Run: 2026-03-03-01KJV0E3GTKTXZ5KXHNN816RV2

Run Details

Duration:
7.1s
Cost:
$0.002547
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts clicked in rapid succession, a frantic, rhythmic percussion that signaled Eva’s heightened state of caution before the door even swung open. Rory stood in the narrow mouth of the hallway, a delivery bag from Golden Empress still slung over her shoulder, the scent of stir-fry and MSG clinging to her wool coat like a second skin. She looked past the door, expecting to see Eva’s perpetually frazzled face, perhaps a stray scroll tucked behind her ear. Instead, the frame was occupied by a tailored charcoal suit that seemed to devour the dim light of the landing. Lucien Moreau leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, his platinum hair pulled back so severely it emphasized the predatory sharpness of his cheekbones. His eyes—one a scorching amber, the other a void of absolute, ink-stain black—tracked Rory’s face with the precision of a jeweler appraising a questionable gem. Rory’s hand went instinctively to her left wrist, her fingers brushing the small, crescent-shaped scar beneath her sleeve. A phantom ache blossomed there, a reminder of a frantic, messy night weeks ago that she had tried to drink into oblivion. You’re persistent, she said, her voice sounding thinner than she would have liked. Lucien tilted his head, a gesture that held none of his usual Gallic nonchalance. He stepped across the threshold without an invitation, forcing Rory to back into the cramped, paper-strewn chaos of the living room. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, abandoned a half-chewed research note and bolted for the safety of the bedroom, his claws skittering on the floorboards. Persistent is a polite way to frame an obsession, Aurora, Lucien murmured. He smelled of rain, expensive tobacco, and that underlying, metallic ozone that always heralded his presence. He looked around the flat, his expression one of faint, mocking distaste as he noted the stacks of books and the precarious piles of scrolls. Your living arrangements have not improved. Neither, it seems, has your choice of company. I didn’t ask for a visit, Luc. And I certainly didn’t ask for a critique of my flat. She dropped the delivery bag onto a stack of journals, the sound muffled by the layers of paper. She felt the sudden, suffocating proximity of him. In the small room, his presence was gravitational. He stood in the center of the mess like a monolith, entirely unbothered by the clutter that usually made Rory feel like she was vibrating out of her own skin. He moved toward her, not quickly, but with a deliberate, predatory fluidity. He stopped just inside her personal space, the tip of his cane tapping softly against a floorboard. Behind the ivory handle, Rory knew, lay a blade thin as a whisper and sharp enough to sever a soul’s connection to its anchor. But it was his gaze that held her pinned. I wasn’t looking for Eva, he said, his voice dropping an octave, slipping into the velvet-soft French accent he usually saved for negotiations. I was looking for the woman who ghosted me in the middle of a delicate exchange, leaving me to explain her absence to people who are far less forgiving than I am. Rory scoffed, crossing her arms over her chest. I didn’t ghost you. I left. There is a distinction. You were playing games with information that could have gotten me killed, just to see what I would do under pressure. I wasn’t a pawn in your little underworld chess match, and I told you that before I walked out. He reached out, his gloved hand hovering for a second before his fingers caught the edge of her sleeve, pulling it back just enough to expose the faint line of her scar. He didn't touch her skin, but the heat radiating from him was palpable, a dry, static warmth that made the hair on her arms stand up. You were never a pawn, Rory. You were the only variable in the equation I couldn’t solve. That makes you dangerous, not disposable. His eyes were locked on hers, the amber one bright with an intensity that felt like a probe, the black one swallowing the light of the room. The distance between them shrank, the air in the room tasting suddenly of ozone and unspoken friction. Rory felt the familiar, dangerous pull—the same magnetism that had drawn her to him in the first place, against every instinct of self-preservation she possessed. She remembered the way his hands felt—cool, steady, and terrifyingly strong. She remembered the nights they had spent in places like this, talking in hushed tones about things that existed beneath the pavement of London, his voice a balm against the anxiety she carried from her past. He was the fix for everything except the damage he did to her equilibrium. You’re a hypocrite, she whispered, tilting her chin up. You talk about variables and equations, but you just want to know if you still have control. Lucien hummed, a low, vibrating sound in his chest. Control is an illusion, Aurora. You taught me that better than anyone. I don't want your compliance; I want your clarity. You’ve been hiding here, serving food to people who don't know your name, playing at a life that isn't large enough to contain you. It’s beneath you. It’s safe, she bit back. After everything, I’m allowed to want safe. He let out a short, sharp laugh, stepping closer until his chest brushed the front of her coat. He leaned down, his face angled toward her ear, his breath warm against her temple. Safety is a shroud, Rory. You aren’t wired for it. You were born to burn, not to smolder in the dark. His hand moved, fingers cupping the back of her neck. It wasn't an aggressive movement, but a possessive claim of territory. Her breath hitched, trapped in the back of her throat. She knew she should push him away, should reach for the nearest heavy book or simply walk out the door, but her knees felt dangerously hollow. The ghost of her former life—the one where she was tethered to a man who wanted her small and silent—flashed through her mind, and then it was extinguished by the sheer, overwhelming reality of Lucien. Why did you come here, really? she breathed, her hands resting flat against the charcoal wool of his lapels. To see if you were still burning, he said, staring at her mouth. Or if you’d finally gone cold. He didn't wait for an answer. He leaned in, the kiss not a gentle reconciliation but a reclamation. It tasted of salt and secrets, a collision of desperate, jagged edges that had been apart for too long. Rory moved into him, her hands clenching in the fabric of his coat, pulling him closer as if she could absorb the dangerous clarity he offered. In this moment, the flat, the books, the life she had built to hide from her mistakes—everything collapsed into the space between their bodies. It was messy, it was ill-advised, and it was perfectly, unmistakably them. As he deepened the kiss, his hand sliding into the hair at the back of her head, Rory realized with a terrifying clarity that she hadn't been hiding for safety at all. She had been waiting for the only person who knew exactly how much damage they could do to each other.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
75.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"quickly"
2"softly"
3"suddenly"
4"really"
5"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"reminder"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"pawn"
count2
5
word"palpable"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"variable"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"variables"
count1
12
word"clenching"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"reminder"
2"whisper"
3"velvet"
4"pawn"
5"palpable"
6"warmth"
7"variable"
8"intensity"
9"unspoken"
10"familiar"
11"variables"
12"clenching"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1223
ratio0
matches(empty)
62.50% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions2
matches
0"Persistent is a polite way to frame an obsession, Aurora, Lucien murmured."
1"To see if you were still burning, he said, staring at her mouth."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1223
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Golden1
Empress1
Moreau1
Rory12
Gallic1
Aurora2
Lucien5
Luc1
French1
London1
You10
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Luc"
5"You"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"suit that seemed to devour the dim light of the landing"
1"felt like a probe, the black one swallo"
36.47% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.635
wordCount1223
matches
0"not quickly, but with a deliberate, predatory fluidity"
1"not a gentle reconciliation but a reclamation"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
85.58% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean48.92
std21.99
cv0.45
sampleLengths
059
140
248
340
413
558
667
718
864
962
1055
1158
1258
1323
1469
1561
1626
1757
1812
1954
2092
2119
2219
2363
2488
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences78
matches
0"was occupied"
1"were locked"
2"was tethered"
3"was extinguished"
35.80% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs203
matches
0"was vibrating"
1"wasn’t looking"
2"was looking"
3"were playing"
4"were still burning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences78
ratio0.077
matches
0"His eyes—one a scorching amber, the other a void of absolute, ink-stain black—tracked Rory’s face with the precision of a jeweler appraising a questionable gem."
1"Rory felt the familiar, dangerous pull—the same magnetism that had drawn her to him in the first place, against every instinct of self-preservation she possessed."
2"She remembered the way his hands felt—cool, steady, and terrifyingly strong."
3"I don't want your compliance; I want your clarity."
