Run: 2026-03-03-01KJV0F1RF2SGTF68YJ6NTR7G4

Run Details

Duration:
9.3s
Cost:
$0.003921
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three sharp knocks rattled the heavy oak door, each one vibrating through the floorboards of the cramped flat. I glanced at Ptolemy, the tabby cat currently sprawled across a stack of ancient, leather-bound manuscripts, his yellow eyes blinking in lazy indifference. "Better not be a collector," I muttered. I tightened the belt of my oversized robe and marched to the entryway. The wood felt cold and unforgiving under my palm. Three deadbolts turned in rhythmic succession, the metallic *snick-snick-snick* echoing off the peeling wallpaper of the landing. I pulled the door inward, ready to give the persistent knocker a piece of my mind. The air shifted, turning crisp and smelling faintly of expensive tobacco and charcoal-rubbed wool. Lucien stood there, his tall frame cutting a sharp silhouette against the dim yellow lights of the hallway. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto mine with the intensity of an apex predator. "You didn't answer your private line," he said. "That's because it's private." He stepped past me, uninvited, his polished boots making no sound on the worn carpet. He surveyed the chaos of the room—the piles of research notes, the precarious stacks of scrolls, and the half-eaten tuna sandwich abandoned on the desk. He took in the space with the clinical detachment of a man appraising a crime scene or a piece of real estate he planned to raze. "A charming nest, Aurora. Utterly chaotic, yet somehow predictable." "Get out, Lucien." He turned, the amber side of his gaze flashing against the softer, darker black. He didn't move toward the door. Instead, he pulled a silk handkerchief from his pocket and flicked a speck of dust off his perfectly tailored charcoal suit jacket. "We have a situation. A rather delicate one involving a client of mine and your unfortunate habit of being where the veil is thinnest." "I told you, I'm done cleaning up after your supernatural messes. Find someone else to play errand girl." I gestured toward the door, my fingers trembling slightly beneath the fabric of my sleeve. He noticed. He always noticed. He didn't acknowledge it with words, but his lips curved into a thin, knowing line that made the heat rise in my chest. "You aren't done," he murmured, pacing toward the small, mismatched kitchen nook. "You’re simply sulking. It lacks the professional edge I once admired." "Admired?" The word left my mouth like a curse. "You used that word to describe my navigation of the Avaros rift, right before you shoved me through it." He stopped, his back to me. The cane tapped once against the linoleum—a sharp, staccato sound. "I ensured your survival. There is a distinction." "Survival isn't the same as living, Lucien." He swiveled with practiced grace, the movement fluid and predatory. He surged into my personal space, the scent of him—woodsmoke and something old, something cold—overwhelming my senses. He was close enough that I could see the fine, intricate silver inlay on his cane’s handle, a stark contrast to the small crescent-shaped scar on my wrist that burned whenever he stood too near. "And yet," he breathed, his voice dropping an octave, "here you are. Living. Holding enough secrets to burn this entire building to the ground." "Is that a threat?" "It’s an observation." I pushed against his chest, but he might as well have been made of iron, or the dark, heavy stone of his father’s realm. He didn't budge. My palm pressed against the charcoal fabric, feeling the steady, rhythmic thrum of a heart that beat with a speed no human should possess. "I'm not doing it," I said, tilting my chin up. "I don't care how many languages you can lie in, or how much coin you’re hiding in the bank." "It isn't about coin." He raised a gloved hand, tracing the air just inches from my cheek, though he didn't make contact. The proximity left my skin humming. "It’s about the breach at the Docks. You were seen in the vicinity of the Golden Empress at midnight. Someone is tracking your movements, Aurora. Someone who doesn't use standard surveillance." The mention of the restaurant made my breath hitch. I had been delivering a late-night order near the warehouse district, trying to avoid the usual haunt of the local shifters. "How do you know that?" "Information is my trade, as you know." "You were following me." "I was protecting an investment." I stepped back, putting the width of the wooden kitchen table between us. I needed distance to think, but the air in the small room felt stifled and thin, like breathing through a wet cloth. "I'm not your investment, Lucien. I'm a person." "A person who is currently being hunted by a rogue thrall from Avaros." He moved toward the window, pulling the heavy velvet curtain aside just enough to peer out into the gray London evening. "You, Laila, are the only one who knows the seal's true frequency. The thrall knows you can undo what he spent three years building." "Don't call me that," I snapped. "That name belongs to the girl you dragged into your filth." "That name belongs to the woman who stared down a daemon-prince and refused to blink." He dropped the curtain and rotated toward me, his expression unreadable, a mask of aristocratic indifference shattered only by the raw, flickering tension in his eyes. "You think you’re safe here? Above a bar? With three deadbolts that wouldn't stop a curious housecat with a grudge?" "I’ve survived longer than you’ve kept your current tailor." He let out a sharp, dry laugh that lacked any true humour. He closed the gap in two long strides, his presence dominating the cramped space of the flat. He reached out, his thumb catching the edge of my jaw, his skin cold as winter ice. I should have shoved him away. I should have grabbed the iron letter opener from the desk and driven it into his shoulder. Instead, I froze. "You smell like rain and panic," he whispered. "I smell like a delivery girl who didn't get enough sleep because her 'ally' keeps deciding she needs to be a pawn in his games." "You are no one's pawn." He stepped closer, his thumb stroking the soft skin of my cheek, a gesture that felt like a betrayal of everything I’d built since I left him. "You are the queen on a board that you refuse to see. I am merely here to ensure the board doesn't collapse under your feet." "I don't need your help." "Evidence suggests the contrary." His other hand came up, resting against the wall behind my head, effectively pinning me in place. The cane clattered to the floor, forgotten, as his shadow stretched long and dark across the spines of the