Run: 2026-03-03-01KJV00X1XTP31R0S5JMP9XTGC

Run Details

Duration:
6.9s
Cost:
$0.002236
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the gray brickwork of Soho, slicking the pavement into a mirror of neon shattered by every passing tire. Detective Harlow Quinn tightened her grip on her sidearm, the cold weight grounding her nerves as she tracked the silhouette sprinting ahead. The target moved with deceptive fluidity, ducking into an alleyway where the smell of stale beer from The Raven's Nest clung to the air like a shroud. She kept her stride steady, her boots striking the cobblestones with the metronomic rhythm of military training. The silhouette rounded a corner, disappearing into the black maw of a subterranean entrance barely lit by a flickering, dying street lamp. Quinn accelerated, the salt-and-pepper cropped hair clinging to her damp forehead as she bridged the distance. Water run-off from the gutters soaked her woolen coat, the heavy fabric dragging against her legs, but she ignored the chill. She reached the threshold and pulled back, leveling her weapon at the dark stairs leading deep beneath the city. Look at the bottom step. If you want to see where that trail actually ends, keep your thumb off the safety and follow me down. The voice echoed from the gloom, light and mocking. Quinn did not break her focus, her eyes scanning the shadows for a trap. She remembered the empty stare of her partner, Morris, three years ago, his badge lying in the mud, his life extinguished by something the forensic reports refused to classify. She would not lose this lead the same way. She descended, the air turning thick with the metallic tang of ionizing dust and the heavy, cloying scent of ozone. Her boots clicked on metal grating, the sound ringing out like a clarion call in a cavernous space. Lights from thousands of candles clustered in iron wall-sconces flickered to life, revealing the vast, vaulted ceiling of an abandoned Tube station. The Veil Market revealed itself in layers of gloom and color; merchants with faces obscured by silk veils sat behind stalls laden with jars of shimmering, viscous liquid and bundles of dried herbs that pulsed with a faint, rhythmic heartbeat. A man with curly dark hair and olive skin stood near a central pillar, his left forearm marked by a jagged, white scar, fingering a Saint Christopher medallion. You know better than to drag an officer into this hole. The last time someone chased me down here, they left in a box with no cause of death on the file. Quinn kept her hand rock-steady, her gaze sweeping the shifting crowd. Shadowy figures paused their haggling, turning to stare at her with eyes that reflected light in unnatural, feline slits. The detective ignored the heat blooming in her gut, the instinctual warning that screamed for her to turn and run back to the surface. She stepped forward, the heel of her boot crunching into crushed bone shards scattered across the platform tracks. I have enough evidence to bury your entire circle of misfits, Herrera. Put the crate down or I put you in cuffs. Tomás let out a sharp, jagged laugh, his fingers tightening around the heavy wooden chest he held against his ribs. He stepped onto the tracks, the third rail sparking with a sudden, violet discharge that illuminated the hollows of his cheeks. He gestured toward the far end of the station, where the track bed descended into a tunnel choked with a thick, pulsating fog that defied the laws of airflow. The police don't have jurisdiction in the veins of London, Quinn. You keep walking, you forfeit the protection of the law and whatever sanity you’ve managed to preserve since Morris went cold. Quinn shifted her weight, feeling the leather watch on her wrist tighten against the damp skin. She caught the scent of burning amber and musk emanating from the stalls, the pungent smell of alchemy masquerading as perfume. She saw a merchant—a tall, spindly figure with fingers too long for its knuckles—gliding toward her, a curved blade glinting in its grip. The detective bypassed Herrera, her gaze tracking the shadow moving behind her, the military precision of her stance holding the chaos at bay. Leave the blade where it is unless you want to see how the department handles illegal imports of the extradimensional variety. The vendor stopped, a chorus of hissing voices erupting from the stalls surrounding them. The air pressure dropped, causing the candle flames to slant violently to the left as if pulled by an unseen gravity. Herrera slid backward into the heavy fog, his face becoming a blurred smudge of motion. Quinn stood at the edge of the abyss, the tunnel mouth yawning open ahead. Behind her, the entrance to the Market began to shift, the stone walls grinding inward to seal off the world of the living. She looked at her watch. The second hand stuttered, then began to spin backward with a high-pitched, metallic whine that vibrated through her marrow. The choice hung in the space between her heartbeat and the next—to stand her ground in a place that defied all logic, or to pursue the man who held the one secret that could bridge the gap between human crime and the shadow that killed her partner. If you think a bit of fog and some parlor tricks are going to stop me from finishing what I started, you clearly haven't been keeping track of my personnel file. She took a breath, the air tasting like copper and old blood. With a swift movement, she holstered her weapon and reached into her pocket, pulling out a smooth, polished stone—a bone token she had scavenged from her partner's final locker. She held it out towards the encroaching darkness of the tunnel. The fog parted, curling around her fingers like a living thing, testing her resolve. She stepped forward again, crossing the threshold from the familiar grime of a subway station into the shifting, unmapped geometry of the tunnels beneath the city. The ground beneath her feet softened, turning from hard rock to something damp and pulse-like. Ahead, Herrera’s shadow merged with the flickering violet light of the tunnel walls, disappearing into a labyrinthine junction marked by glowing, archaic runes. Quinn tightened her jaw, the sharp line of it set against the encroaching dark. She ignored the voices now whispering from the walls, their sounds like paper tearing, and kept her eyes locked on the rhythmic bobbing of Tomás’s medallion ahead. She was in the belly of the beast, and there was no turning back until the truth surfaced.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1093
