Run: 2026-03-03-01KJV08YP4J6X7FX6V2JF00E2P

Run Details

Duration:
7.8s
Cost:
$0.002544
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the London pavement, turning the asphalt into a black mirror that shattered under every boot strike. Detective Harlow Quinn ignored the ache in her knees and the rhythmic thrum of blood against her eardrums. Ahead of her, a figure cloaked in a heavy charcoal coat darted around the corner of a boarded-up shopfront toward the rusted metal stairs of an abandoned Tube station. Harlow pushed harder, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull by the relentless downpour. She reached the top of the stairs, lungs burning with the sharp, metallic tang of the city. Below, the dark maw of the subterranean entrance swallowed the man’s shadow. She drew her service weapon, the steel cold and familiar in her palm. The watch on her left wrist clicked as she checked the time; the full moon hung obscured somewhere behind the thick, bruised clouds, signaling the shift. "Stop right there, Herrera. You have nowhere left to run." The silhouette at the bottom of the stairs paused, his frame rigid. He glanced back, the faint ambient light from the streetlamps catching the desperate, jagged movement of his throat. He reached for a chain around his neck, fingers brushing against a worn medallion before he plunged further into the gloom. Harlow didn't hesitate. She descended, each step ringing out with a sharp, hollow echo that betrayed her position. The stench of stale air, damp concrete, and something metallic—like copper mixed with ozone—waited in the dark. She reached the landing, where a wall of graffiti-covered tiles gave way to a rusted service gate. The lock hung open, swaying on a broken hinge. "I know about the treatments, Tomás. I know you’re the one patching up the people nobody else sees. Talk now, and I might forget you ever held a scalpel." The man turned, his olive skin ghostly pale in the sliver of moonlight filtering through a crack in the ceiling. He clutched his left forearm beneath his coat, the fabric marred by a long, jagged tear. The scar hidden beneath the wool seemed to pulse with a faint, unnatural heat. "You should have stayed in the light, Detective. You have no idea what you’re chasing down here. This isn't a case you solve with handcuffs." He tapped a piece of bone against the sensor of the turnstile. A hidden mechanism ground to life with the sound of grinding teeth, and the inner wall of the station receded, revealing a spiraling tunnel lined not with transit signs, but with flickering, oil-slicked lanterns. The air shifted instantly, growing thick with the scent of dried herbs, ozone, and wet earth. A low hum vibrated against the floorboards, rhythmic as a heartbeat. Harlow stood at the threshold of the entrance to the Veil Market. The tunnel pulsed with a sickly, iridescent light. Dozens of shadows moved in the depths, creatures draped in heavy silks, their faces obscured by intricate masks. A merchant with eyes like polished obsidian caught her stare, his hands busy weighing glowing, crystalline shards in a brass scale. "Step away from the gate, Herrera. You’re under arrest for obstruction and aiding known associates." "Look at this place and tell me your laws apply here. You think you’re hunting a criminal? You’re walking into a slaughterhouse." His voice didn't rise; it carried a strange, hollow resonance that seemed to bounce off the damp walls and return as a whisper. He stepped backward, crossing the line into the throng of the market. The crowds parted for him, heads turning, masks tilting with predatory curiosity. A creature with skin that rippled like oil turned a long, needle-tipped finger toward the entrance, pointing directly at the detective. Harlow shifted her stance, military discipline warring with the primal urge to retreat. She took one step inside. The transition felt electric, the hair on her arms standing rigid. The tunnel walls felt less like brick and more like living, pulsating muscle. "I’ve spent eighteen years in the rain, Tomás. You think a few shadows and a bit of theater will make me turn back?" "I think you’ve forgotten what happened to Morris. You really want to find out what really took him? This is where secrets like that go to be butchered. Walk in, and you won’t just lose your badge. You’ll lose the last bit of reality keeping you sane." He pulled a small satchel from his side, tossing a handful of fine, silver powder into the air. The dust hung suspended, then ignited into a blinding flash of white light that hissed against the stone floor. When the light dimmed, the man vanished into the sea of cloaks and shifting, inhuman limbs. Harlow pushed forward, ignoring the way the shadows behind her seemed to lengthen and sharpen, morphing into claws that scraped against the tiled walls. She saw a flicker of the Saint Christopher medallion twenty feet ahead, bobbing through the crowd. She kept her weapon low, her eyes scanning the bizarre wares laid out on makeshift crates: glass vials filled with captured lightning, knives carved from teeth, and scrolls that seemed to unroll and read themselves in languages that hurt her teeth to even perceive. The market swarmed. A woman with too many joints in her fingers glided past, a tray of pulsating, bioluminescent organs offered toward the detective. Harlow sidestepped, her shoulder brushing against a hooded figure that felt unnervingly cold, like stagnant water. "Where are you, Herrera?" "Searching for ghosts, Detective? You’ll find plenty here." The voice didn't come from behind; it drifted from the rafters, layered and distorted. She spun toward the ceiling, seeing only the tangled web of electrical wires and pulsating ceiling moss. She pushed through a knot of people—if they were people—their garments smelling of mothballs and rotted flowers. One of them stopped her, holding a lantern that glowed with a sickly, bruised purple light. The creature’s face remained buried deep within a hood, but the hands—six-fingered, webbed in translucent skin—clutched at the air, blocking her path. "She is not of the Veil," the creature hissed, its voice like dry leaves skittering over pavement. "Out of my way. I have an order for apprehension." "Orders die here. Reality bends to the highest bidder." The creature lunged. Harlow deflected the strike with her forearm, feeling the impact rattle her bones. She drove her boot into the creature’s midsection, forcing it to crumple, but the market didn't stop. The flow of buyers and sellers shifted around her, turning into a whirlpool of confusion. She fought to keep her eyes on the medallion, that small, silver circle of sanity being swallowed by the gloom. She vaulted over a table of screeching, clockwork insects, her boots sliding on the slick, uneven floor. Her heart hammered against her ribs, the rhythm syncing with the strange, thumping pulse of the underground station. Every sense she possessed screamed at her to retreat, to bolt back up the stairs and into the comforting, honest cold of the London rain. Instead, she took another step into the belly of the beast.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1178
