Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZVZ35MCANWATTWEZSNQQG

Run Details

Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.002602
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped through the gap between two gnarled oaks, the air shifting from the damp chill of a London November to a thick, honey-heavy warmth. The standing stones hummed, a low-frequency vibration that rattled her teeth. Moonlight pierced the canopy here, not with the hazy glow of city lamps, but with the sharp, silver clarity of a blade. She adjusted the strap of her bag, her palm brushing the crescent scar on her wrist. The silence of the Fae Grove stretched out, unnatural and absolute, devoid of the cricket chirps or rustling wind that should have defined a park at night. "I know you're here. The stone didn't pulse for nothing." Her voice fell flat, sucked into the dense carpet of wildflowers that pulsed with a faint, bioluminescent rhythm. The Heartstone pendant nestled against her collarbone, warm enough to sear, the metal chain biting into her skin like a brand. She scanned the perimeter. The ancient oaks twisted in impossible loops, their trunks oozing a thick, viscous sap that smelled of iron and rot. She took a step forward, the grass crunching like dried marrow under her boots. A shadow detached itself from the base of a lichen-covered monolith, fluid and jagged. It didn't belong to any tree. It twitched, limbs elongating, before snapping back into the dense darkness of the brush. Rory gripped the silver chain, pulling the crimson gem into the light. It threw a sanguine reflection across the clover, casting long, distorted shadows that danced independent of her movements. "Stop playing with the light. I’m not here for games." Rory pivoted, eyes scanning the periphery as a sound echoed—a wet, slithering noise, like a lung struggling to breathe through fluid. Something shifted behind her shoulder. She whirled, her back hitting the cold, rough flank of a boundary stone. The stone felt soft, yielding like flesh under her jacket, and she recoiled, heart hammering against her ribs. She stared at the rock. A faint, rhythmic throbbing moved beneath the grey surface, matching the cadence of her own pulse. "You led me here, so show yourself." No answer came, only the sudden, sharp scent of ozone. The grove felt tighter, the clearing shrinking as if the trees were inching closer while she exhaled. She drew her phone from her pocket, the screen dead, a reflection of the panicked expression on her face. A sharp, rhythmic tapping started—a high-pitched clicking, like fingernails on skull bone, coming from everywhere at once. It moved in a spiral, tightening toward the center where she stood. She pulled a lighter from her pocket, desperate for a spark, but the flame refused to catch, the wick sputtering in the thick, charged air. Something groaned, a sound that bypassed her ears and manifested as a pressure inside her skull. The wildflowers began to wilt, blackening into ash before her eyes, curling into delicate, skeletal remains in the span of a heart cycle. She knelt, checking the grass, but her hand passed through a shimmering, translucent membrane that stretched just above the soil. "You’re hiding. You think this helps?" A twig snapped, loud as a gavel strike, directly behind her ear. Rory didn't turn. She stood, muscles coiled, watching the edge of the grove where the trees began to bleed shadow. A figure stood in the distance, or perhaps it was a constellation of limbs draped in rags of mist. It possessed no face, only a vertical seam that vibrated with that same, nauseating low-frequency hum. It stepped forward and the ground buckled, dirt rising to meet its weight without leaving a mark. She pulled the Heartstone out, the gem glowing with a violent, frantic intensity. The creature recoiled, its form stuttering like a damaged film reel. The clicking sound escalated into a cacophony of chattering teeth. She backpedaled, her heel catching on a root, and she sprawled backward into the dirt. "Keep pushing. See what happens when the stone breaks." She held the pendant aloft, the chain taut. The creature surged, a blur of elongated reach and shifting geometry, stopping inches from her face. No breath hit her, only a sudden, plunging drop in temperature that turned her exhaled air into a dense, white fog. Up close, the thing reeked of ancient, stagnant water. It tilted its head, the vertical seam parting to reveal a void of absolute, terrifying nothingness. Rory stared into the maw, seeing her own reflections mirrored in the periphery of its emptiness—a hundred versions of herself, some crying, some screaming, all