Run: 2026-03-03-01KJV045T42MQ1N2PR4RV05YNV

Run Details

Duration:
4m 18s
Cost:
$0.003911
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swings open an inch, jams on a stack of Chinese takeout menus Eva had dumped by the frame that morning. Rory heaves it wider, ready to bark at her friend about cluttering the doorway—then stops. Standing on the scuffed concrete landing, rain dripping off the brim of his tailored charcoal suit jacket, is Lucien Moreau. Platinum blond hair slicked back tight from his forehead, ivory-handled cane tucked against his hip, one eye amber and one black, glowing faintly in the dim hallway light that filters down from the Brick Lane streetlamp above. His sandalmwood and citrus cologne cuts through the curry scent drifting up from the shop below, sharp and familiar, the same scent that had lingered on her clothes the night they last spoke. Her throat goes dry. She’d deleted his number six months prior, had avoided every spot he frequented, had begged Eva never to mention her to any supernatural fixers—especially not him. “Lucien,” she says, and the word comes out thin, shaky, nothing like the cool, sharp tone she uses with delivery customers or her prickly ex. She reaches for the deadbolt, ready to slam the door shut, but he slides the ivory tip of his cane between the door and the frame, stopping it cold. The polished wood catches the light, and she can see the thin seam running along its length, the hidden blade she’d once pressed her palm to, curious, before he’d pulled his hand away, his touch sending a shiver down her spine that she’d felt for days after. “You didn’t answer your phone,” he says, his voice low, accented, exactly the way she remembers—rougher than she’d pictured a Frenchman’s voice would be, warm like aged brandy. He shifts his weight, and the cane taps once against the step, the sound loud in the quiet flat. Rory yanks harder on the door, but the cane doesn’t move. “You shouldn’t be here. I told you never to come near me again.” That’s a lie, sort of—she’d never said those exact words, but she’d implied it, when she’d thrown his business card across the table and told him to get lost. His mouth twitches, that dry, lopsided smile she’d both hated and wanted the first time they met. “I kept away for six months. Until I heard Evan was out of prison.” The name hits her like a fist to the chest. Evan, her abusive ex, the man who’d chased her from Cardiff to London, who’d thrown a wine glass at her wrist six months prior, leaving a thin, jagged cut next to the old crescent scar she’d had since she was seven. She’d thought he was locked up, thought she’d finally escaped him. “How?” “He paid a guard to look the other way. Got paroled early.” Lucien’s gaze flickers past her, to the stack of illuminated manuscripts piled on the couch, to the tabby cat named Ptolemy curled up on a stack of Tolkien paperbacks by the window, and nods once. “Nice place. Cramped, just like Eva said.” Rory’s jaw tightens. She’d begged Eva not to mention her to anyone, especially not supernatural fixers. “You followed me here.” “Tracking isn’t following,” he says, and his voice loses that dry playfulness, grows sharp, earnest. “I’ve been watching Evan since he got out two weeks ago. He’s been asking around about fixers, looking for someone to make sure you can’t leave London, can’t hide from him.” Rory’s hands start to shake. She steps back, knocking over a stack of poetry collections by the door, and the books clatter to the floor. Ptolemy yowls, bolts from his perch, and hides under the dining table. The scent of old paper and jasmine tea, the smell that has always made her feel safe, mixes with Lucien’s cologne, and suddenly she’s back to that first night she came to him, crying in his office, begging him to make Evan stop. She’d been desperate, then. She’d left Cardiff after Evan hit her, had fled to London with nothing but a duffel bag and Eva’s phone number, had taken the delivery job at Golden Empress to pay rent, and then Evan had found her, had shown up at her flat above Silas’ bar, had screamed at her until she’d promised to come back to him. She’d run to Lucien that night, covered in wine glass shards, her wrist bleeding, and he’d sat across from her, listened to her story, and then said he’d fix Evan—for a price. The price was Eva’s research on Avaros, the realm Lucien’s father ruled over, decades of scrolls and notes Eva had spent ten years compiling. Rory had refused, had told him to get lost, had thrown his business card across the table and left his office, and that had been the last time she’d spoken to him until now. “I don’t need your help,” she says, even though her voice wavers, even though she can feel the ghost of Evan’s fists on her shoulders, can feel the sharp edge of the knife he’d borrowed from the pub owner down the road. “I can handle him.” Lucien pushes off the wall, and suddenly he’s closer, the gap between them shrinking, and she can see the faint lines around his eyes, the way his heterochromatic eyes soften when he looks at her. “Evan has a knife. He’s not going to let you handle him alone.” He pauses, and for a second, she can see the vulnerability under his tailored suit, the half-demon boy who’d