Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTZY8FE796FR35KXXN74J1M

Run Details

Duration:
8.9s
Cost:
$0.003165
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside the abandoned Camden station tasted of wet iron and centuries of trapped soot. Harlow Quinn stepped over a rusted turnstile, her boots crunching against broken glass. Flashlight beams cut through the heavy, stagnant gloom, illuminating patches of graffiti and the flaking tile walls. She adjusted the leather watch on her wrist, checking the time. Past midnight. Uniforms crowded the platform, their blue vests stark against the grime. A single body lay humped in the shadow of a stalled train carriage. Harlow skirted the crime scene tape, her sharp jaw set. She stopped a few feet from the corpse. The victim—a man, young, dressed in high-end streetwear—didn't belong in this sub-floor crawlspace. His skin held a gray, waxy pallor that sat poorly with the fresh blood pooling beneath his neck. A sergeant stood near the train steps, scrolling through a tablet. He looked up, his expression pinched. "Suicide, Detective. Gunshot wound to the head, discharge residue on the palms. The ballistics unit is itching to call it and head home." Harlow crouched, ignoring the man’s assessment. She clicked her light higher. The blood wasn't dark and coagulated like a typical post-mortem pool; it shimmered with an iridescent, oily sheen. She leaned closer, nostrils flaring. The metallic tang of copper was missing, replaced by the cloying scent of ozone and lilies. "Look at the exit wound, Sergeant. You see anything?" The sergeant shuffled his feet, eyes fixed on the ceiling. "Entrance through the temple, exit out the jaw. Standard path. Violent, sure, but clean in the legal sense." "Then explain why the glass shards beneath his head are fused together." Harlow pointed a gloved finger at the ground. Melted silicon pooled into a jagged, warped disk directly under the victim's skull. It wasn't kinetic force. Heat, intense and concentrated, had turned the impact site into a miniature glass kiln. She traced the arc of the blood spatter on the wall. Instead of a fan shape, the droplets formed intricate, swirling geometric patterns that defied gravity, climbing upward rather than streaking down. "Everything points to a struggle, not a self-inflicted end," she stood, eyes scanning the dark tunnel beyond the train. "Look at his belt buckle. It’s unlatched. His shoes are off, tossed ten feet into the tracks. People don't kick off their sneakers to pull a trigger." "The team found a suicide note in his burner phone, Detective. Maybe he had a flair for the dramatic." Harlow ignored the dismissal. She walked toward the train car, her military gait measured and precise. She bypassed the body and circled the front of the carriage. Her flashlight caught a glint of metal wedged in the track gravel. She knelt, retrieving a small brass object, its surface coated in a thick, crusty layer of green verdigris. A Veil Compass. She turned it over; the etched sigils pulsed with a faint, rhythmic amber light. The needle didn't point north. It spun erratically before snapping toward a sealed service door recessed into the brickwork. She thought of Morris. Three years ago, he’d stood in a room just like this, whispering about things the department refused to acknowledge. He’d vanished into a rift just like the one this compass now tracked. "We aren't closing this case," Harlow said, her voice cutting through the hum of the station’s ventilation fans. "Get the forensics team to scrape those floor samples. I want a chemical breakdown, specifically looking for heavy isotopes." "Quinn, you're chasing shadows again. The Commissioner wants a wrap on this by dawn." She stood, locking eyes with him. The sergeant flinched, shifting his gaze back to his tablet. "The Commissioner will get his report. It will detail how a man died in a secure location without a weapon present. Note the lack of a shell casing. No firearm on the floor, no hole in the wall, and the victim is missing his watch." She tucked the brass compass into her inner pocket. The metal felt vibrating, almost warm against her skin. She walked to the far end of the platform, testing the air. The faint smell of ozone grew stronger, pulling her toward the service door. "I'm going to canvass the tunnels. Keep the scene sanitized. If anyone from the media shows up, tell them it’s a gas leak incident." "You're walking into a restricted zone without backup, Detective. That’s a direct violation of protocol." Harlow pushed the heavy iron door. It groaned, thick grease smearing across her sleeve. "Protocol died three years ago, Sergeant. Keep the lights on." She stepped into the darkness. The air thinned, the sound of the city above fading to a distant rumble. Her tactical flashlight revealed a secondary tunnel, one clearly not on the municipal blueprints. It led deeper, toward the forgotten bowels of the old station. She checked the compass again. The needle locked firmly toward a faint, flickering light ahead. The walls changed. Where the station was brick and tile, this tunnel was lined with something that looked like compressed bone, smooth and porous. She moved, her boots silent. A soft scratching noise echoed from the darkness—a sound like quill on parchment. She turned a corner and saw a figure silhouetted by the glow of several glowing, floating lanterns. Smaller, unassuming, clutching a worn leather satchel to her chest. The girl—Eva—froze, her round glasses catching the light. She was tucking a lock of curly red hair behind her ear, her green eyes wide with panic. "You aren't supposed to be here, Detective." The girl didn't look like a killer, but the satchel bulged with heavy, ancient-looking tomes. The air around her smelled of old paper and that same, unnatural lily-ozone scent. "The victim in the station. Tell me how he lost his watch." Eva shifted, gripping the satchel tighter. "He wasn't supposed to trigger the ward, but he was greedy. He thought he could steal from the Market without paying the bone toll." "The Market? We are in a decommissioned Tube line, not an alchemist shop." Eva gestured to the bone-lined walls. "The Veil Market doesn't care about your transit authority. It moves where it wants. And you, Detective, are walking into territory that doesn't respect the laws of the Metropolitan Police." Harlow reached for her holster, hand hovering over the grip. "I have a dead body behind me who claims otherwise. Start explaining, or you're coming down to the station for questioning." Eva didn't move. She shifted her glasses, her freckled face tightening with sudden, sharp resolve. "Questioning won't help you, Harlow. Have you ever wondered why you’re the only one who sees the patterns? Why every case involving an unexplainable death keeps leading you back to this station?" Harlow