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1093
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"maw"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count2
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count2
11
word"glinting"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count1
13
word"resolve"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"weight"
2"maw"
3"chill"
4"echoed"
5"gloom"
6"scanning"
7"flickered"
8"silk"
9"pulsed"
10"rhythmic"
11"glinting"
12"vibrated"
13"resolve"
14"familiar"
15"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences56
filterMatches
0"know"
1"watch"
2"think"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences56
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1089
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1089
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn8
Raven1
Nest1
Morris2
Tube1
Veil1
Market2
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera4
London1
Tomás2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Nest"
3"Morris"
4"Market"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Herrera"
8"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1089
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
85.74% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean64.06
std28.83
cv0.45
sampleLengths
087
178
225
381
4108
532
672
722
870
932
1083
1121
1287
1371
1431
1592
1697
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs189
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences56
ratio0.071
matches
0"The Veil Market revealed itself in layers of gloom and color; merchants with faces obscured by silk veils sat behind stalls laden with jars of shimmering, viscous liquid and bundles of dried herbs that pulsed with a faint, rhythmic heartbeat."
1"She saw a merchant—a tall, spindly figure with fingers too long for its knuckles—gliding toward her, a curved blade glinting in its grip."
2"The choice hung in the space between her heartbeat and the next—to stand her ground in a place that defied all logic, or to pursue the man who held the one secret that could bridge the gap between human crime and the shadow that killed her partner."
3"With a swift movement, she holstered her weapon and reached into her pocket, pulling out a smooth, polished stone—a bone token she had scavenged from her partner's final locker."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1099
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.01364877161055505
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006369426751592357
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences56
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
97.32% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences56
mean19.45
std7.65
cv0.393
sampleLengths
021
122
227
317
422
516
621
719
85
920
109
1114
1229
139
1420
1518
1622
1740
1828
1911
2021
2111
2219
2324
2418
2512
2610
2720
2821
2929
3011
3121
3216
3321
3423
3523
3621
3714
3821
3915
4014
4123
425
4319
4447
4531
4612
4729
4811
4914
52.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.39285714285714285
totalSentences56
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences56
matches
0"She kept her stride steady,"
1"She reached the threshold and"
2"She remembered the empty stare"
3"She would not lose this"
4"She descended, the air turning"
5"Her boots clicked on metal"
6"You know better than to"
7"She stepped forward, the heel"
8"I have enough evidence to"
9"He stepped onto the tracks,"
10"He gestured toward the far"
11"You keep walking, you forfeit"
12"She caught the scent of"
13"She saw a merchant—a tall,"
14"She looked at her watch."
15"She took a breath, the"
16"She held it out towards"
17"She stepped forward again, crossing"
18"She ignored the voices now"
19"She was in the belly"
ratio0.357
40.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences56
matches
0"Rain lashed against the gray"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn tightened her"
2"The target moved with deceptive"
3"She kept her stride steady,"
4"The silhouette rounded a corner,"
5"Quinn accelerated, the salt-and-pepper cropped"
6"Water run-off from the gutters"
7"She reached the threshold and"
8"The voice echoed from the"
9"Quinn did not break her"
10"She remembered the empty stare"
11"She would not lose this"
12"She descended, the air turning"
13"Her boots clicked on metal"
14"The Veil Market revealed itself"
15"A man with curly dark"
16"You know better than to"
17"The last time someone chased"
18"Quinn kept her hand rock-steady,"
19"Shadowy figures paused their haggling,"
ratio0.839
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"If you want to see"
1"If you think a bit"
ratio0.036
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Shadowy figures paused their haggling, turning to stare at her with eyes that reflected light in unnatural, feline slits."
1"The detective ignored the heat blooming in her gut, the instinctual warning that screamed for her to turn and run back to the surface."
2"He stepped onto the tracks, the third rail sparking with a sudden, violet discharge that illuminated the hollows of his cheeks."
3"He gestured toward the far end of the station, where the track bed descended into a tunnel choked with a thick, pulsating fog that defied the laws of airflow."
4"The detective bypassed Herrera, her gaze tracking the shadow moving behind her, the military precision of her stance holding the chaos at bay."
5"The second hand stuttered, then began to spin backward with a high-pitched, metallic whine that vibrated through her marrow."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.9021%