grown up alone in Marseille, looking for a way to belong. “I’m not here to ask for the research this time. I’m here to protect you. That’s all.” Rory stares at him, at the way his hand curls around the cane, at the way his suit fits his shoulders perfectly, at the way he’s not lying—she can tell. She’d always been good at reading people, at picking up on lies, but with Lucien, she’d never been able to tell when he was being honest, or when he was just playing his fixer game. Until now. She steps closer, and her bare ankle brushes the leg of his tailored trousers, and she doesn’t pull away. “Why?” she asks, this time quiet, vulnerable, nothing like the cool delivery driver she pretends to be. “You said you only cared about the research before.” He reaches out, and his hand brushes her wrist, the one with the crescent scar, and she doesn’t pull away. The touch is gentle, careful, like he’s handling something fragile. “That wasn’t the only reason I wanted the research. I wanted you to let me in. I wanted to stop seeing you as a client, and start seeing you as… more.” His voice drops, so quiet she almost misses it, and his amber eye glints in the dim light from the hallway. “I’ve been thinking about you every day since you told me to get lost. About the way you yelled at a customer for stealing his noodles outside Silas’ bar, about the way you laughed when Ptolemy knocked over your tea, about the way your eyes lit up when you were talking about Eva’s research on medieval demons.” Rory’s throat tightens. She’d never told him about that last part, about how she’d spent her nights off reading Eva’s scrolls, about how she’d always been fascinated by the supernatural, even after Evan had told her it was all nonsense. “You noticed that?” “Of course I noticed.” He shifts closer, and his other hand comes up, touches her cheek, and the touch is warm, even through the cool air of the flat. His fingers brush the loose strands of her shoulder-length black hair, which has fallen out of the messy bun she’d tied it in that morning, and she shivers, not from the cold, but from the touch. “I noticed everything about you, Rory. From the first day I saw you sitting outside Silas’ bar, covered in delivery grease, yelling at a tourist who’d refused to pay for his lo mein. I knew then that I was done for.” She remembers that day, now. She’d just finished a double shift, her feet sore, eating a cold spring roll she’d grabbed from the restaurant’s leftover bin, and he’d sat down next to her, offered her a cigarette, asked her if she needed a fixer. She’d told him to go away, that she didn’t need help from someone who made his living messing with the supernatural, but he’d stayed, and they’d talked for an hour, and she’d felt safe for the first time since she left Evan. She tilts her head up to meet his gaze, the five-inch difference in their heights making it easy, and smiles, for the first time in six months. “I’m sorry I didn’t trust you before,” she says, her voice quiet, and it’s the first time she’s ever admitted that she’d been wrong, that she’d been scared of letting someone get close to her. He pulls her closer, and she wraps her arms around his shoulders, and he presses a kiss to the top of her head, gentle, careful. The rain slows outside, and the curry scent drifts up again, soft and warm, and for the first time in half a year, Rory feels like she’s home.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1553
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1553
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"down her spine"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"down her spine"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
61.99% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences53
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"start to"
1"tends to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1547
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1250
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Chinese1
Eva7
Lucien7
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Frenchman1
Cardiff2
London2
Ptolemy2
Tolkien1
Rory8
Evan8
Golden1
Empress1
Avaros1
Marseille1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Frenchman"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Rory"
6"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
4"Golden"
5"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.646
wordCount1547
matches
0"not from the cold, but from the touch"
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences64
matches
0"remembers that day"
1"away, that she"
2"admitted that she’dwrong, that she’d"
74.53% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean64.46
std26.48
cv0.411
sampleLengths
037
190
255
376
447
553
631
763
854
920
1046
1180
1295
1358
1446
1595
1667
1745
18139
1943
20106
2186
2262
2353
85.40% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences53
matches
0"was locked"
1"been fascinated"
2"been scared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs202
matches
0"was being"
1"was just playing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences64
ratio0.094
matches
0"Rory heaves it wider, ready to bark at her friend about cluttering the doorway—then stops."
