| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1129 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 7.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1129 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "resonance" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "dancing" | | 8 | "cascading" | | 9 | "velvet" | | 10 | "glint" | | 11 | "beacon" | | 12 | "vibrated" | | 13 | "fractured" | | 14 | "etched" | | 15 | "flickered" | | 16 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1128 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.81% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1128 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.06 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Rory | 12 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Grove | 3 | | Fae | 3 | | Veil | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Isolde | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Dymas" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.968 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like static on an old television s" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 51.27 | | std | 35.11 | | cv | 0.685 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 102 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 109 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 68 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 83 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 89 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 93 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 98 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 105 |
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| 85.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "being stretched" | | 1 | "was covered" | | 2 | "is owed" | | 3 | "was shrouded" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "The liquid didn't flow downward; it defied gravity, dancing in geometric spheres above the basin before cascading upward into the canopy." | | 1 | "The droplet didn't break; it orbited her palm, coating her skin in a faint, bioluminescent shimmer that mirrored the glint of the Fae blade." | | 2 | "They didn't move like a person; they simply rearranged the space they occupied, existing in the gaps between one moment and the next." | | 3 | "The realization hit her then—the garden was not merely flora." | | 4 | "The image staring back was not entirely her own; her eyes were a deeper, more predatory shade of cobalt, and the scar on her wrist glowed with a faint, crimson light." | | 5 | "She had left her old life in Cardiff to run, to hide; now, she realized she had been running toward this threshold all along." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1131 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.02564102564102564 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00618921308576481 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 15.67 | | std | 7.52 | | cv | 0.48 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 31 |
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| 52.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3472222222222222 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She drifted two inches above" | | 1 | "She felt the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 2 | "It is not the wind." | | 3 | "It tilted its head, observing" | | 4 | "You bring the scent of" | | 5 | "They didn't move like a" | | 6 | "It was an intelligence, a" | | 7 | "It feels like the reality" | | 8 | "She blinked, and the reflection" | | 9 | "She looked up at the" | | 10 | "It was the only part" | | 11 | "She pulled it away, watching" | | 12 | "It is the threshold of" | | 13 | "They looked back, their violet" | | 14 | "She glanced at the Fae" | | 15 | "She had left her old" | | 16 | "She squeezed the hilt of" |
| | ratio | 0.239 | |
| 44.51% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the Richmond" | | 1 | "Rory stepped over the boundary" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant resting against" | | 3 | "Isolde moved ahead, her silver" | | 4 | "She drifted two inches above" | | 5 | "The deeper we tread, the" | | 6 | "Rory tightened her grip on" | | 7 | "She felt the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 8 | "Nyx followed at the edge" | | 9 | "These woods breathe, Rory." | | 10 | "It is not the wind." | | 11 | "The voice of the Shade" | | 12 | "Rory paused, tapping a finger" | | 13 | "Every time the wind brushed" | | 14 | "A stag with antlers made" | | 15 | "It tilted its head, observing" | | 16 | "The boundary of the Grove" | | 17 | "Isolde’s pale lavender eyes tracked" | | 18 | "Rory looked toward the center" | | 19 | "The liquid didn't flow downward;" |
| | ratio | 0.831 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "If you linger, you leak." |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the Richmond grove tasted of crushed ozone and overripe peaches, a cloying sweetness that clung to the back of Rory’s throat." | | 1 | "Rory stepped over the boundary line, the crunch of dry autumn leaves beneath her boots replaced by the soft, resilient spring of moss that rippled like silk und…" | | 2 | "Isolde moved ahead, her silver hair catching a light that had no discernible source." | | 3 | "She drifted two inches above the ground, leaving no indentation in the lush, glowing flora that carpeted the clearing." | | 4 | "Around them, trees with translucent, glass-like bark spiraled toward a sky that swirled with ribbons of amber and bruised gold." | | 5 | "It tilted its head, observing the group with a gaze that felt heavy, ancient, and entirely devoid of human empathy." | | 6 | "Isolde’s pale lavender eyes tracked a cluster of iridescent hummingbirds that zipped through the air, their wings leaving streaks of powdered light." | | 7 | "The droplet didn't break; it orbited her palm, coating her skin in a faint, bioluminescent shimmer that mirrored the glint of the Fae blade." | | 8 | "The amber light in the sky deepened, casting long, fractured shadows that didn't align with their physical bodies." | | 9 | "Rory stepped cautiously around a patch of mushrooms that glowed with a rhythmic, pulsing luminescence." | | 10 | "It was an intelligence, a vast, interconnected network that tracked their every movement with subtle shifts in color and tone." | | 11 | "The entrance was shrouded in a swirling, opaque mist that looked like static on an old television screen." | | 12 | "Nyx drifted through the mist of the gateway, their form dissolving into a swarm of dancing shadows before reforming on the other side." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |