| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 75.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1230 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "really" | | 5 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1230 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "reminder" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "pawn" | | 5 | "palpable" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "variable" | | 8 | "intensity" | | 9 | "unspoken" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "variables" | | 12 | "clenching" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1223 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.50% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Persistent is a polite way to frame an obsession, Aurora, Lucien murmured." | | 1 | "To see if you were still burning, he said, staring at her mouth." |
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| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1223 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.98 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "You" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Gallic | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | Lucien | 5 | | Luc | 1 | | French | 1 | | London | 1 | | You | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Luc" | | 5 | "You" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 78.57% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "suit that seemed to devour the dim light of the landing" | | 1 | "felt like a probe, the black one swallo" |
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| 36.47% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.635 | | wordCount | 1223 | | matches | | 0 | "not quickly, but with a deliberate, predatory fluidity" | | 1 | "not a gentle reconciliation but a reclamation" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.58% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 48.92 | | std | 21.99 | | cv | 0.45 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 62 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 69 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 57 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 54 | | 20 | 92 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 63 | | 24 | 88 |
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| 91.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "was occupied" | | 1 | "were locked" | | 2 | "was tethered" | | 3 | "was extinguished" |
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| 35.80% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 203 | | matches | | 0 | "was vibrating" | | 1 | "wasn’t looking" | | 2 | "was looking" | | 3 | "were playing" | | 4 | "were still burning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "His eyes—one a scorching amber, the other a void of absolute, ink-stain black—tracked Rory’s face with the precision of a jeweler appraising a questionable gem." | | 1 | "Rory felt the familiar, dangerous pull—the same magnetism that had drawn her to him in the first place, against every instinct of self-preservation she possessed." | | 2 | "She remembered the way his hands felt—cool, steady, and terrifyingly strong." | | 3 | "I don't want your compliance; I want your clarity." | | 4 | "The ghost of her former life—the one where she was tethered to a man who wanted her small and silent—flashed through her mind, and then it was extinguished by the sheer, overwhelming reality of Lucien." | | 5 | "In this moment, the flat, the books, the life she had built to hide from her mistakes—everything collapsed into the space between their bodies." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1239 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "cramped, paper-strewn chaos" |
| | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03470540758676352 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01694915254237288 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 15.68 | | std | 8.8 | | cv | 0.561 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 36 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 44.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3717948717948718 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 43.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the frame was occupied" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She looked past the door," | | 1 | "His eyes—one a scorching amber," | | 2 | "You’re persistent, she said, her" | | 3 | "He stepped across the threshold" | | 4 | "He smelled of rain, expensive" | | 5 | "He looked around the flat," | | 6 | "Your living arrangements have not" | | 7 | "I didn’t ask for a" | | 8 | "She dropped the delivery bag" | | 9 | "She felt the sudden, suffocating" | | 10 | "He stood in the center" | | 11 | "He moved toward her, not" | | 12 | "He stopped just inside her" | | 13 | "I wasn’t looking for Eva," | | 14 | "I was looking for the" | | 15 | "I didn’t ghost you." | | 16 | "You were playing games with" | | 17 | "I wasn’t a pawn in" | | 18 | "He reached out, his gloved" | | 19 | "He didn't touch her skin," |
| | ratio | 0.61 | |
| 44.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts clicked in" | | 1 | "Rory stood in the narrow" | | 2 | "She looked past the door," | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau leaned slightly on" | | 4 | "His eyes—one a scorching amber," | | 5 | "Rory’s hand went instinctively to" | | 6 | "A phantom ache blossomed there," | | 7 | "You’re persistent, she said, her" | | 8 | "Lucien tilted his head, a" | | 9 | "He stepped across the threshold" | | 10 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, abandoned" | | 11 | "He smelled of rain, expensive" | | 12 | "He looked around the flat," | | 13 | "Your living arrangements have not" | | 14 | "Neither, it seems, has your" | | 15 | "I didn’t ask for a" | | 16 | "She dropped the delivery bag" | | 17 | "She felt the sudden, suffocating" | | 18 | "He stood in the center" | | 19 | "He moved toward her, not" |
| | ratio | 0.831 | |
| 64.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts clicked in rapid succession, a frantic, rhythmic percussion that signaled Eva’s heightened state of caution before the door even swung open." | | 1 | "Lucien tilted his head, a gesture that held none of his usual Gallic nonchalance." | | 2 | "I wasn’t looking for Eva, he said, his voice dropping an octave, slipping into the velvet-soft French accent he usually saved for negotiations." | | 3 | "I was looking for the woman who ghosted me in the middle of a delicate exchange, leaving me to explain her absence to people who are far less forgiving than I a…" | | 4 | "He reached out, his gloved hand hovering for a second before his fingers caught the edge of her sleeve, pulling it back just enough to expose the faint line of …" | | 5 | "He didn't touch her skin, but the heat radiating from him was palpable, a dry, static warmth that made the hair on her arms stand up." | | 6 | "His eyes were locked on hers, the amber one bright with an intensity that felt like a probe, the black one swallowing the light of the room." | | 7 | "Rory felt the familiar, dangerous pull—the same magnetism that had drawn her to him in the first place, against every instinct of self-preservation she possesse…" | | 8 | "She remembered the nights they had spent in places like this, talking in hushed tones about things that existed beneath the pavement of London, his voice a balm…" | | 9 | "You’ve been hiding here, serving food to people who don't know your name, playing at a life that isn't large enough to contain you." | | 10 | "The ghost of her former life—the one where she was tethered to a man who wanted her small and silent—flashed through her mind, and then it was extinguished by t…" | | 11 | "It tasted of salt and secrets, a collision of desperate, jagged edges that had been apart for too long." | | 12 | "Rory moved into him, her hands clenching in the fabric of his coat, pulling him closer as if she could absorb the dangerous clarity he offered." | | 13 | "As he deepened the kiss, his hand sliding into the hair at the back of her head, Rory realized with a terrifying clarity that she hadn't been hiding for safety …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |