Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZNXFVZ5JQ1ATBZK6EP56H

Run Details

Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.002491
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed, casting a sickly pallor over the Soho pavement. Rain slicked the street, turning the cobblestones into mirrors for the city’s restless lights. Inside, the air hung heavy with the scent of spilled stout and damp wool. Rory adjusted the motorcycle jacket across her shoulders, her fingers tracing the crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit that sharpened whenever she passed through the threshold. Silas stood behind the mahogany bar, polishing a highball glass with rhythmic, practiced friction. He moved with a subtle hitch in his left leg, the knee buckling almost imperceptibly as he pivoted to stow the glassware. His silver signet ring caught the dim amber light of the pendant lamps, glinting like a promise kept in the shadows. He didn't look up when the heavy oak door creaked open, but his shoulders squared, the posture of a man who tracked every breath in the room. Rory approached the counter, the floorboards groaning under her boots. She shed her helmet, shaking out her damp, shoulder-length black hair. The room felt smaller than she remembered, the maps on the walls yellowed with age, the old photographs of nameless agents watching her from the periphery. A shadow detached itself from a corner booth near the bookshelf. It moved with an elegance that felt misplaced among the grime of a London dive bar. The woman stopped in the center of the room, her coat expensive, her posture brittle. "Rory?" The voice carried the crystalline sharpness of a glass shattering. Rory froze mid-step, her hand straying to the edge of the bar for stability. The woman was Eva. Or at least, it was the woman who had once been Eva. The girl Rory had left behind in Cardiff was gone, buried under layers of sharp tailoring and a face that looked as though it had been carved from marble. The vulnerability that once defined their shared teenage years had evaporated, replaced by a cold, calculating stillness. "It’s been a long time, Eva." Eva stepped forward. Her heels made no sound on the wood. She studied Rory with eyes that seemed to count her pulses, noting the scuff marks on her leather jacket, the faint bruise darkening along her temple. "You look like you're playing courier for a life you haven't earned yet," Eva said, her tone devoid of warmth. She curled a hand around the stool next to Rory, the leather of her glove creaking. "Still hiding in the fringes of Soho?" "I’m working. It pays the bills." "It hides the past. There's a difference." Silas slid a pint of lukewarm lager toward Rory, his hazel eyes flickering between the two women. He recognized the friction, the magnetic pull of two worlds colliding in his sanctuary. He didn't offer a pleasantry. He simply pulled back into the shadows of the back room, leaving them to the silence of the bar. Rory gripped her glass, the condensation chilling her palm. "I didn't think I'd see you outside of my nightmares, let alone here." Eva leaned in, the scent of expensive perfume cutting through the bar’s stale brew. She looked down at Rory's wrist, her gaze lingering on the crescent scar for a fraction of a second too long. "Nightmares imply you're still afraid, Rory. Tell me you finally grew a spine somewhere between legal briefs and whatever this is." "I left Evan. That took more spine than you ever showed in Cardiff." Eva let out a sharp, jagged laugh. It wasn't intended for the room, but for the history hung between them like a shroud. She plucked a cigarette from a silver case but didn't light it. She just rolled the white paper between her thumb and forefinger, the movement hypnotic. "You think leaving him was the victory? You spent four years running. You crossed the country, changed your name, started riding a bike for a takeaway joint. You’re not free. You’re just a ghost who forgot to stop haunting the living." "I don't need a lecture on autonomy from someone who sold hers to the highest bidder in the city." Rory watched Eva’s eyes. They were bright, hard, and utterly empty. The girl who had once whispered about escape plans in the back of the campus library had been replaced by a woman who spoke as if she owned the streets she walked upon. The weight of the years sat heavy on the bar. Every unspoken regret, every letter left unanswered, every night spent awake in a flat that smelled of damp and failure—it all coalesced in the space between their stools. "I didn't have a choice back then," Eva said, her voice dropping to a low, serrated edge. "You left me to face the fallout of our little exit. You think I’m the one who changed? I had to become this to keep breathing." "You chose the life, Eva. Don't frame it as survival." "Survival is a luxury you never appreciated." Eva reached out, her gloved fingers trembling just enough to betray the composed exterior. She touched the edge of Rory's sleeve, pulling it back to reveal the scar in full. The skin felt cold beneath the fabric. "Look at us," Eva murmured. "Two children who thought the world would wait for them to decide who they wanted to be." "The world didn't wait. It just kept moving." Rory pulled her arm away, the motion abrupt. She downed the rest of her drink in one long, bitter swallow. The warmth of the alcohol did nothing to settle the ache in her chest. She had come here to disappear, to vanish into the rhythm of the city and the anonymity of the delivery route, but the past had a way of seeking out the cracks in her resolve. "Are you going to stay?" "I'm passing through," Eva said, straightening her coat. She peered toward the back room, catching a glimpse of Silas’ silhouette