1"She’d deleted his number six months prior, had avoided every spot he frequented, had begged Eva never to mention her to any supernatural fixers—especially not him."
2"“You didn’t answer your phone,” he says, his voice low, accented, exactly the way she remembers—rougher than she’d pictured a Frenchman’s voice would be, warm like aged brandy."
3"“You shouldn’t be here. I told you never to come near me again.” That’s a lie, sort of—she’d never said those exact words, but she’d implied it, when she’d thrown his business card across the table and told him to get lost."
4"She’d run to Lucien that night, covered in wine glass shards, her wrist bleeding, and he’d sat across from her, listened to her story, and then said he’d fix Evan—for a price."
5"Rory stares at him, at the way his hand curls around the cane, at the way his suit fits his shoulders perfectly, at the way he’s not lying—she can tell."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1005
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.027860696517412936
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008955223880597015
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean24.17
std15.1
cv0.625
sampleLengths
022
115
220
337
433
54
626
725
829
947
1028
1119
1211
1342
1417
1514
1610
1741
1811
191
2047
217
223
2313
244
2515
2631
275
2820
2912
3043
314
3259
3332
3424
3534
3642
374
3835
3943
4017
4130
4235
432
4419
4517
469
4720
4810
4952
42.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3125
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences52
matches
0"His sandalmwood and citrus cologne"
1"Her throat goes dry."
2"She’d deleted his number six"
3"she says, and the word"
4"She reaches for the deadbolt,"
5"he says, his voice low,"
6"He shifts his weight, and"
7"His mouth twitches, that dry,"
8"She’d thought he was locked"
9"She’d begged Eva not to"
10"he says, and his voice"
11"She steps back, knocking over"
12"She’d been desperate, then."
13"She’d left Cardiff after Evan"
14"She’d run to Lucien that"
15"she says, even though her"
16"He pauses, and for a"
17"She’d always been good at"
18"She steps closer, and her"
19"she asks, this time quiet,"
ratio0.596
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences52
matches
0"The door swings open an"
1"Rory heaves it wider, ready"
2"Platinum blond hair slicked back"
3"His sandalmwood and citrus cologne"
4"Her throat goes dry."
5"She’d deleted his number six"
6"she says, and the word"
7"She reaches for the deadbolt,"
8"The polished wood catches the"
9"he says, his voice low,"
10"He shifts his weight, and"
11"Rory yanks harder on the"
12"That’s a lie, sort of—she’d"
13"His mouth twitches, that dry,"
14"The name hits her like"
15"Evan, her abusive ex, the"
16"She’d thought he was locked"
17"Lucien’s gaze flickers past her,"
18"Rory’s jaw tightens."
19"She’d begged Eva not to"
ratio0.981
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Platinum blond hair slicked back tight from his forehead, ivory-handled cane tucked against his hip, one eye amber and one black, glowing faintly in the dim hal…"
1"His sandalmwood and citrus cologne cuts through the curry scent drifting up from the shop below, sharp and familiar, the same scent that had lingered on her clo…"
2"Evan, her abusive ex, the man who’d chased her from Cardiff to London, who’d thrown a wine glass at her wrist six months prior, leaving a thin, jagged cut next …"
3"The scent of old paper and jasmine tea, the smell that has always made her feel safe, mixes with Lucien’s cologne, and suddenly she’s back to that first night s…"
4"His fingers brush the loose strands of her shoulder-length black hair, which has fallen out of the messy bun she’d tied it in that morning, and she shivers, not…"
5"She’d told him to go away, that she didn’t need help from someone who made his living messing with the supernatural, but he’d stayed, and they’d talked for an h…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
71.5152%