4"The ghost of her former life—the one where she was tethered to a man who wanted her small and silent—flashed through her mind, and then it was extinguished by the sheer, overwhelming reality of Lucien."
5"In this moment, the flat, the books, the life she had built to hide from her mistakes—everything collapsed into the space between their bodies."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1239
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"cramped, paper-strewn chaos"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03470540758676352
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.01694915254237288
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean15.68
std8.8
cv0.561
sampleLengths
024
135
220
320
423
525
618
722
813
914
1021
1123
1212
1316
1425
156
168
177
1811
1918
208
218
2230
2312
2417
2524
269
2723
2832
298
304
312
324
3321
3419
3532
3626
376
3811
396
4027
4117
4225
4311
4436
4514
469
4717
489
495
44.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3717948717948718
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners29
43.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Instead, the frame was occupied"
ratio0.013
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences77
matches
0"She looked past the door,"
1"His eyes—one a scorching amber,"
2"You’re persistent, she said, her"
3"He stepped across the threshold"
4"He smelled of rain, expensive"
5"He looked around the flat,"
6"Your living arrangements have not"
7"I didn’t ask for a"
8"She dropped the delivery bag"
9"She felt the sudden, suffocating"
10"He stood in the center"
11"He moved toward her, not"
12"He stopped just inside her"
13"I wasn’t looking for Eva,"
14"I was looking for the"
15"I didn’t ghost you."
16"You were playing games with"
17"I wasn’t a pawn in"
18"He reached out, his gloved"
19"He didn't touch her skin,"
ratio0.61
44.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences77
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked in"
1"Rory stood in the narrow"
2"She looked past the door,"
3"Lucien Moreau leaned slightly on"
4"His eyes—one a scorching amber,"
5"Rory’s hand went instinctively to"
6"A phantom ache blossomed there,"
7"You’re persistent, she said, her"
8"Lucien tilted his head, a"
9"He stepped across the threshold"
10"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, abandoned"
11"He smelled of rain, expensive"
12"He looked around the flat,"
13"Your living arrangements have not"
14"Neither, it seems, has your"
15"I didn’t ask for a"
16"She dropped the delivery bag"
17"She felt the sudden, suffocating"
18"He stood in the center"
19"He moved toward her, not"
ratio0.831
64.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"To see if you were"
ratio0.013
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount14
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked in rapid succession, a frantic, rhythmic percussion that signaled Eva’s heightened state of caution before the door even swung open."
1"Lucien tilted his head, a gesture that held none of his usual Gallic nonchalance."
2"I wasn’t looking for Eva, he said, his voice dropping an octave, slipping into the velvet-soft French accent he usually saved for negotiations."
3"I was looking for the woman who ghosted me in the middle of a delicate exchange, leaving me to explain her absence to people who are far less forgiving than I a…"
4"He reached out, his gloved hand hovering for a second before his fingers caught the edge of her sleeve, pulling it back just enough to expose the faint line of …"
5"He didn't touch her skin, but the heat radiating from him was palpable, a dry, static warmth that made the hair on her arms stand up."
6"His eyes were locked on hers, the amber one bright with an intensity that felt like a probe, the black one swallowing the light of the room."
7"Rory felt the familiar, dangerous pull—the same magnetism that had drawn her to him in the first place, against every instinct of self-preservation she possesse…"
8"She remembered the nights they had spent in places like this, talking in hushed tones about things that existed beneath the pavement of London, his voice a balm…"
9"You’ve been hiding here, serving food to people who don't know your name, playing at a life that isn't large enough to contain you."
10"The ghost of her former life—the one where she was tethered to a man who wanted her small and silent—flashed through her mind, and then it was extinguished by t…"
11"It tasted of salt and secrets, a collision of desperate, jagged edges that had been apart for too long."
12"Rory moved into him, her hands clenching in the fabric of his coat, pulling him closer as if she could absorb the dangerous clarity he offered."
13"As he deepened the kiss, his hand sliding into the hair at the back of her head, Rory realized with a terrifying clarity that she hadn't been hiding for safety …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
71.6206%