Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZW91JCETS1Y24FWRQ5J9F

Run Details

Duration:
5m 44s
Cost:
$0.005021
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The frost stuck to Rory’s black jeans cuffs as she hiked the final mile of dirt path through Richmond Park. It was nearly midnight, and the only light came from a half-moon that sliced through the bare oak branches, painting the frost in sharp silver streaks. She pushed a strand of her shoulder-length black hair out of her face, her bright blue eyes scanning the dark for any sign of the clearing she’d mapped on old forum posts. “Stupid,” she muttered, her voice thin in the cold air. “This is so stupid.” She’d left the flat above Silas’ bar three hours earlier, after the Heartstone Pendant thrumming under her flannel shirt had refused to quiet down for the first time since the strange pulses started three weeks prior. Eva had called twice, left a voice mail warning her not to chase ghosts, but Rory had hit ignore. She’d never believed in fae realms or portal rifts, not after Evan’s snide comments about her “stupid fantasy books,” but the pulses were real. They’d started as a faint hum when she was near the abandoned hospital on Wandsworth Road, then the library by her flat, then last night, nonstop, so loud she’d had to press a hand to the gem to keep from waking the neighbors above Silas’ bar. The pendant, the anonymous gift someone had slipped under her door last month, had started pulsing right after the first Hel portal reports popped up on the rare forums she visited, the ones that didn’t get shut down by mods within hours. She’d saved every post, mapped every location where the pulses were strongest, and tonight, the gem had pulled her all the way to Richmond Park. She spotted the hawthorn thicket where she’d left her scooter, its metal body glinting silver in the moonlight, and tucked her keys into her palm. Then she turned toward the gap in the trees, the one the forum post had described, and pushed through the brambles. The cold vanished. One second she was breathing in the sharp, frosty air, the next she was standing in a space that smelled like elderflower and damp, turned soil. The frost under her boots was gone, replaced by thick, spongy moss that gave under her weight. She glanced up, and her breath caught. The oak canopy didn’t let in the silver moonlight. Instead, the sky was a soft, washed-out lavender, like the twilight of a spring evening even though her phone said it was 11:47 PM. All around her, bluebells carpeted the ground. “Bluebells don’t bloom in November,” she said out loud, her voice firm, like saying it would make it true. She knelt down, picked one up between her fingers, and its petals were soft, dewy, like they’d been picked that morning, not growing in the dead of winter. She stepped on a cluster of them, expecting to hear the soft crunch of crushed petals, but instead they bounced under her boot, springing back into place like nothing had touched them. She reached up, tugged the pendant out from under her flannel shirt, and held it in her palm. The deep crimson gem glowed brighter now, pulsing in time with her rapid heartbeat, warm enough to seep through her skin and into her bones. She’d never felt it this alive. The first sound came a moment later: a thin, trilling note, high enough that it tickled the edge of her hearing. Not a bird call—she’d spent enough nights working late deliveries to recognize the chirp of a sparrow, the hoot of an owl. This was something else. A human voice, but stretched too thin, too pure, like it hadn’t been used to speak in centuries. She stood still, listening. The note faded, then another, followed by a second, then a dozen, weaving into a melody that made the hair on the back of her neck stand up. She couldn’t understand the words, but she could feel them digging into the back of her skull, like someone scraping a spoon against a ceramic mug. Rory’s left wrist tingled. She rubbed the crescent scar there, the one from the time she’d fallen through a frozen creek as a kid, a small, familiar anchor. The habit had stuck around after Evan would grab her there, when he was angry, a quiet way to ground herself when his shouts got too loud. She took a step forward, her boot sinking into the moss, and spotted movement at the edge of the ancient oak standing stones that ringed the clearing. The trees stood in a tight circle, their trunks thick with lichen, their branches twisting overhead like gnarled fingers. That was the boundary, she’d read in the forum posts—faerie groves marked by oak circles, hidden in plain sight. A flash of pale white darted behind the thickest oak trunk. She squinted, leaned in, and for a split second she saw it: a hand, too small, fingers bent at angles that shouldn’t be possible, pressed flat against the rough bark. Then it was gone. “Who’s there?” Her voice came out quieter than she meant it to, cracking at the end. The words bounced off the oak trunks, echoing back to her, and the singing cut off abruptly. Silence fell, so thick she could taste it. The only sound was the soft rustle of her own breath, and the thrum of the Heartstone Pendant in her hand. She waited, counting to ten, twenty, thirty, but there was no other sound. No wind, no crickets, no distant traffic from the nearby road. Nothing. Then, a soft touch landed on her shoulder. She froze. The touch was light, like a butterfly’s wing, but it was there, pressing gently against the bare skin of her shoulder where her flannel shirt had unzipped. She could feel the pressure, faint but unmistakeable, like someone was leaning in close, their breath warm against her neck. “Stop it,” she whispered, the word barely audible. She turned her head. Nothing. Just the oak trunk, its bark rough and gray, stretched out in front of her. No hand, no figure, no sign of anyone else in the clearing. The touch was gone. She stepped back, her boot slipping on the moss, and caught herself on the standing stone next to her. Her palm pressed against the