stepped closer, the light beam hitting the girl’s bag. She saw a glimmer of a brass casing identical to the one in her own pocket poking out from the leather flap. "Explain the note." "The note was a warning, not a suicide letter. He didn't write it. It was written in a language that tears at the reality of whoever reads it until their brain turns to liquid. He didn't die of a gunshot. He died of exposure to the truth. You’re lucky the wards didn't claim your vision the moment you walked through that door." Harlow felt the compass in her pocket vibrate violently, pulling toward the satchel. She ignored the warning, forcing herself to maintain the distance. The girl stood her ground, her fingers trembling slightly. "You're harboring evidence in a homicide investigation. You're going to put that bag on the ground, slow, and we're going to discuss the connection between the victim and the museum archives." "If I put this bag down, you won't walk out of here alive," Eva said. "The Market doesn't like detectives. They especially don't like ones that keep asking about DS Morris." Harlow felt the air shimmer, the shadows in the tunnel beginning to stretch into elongated, jagged fingers. The walls themselves seemed to pulse with a low, thrumming heartbeat. She didn't draw her weapon, instead squaring her shoulders, the years of decorated service turning her into a pillar of stillness against the encroaching chaos. "Morris wasn't a hero, but he was my partner. Tell me what they did to him, or I shut down this entire line shift by shift. I don't care how many of these hidden markets you open." Eva looked past her, into the deepening void of the tunnel. Her expression changed, the fear replaced by a hollow, haunting gravity. "They didn't kill him, Detective. They integrated him."
created_at"2026-03-03T23:18:42.429Z" 3/3/2026, 11:18:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.214
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1429
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Lily"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1429
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"standard"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"glint"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"firmly"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"resolve"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"stark"
2"shimmered"
3"standard"
4"traced"
5"intricate"
6"scanning"
7"measured"
8"glint"
9"etched"
10"pulsed"
11"rhythmic"
12"firmly"
13"echoed"
14"resolve"
15"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences79
matches
0"e with panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1424
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount866
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Quinn1
Harlow11
Veil1
Compass1
Morris1
Eva6
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Harlow"
2"Morris"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.865
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like compressed bone, smooth and p"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1424
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean29.67
std20.38
cv0.687
sampleLengths
059
173
217
323
450
59
610
718
812
971
1046
1119
1293
1336
1437
1514
1616
1745
1843
1924
2015
2114
2210
2359
2442
2553
267
2729
2812
296
3024
3113
326
3330
3410
3521
3615
3732
3832
393
4062
4132
4231
4331
4453
4537
4622
478
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"was lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs138
matches
0"was tucking"
5.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences104
ratio0.048
matches
0"The victim—a man, young, dressed in high-end streetwear—didn't belong in this sub-floor crawlspace."
1"The blood wasn't dark and coagulated like a typical post-mortem pool; it shimmered with an iridescent, oily sheen."
2"She turned it over; the etched sigils pulsed with a faint, rhythmic amber light."
3"A soft scratching noise echoed from the darkness—a sound like quill on parchment."
4"The girl—Eva—froze, her round glasses catching the light."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount876
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.0228310502283105
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01141552511415525
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean13.69
std8.8
cv0.643
sampleLengths
016
113
217
311
42
511
613
710
88
913
1018
1111
126
1323
146
155
1618
175
1816
199
2010
2118
2212
238
2413
254
2614
2711
2821
2919
3027
3119
324
3312
3411
3512
3618
373
3814
395
4014
414
4219
4313
4418
4519
4614
476
4810
4945
49.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3269230769230769
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners34
43.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Instead of a fan shape,"
ratio0.013
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences77
matches
0"She adjusted the leather watch"
1"She stopped a few feet"
2"His skin held a gray,"
3"He looked up, his expression"
4"She clicked her light higher."
5"She leaned closer, nostrils flaring."
6"It wasn't kinetic force."
7"She traced the arc of"
8"she stood, eyes scanning the"
9"She walked toward the train"
10"She bypassed the body and"
11"Her flashlight caught a glint"
12"She knelt, retrieving a small"
13"She turned it over; the"
14"It spun erratically before snapping"
15"She thought of Morris."
16"He’d vanished into a rift"
17"She stood, locking eyes with"
18"She tucked the brass compass"
19"She walked to the far"
ratio0.429
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences77
matches
0"The air inside the abandoned"
1"Harlow Quinn stepped over a"
2"Flashlight beams cut through the"
3"She adjusted the leather watch"
4"Uniforms crowded the platform, their"
5"A single body lay humped"
6"Harlow skirted the crime scene"
7"She stopped a few feet"
8"The victim—a man, young, dressed"
9"His skin held a gray,"
10"A sergeant stood near the"
11"He looked up, his expression"
12"Harlow crouched, ignoring the man’s"
13"She clicked her light higher."
14"The blood wasn't dark and"
15"She leaned closer, nostrils flaring."
16"The metallic tang of copper"
17"The sergeant shuffled his feet,"
18"Harlow pointed a gloved finger"
19"It wasn't kinetic force."
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His skin held a gray, waxy pallor that sat poorly with the fresh blood pooling beneath his neck."
1"Instead of a fan shape, the droplets formed intricate, swirling geometric patterns that defied gravity, climbing upward rather than streaking down."
2"Where the station was brick and tile, this tunnel was lined with something that looked like compressed bone, smooth and porous."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she stood, eyes scanning the dark tunnel beyond the train"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.3629%