books lining the wall. "If that thrall finds you before I can secure the perimeter, he won't care about your intellect or your quick thinking. He wants your skin to map out the ley lines of the city." "Then let him try," I hissed, though my own voice lacked the bite I wanted. He leaned in, his forehead resting against mine. The contact sent a jolt through my spine, a familiar, electric surge I had spent months trying to bury. "He isn't coming alone, Aurora. He’s coming with shadows." The sound of glass shattering downstairs—the unmistakable crashing of windows at the bar below—ripped through the room. Ptolemy let out a sharp, alarmed yowl and bolted beneath the sofa. Lucien stiffened, his grip on my jaw tightening for a split second before he let go. He spun toward the door, his eyes turning almost entirely black. "How many?" I whispered, my hand reaching instinctively for the concealed blade I kept taped under the desk. "Too many," he replied, drawing the thin, elegant blade from the hidden length of his cane with a sound like a whisper. "Lock the secondary bedroom. Do not open it for anything that doesn't say my name in the tongue of Avaros." "Lucien—" "Go!" The door to the flat splintered inwards, the iron deadbolts snapping like toothpicks as a massive, smoke-wreathed shape stepped through the jagged hole, its eyes glowing with the sickly pallor of dying stars.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.326
leniency0.652
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1378
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"utterly"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1378
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"predator"
count1
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"predictable"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"standard"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"unreadable"
count1
14
word"shattered"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"pawn"
count2
17
word"ensure"
count1
18
word"familiar"
count1
19
word"electric"
count1
20
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"echoing"
2"intensity"
3"predator"
4"chaotic"
5"predictable"
6"silk"
7"flicked"
8"intricate"
9"stark"
10"tracing"
11"standard"
12"velvet"
13"unreadable"
14"shattered"
15"tension"
16"pawn"
17"ensure"
18"familiar"
19"electric"
20"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1372
ratio0.001
matches
0"snick-snick-snick"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions3
wordCount904
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity0.22
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
London1
persons(empty)
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a betrayal of everything I’d"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1372
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean24.5
std19.52
cv0.797
sampleLengths
041
17
255
352
48
54
666
79
83
942
1024
1118
1243
1323
1428
1516
168
177
1862
1924
204
213
2251
2329
2459
2530
265
277
284
295
3035
318
3258
3317
3441
3520
369
3769
383
398
4025
4157
425
434
4440
4534
4615
4727
489
4929
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"been made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
19.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences93
ratio0.043
matches
0"He surveyed the chaos of the room—the piles of research notes, the precarious stacks of scrolls, and the half-eaten tuna sandwich abandoned on the desk."
1"The cane tapped once against the linoleum—a sharp, staccato sound."
2"He surged into my personal space, the scent of him—woodsmoke and something old, something cold—overwhelming my senses."
3"The sound of glass shattering downstairs—the unmistakable crashing of windows at the bar below—ripped through the room."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount917
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"ancient, leather-bound manuscripts,"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.029443838604143947
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010905125408942203
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean14.75
std8.91
cv0.604
sampleLengths
018
123
27
313
49
517
616
714
818
920
108
114
1215
1325
1426
159
163
1714
186
1922
2024
2118
2215
232
243
2523
2612
2711
289
2919
306
3110
328
337
3410
3517
3635
3724
384
393
4024
413
4224
4310
4419
4522
466
4731
489
4921
32.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3118279569892473
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"Instead, he pulled a silk"
1"Instead, I froze."
ratio0.035
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences57
matches
0"I glanced at Ptolemy, the"
1"I tightened the belt of"
2"I pulled the door inward,"
3"He leaned slightly on his"
4"He stepped past me, uninvited,"
5"He surveyed the chaos of"
6"He took in the space"
7"He turned, the amber side"
8"He didn't move toward the"
9"I gestured toward the door,"
10"He always noticed."
11"He didn't acknowledge it with"
12"he murmured, pacing toward the"
13"He stopped, his back to"
14"He swiveled with practiced grace,"
15"He surged into my personal"
16"He was close enough that"
17"he breathed, his voice dropping"
18"I pushed against his chest,"
19"He didn't budge."
ratio0.702
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences57
matches
0"I glanced at Ptolemy, the"
1"I tightened the belt of"
2"The wood felt cold and"
3"I pulled the door inward,"
4"The air shifted, turning crisp"
5"Lucien stood there, his tall"
6"He leaned slightly on his"
7"He stepped past me, uninvited,"
8"He surveyed the chaos of"
9"He took in the space"
10"He turned, the amber side"
11"He didn't move toward the"
12"I gestured toward the door,"
13"He always noticed."
14"He didn't acknowledge it with"
15"he murmured, pacing toward the"
16"The word left my mouth"
17"He stopped, his back to"
18"The cane tapped once against"
19"He swiveled with practiced grace,"
ratio0.93
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He didn't acknowledge it with words, but his lips curved into a thin, knowing line that made the heat rise in my chest."
1"The door to the flat splintered inwards, the iron deadbolts snapping like toothpicks as a massive, smoke-wreathed shape stepped through the jagged hole, its eye…"
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he breathed, his voice dropping an octave,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"I muttered (mutter)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"he breathed (breathe)"
3"I snapped (snap)"
4"he whispered (whisper)"
5"I hissed (hiss)"
6"I whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.217
leniency0.435
rawRatio0.7
effectiveRatio0.304
77.7963%