trapped within the shifting layers of its throat. She pressed the pendant into the void. White-hot energy flared, smelling of ionized copper. The creature shrieked, a sound not of this world, a glass-shattering dissonance that made her vision swim with crimson spots. She scrambled backward, her hands scraping against the stones. The grove started to fold, the ceiling of branches reaching down like grasping fingers, stitching themselves together into a solid, impenetrable web. She stood, chest heaving, the Heartstone dimming to a dull, bruised color. The clicking stopped. The silence resumed, even heavier than before, suffocating in its intensity. "Still there? Come out and finish it." A faint rustle came from the left, then the right—a synchronized movement that suggested a pack, not a singular shadow. A trail of black sap began to snake across the clearing, carving runes into the soil that glowed with a faint, sickly violet hue. They were surrounding her, the trees and the shadows and the very air conspiring to box her into a corner of the grove that hadn't existed a minute ago. She looked up. The sky was gone, replaced by a swirling vortex of ash and dark velvet. She felt a cold, phantom hand trace the line of her throat, light as a feather, cold as a tomb. She swiped at it, skin meeting cold, resistant air. The laughter started—not a sound, but a vibration that rattled her marrow. It was the sound of her childhood, the sound of an Irish rainstorm, the sound of the front door of her flat slamming shut. They were using her memories as weapons, sewing them into the fabric of the grove. "Use whatever voice you want. It won’t make me walk into that edge." She backed toward the standing stones, the only landmarks she recognized, the only anchors to the world she understood. The stones were humming in harmony now, a high, piercing note that made her vision spark with flares of blue. The creature was closer, its oily shadow staining her boots, the air thick with the taste of copper and burnt hair. She reached for the stone once more, but her hand felt heavy, rooted to the spot by an unseen, crushing gravity. The pendant flickered, the light dimming to a pinprick, struggling against the encroaching dark. She watched the black sap pool around her feet, rising like a tide, warm and viscous. It felt like living tar, pulling at her boots, anchoring her to the cursed earth. The creature parted the trees and stepped fully into the light, its height distorting, limbs fracturing and reforming into a jagged, impossible silhouette that filled her entire field of vision. It didn't strike. It waited, the vertical seam pulsing in time with the dying Heartstone. "Fine. Let's see what you want."
created_at"2026-03-03T23:17:27.281Z" 3/3/2026, 11:17:27 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1220
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1220
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count2
9
word"charged"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count2
13
word"cacophony"
count1
14
word"maw"
count1
15
word"synchronized"
count1
16
word"velvet"
count1
17
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"pulse"
4"pulsed"
5"scanned"
6"scanning"
7"echoed"
8"rhythmic"
9"charged"
10"vibrated"
11"weight"
12"intensity"
13"cacophony"
14"maw"
15"synchronized"
16"velvet"
17"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
65.64% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1215
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount1147
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
November1
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone4
Irish1
Rory5
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like living tar, pulling at her bo"
35.39% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.646
wordCount1215
matches
0"not with the hazy glow of city lamps, but with the sharp, silver clarity of a blade"
1"not a sound, but a vibration"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean52.83
std34.08
cv0.645
sampleLengths
0101
110
263
378
410
578
67
775
884
96
1084
1149
129
1370
1467
1557
167
1790
1880
1913
2081
2190
226
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"was gone"
55.86% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs185
matches
0"were inching"
1"were surrounding"
2"were using"
3"were humming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences82
ratio0.061
matches
0"Rory pivoted, eyes scanning the periphery as a sound echoed—a wet, slithering noise, like a lung struggling to breathe through fluid."
1"A sharp, rhythmic tapping started—a high-pitched clicking, like fingernails on skull bone, coming from everywhere at once."
