| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.326 | | leniency | 0.652 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "intensity" | | 3 | "predator" | | 4 | "chaotic" | | 5 | "predictable" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "flicked" | | 8 | "intricate" | | 9 | "stark" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "standard" | | 12 | "velvet" | | 13 | "unreadable" | | 14 | "shattered" | | 15 | "tension" | | 16 | "pawn" | | 17 | "ensure" | | 18 | "familiar" | | 19 | "electric" | | 20 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1372 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 3 | | wordCount | 904 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 0.22 | | worstName | "Ptolemy" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Ptolemy" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | (empty) | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a betrayal of everything I’d" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1372 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 24.5 | | std | 19.52 | | cv | 0.797 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 62 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 59 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 58 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 41 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 69 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 57 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 40 | | 45 | 34 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 99.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 19.97% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "He surveyed the chaos of the room—the piles of research notes, the precarious stacks of scrolls, and the half-eaten tuna sandwich abandoned on the desk." | | 1 | "The cane tapped once against the linoleum—a sharp, staccato sound." | | 2 | "He surged into my personal space, the scent of him—woodsmoke and something old, something cold—overwhelming my senses." | | 3 | "The sound of glass shattering downstairs—the unmistakable crashing of windows at the bar below—ripped through the room." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 917 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "ancient, leather-bound manuscripts," | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.029443838604143947 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010905125408942203 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 14.75 | | std | 8.91 | | cv | 0.604 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 32.62% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.3118279569892473 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he pulled a silk" | | 1 | "Instead, I froze." |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "I glanced at Ptolemy, the" | | 1 | "I tightened the belt of" | | 2 | "I pulled the door inward," | | 3 | "He leaned slightly on his" | | 4 | "He stepped past me, uninvited," | | 5 | "He surveyed the chaos of" | | 6 | "He took in the space" | | 7 | "He turned, the amber side" | | 8 | "He didn't move toward the" | | 9 | "I gestured toward the door," | | 10 | "He always noticed." | | 11 | "He didn't acknowledge it with" | | 12 | "he murmured, pacing toward the" | | 13 | "He stopped, his back to" | | 14 | "He swiveled with practiced grace," | | 15 | "He surged into my personal" | | 16 | "He was close enough that" | | 17 | "he breathed, his voice dropping" | | 18 | "I pushed against his chest," | | 19 | "He didn't budge." |
| | ratio | 0.702 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "I glanced at Ptolemy, the" | | 1 | "I tightened the belt of" | | 2 | "The wood felt cold and" | | 3 | "I pulled the door inward," | | 4 | "The air shifted, turning crisp" | | 5 | "Lucien stood there, his tall" | | 6 | "He leaned slightly on his" | | 7 | "He stepped past me, uninvited," | | 8 | "He surveyed the chaos of" | | 9 | "He took in the space" | | 10 | "He turned, the amber side" | | 11 | "He didn't move toward the" | | 12 | "I gestured toward the door," | | 13 | "He always noticed." | | 14 | "He didn't acknowledge it with" | | 15 | "he murmured, pacing toward the" | | 16 | "The word left my mouth" | | 17 | "He stopped, his back to" | | 18 | "The cane tapped once against" | | 19 | "He swiveled with practiced grace," |
| | ratio | 0.93 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn't acknowledge it with words, but his lips curved into a thin, knowing line that made the heat rise in my chest." | | 1 | "The door to the flat splintered inwards, the iron deadbolts snapping like toothpicks as a massive, smoke-wreathed shape stepped through the jagged hole, its eye…" |
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| 91.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he breathed, his voice dropping an octave," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "he breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "I snapped (snap)" | | 4 | "he whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "I hissed (hiss)" | | 6 | "I whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.217 | | leniency | 0.435 | | rawRatio | 0.7 | | effectiveRatio | 0.304 | |