in the doorway. She seemed to weigh the cost of staying against the urge to flee. "Though I suppose there's nothing left for me to reclaim here. I’m just visiting a cemetery." "The dead don't like visitors who look like they’ve come to dig." "Then it’s a good thing I never cared for the dead." Eva turned toward the exit, her steps measured and precise. She didn't look back as she pushed through the heavy door, the green neon light bleeding into the interior as the night air rushed in to meet them. The door clicked shut, the sound final and hollow. Rory leaned her head against the cool wood of the bar. Silas limped out of the shadows, his presence a steady anchor in the sudden quiet. He didn't speak. He simply picked up the empty glass and began to wipe it down, the motion precise and unhurried. Outside, the city continued its relentless, mechanical churn, unbothered by the ghosts left behind in the rain.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.217
leniency0.435
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1158
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1158
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"crystalline"
count1
4
word"marble"
count1
5
word"calculating"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"magnetic"
count1
8
word"sanctuary"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"chilling"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"resolve"
count1
14
word"measured"
count1
15
word"mechanical"
count1
16
word"churn"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"rhythmic"
2"glinting"
3"crystalline"
4"marble"
5"calculating"
6"warmth"
7"magnetic"
8"sanctuary"
9"silence"
10"chilling"
11"weight"
12"unspoken"
13"resolve"
14"measured"
15"mechanical"
16"churn"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
72.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1157
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount880
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
London1
Eva12
Rory13
Cardiff1
Silas3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.761
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"eyes that seemed to count her pulses, noting the scuff marks on her leather jacket, the faint bruise darkening along her temple"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1157
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean34.03
std24.71
cv0.726
sampleLengths
074
184
247
342
41
586
66
737
843
96
107
1155
1222
1335
1421
1513
1649
1741
1819
1982
2043
2110
227
2337
2422
258
2669
275
2852
2912
3011
3147
3247
3317
93.76% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"was gone"
1"been carved"
2"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences80
ratio0.013
matches
0"Every unspoken regret, every letter left unanswered, every night spent awake in a flat that smelled of damp and failure—it all coalesced in the space between their stools."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount792
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.022727272727272728
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005050505050505051
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean14.46
std7.87
cv0.544
sampleLengths
017
114
214
329
414
522
621
727
810
911
1026
1111
1216
1315
141
1510
1614
174
1812
1929
2017
216
223
238
2426
2520
2616
277
286
297
3017
3114
325
3319
349
3513
3614
3721
3821
3913
407
4116
4212
4314
4441
4519
464
477
4833
4910
44.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.325
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences60
matches
0"He moved with a subtle"
1"His silver signet ring caught"
2"He didn't look up when"
3"She shed her helmet, shaking"
4"It moved with an elegance"
5"Her heels made no sound"
6"She studied Rory with eyes"
7"She curled a hand around"
8"He recognized the friction, the"
9"He didn't offer a pleasantry."
10"He simply pulled back into"
11"She looked down at Rory's"
12"It wasn't intended for the"
13"She plucked a cigarette from"
14"She just rolled the white"
15"They were bright, hard, and"
16"She touched the edge of"
17"She downed the rest of"
18"She had come here to"
19"She peered toward the back"
ratio0.4
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences60
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rain slicked the street, turning"
2"Rory adjusted the motorcycle jacket"
3"Silas stood behind the mahogany"
4"He moved with a subtle"
5"His silver signet ring caught"
6"He didn't look up when"
7"Rory approached the counter, the"
8"She shed her helmet, shaking"
9"The room felt smaller than"
10"A shadow detached itself from"
11"It moved with an elegance"
12"The woman stopped in the"
13"The voice carried the crystalline"
14"Rory froze mid-step, her hand"
15"The woman was Eva."
16"The girl Rory had left"
17"The vulnerability that once defined"
18"Eva stepped forward."
19"Her heels made no sound"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory adjusted the motorcycle jacket across her shoulders, her fingers tracing the crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit that sharpened whenever she p…"
1"The girl Rory had left behind in Cardiff was gone, buried under layers of sharp tailoring and a face that looked as though it had been carved from marble."
2"She studied Rory with eyes that seemed to count her pulses, noting the scuff marks on her leather jacket, the faint bruise darkening along her temple."
3"Every unspoken regret, every letter left unanswered, every night spent awake in a flat that smelled of damp and failure—it all coalesced in the space between th…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva said, her tone devoid of warmth"
1"Eva said, her voice dropping to a low, serrated edge"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.087
77.7692%