lichen-covered bark, and she jerked her hand back— the stone was cold, normal, but for a split second she could have sworn she felt something else, a faint, honey-sweet warmth, like the pendant. She looked down at her hands. The Heartstone was still in her palm, glowing bright crimson, but now there was a thin, silver line winding around her wrist, matching the faint cracks in the stone’s bark. She rubbed her wrist, trying to brush it off, but it stayed, faint and silvery, like a temporary tattoo. Then, she heard it. A soft, clicking sound, coming from behind her. Not fast, not loud, just a steady tap-tap-tap, like someone tapping their fingernails against a wooden table. She spun around, her heart thudding, loud enough to drown out the hum of the pendant. The bramble thicket she’d pushed through earlier was gone. In its place was a wall of dense, dark green ferns, so tall they reached her shoulders, their fronds closed tight like they’d never been disturbed. A cold prickle crawled up her spine, starting at her shoulders and spreading down to her toes. She’d walked through that bramble thicket minutes ago—she could still feel the thorns catching on her jacket sleeve. She rubbed her arm, and there were no scratches, no sign that she’d pushed through sharp brambles at all. The clicking sound got louder, closer, and she spotted the crack in the fern wall. A split had opened, just wide enough for a pair of empty black eyes to peek through. She stumbled back, her back hitting the standing stone, and the pendant slipped from her hand, clattering onto the moss. The gem glowed brighter than ever, flooding the clearing with a soft red light, and the clicking sound stopped. For a second, she could see the figure behind the ferns: tall, thin, its skin pale as bone, its hair a mass of dark, tangled threads that dripped with something glistening. It held a bundle of small, pale hands, their fingers bent at wrong angles, and its mouth was split into a grin that stretched too wide, too sharp, like a animal’s jaw. Then the fern wall crashed closed, and the figure was gone. She scrambled to grab the pendant, pressing it back against her chest, tucking it under her flannel shirt. The pulsing had slowed, but it was still there, a steady hum now, like it was warning her. She turned around, searching for the fern wall, for any sign of the way out, but the wall of ferns was gone. In its place was the dirt path, the hawthorn, her scooter waiting in the shadows, just as she’d left it. She ran toward the scooter, her boots slipping on the frost-covered dirt, and fumbled with her keys, dropping them twice before she managed to stick them in the ignition. She turned the key, and the scooter sputtered to life, and she peeled away from the hawthorn, driving as fast as she could down the dirt path, away from the clearing. When she pulled into the alley behind Silas’ bar, an hour later (or so she thought), she wiped the sweat from her forehead and climbed off the scooter. She fished her phone out of her jacket pocket, pressed the power button, and the screen lit up. The lock screen showed the time: 12:07 AM. Only ten minutes had passed since she’d parked her scooter at Richmond Park. She opened her camera roll, and there, at the bottom, was a new photo, taken at 11:48 PM, the exact time she’d stepped into the grove. The photo was blurry, taken from behind an oak tree, showing the circle of standing oaks, and a pale, thin figure peeking through a gap in the ferns, its empty black eyes staring directly at the camera. She dropped the phone on the sidewalk, her hands shaking. The pendant under her shirt was still humming, faint now, but it wasn’t gone. She’d felt the wrongness in that grove, the things that shouldn’t be there, the sounds and the touches and the time that didn’t make sense. And now, she had proof that it wasn’t just her imagination.
created_at"2026-03-03T23:17:37.471Z" 3/3/2026, 11:17:37 PM
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native_tokens_reasoning10042
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1749
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1749
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count2
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"glistening"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"glinting"
2"weight"
3"could feel"
4"familiar"
5"echoing"
6"silence"
7"warmth"
8"glistening"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences95
matches
0"was angry"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1746
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1675
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Richmond3
Park3
Eva1
Evan2
Wandsworth1
Road1
Hel1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Evan"
3"Pendant"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Wandsworth"
3"Road"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like elderflower and damp, turned"
85.45% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.145
wordCount1746
matches
0"not to chase ghosts, but Rory had hit ignore"
1"not after Evan’s snide comments about her “stupid fantasy books,” but the pulses were real"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"picked that morning"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean49.89
std28.01
cv0.561
sampleLengths
092
1125
267
346
43
583
67
779
849
965
1058
1155
1265
1345
1433
1554
168
1749
1812
1928
204
2157
2255
2329
2451
2554
2632
27102
2811
2978
3060
3146
3221
3363
3460
75.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences95
matches
0"was gone"
1"been picked"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
4"was gone"
5"been disturbed"
6"was gone"
7"was gone"
71.79% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs260
matches
0"was breathing"
1"was standing"
2"was leaning"
3"was warning"
4"was still humming"
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences96
ratio0.042
matches
0"Not a bird call—she’d spent enough nights working late deliveries to recognize the chirp of a sparrow, the hoot of an owl."
