the floor with a dull thud, both hands coming up to frame her face, his thumbs pressing against the damp skin beneath her eyes." | | 7 | "But when he tilted his head, a ghost of a smile tugging at the corner of a mouth that had tasted all the secrets of her soul, she felt the barrier break." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |