Run: 2026-03-03-01KJV0A9SRH6Z9P7QV0W5RE711

Run Details

Duration:
8.3s
Cost:
$0.002861
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed, casting a sickly sludge of light over the damp Soho pavement. Inside, the air tasted of stale malt and the heavy, metallic tang of history. Aurora wiped her forehead with the back of her wrist, the small crescent scar catching the dim amber glow of the Edison bulbs as she slid a stack of delivery slips onto the bar top. Silas leaned against the polished mahogany, his silver ring clicking softly as he drummed his fingers. He shifted his weight, favoring the bad knee that gave him away every time the barometric pressure dropped. He didn't look up from the glass he was polishing, but the corner of his mouth twitched upward. "Late again, Rory. The wontons will have ghosts by the time they reach their destination." "Traffic was a parking lot of angry metal and broken dreams, Silas. Don't start." She grabbed a rag to wipe the condensation from her temples. A shadow blocked the doorway, the heavy oak door swinging wide to reveal a man in a bespoke navy coat. He stood rigid, his eyes scanning the low-slung rafters, the maps yellowed with age, and the motley collection of patrons buried in their pints. He stepped in, his polished Oxfords clicking against the floorboards with a rhythm that felt out of place among the scuffed boots and sneakers of the usual crowd. Aurora froze. She recognized the sharp line of that jaw, the way he held his shoulders—a posture forged in private schools and maintained through high-stakes depositions. It was Evan. He looked older, the arrogance that once sat like a throne upon his features now tempered by a jagged line of anxiety. He walked toward the bar, his gaze sweeping over the room until it locked on her. "Laila? Is that actually you?" The name pricked her like a thorn. She hadn't used that name since the day she climbed onto the night coach to London, leaving her phone at the bottom of a trash bin in Cardiff. She turned slowly, her blue eyes turning to flint. "Names don't exist here, Evan. You took a wrong turn at the city limits." He stopped three feet away, his hands shoved deep into his coat pockets as if he were afraid to touch anything in the room. He looked at Silas, then back at her, his lips parting in a mockery of a smile. "I saw the delivery bike outside. I figured the logo looked familiar. I didn't think I’d find you behind a bar in the shadows of a place like this. You look... different. Sharp. Like something that cuts." Silas set the glass down, his movements slow and deliberate. He didn't introduce himself, staying in the peripheral, a quiet sentinel watching the shift in the air pressure. Aurora kept her hands locked on the bar, gripping the edge until her knuckles turned ivory. "I am different. And you are trespassing on a life that doesn't include your brand of collateral damage." "I spent two years looking for you, Rory." "You spent two years looking for a possession you lost, not a person. There’s a distinction." "That’s not fair. I changed. I stopped the firm, I stopped the pressure. I went to therapy, for God’s sake, I sat in rooms with people who told me how to be a person again." He leaned closer, the scent of expensive cologne clashing with the pungent aroma of hops and floor wax. He reached out, his hand hovering near her sleeve before he saw the look in her eyes and pulled it back, his fingers trembling in the air. Time stretched between them, thick and suffocating. The bar faded; the clatter of plates and the murmur of other guests became a dull, rhythmic ringing in her ears. "You look like a ghost of the man who decided I shouldn't go to the park without a chaperone," she murmured. "I was young. We were both stupid." "No. You were a jailer. I was just the inmate who finally learned how to pick the lock." Silas cleared his throat, the sound like gravel underfoot. He pushed a fresh glass of whiskey toward the space between them, the ice clinking a hollow, solitary note. Evan didn't look at the drink. His eyes were trapped in the reflection of the mirror behind the bar, fixed on Aurora’s face, tracing the maturity she had earned through sleepless nights and the quiet survival of her exile. "Is this your life now? Serving people who don't know your real name? Living in a flat that smells like old tobacco?" "It’s a life where I don't have to account for every second of my schedule. Where I don't have to apologize for existing in the same room as a map." "I have the car outside. I’m heading back to the coast. It wouldn't take anything to get you out of this. We could leave all this behind." Aurora let out a short, sharp laugh. It lacked humor, echoing instead with the weight of every night she spent staring at the ceiling of her cramped flat, imagining him coming for her in the dark. "You think the distance is the problem? You think this coat or that bike or this bar is the friction? You don't get it, Evan. You don't have the capacity to get it. You look at me and you see an extension of your own ego. I don't exist to you. I only exist as an entry in your ledger that didn't balance." "I love you, Aurora. I never stopped." Silas shifted his weight, his gaze hardening as he stepped into the light. He leaned in, his voice a low, resonant rumble that cut through the space Evan had carved out for his plea. "She’s already accounted for, son. You’re looking for a woman who doesn't live here anymore, and quite frankly, she isn't welcome in your version of the world. Time has a way of calcifying things. You’re trying to move a mountain that’s already been leveled." Evan looked at the older man, recognizing the authority, the quiet strength that came from having seen the world end a dozen times and having walked away from the wreckage. He looked back at Aurora, the realization dawning on him that the person he came to reclaim had been buried deep, and he lacked the tools to excavate her. "You really won't even consider it? A conversation? A single hour without the walls of this place?" "My shift ends when the last order is delivered. My life ends when I stop being in control of it. You aren't part of either equation." She picked up the next ticket, turning away from him to face the kitchen door. The movement was final, a rejection of the past folded into the rhythm of her work. Evan lingered, his stature deflating, the sharp, tailored lines of his coat suddenly appearing foolish in the dim, unpretentious glow of the Nest. He turned, his Oxfords clicking a slow retreat toward the door, echoing his failure with every step. He reached the threshold and looked back one final time. Aurora didn't turn. She stood at the center of the bar, counting out change for a regular at the far end of the counter. The green light of the neon sign flickered, throwing a long shadow across the threshold. The door swung open, the wet street air rushing in, and then it clicked shut. Silas exhaled, the sound long and weary. He picked up the forgotten glass of whiskey and poured it into the sink. "Good riddance to bad rubbish, then." "He was always good at making a grand entrance. He was never any good at the leaving." She grabbed the next bag of food, the warmth of the container seeping into her palms. She looked toward the door, then back at the maps on the wall, the geography of places she would never go and histories she had long ago outrun. "You’re going to be okay, Rory?" "I’m finished," she said, her voice steady. "And finished is exactly what I wanted to be."
created_at"2026-03-03T23:25:16.996Z" 3/3/2026, 11:25:16 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.08
leniency0.16
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1359
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"really"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1359
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"sentinel"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"solitary"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count2
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"long shadow"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"scanning"
2"familiar"
3"sentinel"
4"rhythmic"
5"solitary"
6"tracing"
7"echoing"
8"flickered"
9"long shadow"
10"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1358
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount876
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Soho1
Edison1
Oxfords2
Evan5
London1
Cardiff1
Silas6
Aurora7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Edison"
3"Oxfords"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1358
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean33.95
std22.3
cv0.657
sampleLengths
069
152
215
314
483
567
65
744
814
941
1037
1144
1218
138
1416
1535
1673
1721
187
1918
2067
2122
2230
2327
2436
2563
267
2734
2844
2959
3017
3126
3271
3364
3421
356
3617
3744
386
3916
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"were trapped"
1"been buried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs141
matches
0"was polishing"
66.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences75
ratio0.027
matches
0"She recognized the sharp line of that jaw, the way he held his shoulders—a posture forged in private schools and maintained through high-stakes depositions."
1"The bar faded; the clatter of plates and the murmur of other guests became a dull, rhythmic ringing in her ears."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount879
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.01820250284414107
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004550625711035267
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean18.11
std10.3
cv0.569
sampleLengths
020
114
235
316
418
518
615
714
811
920
1024
1128
122
1324
143
1522
1616
175
187
1928
209
2114
2224
2317
2437
2510
2618
2716
2818
298
3016
3135
3218
3327
347
3521
3621
377
3818
399
4019
416
4233
4322
4430
4527
467
4729
4863
497
37.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.30666666666666664
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences50
matches
0"He shifted his weight, favoring"
1"He didn't look up from"
2"She grabbed a rag to"
3"He stood rigid, his eyes"
4"He stepped in, his polished"
5"She recognized the sharp line"
6"It was Evan."
7"He looked older, the arrogance"
8"He walked toward the bar,"
9"She hadn't used that name"
10"She turned slowly, her blue"
11"He stopped three feet away,"
12"He looked at Silas, then"
13"He didn't introduce himself, staying"
14"He leaned closer, the scent"
15"He reached out, his hand"
16"He pushed a fresh glass"
17"His eyes were trapped in"
18"It lacked humor, echoing instead"
19"He leaned in, his voice"
ratio0.58
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences50
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora wiped her forehead with"
2"Silas leaned against the polished"
3"He shifted his weight, favoring"
4"He didn't look up from"
5"She grabbed a rag to"
6"A shadow blocked the doorway,"
7"He stood rigid, his eyes"
8"He stepped in, his polished"
9"She recognized the sharp line"
10"It was Evan."
11"He looked older, the arrogance"
12"He walked toward the bar,"
13"The name pricked her like"
14"She hadn't used that name"
15"She turned slowly, her blue"
16"He stopped three feet away,"
17"He looked at Silas, then"
18"Silas set the glass down,"
19"He didn't introduce himself, staying"
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He shifted his weight, favoring the bad knee that gave him away every time the barometric pressure dropped."
1"He stepped in, his polished Oxfords clicking against the floorboards with a rhythm that felt out of place among the scuffed boots and sneakers of the usual crow…"
2"He reached out, his hand hovering near her sleeve before he saw the look in her eyes and pulled it back, his fingers trembling in the air."
3"Evan looked at the older man, recognizing the authority, the quiet strength that came from having seen the world end a dozen times and having walked away from t…"
4"Evan lingered, his stature deflating, the sharp, tailored lines of his coat suddenly appearing foolish in the dim, unpretentious glow of the Nest."
5"He turned, his Oxfords clicking a slow retreat toward the door, echoing his failure with every step."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.08
leniency0.16
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.08
75.5234%