1"That was the boundary, she’d read in the forum posts—faerie groves marked by oak circles, hidden in plain sight."
2"Her palm pressed against the lichen-covered bark, and she jerked her hand back— the stone was cold, normal, but for a split second she could have sworn she felt something else, a faint, honey-sweet warmth, like the pendant."
3"She’d walked through that bramble thicket minutes ago—she could still feel the thorns catching on her jacket sleeve."
98.95% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount98
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.04081632653061224
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.02040816326530612
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean18.19
std9.84
cv0.541
sampleLengths
020
126
232
310
44
536
619
724
846
942
1025
1125
1221
133
1426
1517
167
179
1824
197
2019
2128
2232
2318
2425
256
2621
2722
284
2918
304
3128
3226
334
3424
3527
3627
3719
3819
3911
4030
414
4216
4317
448
4521
4613
4711
481
498
44.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2916666666666667
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences92
matches
0"Then she turned toward the"
1"Instead, the sky was a"
2"Then it was gone."
3"Then, a soft touch landed"
4"Just the oak trunk, its"
5"Then, she heard it."
6"Then the fern wall crashed"
7"Only ten minutes had passed"
ratio0.087
41.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences92
matches
0"It was nearly midnight, and"
1"She pushed a strand of"
2"she muttered, her voice thin"
3"She’d left the flat above"
4"She’d never believed in fae"
5"They’d started as a faint"
6"She’d saved every post, mapped"
7"She spotted the hawthorn thicket"
8"She glanced up, and her"
9"she said out loud, her"
10"She knelt down, picked one"
11"She stepped on a cluster"
12"She reached up, tugged the"
13"She’d never felt it this"
14"She stood still, listening."
15"She couldn’t understand the words,"
16"She rubbed the crescent scar"
17"She took a step forward,"
18"She squinted, leaned in, and"
19"Her voice came out quieter"
ratio0.446
57.83% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences92
matches
0"The frost stuck to Rory’s"
1"It was nearly midnight, and"
2"She pushed a strand of"
3"she muttered, her voice thin"
4"She’d left the flat above"
5"Eva had called twice, left"
6"She’d never believed in fae"
7"They’d started as a faint"
8"The pendant, the anonymous gift"
9"She’d saved every post, mapped"
10"She spotted the hawthorn thicket"
11"The cold vanished."
12"One second she was breathing"
13"The frost under her boots"
14"She glanced up, and her"
15"The oak canopy didn’t let"
16"she said out loud, her"
17"She knelt down, picked one"
18"She stepped on a cluster"
19"She reached up, tugged the"
ratio0.804
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount14
matches
0"It was nearly midnight, and the only light came from a half-moon that sliced through the bare oak branches, painting the frost in sharp silver streaks."
1"The pendant, the anonymous gift someone had slipped under her door last month, had started pulsing right after the first Hel portal reports popped up on the rar…"
2"One second she was breathing in the sharp, frosty air, the next she was standing in a space that smelled like elderflower and damp, turned soil."
3"The frost under her boots was gone, replaced by thick, spongy moss that gave under her weight."
4"She stepped on a cluster of them, expecting to hear the soft crunch of crushed petals, but instead they bounced under her boot, springing back into place like n…"
5"She took a step forward, her boot sinking into the moss, and spotted movement at the edge of the ancient oak standing stones that ringed the clearing."
6"She squinted, leaned in, and for a split second she saw it: a hand, too small, fingers bent at angles that shouldn’t be possible, pressed flat against the rough…"
7"The Heartstone was still in her palm, glowing bright crimson, but now there was a thin, silver line winding around her wrist, matching the faint cracks in the s…"
8"A cold prickle crawled up her spine, starting at her shoulders and spreading down to her toes."
9"She stumbled back, her back hitting the standing stone, and the pendant slipped from her hand, clattering onto the moss."
10"For a second, she could see the figure behind the ferns: tall, thin, its skin pale as bone, its hair a mass of dark, tangled threads that dripped with something…"
11"It held a bundle of small, pale hands, their fingers bent at wrong angles, and its mouth was split into a grin that stretched too wide, too sharp, like a animal…"
12"She scrambled to grab the pendant, pressing it back against her chest, tucking it under her flannel shirt."
13"She ran toward the scooter, her boots slipping on the frost-covered dirt, and fumbled with her keys, dropping them twice before she managed to stick them in the…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice firm, like saying it would make it true"
1"she whispered, the word barely audible"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.667
75.6209%