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1178
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"maw"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count2
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"crystalline"
count1
12
word"resonance"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"electric"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count1
16
word"scanning"
count1
17
word"apprehension"
count1
18
word"comforting"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"rhythmic"
2"maw"
3"familiar"
4"gloom"
5"echo"
6"pulse"
7"vibrated"
8"pulsed"
9"depths"
10"intricate"
11"crystalline"
12"resonance"
13"whisper"
14"electric"
15"flicker"
16"scanning"
17"apprehension"
18"comforting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
46.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1172
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount964
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
London2
Harlow8
Quinn1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
places
0"London"
1"Veil"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"resonance that seemed to bounce off the damp walls and return as a whisper"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.853
wordCount1172
matches
0"not with transit signs, but with flickering, oil-slicked lanterns"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean40.41
std23.95
cv0.593
sampleLengths
079
168
210
351
461
529
650
725
873
959
1015
1122
1268
1342
1423
1547
1653
1784
1840
194
208
2148
2238
2317
2410
259
2668
2760
2811
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"being swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs167
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences70
ratio0.086
matches
0"The watch on her left wrist clicked as she checked the time; the full moon hung obscured somewhere behind the thick, bruised clouds, signaling the shift."
1"The stench of stale air, damp concrete, and something metallic—like copper mixed with ozone—waited in the dark."
2"His voice didn't rise; it carried a strange, hollow resonance that seemed to bounce off the damp walls and return as a whisper."
3"The voice didn't come from behind; it drifted from the rafters, layered and distorted."
4"She pushed through a knot of people—if they were people—their garments smelling of mothballs and rotted flowers."
5"The creature’s face remained buried deep within a hood, but the hands—six-fingered, webbed in translucent skin—clutched at the air, blocking her path."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount976
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"long, needle-tipped finger"
1"sickly, bruised purple light."
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.01639344262295082
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00819672131147541
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean16.74
std7.86
cv0.47
sampleLengths
018
118
229
314
417
512
613
726
810
912
1018
1121
123
1315
1417
1517
169
1729
1820
1916
2014
2125
2212
2334
2416
2511
2612
278
2818
2921
3015
3122
3223
3312
3412
3521
3613
375
3811
3913
4023
4147
4218
4319
4416
4524
4616
4744
483
4921
50.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.35714285714285715
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners25
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Instead, she took another step"
ratio0.017
84.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences59
matches
0"She reached the top of"
1"She drew her service weapon,"
2"He glanced back, the faint"
3"He reached for a chain"
4"She descended, each step ringing"
5"She reached the landing, where"
6"He clutched his left forearm"
7"He tapped a piece of"
8"His voice didn't rise; it"
9"He stepped backward, crossing the"
10"She took one step inside."
11"He pulled a small satchel"
12"She saw a flicker of"
13"She kept her weapon low,"
14"She spun toward the ceiling,"
15"She pushed through a knot"
16"She drove her boot into"
17"She fought to keep her"
18"She vaulted over a table"
19"Her heart hammered against her"
ratio0.339
2.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences59
matches
0"Rain slicked the London pavement,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ignored the"
2"Harlow pushed harder, her salt-and-pepper"
3"She reached the top of"
4"She drew her service weapon,"
5"The watch on her left"
6"The silhouette at the bottom"
7"He glanced back, the faint"
8"He reached for a chain"
9"Harlow didn't hesitate."
10"She descended, each step ringing"
11"The stench of stale air,"
12"She reached the landing, where"
13"The lock hung open, swaying"
14"The man turned, his olive"
15"He clutched his left forearm"
16"The scar hidden beneath the"
17"He tapped a piece of"
18"A hidden mechanism ground to"
19"The air shifted instantly, growing"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Rain slicked the London pavement, turning the asphalt into a black mirror that shattered under every boot strike."
1"She descended, each step ringing out with a sharp, hollow echo that betrayed her position."
2"His voice didn't rise; it carried a strange, hollow resonance that seemed to bounce off the damp walls and return as a whisper."
3"A creature with skin that rippled like oil turned a long, needle-tipped finger toward the entrance, pointing directly at the detective."
4"The dust hung suspended, then ignited into a blinding flash of white light that hissed against the stone floor."
5"She kept her weapon low, her eyes scanning the bizarre wares laid out on makeshift crates: glass vials filled with captured lightning, knives carved from teeth,…"
6"Harlow sidestepped, her shoulder brushing against a hooded figure that felt unnervingly cold, like stagnant water."
7"One of them stopped her, holding a lantern that glowed with a sickly, bruised purple light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the creature hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.167
77.5105%