2"Rory stared into the maw, seeing her own reflections mirrored in the periphery of its emptiness—a hundred versions of herself, some crying, some screaming, all trapped within the shifting layers of its throat."
3"A faint rustle came from the left, then the right—a synchronized movement that suggested a pack, not a singular shadow."
4"The laughter started—not a sound, but a vibration that rattled her marrow."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1159
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, honey-heavy warmth."
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.023295944779982744
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007765314926660914
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean14.82
std6.67
cv0.45
sampleLengths
025
111
222
316
427
510
618
721
84
920
1014
1114
126
1314
1412
1518
1610
1721
185
1913
2018
215
2216
237
2410
2517
2619
2717
2812
2925
3016
3123
3220
336
3412
353
3617
3719
3816
3917
4013
4111
4210
4315
449
458
4616
4721
489
4916
40.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.23170731707317074
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners19
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences74
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"Her voice fell flat, sucked"
2"She scanned the perimeter."
3"She took a step forward,"
4"It didn't belong to any"
5"It twitched, limbs elongating, before"
6"It threw a sanguine reflection"
7"She whirled, her back hitting"
8"She stared at the rock."
9"She drew her phone from"
10"It moved in a spiral,"
11"She pulled a lighter from"
12"She knelt, checking the grass,"
13"She stood, muscles coiled, watching"
14"It possessed no face, only"
15"It stepped forward and the"
16"She pulled the Heartstone out,"
17"She backpedaled, her heel catching"
18"She held the pendant aloft,"
19"It tilted its head, the"
ratio0.473
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences74
matches
0"Rory stepped through the gap"
1"The standing stones hummed, a"
2"Moonlight pierced the canopy here,"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"The silence of the Fae"
5"Her voice fell flat, sucked"
6"The Heartstone pendant nestled against"
7"She scanned the perimeter."
8"The ancient oaks twisted in"
9"She took a step forward,"
10"A shadow detached itself from"
11"It didn't belong to any"
12"It twitched, limbs elongating, before"
13"Rory gripped the silver chain,"
14"It threw a sanguine reflection"
15"Rory pivoted, eyes scanning the"
16"Something shifted behind her shoulder."
17"She whirled, her back hitting"
18"The stone felt soft, yielding"
19"She stared at the rock."
ratio0.946
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount15
matches
0"The standing stones hummed, a low-frequency vibration that rattled her teeth."
1"The silence of the Fae Grove stretched out, unnatural and absolute, devoid of the cricket chirps or rustling wind that should have defined a park at night."
2"The ancient oaks twisted in impossible loops, their trunks oozing a thick, viscous sap that smelled of iron and rot."
3"It threw a sanguine reflection across the clover, casting long, distorted shadows that danced independent of her movements."
4"The grove felt tighter, the clearing shrinking as if the trees were inching closer while she exhaled."
5"Something groaned, a sound that bypassed her ears and manifested as a pressure inside her skull."
6"The wildflowers began to wilt, blackening into ash before her eyes, curling into delicate, skeletal remains in the span of a heart cycle."
7"She knelt, checking the grass, but her hand passed through a shimmering, translucent membrane that stretched just above the soil."
8"It possessed no face, only a vertical seam that vibrated with that same, nauseating low-frequency hum."
9"No breath hit her, only a sudden, plunging drop in temperature that turned her exhaled air into a dense, white fog."
10"The creature shrieked, a sound not of this world, a glass-shattering dissonance that made her vision swim with crimson spots."
11"They were surrounding her, the trees and the shadows and the very air conspiring to box her into a corner of the grove that hadn't existed a minute ago."
12"The stones were humming in harmony now, a high, piercing note that made her vision spark with flares of blue."
13"It felt like living tar, pulling at her boots, anchoring her to the cursed earth."
14"The creature parted the trees and stepped fully into the light, its height distorting, limbs fracturing and reforming into a jagged, impossible silhouette that …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
70.9225%